ARJUN vs ZAHEER

[Manju roy]

Bhut khub arjun ko v pata ho gaya ki uska jija zaheer hone wala hai ab dekhna ye hai ki arjun kya karta hai zaheer ko jija manta hai ya dusman yaha shanu ke parents ka v role dikho taki sab clear ho shanu ke room me hi dono ko rat bhar romance ke sath sex dikhao
Write tum bhut sahi ho tumhare likhne ka or sochne ka angle bhut sahi hai bas yese hi story likhte jao or hame entertain karte raho



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Update 99




Scene – Early Morning, Arjun’s Room
Arjun apne kamre ki khidki ke paas baithe cigarette ke dhuye ke chakkar hawa me uda raha tha. Aankhen laal si, raat bhar ki neend usne phoonk phoonk kar uda di thi. Dil me abhi bhi kal raat ka gussa tha—Shanu ki baatein, uska Zaheer ke liye khul kar khada ho jaana, aur phir uss thappad ki yaad jo usne gusse me maar diya tha. Uske dimaag me sab kuch ghoom raha tha, lekin Arjun wo aadmi nahi tha jo sirf emotions me doob kar baith jaye. Uski planning machine jaise dimaag phir se chalne lag gaya tha.
Arjun apne chair pe piche jhuk kar sochta hai
Arjun (andar hi andar)
Agar mujhe un sab pe control paana hai, to ab ek naya angle sochna hoga. Sirf aam students ko target karne se kuch nahi hoga. Mujhe un logon pe haath daalna hoga jinke aas paas crowd apne aap lagta hai.
Usne ek diary uthai, pen khola aur likhna shuru kiya.
Arjun
Singer… dancer… athletes… basketball team… haan, yahi log hain. Inke aas paas hamesha bhid hoti hai. Agar yeh convince ho gaye, to indirectly unke fans, unke dost, unke supporters sab mere side aa jayenge. Matlab hundreds of votes without much effort.
Wo ek aur cigarette jalata hai, ek lamba kash leta hai aur diary me naam likhne lagta hai jo uske dimag me ghoom rahe the—college ke famous faces. Uski aankhon me ek thandi si chamak aa gayi jaise kisi ne usse ek naya weapon de diya ho.
Arjun
Zaheer… tu samajhta hai sab tere favour me jaa raha hai. Ab dekh, main kaisi game khelta hoon.
Arjun diary band karta hai, cigarette ki bachi hui raakh ko dabata hai aur ek confident smirk deta hai. Uska plan set ho chuka tha—ab bas execute karna tha.
Scene – Midday, College Campus

Ek classroom ke corner me ek chhoti si meeting chal rahi thi. Whiteboard ke saamne Zaheer, Shanu, Priya aur Taz baithe hue the. Table par files, pamphlets aur water bottles bikri hui thi. Subah ki thakan sabke chehre par dikh rahi thi, lekin dimaag abhi bhi active tha.
Zaheer apni notebook bandh karke sab ki taraf dekhta hai
Zaheer
Humne campus ke har kone me rally ki, posters lagaye, seminars kiye… lekin abhi bhi Arjun humse ek kadam aage khel raha hai. Kuch aisa hai jo hum touch nahi kar paye.
Shanu apna pen ghumate hue sochti hai
Shanu
Exactly. Agar hume students ko emotionally connect karna hai to un jagahon tak pahunchna hoga jahan wo sabse zyada vulnerable feel karte hain.
Priya haath jod ke thoda frustrate hoti hai
Priya
Lekin aur bacha kya hai? Library cover ki, sports ground cover kiya, canteen cover kiya, classrooms bhi. Ab aur bacha hi kya hai?
Taz chair pe ulta baith kar mazaak me kehta hai
Taz
Bas hostel hi bacha hai. Waha jaake speeches doge kya? Girls ki balcony ke neeche mic lekar khade ho jaoge?
Sab hans padte hain, lekin Shanu aur Zaheer ek pal ke liye ek dusre ki taraf serious nazar se dekhte hain. Us nazar me mazaak nahi tha—jaise dono ek hi baat samajh gaye ho.
Shanu halki muskaan ke saath
Shanu
Nahi Taz… tumne mazaak me bola, par asal me hostel hi wo jagah hai jahan hum abhi tak nahi gaye. Wahi ek jagah hai jahan students apna asli din guzarte hain, apni asli problems face karte hain.
Zaheer sir hila kar agree karta hai
Zaheer
Haan. Hostel ke corridors, common rooms, late night study sessions… waha ka connection canteen ya classroom se alag hota hai. Agar hum waha unke saath interact karein, unki problems ko genuinely sunen… to hum unke dil jeet lenge.
Priya bhi excited ho jaati hai
Priya
Yaar this makes sense. Waha ka environment hi alag hota hai. Agar hum hostel side le aaye apni campaign me, to Arjun chahe jitna bhi smart ban jaye, students humse zyada relate karenge.
Sab ke chehre pe ek nayi energy aa jaati hai.
Shanu apne notebook me likh kar bolti hai
Shanu
To decide ho gaya. Hostel hoga hamara agla step.
Parallel Scene – Arjun’s Side
Campus ke dusre kone me Arjun apne 3–4 trusted boys ke saath baithe hue tha. Unke saamne ek list padhi thi—college ke famous dancers, ek band ke singers, aur basketball team ke teen players ke naam.
Arjun apne chehre pe confident grin ke saath bolta hai
Arjun
In sab ko individually approach karna hai. Unhe feel karana hai ki main unke talent ko support kar raha hoon. Agar yeh log mere favour me aa gaye, to Arjun ka naam har jagah ghoomega.
Uske dost excited ho kar taali bajate hain.
Arjun dil me sochta hai
Shanu… Zaheer… tum dono hostel ka plan banate raho. Main tumhare stars ko apni taraf kheench lunga. Tab dekhna kiski baat sunte hain students.
Scene – College Music Room, Late Afternoon

Ek soft guitar strum ho raha tha. Teen–chaar students practice kar rahe the—college ke famous singers aur musicians. Unke beech Arjun entry leta hai, ek friendly smile ke saath. White shirt ke sleeves fold kiye hue, haath me ek juice bottle.
Arjun casually guitar wale ladke ke paas jaake baithta hai.
Arjun
Tum logon ki practice dekh ke lagta hai ki is college ka asli talent yahin hai. Waise bataun? Agar thoda aur push mile na, to tum log bahar ke stage tod doge.
Singer hansi me bolta hai
Push kaun dega Arjun bhai? College me facilities ka haal to tum jante ho. Instruments purane, koi proper diet plan nahi, koi support nahi.
Arjun thoda jhuk kar unki taraf confidential tone me bolta hai
Arjun
Isi liye to mai keh raha hoon. Tumhe jo chahiye, wo sab arrange ho sakta hai—better equipment, rehearsal space, even proper diet consultation. Bas ek cheez chahiye… tum log mujhe apna samjho. Main tumhare side hoon.
Singer ke saath baaki boys bhi ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain. Ek ladka cautious tone me bolta hai
Student
Arjun, hum kisi ke politics me padna nahi chahte. Hum bas apna music karna chahte hain.
Arjun hansi ke saath unke kandhe pe haath rakhta hai
Arjun
Aur wahi to main chah raha hoon… tum apna music karo, baki sab main sambhal lunga. Tum log meri guarantee ho. Tumhari awaaz, tumhara naam—tumhe agar sahi platform mila, to tumhare fan followers double ho jayenge. Aur mai chahta hoon tum logon ke liye ek bada stage banau.
Uska andaaz itna friendly aur convincing tha ki students ke chehre soften hone lage. Singer finally haan me sir hila deta hai
Singer
Theek hai Arjun… jo bol rahe ho agar sach hai, to hum tumhare saath hain.
Arjun andar hi andar smirk karta hai, jaise ek aur pawn board par chal gaya ho.
Scene Shift – Basketball Court, Evening
Basketball team ke players shots practice kar rahe the. Arjun ek ball uthata hai aur khud ek basket mar deta hai—wo bhi perfect shot. Team clap kar deti hai.
Arjun cool tone me kehta hai
Arjun
Aap log already stars ho, lekin imagine karo agar proper diet, gym supplements, aur naye shoes ho jayein… to tumhara game next level pe chala jayega. Main chahoon to sponsors tak baat kara sakta hoon. Bas ek cheez… mujhe apna dost samajhna.
Team captain ball pakad kar Arjun ke saamne aata hai
Captain
Aur tumhe hamari dosti ke badle kya chahiye?
Arjun confident grin ke saath
Bas support. Jab waqt aaye, bas itna kehna ki Arjun tumhare saath hai. Tumhara game mera game hai.
Captain aur team ke players ek dusre ko dekh kar sir hila dete hain.
Arjun unse casual hug karta hai, jaise ek family member ho. Lekin uske dimaag me sirf ek hi baat chal rahi hoti hai—votes aur influence.
Scene – Boys Hostel Common Area, Late Night

Common area ke tube lights halki yellow glow de rahe the. Walls pe poster lage hue the—kisi ka cricket match ka, kisi ka band ka performance. Shanu apne file aur notebook lekar Zaheer ke saath andar aati hai.
Hostel ke kuch ladke sofa pe baithe the, cards khel rahe the, kuch phones me busy the. Jaise hi Shanu ko dekhte hain, unke expressions change ho jaate hain.
Ek ladka seedha taunt maar deta hai
Arre waah… girls hostel bandh ho gaya kya jo madam yahan aayi hain?
Dusra hansi ke saath bolta hai
Zaheer bhai, lagta hai ab padhai se zyada romance ke notes banenge.
Ek teesra halka sa whistle bajata hai, jisse poore group me hansi phail jaati hai.
Shanu file table par rakhti hai, aankhon me gussa to aata hai, lekin wo kuch kehti nahi. Uske chehre ka expression ekdum composed hota hai.
Zaheer un ladko ki taraf ek sharp nazar se dekhta hai, phir calm voice me bolta hai
Bachpan se sikhaya gaya hai na ki mehmaan ka apmaan nahi karte… aur Shanu sirf meri saathi nahi, is strategy ka important hissa hai. Tum logo ko problem hai, to tum ja sakte ho.
Room ekdum khamosh ho jaata hai. Ladke thoda murmur karte hain, lekin phir chup ho jaate hain.
Shanu halka sa Zaheer ki taraf dekhti hai, uske aankhon me ek unspoken thanks tha. Zaheer sirf ek chhoti si reassuring smile de deta hai.
Dono table par baith kar plan discuss karne lagte hain. Notebook ke pages palat-te hue Shanu bolti hai
Agar Arjun ne apne star students ko target kar liya hai, to hume us jagah jaana hoga jahan wo abhi tak touch nahi kar paya.
Zaheer sir hila ke kehta hai
Bilkul. Aur tumhe notice hua? Hostel ke students ka apna ek alag hi network hota hai. Ye log khud to stage par nahi hote, lekin campus me har information, har gossip unke paas hoti hai. Agar ye log humare saath aaye, to Arjun ko pata bhi nahi chalega aur humara circle double ho jaayega.
Shanu thoda muskura kar bolti hai
To iska matlab hume hostel me hi entry leni hogi.
Us waqt Taz aata hai, ek chips ka packet kholte hue aur joke maar deta hai
Hostel politics ko sambhalna matlab ek saath 50 bhaade ke chachas ko convince karna… good luck, guys.
Sab hans dete hain. Shanu aur Zaheer ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain aur bas ek aankhon ka ishaara hota hai—yehi next step hai.
Hostel ke common room ka mahaul dheere dheere badal gaya tha. Jo ladke pehle hansi-mazaak kar rahe the, ab thoda serious ho kar apni baatein share karne lage.

