08-09-2025, 10:35 AM
Shailu ji post some updates!!! Everybody following your stories is eagerly waiting!!!
(08-09-2025, 09:13 AM)shailu4ever Wrote: Feeling Let Down
I just returned from traveling from India to the US today (Sunday), and finally logged back into this site. What I found was honestly frustrating, no interaction in this thread, no acknowledgment of the updates I’ve been sharing.
It makes me wonder: does anyone even care about this story anymore? If it doesn’t matter to you, I can stop and put my energy somewhere else. Engagement once made this space vibrant... now it feels like I’m just posting into a void.
If this community still values the effort I’ve put into this story, it’s time to actually show it. Otherwise, I need to rethink whether this story even belongs here.
Thank you to everyone who offered encouragement in the beginning. But now, it feels cold and empty.
With great disappointment,
-- Shailu
(09-09-2025, 12:38 PM)masti.bhai Wrote: We're eagerly waiting for the next instalment. Please write erotica, not mechanistic sex. Add kinks. We're jaded.
(09-09-2025, 05:16 PM)desiass Wrote: Please do continue the Story, very unique way of writing
(29-08-2025, 12:13 PM)shailu4ever Wrote:.The Prologue
The Swamiji
They call him Swamiji.
Graceful as a saint. Feared as a god. Obeyed as a king.
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He rose,
crushing petals beneath his feet—
jasmines of innocence,
roses of devotion,
lives too fragile to resist his shadow.
The world saw a god.
Only the earth remembers
how many flowers he destroyed
to become The Swamiji.
This is the story whispered
by crushed jasmines and torn roses,
by vows turned to ash in the shadows.
This is the story of The Swamiji
A story no one dares speak aloud.
The Swamiji
(11-09-2025, 12:05 PM)Prakash1986 Wrote: Hi
Wow, this prologue is absolutely mesmerizing. The imagery you've crafted is haunting and beautiful, especially the way you juxtapose the grace of the Swamiji with the destruction he leaves in his wake.
I want to read the story of those destroyed flowers. Interesting
The lines "The world saw a god. Only the earth remembers" are chilling. I’m hooked already.
(11-09-2025, 01:40 PM)Prakash1986 Wrote: I just finished reading the intro scenes, and they are beautifully written. The elegance and richness of the atmosphere, along with the luxurious detail of the venue, are captured exceptionally well.
Great job. Keep continuing