14-09-2025, 10:47 PM
End of Chapter 2 – Threads of Saffron
The Expanding Mystery
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(02-09-2025, 05:09 PM)ratipremi Wrote: Story is going very well. My earlier comments were not found worthy of posting by who ever decides that.
(16-09-2025, 09:36 AM)aaran88 Wrote: Hi
Just finished reading the first chapter.
It's wonderful. The suspense, storytelling and the scenes and very good.
Great story.
(29-08-2025, 12:13 PM)shailu4ever Wrote:.
The Prologue
The Swamiji
They call him Swamiji.
Graceful as a saint. Feared as a god. Obeyed as a king.
His blessings crown ministers.
His silence erases dynasties.
His ashrams hold secrets no one dares name.
Ministers bow with trembling hands.
Industrialists, with guarded hearts.
Gangsters, with bloodied palms, lower their gaze before him.
His ashrams rise like temples of mystery,
white walls kissed by saffron flags.
Gates that welcome kings and strangers—
who emerge reborn:
glowing, hushed, untouchable.
What happens within, no tongue will confess.
Prayer or sin. Heaven or hunger.
Only shadows know.
How many jasmines crushed?
How many roses torn?
How many vows burned to smoke?
Purity broken.
Desire reborn.
Sins wrapped in the scent of roses and sandalwood.
He is grace.
He is danger.
Saint and ruler.
Sinner and god.
Some call him saint.
Some call him sovereign.
Some, a god in mortal skin.
But none truly know him.
Not the devotees who kiss his feet.
Not the ministers who kneel for his counsel.
Not even those who share his bed.
He rose,
crushing petals beneath his feet—
jasmines of innocence,
roses of devotion,
lives too fragile to resist his shadow.
The world saw a god.
Only the earth remembers
how many flowers he destroyed
to become The Swamiji.
This is the story whispered
by crushed jasmines and torn roses,
by vows turned to ash in the shadows.
This is the story of The Swamiji
A story no one dares speak aloud.
The Swamiji
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(18-09-2025, 09:58 PM)masti.bhai Wrote: Hello,
We have been supportive and encouraging.
It's no more or less than other authors.
We certainly liked this kind of erotica.
I beg you to stay back.
As the story progresses, I guarantee there will be more feedback - positive or negative.
I'm not sure where else you will find more engagement. Let me know; I'll check it out too.
(14-10-2025, 07:25 PM)PELURI Wrote: hi..shailu ji....i am following all your stories...the concepts are always intriguing and promising...feel that introduction of too many characters simultaneously leads to certain characters being forgotten....slow fire built up is always enticing but too much slow permits diversion of readers interest....they are not held glued and captivated...atleast me...the erotica is often clumsy and therefore not titillating which is the purpose...my very personal opinions....many regards
(18-09-2025, 11:16 AM)shailu4ever Wrote: Dear Friends,
I want to take a moment to share something from my heart. Writing and sharing my work here has been a meaningful journey, but it has also been a struggle. It’s been disheartening to see so little response or feedback on my stories. Writing takes time, effort, and emotion, and I truly believe that deserves more engagement than I’ve received.
I’ve come to realize that maybe this site just isn’t the right platform for the type of stories I’m creating. Particularly, the story Swamiji doesn’t seem to fit here, possibly because of its content. I believe it is better suited for a different platform, one where it can find an audience that truly appreciates its depth and message.
That said, I don’t want to leave without expressing my gratitude. To everyone who supported me, read my work, and offered kind compliments, thank you. Your encouragement has meant so much, and it kept me going for as long as I did here.
So, with a heavy heart, I’ve decided I will not be writing here anymore. It’s time for me to move on and find new spaces where my stories can be better received and engaged with.
Wishing you all the very best, and thank you once again for being part of this journey with me.
With gratitude and warmth,
-- Shailu
Good Bye Everyone
(18-09-2025, 09:58 PM)masti.bhai Wrote: Hello,
We have been supportive and encouraging.
It's no more or less than other authors.
We certainly liked this kind of erotica.
I beg you to stay back.
As the story progresses, I guarantee there will be more feedback - positive or negative.
I'm not sure where else you will find more engagement. Let me know; I'll check it out too.