Ek lanky sa ladka, jo bunk bed ke kone par baitha tha, pehle bolta hai
Sabse badi problem hai paani ki. Din bhar ek tanki se hi kaam chalana padta hai aur subah 6 baje ke baad to tap bilkul sookh jaate hain.
Dusra ladka taana maar ke bolta hai
Aur jab paani aata bhi hai na, usme itna mitti hota hai jaise kisi ne balti bhar ke chuna ghola ho.
Shanu turant pen chalati hai, notes banane lagti hai.
Ek aur ladka, thoda gusse me
Mess ka haal to mat hi pucho. Kal daal khatti thi, paratha me se tel tapak raha tha aur ek din to roti kholne pe usme dead cockroach nikla.
Sab ladke zor zor se react karte hain.
Phir ek aur awaaz aati hai—
Aur raat ko chuhe aur machhar ka mela lagta hai. Lagta hai jaise hostel nahi, jungle me reh rahe hain.
Sab ki baat sun kar Zaheer unki taraf ghoom kar calmly bolta hai
Main tumhari frustration samajh sakta hoon. Ye sirf tumhari problem nahi, tumhare liye insult bhi hai. Aur yahi insult tumhare vote ki value bhi ban sakti hai.
Shanu softly add karti hai
Agar hum tumhari saari problems likh kar official complaint banaye, aur ek united group ke saath demand rakhe… to isse ignore karna kisi ke liye aasaan nahi hoga.
Ek ladka sceptical hota hai
Par complaint to humne pehle bhi bheji thi. Koi sunta hi nahi.
Zaheer uski taraf seedha dekh kar bolta hai
Tab difference ye tha ki tumhare peeche ek organized movement nahi tha. Ab hoga. Main promise karta hoon—agar tum log humare saath khade hote ho, to main apna naam risk me dal kar bhi tumhari awaaz upar tak le jaunga.
Room me khamoshi chhati hai. Sab ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain.
Shanu fir muskaan ke saath bolti hai
Ye sirf ek election ka issue nahi hai. Ye tumhari dignity ki baat hai. Agar hum saath khade ho gaye to tumhari awaz ko koi ignore nahi kar paayega.
Dheere dheere ladke sir hilane lagte hain. Ek ladka bol padta hai
Theek hai… agar tum sach me serious ho, to hum tumhare saath hain.
Room me ek naya energy aa jata hai. Shanu aur Zaheer ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain, aankhon me wahi satisfaction tha—pehla step successful ho gaya tha.

Library ke ek kone me Arjun apni team ke saath baitha tha. Table par cigarettes ke empty packets aur cold coffee ke glasses bikhar gaye the. Uske 3–4 close supporters uske aas paas notes aur student lists nikal kar baatein kar rahe the. Arjun ka expression thoda blank tha, lekin uski aankhon me ek thandi si aag jal rahi thi.
Ek ladka dheere se aage jhuk kar bolta hai
Bhai… ek khabar mili hai, Zaheer aur Shanaya Singh boys hostel gaye the. Wahan ke students ko ek saath bitha kar apni taraf khinchne ki koshish ki.
Arjun ki ungli cigarette ke filter par atak gayi. Usne ek gehri saans li aur dheere se smoke chhoda. Uski jawline kas gayi thi.
Woh khud se zyada gusse me mumbling karta hai
Slap ke baad… gusse ke baad bhi… usne uske sath jaana choose kiya? Behenchod Zaheer ke saath…
Table pe baitha ek aur supporter cautiously bolta hai
Bhai, tension mat lo. Hostel ke ladke kuch khaas kar nahi paayenge. Tumhare paas already star students ka support aa raha hai.
Arjun ne uske taraf aisi nazar daali jaise uski baat uske kaan tak hi nahi gayi ho. Usne apna haath table par thoda zor se patka, awaaz library ki khamoshi me halki goonj ban gayi.
Arjun teeth grind karte hue
Yeh sirf election ka khel nahi hai ab. Yeh personal hai. Shanu fir se us harami ke saath khadi ho gayi. Matlab meri baaton, mere warning, mere gusse ka us par koi asar hi nahi…
Uske saath baitha ladka dar kar chup ho gaya.
Arjun dheere se cigarette bujhata hai aur apni chair pe peeche tak jhukt kar baith jata hai. Uske hothon pe ek dark si muskaan thi.
Arjun
Agar woh meri baaton se nahi samajh rahi… to main use dikhata hoon ki meri khamoshi ka matlab kya hota hai. Zaheer ko target karne ka waqt aa gaya hai.. Arjun ki aankhen khidki se bahar tik gayi thi—aur uske chehre se saaf tha ki agla plan aur bhi zyada khatarnak hoga. 
Arjun
Ab waqt aa gaya tisre circle ko kholne ka, ab dekh tu zaheer behen ke lode qureshi.

[Manju roy]

Yarr sab maza kirkira kar diaa shanu or zaheer ka romance nahi dikhya wahi shanu ko arjun ke gusse se koi fark hi nahi pada tab to yak hi bat ho sakta hai ya to shanu ko zaheer ke alawa koi nahi dikh raha hai apna bhai or family v nahi ya to shanu arjun ko kuch samajti hi nahi hai dusra ab yesa ma dikhana ki arjun zaheer ki bhan ko jake chod ke badla le ye sab purana hai kuch new add karo

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Update 100




Scene – next day College Canteen, Late Afternoon
Canteen ka ek kone thoda quiet tha, jahan tables hamesha half-empty rehte the. Wahi corner choose karke Shanu aur Zaheer baith gaye the. Table par ek notebook khuli hui thi, jisme Zaheer ne students ke hostel aur canteen related complaints likhe the.
Zaheer pen ghumata hua bolta hai
Abhi hostel ke baad canteen ka issue sabse bada hai. Food quality itni kharaab hai ki students literally complain karte karte thak gaye hain. Agar hum yahan kuch karne ka wada karte hain na, to easily kaafi log hume support denge.
Shanu apni coffee stir kar rahi thi lekin uski aankhon me woh concentration nahi tha. Uska chehra thoda halka sa udas tha, jaise dimag kahin aur atka hua ho.
Zaheer uske chehre ko dekh kar pen rakh deta hai
Kya hua? Tum meri baaton pe dhyan hi nahi de rahi ho.
Shanu dheere se, almost fumble karte hue
Nahi, main sun rahi hoon… bas…
Zaheer uska haath gently pakad leta hai
Bas kya? Shanu, main tumhe pehchanta hoon. Tumhari aankhon me abhi bhi kal raat ki baat dikh rahi hai.
Shanu ne apni nazar jhuka li. Uske cheek par abhi bhi woh halka sa laal mark tha, jo makeup se thoda chhup gaya tha lekin kareeb se dekhne par pehchana ja sakta tha.
Shanu whisper karti hai
Arjun bhai… unhone jo kiya… main samajh nahi pa rahi… unhe itna gussa kyun aata hai hum dono pe?
Zaheer ki jawline tighten ho gayi. Usne apna dusra haath bhi Shanu ke haath par rakh diya.
Zaheer softly
Because he thinks he owns you. Uske liye tum sirf ek behen nahi, ek possession ho. Usse lagta hai ki tumhari zindagi tumhare decisions uske control me hone chahiye. Aur jab tumne mere saath khade hone ka decision liya… usse accept hi nahi ho raha.
Shanu ki aankhen bhar aayi, usne ek shaky sa laugh kiya
Par main to bas chahti hoon… thoda sa respect, thoda sa freedom… aur thoda sa pyaar.
Zaheer ne uske aansuon ko apne thumb se gently wipe kiya.
Tumhe yeh sab milega. Mere saath, hamesha. Main promise karta hoon, chahe Arjun ho ya koi aur, main tumhare saath khada rahunga. Hum dono ek dusre ke against poori duniya ka saamna kar sakte hain.
Shanu ne dheere se uske shoulder pe apna sar rakh diya. Notebook ki open pages hawa se thodi hil gayi, aur us moment me dono ke beech ek chhupi si shanti aa gayi—ek aisi shanti jo unhe aur mazboot kar rahi thi.
Scene – Ammu’s Chhat, Evening

Shaam ka waqt tha. Ammu apne ghar ki chhat me baith kar ek novel padh rahi thi. Thandi hawa chal rahi thi, aur aangan ke ek kone me chhota sa tulsi ka paudha diya jala kar roshan kar raha tha. Tabhi gate ki khat khat ki awaaz aayi. Ammu ne aankh uthayi, aur dekhte hi uska chehra thoda sakht ho gaya—Arjun khada tha.
Arjun dheere se andar aaya, jaise use maloom ho ki yeh mulakaat aasan nahi hogi.
Ammu ne seedha dekha bhi nahi, sirf cold tone me bola
Tumhe yahan aane ki kya zarurat thi?
Arjun ruk gaya, usne halka sa muskaan dikhane ki koshish ki
Mujhe pata tha tum yeh hi kahogi. Lekin… mujhe tumse baat karni hi thi, Ammu.
Ammu ne apni kitaab band kar di aur khadi ho gayi
Arjun, main abhi tumhari koi baat sunne ke mood me nahi hoon. Tumhe maloom hai tum kis raste par chal rahe ho? Tumhare har kadam me sirf dushmani, sirf ego hai.
Arjun ki aankhen thodi nam si lag rahi thi, jaise wo pehle se rehearse kar ke aaya ho
Akelepan kaise hota hai, Ammu, tumhe pata hai? Main jitne bhi doston ko apna maanta tha, sab Zaheer ke saath chale gaye. Jo log meri team hua karte the, ab unki loyalty bhi us taraf hai. Shanu bhi… usne bhi mera saath chhod diya.
Ammu ne uski taraf dekha, thoda hurt aur thoda angry
Aur kyun na jaayein, Arjun? Tumhari aankhon me sirf badla dikh raha hai. Tum apni zindagi ko jalakar kya sabit karna chahte ho?
Arjun uske aur kareeb aaya, uski awaaz me thodi vulnerability thi
Bas ek cheez sabit karna chahta hoon… ki main akela nahi hoon. Ki mere paas ab bhi koi hai jo mujhe samajhta hai.
Ammu ne uski aankhon me dekha, thoda hil gayi. Uske dil me ab bhi Arjun ke liye ek jagah thi, lekin uska gussa usse rok raha tha.
Ammu ne halki si thandi saans li
Tum jis raste pe ho, uska anjaam sirf barbaadi hai. Aur main chahti hoon tum ruk jao. Tumhe samajhna hoga ki tumhe support ki zarurat hai, par us tarike se nahi jaisa tum soch rahe ho.
Arjun ne dheere se uska haath pakad liya, uske palm par apni ungli se halka sa press karte hue
Main bas tumse ek hi cheez maang raha hoon… thoda sa saath. Main promise karta hoon, main tumhe hurt nahi karunga. Mujhe bas tumhari presence chahiye.
Ammu ne haath kheenchna chaha lekin ruk gayi. Uska dil aur dimaag dono lad rahe the. Wo usse mana nahi kar paayi, lekin khud ko uske side bhi nahi karna chahti thi.
Ammu dheere se
Arjun… main tumhe support karungi, par is shart pe ki tum apne limits cross nahi karoge. Tumhare iraade agar khatarnaak huye, to main sabse pehle tumhe rokne wali banungi.
Arjun ke chehre par ek relief aa gaya, jaise usne ek naya circle complete kar liya ho. Usne bas dheere se sir hila diya aur thoda sa smile kiya, lekin andar hi andar uski calculation aur strategy chal rahi thi.
Scene – College Library ke Bahar, Dopahar

Library ke saamne chhaya hua bada neem ka ped tha. Neeche benches par students baith kar apni notebooks aur assignments ki baatein kar rahe the. Kuch ladke mess ki chai le kar aaye the, kuch ladkiyan group study kar rahi thi. Iss bheed me ek alag sa energy thi – har kisi ke apne issues, apne struggles.
Issi bheed me Zaheer, Shanu aur Priya aage badhe. Unke aate hi students ke chehre pe curiosity aa gayi. Sabko maloom tha ki in logon ne hostel ke issues uthaye the aur uska asar chhupane layak nahi tha.
Zaheer apni confident tone me bola
Hume pata hai ki library ke students ke liye environment perfect nahi hai. Hum aaj yeh sunne aaye hain ki tum logon ke liye sabse badi problems kya hain.
Ek student ne turant complain kiya
Library me AC ya fans ki halat dekho, sirf garmi aur suffocation hoti hai. Concentration karna mushkil ho jata hai.
Dusre ne bola
Aur books ka stock? Old editions hi pade rehte hain. Research karna mushkil hai.
Priya ne turant unki baatein note karni shuru ki. Uska calm aur organized style students ko trust dilata tha.
Priya
Main ensure karungi ki yeh points likh kar official application banayein. Jab tak action nahi hoga, tab tak hum follow up karte rahenge.
Shanu ne library ke ek aur issue pe baat uthai
Aur safety bhi. Sham ke baad ladkiyon ke liye yahaan akela padhna mushkil hota hai. Proper guard hona chahiye.
Ek ladki ne haan me sir hila diya, uski aankhon me thoda relief tha ki koi sun raha hai.
Iss waqt Taz aage badh gaya, uske chehre par wahi hamesha ka naughty smile tha.
Taz
Wah, kya baat hai. Tum log to asli “library ke Avengers” lag rahe ho. Zaheer Captain Serious, Shanu Lady Boss aur Priya Miss Notebook. Ek hi problem hai… inke sath hostel ka Spiderman abhi tak missing hai.
Sab students hans pade. Shanu ne usse ek sharp look diya, lekin wo thoda blush kar gayi. Zaheer ne apni hansi rokne ki koshish ki, par aankhon se wo clear tha ki joke lage bhi hai aur connect bhi kar gaya.
Zaheer ne Taz ki taraf dekh kar halka sa sarcastic tone me bola
Tumhari taunts se zyada tumhari energy kisi kaam aayegi, Taz. Shikayat sunne ke bajaye joke marne me expert ho tum.
Taz ne chill attitude me haath uthaya
Arre bhai, joke bhi zaruri hai. Warna tum log ka group boring hi ho jaata.
Atmosphere halka ho gaya, lekin ek subtle realization sabke chehre pe tha – hostel ke baad ab library circle bhi unke saath aa raha tha. Zaheer aur Shanu ke liye yeh ek aur win thi.
Priya ne diary band kar ke calmly kaha
Yeh bas shuruat hai. Agar humne students ke trust ko aise hi jeetna jari rakha, to hum kuch bhi kar sakte hain.
Zaheer aur Shanu ne ek dusre ki taraf dekha. Unke chehre pe ek silent agreement tha – har circle me Arjun ka influence todna hai, aur students ko apne saath laana hai.
Scene – Arjun ka adda, afternoon 

Room ke andar dhuaan ghera hua tha. Cigarette ka half-burnt tukda ashtray me dab kar Arjun phone par baat kar raha tha. Uski awaaz calm thi, lekin saamne se aati awaaz me ek aisa pressure tha jo kisi ko bhi hila de.
Party Supremo
Do din me Zaheer ne hostel aur library dono jagah apni pakad bana li. Aur tum? Tumhe kya samajh rakha hai humne, ki tum bas cigarette pi kar time pass karoge? Arjun, agar is speed me tumne game change nahi kiya, to tumhari kursi bhi tumhe mehengi padegi.
Phone cut ho gaya.
Arjun ne palm se apna face rub kiya, gusse aur tension ka mix expression uske chehre pe tha. Uski aankhen laal si lag rahi thi – sleeplessness aur stress ka effect. Wo apne mind me calculations kar hi raha tha ki peeche se ek halki si khamosh aahat hui.
Arjun ne palat kar dekha – darwaze pe Ammu khadi thi. Uska dupatta dheere se breeze me hila, aur chehre pe wohi narazgi thi jo Arjun jaanta tha.
Ek second ke liye Arjun ne bas usse dekha – jaise usne apni thakan bhool gayi ho. Uske chehre pe ek relief tha, ek chhoti si smile, jo cigarette ke dhuaan ke peeche bhi clear thi.
Arjun
Aakhir tum aa hi gayi…
Ammu ne aankh chura li, uska tone thoda cold tha
Bas tumhari zid ki wajah se. Lekin iska matlab yeh nahi ki main tumhari har baat blindly maan loongi.
Arjun uske paas aaya aur usse chair par bithaya. Apni team ke kuch core boys jo wahan baithe the, unse introduce karwate hue bola
Yeh hai Ammu. Aaj se hamari circle ka ek naya face.
Sabne halki si respect ke saath Ammu ko dekha, lekin Arjun turant uska role define karne laga.
Arjun
Dekho Ammu, abhi tak hamare paas ek badi problem hai. Election ke time pe ladkiya apne ghar me hi baithi rehti hain. Vote karna unke liye priority nahi hota. Class bhi off hoti hai, to unka campus se connection khatam sa ho jaata hai. Tum khud ko hi dekh lo… tum kitne din baad college aayi ho.
Ammu ne uski baat sun kar sir jhuka liya. Thoda socha aur phir uske chehre pe ek sharp expression aaya.
Ammu
To tumhe problem samajh aayi hai, solution bhi utna mushkil nahi hai. Tumhe un ladkiyon ke liye ek aisa safe space create karna hoga jahan wo feel karein ki unki baat sunne wala koi hai. Chahe wo study ke liye counselling corner ho, ya ek cultural wing jahan unki hobbies ko platform mile. Agar tum unki zarurat ke according ek nayi jagah create kar doge, to wo apne ghar se nikal kar vote dene zarur aayengi.
Arjun ne uski baat dhyan se suni. Ek dum se uske chehre pe wohi victorious grin aayi jo hamesha tab hoti thi jab usse ek game-changing idea milta tha.
Arjun
Exactly… tumhe lagta hai tum mujhe rok rahi ho, lekin asal me tum meri strategy ko aur strong bana rahi ho.
Ammu ne usse stern look diya
Arjun, main tumhara sath dene aayi hoon, lekin sirf ek condition pe – agar tumhe lagta hai tum sab kuch power aur kursi ke liye kar rahe ho, to main palat jaaungi.
Arjun ki aankhon me ek pal ke liye wohi intense spark aayi, jo usne kabhi pehle Ammu ke liye mehsoos kiya tha.
Arjun
Tumhe lagta hai main akela hoon. Mere dost, meri team… sab Zaheer ke sath chale gaye. Ab bas ek tum hi ho jo mujhe samajhti ho. Isiliye mujhe tumhara sath chahiye.
Room me ek silence chha gaya. Arjun aur Ammu ke beech ek unsaid sa rishta ban raha tha – jisme politics ke plans bhi the, aur personal emotional
Scene – next day College Campus ke ek purane hall ke andar

Purana seminar hall jo lambe samay se unused tha, uske andar Arjun ne apni team se saaf-safai karwayi thi. Curtains dhul gaye the, floor pe naye rugs bichh gaye the, aur ek corner me notice board lagaya gaya tha jisme bold letters me likha tha – Girls Forum – Aapki Baat, Aapka Haq.
Arjun ki team wahan busy thi chairs lagane me, lekin Arjun khud ek kone me khada Ammu ko observe kar raha tha. Aaj uska role shuru ho raha tha – aur usne khud idea diya tha ki ladkiyon ke liye ek safe space create ho.
Door dheere se khula. Kuch ladkiyan, shuru-shuru me hesitant si, andar aayi. Unki aankhon me shanka thi – ki kya ye bhi ek aur political drama hai? Ya phir sach me koi sunne wala hai?
Ammu unke saamne aayi. Uska tone calm tha, lekin usme ek authority bhi thi.
Ammu
Dekho, yahan koi speeches nahi hongi, koi promises nahi. Yahan sirf aapki baat hogi. Aapko jo problem hai, jo dikkat hai… wo aap yahan share kar sakti ho. Aur hum uske solution dhoondne ki responsibility lenge.
Ek ladki ne apni notebook se ek chit nikaali aur hesitant tone me bola
Hostel ka bathroom condition itna kharab hai ki roz sick feel hota hai… koi sunta hi nahi.
Dusri ne bola
Library me girls ke liye koi alag section hi nahi hai, aur hum uncomfortable feel karte hain.
Teesri ladki ne gusse me kaha
Mess ka khana insaan ke khane layak nahi hai.
Ammu unki baatein dhyaan se sunti rahi, phir ek ek point note karti gayi. Uski calm listening ne un ladkiyon ka confidence badha diya. Dheere dheere aur voices unse judti gayi.
Arjun ek side khada dekh raha tha – uske chehre pe wo typical politician wali grin nahi thi, balki ek admiration tha. Wo Ammu ko dekh raha tha jaise usne ek naya circle khol diya ho – the most important one.
Thodi der baad jab discussion khatam hua, Ammu ne sab ladkiyon ko ek chhoti si baat kahi
Aap sab samajhti ho ki aapki problems sirf aapki hain. Lekin asal me yeh sab ek pattern hai. Aur agar hum is pattern ko todna chahte hain, to ek saath chalna hoga. Ab yeh forum wahi jagah banega jahan se aapki awaaz campus tak jaayegi.
Room me ek halka sa cheer hua. Girls ke faces pe ek hope thi.
Arjun aage aaya, usne deliberately apna tone soft rakha
Mujhe politics ki zarurat hai, lekin aapko ek awaaz ki zarurat hai. Shayad hum ek dusre ke liye wahi ban sakte hain.
Ladkiyan usse directly address nahi kar rahi thi, lekin unke expressions clear the – Arjun ka forum alag hai.
Jab hall thoda khali hua, Arjun Ammu ke paas aaya, dheere se bola
Tumne sirf ek forum nahi khola, tumne mujhe Zaheer ke sabse strong circle ka jawab de diya hai.
Ammu ne bas uski taraf dekha aur calmly kaha
Yaad rakho Arjun… yeh un ladkiyon ke liye hai, tumhari kursi ke liye nahi.
Arjun ki aankhon me ek second ke liye wohi conflict dikhayi diya – ambition aur Ammu ki baat me atka hua. Lekin usne bas ek faint smile di aur peeche hat gaya.
Scene – College Canteen, dusre din dopahar

Canteen hamesha ki tarah crowded tha, lekin aaj ek kone me unusual sa jamghat bana tha. Ammu ek table par baithi thi, saamne ek notebook khuli thi jisme wo students ki problems likh rahi thi. Kuch girls aur kuch boys bhi uske aas-paas khade apni complaints bata rahe the.
Ek ladka bola
Hostel me peene ka paani itna ganda hai ki health issue ban gaya hai.
Ek ladki ne add kiya
Aur canteen me hygiene zero hai… yahan cockroaches tak milte hain.
Ammu calmly sun rahi thi, sab points likh rahi thi, beech-beech me students ko reassure karti thi ki unki baat ignore nahi hogi. Uske face par ek focused seriousness thi – ab wo sirf Ammu nahi, ek representative lag rahi thi.
Tabhi peechhe se ek heavy voice ghoonji.
Zaheer
Bas. Bahut ho gaya ye nautanki.
Poora canteen ekdum chup ho gaya. Sabne mudkar dekha – Zaheer wahan khada tha, aankhon me gussa, haathon me balled fists. Uske saath kuch uske dost bhi the.
Zaheer seedha Ammu ki taraf aaya.
Zaheer
Ammu… tum yeh sab kya kar rahi ho? Tumhein politics me shamil hone ki kya zarurat thi? Ye sab tumhare kaam ka nahi hai.
Ammu ne sir utha kar calmly kaha
Main students ki problems sun rahi hoon. Tumhe problem kya hai Zaheer?
Zaheer ka tone aur hard ho gaya
Problem yeh hai ki tum mere saamne khadi ho rahi ho. Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kis game ka hissa ban rahi ho? Ye Arjun ka trap hai aur tum uska hissa ban gayi ho.
Ammu ne firm voice me jawab diya
Main kisi ka trap nahi hoon. Main sirf students ke liye hoon.
Zaheer ek step aur aage bada, jaise usse scold karne wala ho. Lekin uske raste me ek figure aa gaya.
Arjun.
Usne apna haath Ammu ke saamne faila diya, jaise usse protect kar raha ho.
Arjun
Usse ek lafz aur kaha Zaheer, aur dekh lena kya hota hai.
Zaheer gusse se boil ho gaya.
Zaheer
Tujhse to main baad me nipatunga. Pehle tu hatt ja.
Arjun ne cold smile di
Main kabhi peeche nahi hat ta.
Agle hi pal Zaheer ne uske collar pakad liya. Arjun ne bhi turant uska haath jhatka aur uske shoulder pe dhakka mara. Dono ke beech se ek dum me hathapai shuru ho gayi – tables girne lage, students chillane lage.
Zaheer ne Arjun ko punch karne ki koshish ki lekin Arjun ne block karke uske seene par zor se dhakka diya. Zaheer peeche ki taraf ek table se takra gaya. Lekin wo turant uth kar Arjun ki taraf jump kar gaya aur dono phir se ek dusre ko pakad kar kheenchne lage.
Shanu zor se cheekhi
Bas! Ruko tum dono!
Ammu bhi beech me aayi, usne Arjun ka haath kheenchne ki koshish ki. Dusre students bhi dono ke beech me aa gaye. Bahut mushkil se unhe alag kiya gaya.
Canteen staff chillane laga
Yahan se nikal jao! security officer bulaenge hum!
Shanu ne Arjun ko kheench kar ek side le liya, aur Ammu ko students ne Zaheer se door kar diya. Dono abhi bhi ek dusre ko ghur rahe the, jaise agar hold na kiya hota to phir se lad padte.
Canteen ke bahar le jaate waqt atmosphere charged tha – students shocked the ki college ke do bade naam ek dusre se openly lad pade

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Beautiful update and nice story

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Scene – Canteen ke brawl ke baad, sham ka time
Canteen wali fight ki khabar aag ki tarah puri campus me phail gayi thi. Har jagah ek hi baat ho rahi thi – Arjun aur Zaheer ka takraav ab khule aam ho chuka hai. Library ke bahar students discussion kar rahe the, hostel ke lawn me groups me log is fight par debate kar rahe the.
Koi keh raha tha
Arjun toh pagal hai, Zaheer se panga le raha hai? Zaheer ke paas poore hostel ka support hai.
Kisi aur ne counter kiya
Pagal? Arjun ne toh Zaheer ko achhi takkar di. Tumne suna nahi? Canteen me usne Zaheer ko dhakka deke gira diya tha.
Girls ke groups bhi is par baatein kar rahe the.
Ek ladki boli
Arjun ke paas guts toh hai, openly Ammu ke liye khada ho gaya.
Dusri boli
Guts? Ya dikhawa? Election aane wale hain, sab drama hai.
Ye gossip aur heated discussions Arjun ke circle ke kaano tak bhi pahunch rahe the. Arjun apne group ke saath ek chhote room me baitha tha, gusse me, lekin aankhon me ek alag hi spark tha. Ammu bhi wahan baithi thi, abhi bhi thodi nervous, jo kuch hua usse sambhal rahi thi.
Arjun ke ek supporter bola
Bhai, ye fight ka impact bada hoga. Sabko lag raha hai ye fight Zaheer aur tumhare power struggle ka climax hai.
Arjun ne cold smile ke saath jawab diya
Aur unka lagna galat bhi nahi hai. Ab poora campus jaanta hai main piche nahi hatne wala.
Ammu ne uski taraf dekha
Lekin Arjun, ye rasta khatarnaak hai. Tumhe samajhna hoga ki violence se students ka trust nahi jeeta jaata. Tumhe kuch aisa karna hoga jo unke problems ko solve kare, na ki sirf Zaheer ko dikhana ke tum powerful ho.
Arjun ne thoda chup rehkar uski baat suni, phir haan me sir hila diya.
Tum sahi keh rahi ho, Ammu. Fight ke baad log hume ya toh villain samjhenge ya hero. Aur hero banne ke liye sirf dikhawa nahi, kaam karna padega.
Uska tone serious ho gaya.
Ab har complaint ka solution chahiye mujhe. Paani, safai, mess ka khana – sab. Agar Zaheer hostel me pakad banata hai toh hum campus ke har kone me. Aur tum, Ammu… tumhe ladkiyon ke groups tak pohochna hoga. Unka trust jeet ke lana hoga.
Ammu ne uski aankhon me dekha, jaise confirm kar rahi ho ki Arjun sirf politics ke liye use nahi la raha. Uske chehre ki sincerity dekh ke usne halki si head nod di.
Room ke bahar kuch students khade the jo fight ki video dikhate hue bol rahe the
Election interesting hone wale hain. Ye fight sirf shuruaat hai.
Scene – Zaheer ke group ka discussion, raat ka waqt, boys hostel ke terrace par

Raat ke andhere me hostel ke terrace par ek purana table aur kuch plastic ki kursiyan lagi thi. Wahi Zaheer ka adda tha. Uske core group ke 6–7 ladke gathered the. Neeche hostel ke andar abhi bhi canteen wali fight ki baatein ho rahi thi, lekin yahan ek aur hi atmosphere tha – thoda relaxed, thoda heated.
Zaheer kursi par chhup chap baitha tha, elbows table par, dono haath jod kar. Uska chehra expressionless tha, lekin aankhen soch me doobi hui.
Uske ek dost ne hansi udate hue bola
Arre bhai, Arjun toh bokhla gaya hai. Uske chehre aur body language se hi lag raha tha ki usne haar maanni shuru kar di.
Dusra bhi agree karte hue bola
Haan, fight ke time uska desperation dikha. Zaheer bhai, aap toh chill ho jao. Ab wo kya ukhaad lega? Hostel pe pakad hamari hai, student council ke seniors bhi hamare saath hai.
Teesra banda bhi bol utha
Aur sabne dekha ki kaise canteen ke students us par hase. Uske paas bas Ammu aur kuch log hai. Baaki toh hamare hi saath hain.
Group me thodi der tak waise hi taunt aur hasna-mazaak chalta raha. Lekin Zaheer bilkul chup raha. Uska chehra ekdum still, jaise kisi aur dimension me chal raha ho.
Aakhir ek banda ne cautious tone me pucha
Zaheer bhai, aap kuch bol kyu nahi rahe? Aap bhi toh dekh rahe ho, Arjun khatam hai.
Tab Zaheer ne dheere se haath uthaya, sab ko chup karaya. Uski awaaz heavy aur calm thi, lekin usme ek leader ki authority thi.
Arjun ko itna halke me mat lo.
Sab ek dusre ki taraf dekhe, thoda surprise hue.
Zaheer aage bola
Jo ladka khud ke doston ke bina itna bold step le sakta hai, Ammu jaise ladki ko saamne la sakta hai, wo bokhla nahi hai. Wo planning kar raha hai. Aur tum log samajh nahi rahe – uske moves unpredictable hai.
Wo kursi ke backrest pe jhuk kar baitha, aankhon me sharp determination.
Hume apni strategy par aur focus karna hoga. Har hostel, har mess, har class me apni pakad double karni padegi. Election ke din koi surprise nahi chahiye.
Uski baaton ka weight sabne feel kiya. Hasna-mazaak khatam. Group me ek silence छा गया, phir sab ne slowly sir nod kiya.
Ek ne calmly kaha
Theek hai bhai, hum apna kaam double karte hain.
Zaheer ke lips pe ek faint sa smirk aaya, par aankhen ab bhi serious thi.
Ye ladai ab zyada intense hone wali hai.
Scene – Zaheer ke ghar, late evening

Sham ka waqt tha. Zaheer ka ghar ek old-fashioned haveli jaisa tha, bade drawing room se lagta hua ek chhota guest room jahan Ammu baithi thi. Usne casual suit pehna tha, baalon ka loose bun bana rakha tha. Wo apni diary me kuch likh rahi thi jab darwaza zor se khula.
Zaheer gusse se andar aaya. Uski aankhen angaaron ki tarah jal rahi thi.
Zaheer
Tum apne aap ko kya samajhti ho, Ammu? Kisne bola tha tumhe politics me kudne ko?
Ammu diary bandh karke seedhe uski taraf dekhti hai. Uska chehra calm tha, par awaaz thandi aur direct.
Ammu
Main apna faisla khud leti hoon, Zaheer. Tum kaun hote ho mujhe rokhne wale?
Zaheer ka rang aur badal gaya, uske haath gusse se thode kaamp gaye.
Zaheer
Tum samajhti nahi ho, yeh khel khatarnaak hai. Aur tum ladki ho, tumhe...
Ammu ne uski baat kaat di, uski awaaz ab steel ki tarah hard thi.
Ammu
Bas Zaheer! Yeh mat kehna ki main ladki hoon isliye mujhe chup rehna chahiye. Aur waise bhi, tum apna raasta chuno, main apna.
Zaheer ka gussa aur badh gaya.
Tumhe samajh nahi aa raha? Arjun tumhe use kar raha hai! Tum mere saamne khadi ho, apni family ke against ja rahi ho uske liye?
Ammu ki aankhon me ek pal ke liye halki si kasak dikhayi di, lekin usne apni himmat jamaa li. Uska reply aur bhi cold tha.
Ammu
Use nahi kar raha, Zaheer. Main uska sath de rahi hoon kyunki main usse maanta hoon.
Zaheer
Kyu? Aakhir kya hai usme jo tumhe dikh raha hai?
Ammu ne ek gehri saans li, jaise dil ke andar ka bojh tod kar nikal rahi ho. Uska chehra ab narazgi se nahi, ek ajeeb si shiddat se bhara tha.
Ammu
Mohabbat hai, Zaheer. Main Arjun se mohabbat karti hoon.
Ye lafz sunkar Zaheer ka chehra ekdum peela pad gaya. Uske gusse ke badle shock aa gaya. Usne ek kadam peeche liya, aankhen Ammu par jam gayi, jaise usne uska dil cheer diya ho.
Room me ekdum khamoshi chha gayi. Sirf Ammu ki steady saans sunai de rahi thi.
Zaheer ne kuch bolne ki koshish ki, par zubaan saath nahi de rahi thi. Ek pal ke liye uske aankhen nam si hui, lekin usne palat kar dekha bhi nahi.
Wo chup chaap darwaza khol kar bahar chala gaya. Ammu wahi khadi reh gayi, uski dhadkan tez, lekin aankhen bilkul steady.
Scene – Arjun aur Shanu ka confrontation (late night, Arjun ke room ke bahar)

Raat ke kareeb 10 baje ka waqt tha. Ghar ke sab lights bujhi hui thi, sirf Arjun ke kamre se halke neela bulb ki roshni bahar aa rahi thi. Canteen ki ladai ke baad ka tension abhi bhi uske chehre par tha. Uske haath bandhe hue the, veins ubhar ke aa rahi thi. Tabhi darwaza zor se khula aur Shanu bina knock kiye andar aa gayi.
Shanu
Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya, Arjun? College ke beech sabke saamne Zaheer se ladai? Kya dikhana chahte the tum?
Arjun turant khada hua, uska gussa abhi bhi thanda nahi hua tha.
Arjun
Aur kya karta main? Dekha nahi kaise mere saamne Ammu ko dant raha tha?
Shanu
Toh iska matlab tum sabke saamne pitai karoge? Tumhare actions tumhe aur kamzor dikha rahe hain, Arjun!
Arjun ka chehra ekdum tight ho gaya. Uski awaaz thodi heavy ho gayi.
Arjun
Aur tum? Tum kis haq se mujhe samjha rahi ho? College ke beech sabke saamne Zaheer ko kiss karne ka haq kaise mila tumhe? Wo bhi us bande ko jo mere khilaf khada hai?
Shanu ka chehra ek pal ke liye shock me aaya, lekin usne turant apni aankhen Arjun ki aankhon me tikayi. Uski awaaz steel jaisi mazboot thi.
Shanu
Main kisiko bhi kiss karun, tumse permission nahi lungi, Arjun. Aur haan, wo Zaheer tha, tumhara dushman, par mere liye sirf ek ladka hai jise main pasand karti hoon. Meri feelings tumhare politics se badi hain. Tumhe samajhna hoga ki duniya sirf tumhari ladaiyon ke aas-paas nahi ghoomti.
Arjun ek pal ke liye khamosh hua, par uski aankhon me dard aur gussa dono ubhar ke aa gaye.
Arjun
Tumhe pata hai na wo mere khilaf hai, fir bhi tum uske saath khadi ho. Kya tumhe lagta hai main majak kar raha hoon? Jo game main khel raha hoon wo jaanleva hai, Shanu. Aur tum usi bande ke saath lip-lock kar rahi ho jo mujhe todna chahta hai!
Shanu ek kadam aage badhi, uski awaaz ab aur tez aur dumdaar thi.
Shanu
Tumhara dushman hai Zaheer, mera nahi. Tumhari raajniti ke liye main apni zindagi aur apne rishtey kurbaan nahi karungi. Tum sab kuch control karna chahte ho Arjun, par main tumhari puppet nahi hoon. Samajh gaye?
Uske lafz ek tamacha the. Arjun ki mooth band ho gayi, uska gussa aur hurt mil kar uske chehre pe saaf dikh raha tha. Usne bina kuch kahe apna jacket uthaya aur darwaza zor se band karte hue bahar nikal gaya.
Shanu uske peeche kuch nahi boli. Sirf apni aankhen band karke gehri saans li, jaise apne dil ka bojh sambhal rahi ho.
Scene – Ammu ke kamre ka late night moment

Raat ka samay tha, ghar ke aas-paas sab soye hue the. Ammu ke kamre ki khidki se halki si chaand ki roshni aa rahi thi. Ammu bed par baithi hui apni diary me kuch likh rahi thi jab achanak darwaza dheere se khula. Usne dekha, Arjun khada tha – thaka hua, aankhon ke neeche halka sa dark circle, kapdon par din bhar ki dhool aur tension ka bojh.
Ammu
Arjun? Tum is waqt? Sab theek hai?
Arjun ne kuch nahi kaha, bas aake uske saamne khada ho gaya. Uski aankhon me gussa bhi tha aur udaasi bhi. Uska chehra bata raha tha ki wo andar se kitna ubl raha hai.
Arjun
Mujhe laga tha main sab handle kar lunga, Ammu. Par... sab mere khilaf ho rahe hain. Zaheer har jagah apna jhaanda gaad raha hai, mera khud ka party head mujhe dhamkane laga hai… aur sabse zyada chubhta hai ki apne log bhi samajhte hain main galat hoon.
Uski awaaz bharra gayi. Ammu khamosh sun rahi thi, uski aankhen Arjun ke chehre par tikki thi.
Arjun
Mujhe gussa aata hai, par mai tootna nahi chahta. Tumhe pata hai Ammu, mujhe tumhari kitni zarurat hai. Tum meri sabse badi taqat ho. Jab tum canteen me thi aur sab ladkiyon ki baatein sun rahi thi… mujhe laga tha mai jeet sakta hoon. Par zaheer ka gussa, party ki dhamki, shanu ke lafz… sab mere andar se kaat rahe hain.
Ammu ka dil bhar aaya. Usne ek kadam aage badhkar Arjun ke dono haath pakde aur use apne paas khinch liya. Arjun ne pehle resist kiya jaise apna gussa rok raha ho, par phir wo toot gaya aur Ammu ke gale lag gaya. Ammu ne uske baalon me apna haath ferte hue uske kaan ke paas dheere se kaha.
Ammu
Shhh… Arjun. Tum akela nahi ho. Main yahi hoon, tumhare saath. Tum jitne bhi dard, gusse, tension se guzar rahe ho, main tumhare saath sab sehne ke liye taiyar hoon.
Arjun ne apna sir uske kandhe par rakha, gehri saans li. Jaise saari duniya ke shor se bas ek jagah sukoon mila ho. Ammu ne uske peeth par halki halki tapki di, jaise uske dil ka bojh halka kar rahi ho.
Ammu
Tum bahut mazboot ho, Arjun. Par tumhe khud ko todne nahi dena hoga. Election ke tension, Zaheer ke attack, sab ka jawab waqt dega. Tum bas apna focus mat khona… aur mujhe apne saath rehne do.
Arjun ne uski baat suni, aankhen band ki aur uske gale me aur kas gaya. Us pal me, uske saare lafz khatam ho gaye, sirf un dono ki saans aur ek dusre ka saath tha.
Kuch lamhe tak wo bas aise hi baith gaye. Arjun ke gusse ki aag dheere dheere shaant hone lagi, jaise Ammu ki baahon ne uske dil ko chain de diya ho.
Scene – Shanu aur Zaheer ka moment

Raat ka waqt tha. Zaheer shanu ke kamre me aata hai, ab bhi canteen ki fight aur Ammu ke confession ka bojh uske andar dahan raha tha. Uske chehre par udaasi aur gusse ka ajeeb sa mel tha. Darwaza khula aur Shanu andar aayi. Usne bina kuch kahe uske paas jaakar uske kandhe par haath rakha.
Zaheer
Tumne mujhe call kyun kiya? Tumhe nahi lagta ab sab khatam ho raha hai… Arjun ke paas sab hai, aur main… sirf haarte ja raha hoon. Aur Ammu…
Uski awaaz halki si phat gayi. Shanu ne uski taraf dekha, ek pal ko uska dil pighal gaya. Usne thoda jhuk kar uski aankhon me dekha.
Shanu
Zaheer… tum jitni baar yeh baat bolte ho na, utni baar mujhe lagta hai tum khud ko pehchante nahi ho. Tum woh ho jo kabhi haar nahi maanta. Jo sabke liye ladta hai. Aur jahan tak Ammu ka sawaal hai… uske decisions uske hain, lekin main? Main yahan hoon… tumhare liye.
Zaheer ne uski taraf dekha, kuch bolne hi wala tha ki Shanu uske aur paas aayi. Uski awaaz me halka sa flirt ka rang ghul gaya.
Shanu
Aur waise bhi, mujhe tum gusse me sabse zyada attractive lagte ho. Aise intense aankhen, aur yeh serious wala look… pata hai, college ki half ladkiyaan tumhe sirf is wajah se dekhte hain.
Zaheer ke chehre par chhupi hui ek halki si muskaan aa gayi.
Zaheer
Tum mujhe cheer up kar rahi ho ya meri tarif ke bahane mere saath flirt?
Shanu ne shaitani muskaan ke saath uske paas aur jhuk kar fुसफुसाया.
Shanu
Dono. Aur agar tum chaho… to main aur bhi zyada bold ho sakti hoon. Tumhe shayad hasi aa jaye, ya phir tum mujhe apne paas kheench lo. Dono options mujhe pasand hain.
Zaheer ne sir hilaaya, uske gusse ki jagah ab ek halka sa blush aur soft smile aa gaya. Usne ek gehri saans li aur Shanu ko apni taraf kheench kar apni baahon me le liya.
Zaheer
Tum na… pagal ho. Lekin shayad isi pagalpan ki zaroorat hai mujhe.
Shanu uske seene par sir rakh ke muskuraayi.
Shanu
Hamesha rahegi. Tum bas mujhe apna smile wapas dete raho.
Kamre me ek khamosi thi, lekin wo khamosi bhi unke beech ke jazbaat ka saboot thi. Zaheer ka gussa pighal chuka tha, aur Shanu ke bold, teasing words ne uska mood halka kar diya tha.

[KK001]

this comment is for update no: 99 ; 

what a disgusting man , I thought he got some humanity left in him , but I was wrong . by reading the whole story , my opinion is , arjun never was a good brother to shanu. now he want to a big brother !!!!.  I know people will say , this is how any brother will response seeing his sister with other man , blah blah blah . we normalize this kind of abusive behavior in our society. but this is not right , arjun don't have any right to slap shanu.  I was very angry while I was reading.  did this shameless man forgot his won deed , he had sex with a girl in her fathers house when her father sleeping in that same house . did he forgot , shanu help him when he was shamelessly trying  sabotage ammus marriage. shanu didn't react angrily when she know about arjun and ammu , she was very happy .  what a hypocrite bastard . 


shanu should have slap him very hard , that's how he may learn some manners. 

I know that people will still want arjun to be victorious , and get a girl like ammu in his life . because he is a fucking bastard of a hero . we become blind when its come to hero's behavior. we just want him to win .  Sad         we normalize their abusive behavior. and think this is how things should be .

[Ayush01111]

this comment is for update no: 99 ; 

what a disgusting man , I thought he got some humanity left in him , but I was wrong . by reading the whole story , my opinion is , arjun never was a good brother to shanu. now he want to a big brother !!!!.  I know people will say , this is how any brother will response seeing his sister with other man , blah blah blah . we normalize this kind of abusive behavior in our society. 

What about zaheer what he did with ammu is right ?

[KK001]

for update 100; 

 
arjun arjun arjun , what a joker . he need support , he feeling lonely , everything is about him . never think about  others. What a selfish man , when he needed ammu , then he came to her , and start crying , manipulate her for his own good.
 
Zaheer , why all man in this story like this , in debet show he talk big about women . and when its come to real life , he become a joker too like arjun , hypocrite . he could have talk to his sister before , could have told her why he is doing this . but no zaheer not gonna do that  , why a girl have to know about politics. I know people gonna say , he did this to save her from bad politics . no , ammu is not a child , she has brain ( a little less then normal people though) , you have to treat her as an adult person , not child.  
 
Zaheer don’t have any right scold ammu , because he kept her in dark about why he take part in this election. And these man , they took women in their family for granted . their ego , don’t let them treat them their equal. They thought womens support from their family will come by default. NO ARJUN AND ZAHEER , THEIR SUPPORT DON’T COME AS DEFAULT, YOU HAVE TO EARN THEM.
 
Ammu please use your brain . don’t fall in arjuns sweet talk , he just use you like a puppet.

[KK001]

now zaheer can see what his silent did , he should have talked to ammu at the first night . treat her more sensibly. but zaheer did one right thing , did not slap ammu. yes she have right to love anyone she want . I can see zaheer is in pain , but for this pain he is also responsible. 

and what i can tell about arjun , want to control everyone. 

ammu think carefully , think about  every behavior of arjun. then you may see what he is doing , this man is dangerous , he can do any thing to win.

[Greenwood]

Update 102




Location – Girls’ Hostel ka lawn area, dopahar ka waqt
Dopehar ke 3 baje ke aas-paas ka waqt hai. Garmi zyada hai lekin hostel ke lawn ke aas-paas neem ke pedh ki chhaon aur hawa ke halki jhonk se mahaul manageable hai. Hostel ke saamne chhoti si canteen aur benches hai, jahan ladkiyan groups me baithi hain. Election ka poster yahan bhi chipka hai, aur sabhi candidates ke naam discuss ho rahe hain.

Gate se Arjun aata hai, formal white shirt, sleeves roll ki hui, jeans aur sneakers me. Uska confident walk sabka dhyaan kheench leta hai. Uske saath Ammu hai, jo ek light blue kurti me hai, uske haathon me kuch campaign flyers hain. Arjun ke saath Ammu ke hone se ladkiyon ke group me curiosity aur bhi badh jaati hai.

Ammu
(halke smile ke saath) Hii sab, hum Arjun ke campaign ke liye aaye hain. Hum chahte hain ki aapki problems, aapki awaaz sunayi jaaye.

Girls ke group me ek ladki bold tone me bolti hai:
Hostel Girl 1
Problems ki baat sab karte hain, par sunta kaun hai? Hostel ke washrooms ka haal dekha hai? Maintenance ke naam par sirf formality hoti hai.

Dusri ladki bhi bol padti hai:
Hostel Girl 2
Aur mess ka khana? Koi check nahi karta ki kya serve ho raha hai. Fees time pe dene ke baad bhi facilities zero.

Ammu dhyan se sun rahi hai, unke saath bench par baith jaati hai. Arjun pehle thoda door khada unhe observe karta hai, phir aage badhta hai aur calmly unke saamne khada hota hai.

Arjun
Agar main election jeet gaya to main sabse pehla kaam hostel ki committee ke saath meeting karke har problem ka record banaunga. Aur sirf record nahi, uska solution timeline ke saath follow-up hoga. Aap chahe to har hafte mujhe report kar sakti hain.

Girls ke chehre par thoda trust dikhne lagta hai. Arjun ke bolne ka andaaz formal nahi, genuine hai. Ammu ek soft tone me add karti hai:

Ammu
Main hostel me rehti nahi, par aap sab ki baat sunke realise ho raha hai ki aapko kisi apne ki zarurat hai jo aapki taraf se stand le. Arjun ke saath rahkar main yeh ensure karungi ki aapka voice us tak directly पहुंचे.

Ek chhoti si ladki, jo pehle chup thi, bol padti hai:
Hostel Girl 3
Aur ragging? Seniors ko kuch kehne se bhi darr lagta hai.

Arjun thoda jhuk ke uski taraf dekhta hai.
Arjun
Ragging ke liye zero tolerance hoga. Agar main jeeta to main personally warden ke saath baat karke helpline number launch karwaunga jo anonymous complaints accept karega.

Girls ke group me khusphus aur smiles aati hain. Unhe lagta hai ki Arjun sirf vaade nahi, practical solutions de raha hai.

Ek aur ladki teasing tone me bolti hai:
Hostel Girl 4
Aur tumhe vote karein kyun? Tum Zaheer ke against ho, Zaheer bhi to smart hai.

Arjun ek confident smile ke saath reply karta hai:
Arjun
Smart hone se zyada zaroori hai kaam karna. Aapko jo bhi candidate kaam ke liye better lage, usse vote dijiye. Main aapki problems solve karne aaya hoon, vote lene nahi.

Uska jawab ladkiyon ke dil ko chhoo jaata hai. Ammu girls ke saath hansi-mazaak karti hai, unki baatein sunke unka trust aur jeet leti hai.

Scene end hota hai jab Arjun aur Ammu hostel ke gate se bahar nikalte hain. Ammu ke chehre pe satisfaction hai. Arjun usse dekh ke halki si muskaan deta hai.

Arjun
Tumhari wajah se unhone meri baat sunni. Tum meri campaign ki jaan ho Ammu.

Ammu blush karte hue sirf muskaan karti hai. Hawa ka halka sa jhonka unke beech ke pal ko aur cinematic bana deta hai.

Location – Girls’ Hostel ka gate, shaam ke kareeb

Arjun aur Ammu hostel ke lawn se baahar nikal rahe hain. Hawa me shaam ki thodi thandak hai, aas-paas ke pedh ke patte hil rahe hain. Ammu ke haath me flyers ka bundle ab aadha reh gaya hai. Dono ke chehre pe ek halka sa sukoon hai, jaise unhe lag raha ho ki aaj ka campaign fruitful raha.

Arjun apni sleeves fold karte hue Ammu ki taraf dekhta hai.
Arjun
Lagta hai unhe hum pe trust hone laga hai. Tumhari soft baatein unke dil ko chhoo gayi.

Ammu halki si muskaan karti hai, lekin uske chehre par ab bhi thodi tension hai.
Ammu
Unki problems genuine hain, Arjun. Agar hum jeet gaye to unhe solve karna hoga, warna hum bhi doosron ki tarah sirf vaade karke reh jayenge.

Arjun sir hila kar uske words ko serious tone me absorb karta hai. Dono hostel ke main gate ke paas aakar rukte hain, Arjun apni bike ki chaabi nikalta hai.

Tabhi, peechhe se ek bohot halki, dari hui aawaz sunai deti hai:
Ladki (hichkichahat se)
Suno…

Ammu pal bhar ke liye rुकती hai aur dheere se mudti hai. Gate ke ek kone se ek chhoti si ladki saamne aati hai, shayad first-year ki student lag rahi hai. Uske kapde thode ajeeb se rumpled hain, baalon me uljhan hai, aankhon me dar aur thakan dono hai. Uska chehra peela pada hua hai, jaise dinon se sahi se soyi na ho.

Ammu uske kareeb jaake softly kehti hai:
Ammu
Haan… kya hua? Tum theek ho?

Ladki ek pal ke liye Ammu ke chehre ko dekhti hai, phir Arjun ko bhi dekhti hai aur hesitant hoti hai, jaise kuch bolne me darr lag raha ho. Arjun uske dar ko mehsoos karta hai, aur thoda peeche hat ke usse space deta hai.

Arjun
(soft, reassuring voice)
Jo bhi problem hai, daro mat. Hum sunne ke liye hain, complain karne ke liye nahi.

Ladki ke hoth kaampte hain, uski aankhon ke kone me aansu aane lagte hain. Wo halki si awaaz me bolti hai:
Ladki
Hostel me… kuch seniors… mujhe… (uska gala ruk jata hai)
Wo hamesha raat ko aate hain… tang karte hain…

Ammu ka chehra ekdum shock aur gusse se bhar jaata hai. Wo dheere se ladki ke kandhe par haath rakhti hai.
Ammu
Tum akeli nahi ho. Mujhe sab batao, kya hota hai?

Ladki ruk ruk ke batati hai ki seniors group uska majak banate hain, kabhi late night uske room ke bahar knock karte hain, kabhi uski photos khinch kar circulate karne ki dhamki dete hain. Uske chehre par dar itna hai ki wo aankh tak nahi mila pa rahi.

Arjun ke andar ka gussa ubal raha hai, lekin wo apni awaaz ko control karke calm tone me kehta hai:
Arjun
Unke naam batao. Main warden aur management ke saamne iss cheez ko uthaoonga. Aur agar tum chaho to anonymous rakhenge, koi tumhe blame nahi karega.

Ladki rone lagti hai aur bas itna kehti hai:
Ladki
Mujhe bas safe feel karna hai… bas itna.

Ammu use gently gale lagati hai, uska sar apne kandhe pe rakhti hai.
Ammu (soft)
Tum safe ho. Ab hum hain na.

Arjun us moment ko dekhta hai, uski aankhon me ek decision ki intensity hai. Wo samajh chuka hai ki election sirf jeetne ka nahi, balki in ladkiyon ke liye stand lene ka hai.

Scene end hota hai jab Ammu us ladki ka naam aur details softly poochti hai, aur Arjun silent khada hai, uske chehre par wo look hai jo kehta hai – “Ab ye fight personal hai

Location – Shanu ka room, raat ka waqt

Clock pe raat ke 10 baje dikh rahe hain. Room me ek table lamp ki warm light hai, jo ek strategizing atmosphere create kar rahi hai. Bed ke aas-paas Zaheer, Shanu, Taz aur Priya baith ke papers, phone aur social media campaigns dekh rahe hain.

Zaheer ka mood confident hai, lekin canteen wali fight ke baad uske andar ek determination aur zyada intense ho gaya hai.

Zaheer
Arjun ka hostel visit kaafi impactful raha hoga. Agar hum kuch alag nahi kare, to hum peeche reh jayenge.

Shanu
(smirking)
To alag karna padega. Arjun sabke saamne sweet aur noble ban raha hai. Hum ek aisa plan banaate hain jo uski image ko challenge kare, bina direct attack ke.

Priya, jo social media ki genius hai, apna phone nikalti hai.
Priya
Students social media pe zyada active hain. Agar hum ek “Student Voice Movement” start karein jahan har student apni problem anonymous share kare aur hum turant us par response den, to impact double hoga.

Taz
Aur uska result turant dikhega. Jo bhi issue aayega, Zaheer personally visit karega, videos banenge, unhe reel ki tarah circulate karenge. Yeh Arjun ke calm speeches se zyada direct lagega.

Zaheer ki aankhon me ek spark aata hai.
Zaheer
Perfect. Aur hum ek open debate challenge rakhenge. Public forum. Main Arjun ko openly challenge karunga ki hum dono saamne audience ke samne baat karein – bina prepared speech ke, bina filter ke.

Shanu ki aankhon me mischievous confidence hai.
Shanu
Aur debate ke din, hum unke saamne aisi real problems rakhenge jinke jawab Arjun ke paas abhi nahi honge. Jaise sports ground ka corruption issue ya warden ka under-table fund…

Priya quickly note kar rahi hai.
Priya
Aur hum ek “Shadow Team” banayenge – volunteers jo hostel aur campus ke chhote chhote issues cover karke social media pe upload karenge with hashtag #ZaheerListens.

Taz laugh karte hue bolta hai:
Taz
Bhai, yeh to dhamaka hoga. Aur agar Arjun react karega, to woh defensive lagega. Agar ignore karega, to laggega ki wo issues ko avoid kar raha hai.

Zaheer deep breath lete hue smirk karta hai.
Zaheer
Arjun ko harana hai, lekin galat tarike se nahi. Hum sach ke through uska game palatenge. Students ko lagna chahiye ki unka asli representative main hoon.

Shanu thoda close aake Zaheer ke kandhe pe haath rakhti hai, soft but intense tone me:
Shanu
Zaheer, tum bas apna charm aur confidence maintain karo. Baki tumhari team hai na.

Zaheer uski aankhon me dekhta hai aur ek confident smile deta hai. Room ke mahaul me energy electric hai. Yeh ek political war ban chuka hai, jahan emotions, strategies aur personal stakes sab involved hain.

Scene end hota hai jab Priya hashtag ke graphics design kar rahi hai, Taz volunteers ko call kar raha hai, aur Shanu aur Zaheer ek dusre ko dekh ke ek silent vow lete hain – “Har cost par jeetenge.”

Location – collage ka room

Election ka mahaul garam hai. Arjun aur Ammu table ke paas baithe hain, posters aur strategy papers scattered hain. Arjun ka phone vibrate hota hai. Taz ka ek insta reel forward hua hai jisme Zaheer ka Student Voice Movement campaign viral ho raha hai. Hashtag #ZaheerListens trend kar raha hai.

Reel me Zaheer ek student ke saath baat kar raha hai jo hostel ke paani ki problem share kar raha hai. Background me likha hai “Hum sun rahe hain – Zaheer for President.”

Arjun reel dekhte hi apne chair se uth kar gusse me room ke andar pace karne lagta hai. Uske chehre par frustration saaf hai.

Arjun
Yeh sab plan tha iska. Direct muddon pe attack kar raha hai. Open debate challenge bhi de raha hai. Agar main ignore karu to weak lagunga, react karu to defensive. Damn!

Ammu uski aankhon me tension dekh rahi hai. Wo softly uth kar uske paas aati hai.

Ammu
Arjun, chill. Tumhare paas apni strength hai. Tum sach bolte ho aur log tum par trust karte hain. Tumhe kisi ke tareeke copy karne ki zarurat nahi hai.

Arjun ruk ke uski taraf mudta hai, voice thodi heavy ho jaati hai:
Arjun
Par Ammu, main haar gaya to? Zaheer sirf election nahi jeet raha, wo mujhe har baar challenge kar raha hai. Mera patience test kar raha hai.

Arjun ke words me ek dard aur gussa dono hai. Uske andar emotions ka storm hai. Wo apni aankhon me halka sa doubt mehsoos kar raha hai.

Ammu uska face gently hold karti hai.
Ammu
Arjun, tum sirf president banne ke liye nahi lad rahe. Tum un sabke liye lad rahe ho jo tum par believe karte hain. Aur main… main hamesha tumhare saath hoon.

Uske tone me softness hai, jo Arjun ke gusse ko melt kar deti hai. Ammu uske paas ek step aur badh kar usse tightly hug karti hai. Arjun initially stiff hota hai, phir dheere se uske hug me dissolve ho jaata hai.

Room ka mahaul warm ho jaata hai. Ammu ke hug se Arjun ke dil ka pressure utar raha hai. Uski heartbeat slow hoti hai.

Ammu (softly)
Tum jeetoge, Arjun. Hum jeetenge. Bas apni honesty aur apna focus mat khona. Baaki sab main sambhal lungi.

Arjun uske baalon me apna face chhupa leta hai, aur ek deep breath lete hue sirf ek shabd kehta hai:
Arjun
Tum meri sabse badi strength ho, Ammu.

Scene end hota hai jab Ammu aur Arjun ek dusre ko hug karke khade hain, aur background me Arjun ke phone pe notifications flood ho rahe hain – Zaheer ke plan ke viral hone ki.

Location – Ammu ka room, same night, 11:30 PM

Room me sirf ek chhoti lamp ki roshni hai. Arjun aur Ammu ek dusre ke paas baithe hain. Ammu Arjun ke kandhe par sir rakhe hui hai, thoda sa sukoon ka moment hai. Arjun ke phone pe notifications aa rahe hain, lekin wo ignore kar raha hai, sirf Ammu ke saath is moment ko feel kar raha hai.

Tabhi Ammu ka phone vibrate karta hai. Screen pe wahi hostel wali ladki ka naam aata hai jise subah girls hostel visit ke waqt Ammu ne dekha tha. Ammu ka dil ekdam se dhak dhak karne lagta hai. Arjun dekhta hai ki Ammu ka chehra pe color chala gaya hai.

Ammu call pick karti hai, phone ka speaker apne kaan ke paas rakhti hai. Dusri taraf se ladki ki rooh kaap dene wali dari hui aawaz sunai deti hai:
Hostel Girl (dheemi, kaampte hue)
Didi… aapne bola tha agar kuch ho to phone karu… please bacha lo… aaj fir wo seniors aaye hai… darwaze pe zor zor se pit rahe hain… gaaliyaan de rahe hain… aur… aur darwaze ke niche… peshab kar rahe hain…

Uske aakhri shabd ke saath uski saans ruki hui lagti hai, jaise ro rahi ho. Background me ladko ki cheekh, gaali aur thok-pit ki awaaz aa rahi hai.

Ammu ekdam se kamp jati hai, uske haath thande ho jaate hain. Uska gala sookh jata hai, aur phone pakde hue uske ungliyon me compan hai.

Ammu (thodi hichkichahat me, dar kar)
K…kya? Abhi? Tum apne room me ho? Darwaza lock hai na?

Ladki bas roti hai aur keh nahi paati. Ammu ke chehre par shock aur gussa dono hai. Wo phone cut nahi karti, sirf call hold par rakhti hai aur Arjun ki taraf mudti hai.

Ammu (kaampte hue, aankhon me aansu)
Arjun… wo hostel wali ladki… seniors fir se gaye hai… darwaza todne ki koshish kar rahe hai… aur… aur darwaze par peshab kar rahe hai…

Ammu ke lips kamp rahe hain. Arjun ka chehra ekdum se stone hard ho jata hai. Uski aankhon me aag si jal uthti hai. Wo chair se ek jerk ke saath uthta hai.

Arjun (intense, teeth clenched)
Bas. Ab khatam. Abhi ke abhi chalte hain waha.

Ammu uska haath pakad leti hai, uske aakhon me dar hai:
Ammu (fikar me)
Arjun, wo log bahut dangerous hai… tum unke saamne jaoge to…

Arjun (usse dekhta hai, aankhon me wild intensity)
Aur unke liye kaun jaayega, Ammu? Agar abhi nahi roka to wo roz karenge. Main unhe dikhata hoon ke kisi ladki ko dara ke kaise consequence hote hain.

Arjun ka gussa ab unstoppable hai, uske chehre par wohi intense fire hai jo Ammu ko andar tak hila deti hai. Wo uska haath zor se pakadta hai.

Ammu bhi roti hui par himmat karke khadi hoti hai:
Ammu (soft but firm)
Main bhi chalungi. Us ladki ko aaj akela nahi chhod sakte.

Arjun uski taraf dekhta hai, uski aankhon me ek pal ke liye softness aati hai. Woh Ammu ka haath squeeze karta hai, jaise keh raha ho ki tum meri strength ho.

Scene end hota hai jab Arjun aur Ammu raat ke andhere me girls hostel ki taraf nikalte hain. Background me Arjun ka face full of rage hai aur Ammu ke chehre par darr ke saath himmat bhi.

[KK001]

What about zaheer what he did with ammu is right ?

hi bro , 

please read my other comments . I am saying this for a long time , that zaheer is not treating ammu sensibly enough . he should have talk with her before.

[Anum sheikh]

Ammu to hmaray or aba kay lye apnay Kuch ghlat mat krna, to Kuch bhi faisla le me teray Sath khara hu, Zaheer ne bhut bar ye line Ammu ko boli. At the end Ammu Kay izhaaray muhabat pr Zaheer chup ho gea Kuch na bola or chla gea jesy Keh rha ho ye tera faisla hai me teray Sath hu. Election campaign me hisa lenay pr gusa rha. Q Kay Yaha lag rha Arjun Ammu ko trap kr rha Sirf election win krny k lye. But wo kbi Jeet na pay ga. Agr wo humble politely compagn krta to me bhi usey spot krti but zaheer need to win

[Anum sheikh]

Ammu ko dimagh Kay Sath ankhain Bhi kholna hongi, mgharmach Kay anso dekh lipat gai, ek pal k lye na Socha jb sb Arjun Kay Sath thy to wo Ammu Kay Sath nhi tha or jb harr dikhny lgi aa gea dum hilata

[Greenwood]

Update 103




Location – Girls Hostel ke bahar, same night – 11:50 PM
Raat ka mahaul bilkul sannata sa hai, sirf door se kutte bhonk rahe hain. Girls hostel ke bahar ek lamppost ki feeki peeli roshni. Gate ke paas se hi andar hall ke taraf se shor sunai de raha hai — gaaliyaan, darwaza thokne ki awaaz, aur kuch ladke hansi udata hua.

Arjun aur Ammu ekdam tezi se aate hain, Arjun ke chehre par ek aag hai, aankhen shikari sher jaise. Ammu uske peeche hai, dar ke bawajood determination ke saath.

Gate par khade security guard bas chhup sa gaya hai, dare hue. Arjun uske paas rukta hai.

Arjun (zordaar, teeth clenched)
Kya dekh raha hai? Band kar is nautanki ko, warna tu bhi saath jayega andar.

Guard ek shabd nahi bolta, Arjun seedha hostel ke andar ghus jata hai. Ammu bhi uske saath hai.

Andar jaake dekhta hai — 5-6 ladke ek darwaze pe pitai kar rahe hain, gaaliyaan dete hue. Unme se ek bottle se darwaze ke niche peshab kar raha hai, baki hansi uda rahe hain.

Ladka 1 (gaali dete hue)
Abe bahar aa madam, warna khud andar ghus ke nikaalenge tujhe!

Arjun ki jaw tight ho jaati hai. Wo ek deep saans leta hai aur seedha unke paas jata hai. Unhone Arjun ko notice nahi kiya tha. Arjun ekdum se loud awaaz me bolta hai:

Arjun (garaj kar)
Oye… ruk ja madarchod!

Sab ladke ek pal ke liye freeze. Dheere se peeche mud kar Arjun ko dekhte hain. Uska expression ekdum shikaar karne wale sher ka hai.

Ladka 2 (hansi uda kar)
Arre ye kaun hai re? Hero banna hai kya?

Arjun (aankh takte hue)
Hero nahi… tera baap. Aur baap jab gussa hota hai na, to beta thok ke seekhta hai.

Ek ladka aage badhta hai, Arjun ke kandhe pe ungli rakhta hai:
Ladka 3 (challenging tone)
Sun na, apna kaam kar, warna…

Arjun uski baat poori hone se pehle ek damdar mukka uske pet me ghusa deta hai. Ladka double ho ke neeche gir jata hai, saans ruk si jati hai. Baaki ladke ekdum se tense.

Arjun (garaj kar, gussa phat raha)
Peshab karte ho darwaze pe? Aurat ko gaaliyaan dete ho? Aaj tumhare haath tod ke dikhata hoon ke mardangi kya hoti hai!

Ek aur ladka peeche se Arjun par attack karta hai, Arjun uska haath pakad ke ulta ghuma ke zid se deewar se takra deta hai. Crack ki awaaz aati hai, ladka cheekhta hai.

Arjun (aur gusse me)
Gaaliyaan sirf main deta hoon, sun!
Ek dum se unpe barsata hai —
Saale kutto! Harami! Chhakka log! Ladkiyon ko darate ho?

Arjun ka raw style pura power me hai. Ek ladke ka collar pakad ke uska sar seedha darwaze pe patakta hai. Dar ke maare andar wali ladki cheekh uthti hai. Ammu ka dil phat raha hai lekin uski aankhon me ab Arjun ke liye respect aur bhi gehri ho rahi hai.

Ek ladka bottle uthata hai Arjun par maarne ke liye. Arjun lightning speed me bottle pakad ke todta hai aur uske gale ke paas rakhta hai:

Arjun (deep voice, aankhon me khoon ka gussa)
Abhi na tera gala cheer ke tere baap ke paas bhej dunga.

Sab ladke ekdum back off karte hain. Arjun ek kick maarta hai ek aur ke chest pe, wo hall ke dusre corner tak ja girta hai.

Jab lagta hai Arjun jeet gaya, tabhi ek naya twist —
Darwaze ke bahar ek aur awaaz aati hai. Ek aur gang ke 14-15 seniors aate hain —

Location – Girls Hostel Hallway, same night – 12:05 AM


Arjun ke saare mukke aur laton ke baad pehle wale 5–6 ladke ya to farsh pe pade karah rahe hain ya deewar ke paas lipat gaye hain. Ammu dare hue ladki ke saath corner me khadi hai, uske haath kaan ke paas, aankhon me aansu.

Arjun ke saans tez hain, gusse me uski aankhen jal rahi hain. Wo ek gunde ka collar pakad ke usse kheenchta hai:

Arjun (garaj kar)
Aur koi aaya to zinda gaad dunga saale!

Tabhi bahar se bhaari boots ki awaaz aati hai. Hostel ka main gate ekdum zor se khulta hai, aur 14–15 naye gunde hall me ghus aate hain. Sab ke haath me danda, chain, kuch ke paas cricket bat. Unke chehre pe ek hi baat likhi hai — chaos.

Aage aata hai unka leader, ek mota sa banda, uske gale me sone ki chain, aankh me khoon.

Leader (haansi uda kar)
Abe lagta hai yahan hero banne ka show chal raha hai. Kaun hai be tu? Jackie Chan ka chhota bhai?

Arjun uske paas ek kadam aage badhta hai, aankh me ek hi message — darne ka sawaal hi nahi.

Arjun (thande lekin khatarnaak tone me)
Naam Arjun hai. Baaki saari details tere dant tod ke samjhaunga.

Leader (hans ke)
Laundo! Isse aaj asli ragging sikhao!

Aur ekdam se saare 14–15 gunde Arjun par toot padte hain.
Arjun ek ko dodge karke uske pet me ghutna ghusa deta hai, dusre ko collar se pakad ke deewar se takrata hai. Lekin numbers zyada hain, peeche se ek danda uske kandhe pe lagta hai.

Ammu cheekh ke Arjun ka naam leti hai.

Ammu (roti hui)
Arjun sambhal ke!

Arjun khun ugalta hai par uski aankhen aur zyada shikari ho jaati hain.

Arjun (garaj kar)
Ek ek ko ginte ginte todunga!

Wo chain pakad ke ek ko jor se kheenchta hai, uska sir table se takrata hai. Ek aur gunda peechhe se latthi lekar aata hai, Arjun uski latthi khinch ke todta hai aur use hi maar deta hai.

Ladkiyan andar ke rooms me chillane lagti hain.

Arjun 3–4 ko khatam kar deta hai lekin gunde khatam nahi ho rahe. Ek gunda Arjun ko peechhe se jhapta hai aur uske haath ko pakad ke kaise-kaise torni ki koshish karta hai. Arjun uska sir peet ke neeche gira deta hai.

Ammu corner me khadi hai, ro rahi hai, but uski aankhon me Arjun ke liye ek ajeeb si shiddat hai. Uska bas chale to bhaag ke Arjun ko bachaye, par wo helpless hai.

Tabhi ek aur bada twist hone wala hai…
Ek gunda matchbox nikal ke hostel ke curtain me aag lagane ki koshish karta hai.

Ammu (darr ke mare)
Nahi!! Aag mat lagao!!

Hallway me aur bhi chaos badhne wala hai.

Location – Girls Hostel Hallway, same night – 12:15 AM


Hallway mein ab halaat aur bhi kharab ho chuke hain. Pura floor chhil raha hai, gundo ki cheekh-pukaar aur ladkiyon ki rooh kaanp dene wali cheekhen goonj rahi hain. Arjun ke kandhe par khoon ba raha hai, par uska gussa uske dard ko daba raha hai.

Arjun ek moment ke liye dekhta hai ki ek gunda matchbox ko jala ke curtain ke paas le ja raha hai. Uski aankhon me ek khaufnaak chamak hai. Arjun garajta hai aur uske taraf daudta hai.

Arjun (dahad ke)
Us matchbox ko gira de, saale!

Wo us tak pahunchta hi hai ki tabhi 3-4 gunde pichhe se Arjun par jhapad padte hain. Ek uske haath ko peechhe se mordo hai, doosra uski kamar kas ke pakadta hai, teesra uske gale ko daba deta hai. Arjun poora zor lagata hai, poore jism ki taqat se chhootne ki koshish karta hai, par unke zabardast pakad ke aage ek kadam bhi nahi badha paata.

Matchbox wala gunda haansi uda kar Arjun ki taraf dekhta hai.

Gunda (hans ke)
Bada hero banta hai? Ab dekh, teri rani ke saamne tamasha kaise hota hai.

Wo matchbox jala ke Ammu ki taraf ganda sa ishaara karta hai aur ek ghatiya comment karta hai jo Ammu ke kaan me zehar ki tarah ghoom jata hai.

Ladka
Iski choot to or chikni or rasili or garam hogi... Shakl se to pakiza lagti hai 

 Ammu ke aansu ruk nahi paate, uska chehra laal pad jata hai, wo darr ke maare kaanp rahi hai.

Arjun ka gussa us moment pe apne peak par pahunch jata hai. Uski aankhen aag ki tarah jal rahi hain, wo garaj ke apni saari taqat lagata hai par gundo ki pakad nahi chhoot rahi.

Aur tabhi...

DHAAAD!

Ek zabardast tez dhamaka hota hai aur sab log ek pal ke liye jam jaate hain. Hostel ke main gate ki taale, chain, aur poora gate hi farsh par toot ke gir jata hai. Dhool aur chingariyon ke beech ek cinematic sa moment ban jaata hai.

Saari ladkiyan, gunde, aur Arjun ke saath khud Ammu bhi ek saath us awaaz ki taraf mud ke dekhti hai.

Hostel ki light achanak jalti-bujhti hai, flicker hoti hai, jisse hallway ka mahaul aur bhi zyada cinematic aur khaufnaak lagne lagta hai.

Aur tab...

SLOW MOTION me, dhool ke cloud ke beech se ek silhoutte dikhayi deta hai. Broad shoulders, confident chaal, aankhon me bijli ki tarah gussa.

Wo hai Zaheer.

Uski entry ekdum filmy hai. Uske chehre par wohi intense gussa hai jo Arjun ke andar jal raha tha. Pura hostel uske kadam ke thokar ke saath goonj raha hai.

Matchbox wala gunda has ke bolta hai:

Gunda (mazaak udate hue)
Aur ek hero aa gaya? Aaja, teri bhi aukaat dikhaate hain.

Zaheer kuch nahi bolta. Bas tez speed se bhagta hai, aur ek dhamakedaar uchhal ke 360-degree spin kick maar ke seedha us gunde ke sir par bajata hai jiske haath me matchbox thi.

Wo gunda hawaa me ghuma kar door jaake takrata hai, matchbox uske haath se door ja girti hai aur aag bujh jaati hai.

Poora scene ek moment ke liye slow motion me chal raha hai – Ammu ki aankhon me hairani, Arjun ke chehre pe ek shock aur saath hi relief, aur hostel ki saari ladkiyan ek dum se khamosh ho jaati hain.

Zaheer utarte hi apna hoodie ka zip kholta hai, aankhon me khoon ka gussa leke Arjun ki taraf ek second dekhta hai, jaise keh raha ho: “Ab milke kaat dalte hain.”

Arjun ke andar bhi ek nayi energy bhar jaati hai.

Location – Girls Hostel Hallway, 12:16 AM, lights flickering


Zaheer ki kick se matchbox wala gunda zameen par behosh pada hai. Dhool ke baadal me se Zaheer ka chehra aage aata hai, aankhon me aag, saansen tez. Arjun ki aankhen usse milti hain, dono ke chehre pe ek hi cheez likhi hai – ab yeh sab bache nahi hain.

Arjun apne kandhe ke ghaav ka dard bhool kar gundo ke beech dahadta hai.

Arjun
Ammu ke saamne ganda muh khola na… ab saare daant tod ke nikalunga!

Zaheer uske bagal me aa khada hota hai.

Zaheer (garaj ke)
Ek ek ko pakad ke aaj yahan ka raasta bhula denge.

Gundo ke chehre pe pehli baar darr ka saaya dikhta hai. Par phir bhi 12–14 log ek saath jhapad padte hain. Aur wahi se shuru hoti hai raw, rough, tod-phod action.


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Ek gunda Arjun ke pichhe se danda le kar aata hai. Arjun peeche dekhe bina apni kohni se uske muh par aisa maarta hai ki uske do daant hawaa me udte hain.

Doosra gunda Zaheer ke upar kursi tod ke maarne ki koshish karta hai. Zaheer ekdum neeche jhukta hai, kursi uske upar se guzarti hai aur wo neeche se uth kar us gunde ke pet me ek dhaka maar ke use diwar se patak deta hai.

Ek aur gunda Arjun ko gale se pakadta hai. Arjun uske haath se chhoot kar uska sar diwar par de maarta hai. Khoon ka chhidkaav hota hai, par Arjun rukta nahi.


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Background me hostel ki light flicker karti hai – ek pal andhera, ek pal roshni. Har flicker ke sath kisi na kisi gunde ka chehra laal ho raha hai, koi hawa me uchhal ke gir raha hai.

Zaheer aur Arjun ek pal ke liye back-to-back ho kar ladte hain.
Ek gunda Arjun par chhura le kar aata hai, Zaheer uske haath ko pakad kar ulti taraf mod deta hai aur chhura uske hi kandhe me ghusa deta hai.
Dusre taraf ek gunda Zaheer ke upar jump karta hai, Arjun ek roundhouse kick se usse hawa me hi patak deta hai.


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Ammu dar ke maare kampti hui unhe dekh rahi hai, par uske andar ek ajeeb sa sukoon bhi hai – Arjun aur Zaheer dono uske liye jaan dene ko tayar hain.

Ek gunda jo sabse bada hai, Arjun ko daba ke marta hai. Arjun uske haath se ghut ke girta hai, par Zaheer uske baal pakad kar usse alag khinchta hai aur uske pet me 3 ghuse pe ghusa maar kar uske pichhe roundhouse kick lagata hai.

Arjun uth kar apni shirt ka collar saaf karta hai, aur ek aur ko pakad kar khidki ke frame se takra deta hai.


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Ab bache hue gunde ek doosre ki taraf dekhta hai, darr ke maare peeche hattne lagte hain. Arjun unke beech ja kar khada hota hai, gale me garaj:

Arjun
Kaun tha jo Ammu ke baare me bakwaas kar raha tha? Abhi zubaan kheench ke rakh dunga!

Zaheer ek aur ko collar pakad kar darwaze ke kande se jor se takra deta hai.

Zaheer
Aaj ke baad yahan kisi ladki ki taraf aankh uthayi, toh zindagi barso hospital me katoge.


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Pura scene tod-phod, khoon, girte hue gunde, aur Arjun-Zaheer ki dard bhari lekin unstoppable energy se bhara hai. Hostel ki deewaron pe khoon ke chhitke lag gaye hain, floor par be-hosh gunde pade hain.

Ab sirf ek ya do gunde bache hain jo dar ke maare darwaze ki taraf bhaagne lagte hain. Arjun ek ko pakadne aage badhta hai…

Aur tabhi –

Hostel ke bahar do jeeps ke brakes ki tez cheekh sunai deti hai, blue-red light ka flicker window se dikh raha hai.

Location – Girls Hostel Hallway, 12:35 AM, red-blue lights flickering through broken gate


Arjun aur Zaheer ke thake hue chehre, saansen tez, haathon par khoon. Behosh gunde zameen par pade hain, toote hue darwaze se bahar security officer jeeps ki roshni hostel ke andar khel rahi hai.

Gate ke paas se Shanu tez kadmon se aati hai, uske piche 6–7 uniformed officers.

Shanu (Arjun ki taraf bhaag kar)
Arjun! Tum theek ho?

Arjun uski taraf dekhta hai, aankhon me gussa ab bhi ubal raha hai, par Shanu ka chehra dekhte hi thoda calm hota hai. Ammu ka haath ab bhi uske bazu ko kas ke pakda hai.

security officer ke saath aayi madam-in-charge awaaz lagati hai,
security officer Inspector
Sab gundo ko jeep me daalo. Ek bhi bhaag nahi paaye.

Constables gundo ko ghaseet ke le ja rahe hain, jo abhi bhi lahu-me-lep hain aur karah rahe hain. Ek do dar ke maare maafi maang rahe hain.


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Iss beech Zaheer chup khada hai, uske chehre par ek ajeeb si shaanti hai, jaise sab kuch pehle se plan tha. Arjun use dekhta hai, samajh nahi paata.

Arjun (garaj ke)
Tu yahan aise achanak kaise…?

Zaheer uski taraf dekh kar khamoshi todta hai, awaaz me ek sakht sachchai:

Zaheer
Main tum dono ki baat sun raha tha. Ammu, tum us ladki ki help ke liye mujhe fir samjhane aa rahi thi na… main wahin pe tha. Sab kuch suna maine.

Ammu ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk jata hai. Wo samajh nahi pa rahi ki Zaheer ka reaction kya hoga. Par Zaheer ke chehre par koi gussa nahi hai, sirf ek gehri thakan.

Zaheer (aage bolta hai)
Main nehi chahta tha tum dono ko risk me daalo. Isliye Shanu ko call kiya aur security officer ko bulaya. Yahi ek raasta tha ki un gundo ko warna mil sake.

Shanu Zaheer ki taraf ek respect bhari nazar se dekhti hai. Arjun ke chehre pe bhi pehli baar uske liye ek alag sa soft corner aata hai.

Zaheer Arjun Ammu or Shanu apne ghar ki taraf laut jate hai, security officer ko thanks kar ke or hostel girl ko good bye karke..
Hostel se nikalte hi arjun shanu ko to zaheer ammu ko ghoorta hai or dono girl apne apne bhaiyo ki bike par aake beth jati hai... Lekin dono ki aankhon me apne apne partner ke liye naram feelings hoti hai, ladai me chot to arjun or zaheer ko bhi lagi thi isliye dono hi concern hoti hai apne lovers ke liye... Isi bich bike vrooommmm ki aawaz se aage nikal padti hai or gali ke bahar Jake gayab ho jati hai

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security officer Inspector aake report likhta hai,
Inspector
In logon ke peeche kaun hai, woh toh station pe pata chalega.

Gundo ko jeep me daal diya ja raha hai. Tabhi ek gunda jo abhi tak behosh tha, hosh me aata hai aur bas halki si hansi ke saath kuch bolta hai:

Gunda (halki si khansi ke saath)
Tumhe lagta hai… yeh sab yahin khatam ho gaya?Location – Girls Hostel Hallway, 12:35 AM, red-blue lights flickering through broken gate


Arjun aur Zaheer ke thake hue chehre, saansen tez, haathon par khoon. Behosh gunde zameen par pade hain, toote hue darwaze se bahar security officer jeeps ki roshni hostel ke andar khel rahi hai.

Gate ke paas se Shanu tez kadmon se aati hai, uske piche 6–7 uniformed officers.

Shanu (Arjun ki taraf bhaag kar)
Arjun! Tum theek ho?

Arjun uski taraf dekhta hai, aankhon me gussa ab bhi ubal raha hai, par Shanu ka chehra dekhte hi thoda calm hota hai. Ammu ka haath ab bhi uske bazu ko kas ke pakda hai.

security officer ke saath aayi madam-in-charge awaaz lagati hai,
security officer Inspector
Sab gundo ko jeep me daalo. Ek bhi bhaag nahi paaye.

Constables gundo ko ghaseet ke le ja rahe hain, jo abhi bhi lahu-me-lep hain aur karah rahe hain. Ek do dar ke maare maafi maang rahe hain.


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Iss beech Zaheer chup khada hai, uske chehre par ek ajeeb si shaanti hai, jaise sab kuch pehle se plan tha. Arjun use dekhta hai, samajh nahi paata.

Arjun (garaj ke)
Tu yahan aise achanak kaise…?

Zaheer uski taraf dekh kar khamoshi todta hai, awaaz me ek sakht sachchai:

Zaheer
Main tum dono ki baat sun raha tha. Ammu, tum us ladki ki help ke liye mujhe fir samjhane aa rahi thi na… main wahin pe tha. Sab kuch suna maine.

Ammu ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk jata hai. Wo samajh nahi pa rahi ki Zaheer ka reaction kya hoga. Par Zaheer ke chehre par koi gussa nahi hai, sirf ek gehri thakan.

Zaheer (aage bolta hai)
Main nehi chahta tha tum dono ko risk me daalo. Isliye Shanu ko call kiya aur security officer ko bulaya. Yahi ek raasta tha ki un gundo ko warna mil sake.

Shanu Zaheer ki taraf ek respect bhari nazar se dekhti hai. Arjun ke chehre pe bhi pehli baar uske liye ek alag sa soft corner aata hai.

Zaheer Arjun Ammu or Shanu apne ghar ki taraf laut jate hai, security officer ko thanks kar ke or hostel girl ko good bye karke..
Hostel se nikalte hi arjun shanu ko to zaheer ammu ko ghoorta hai or dono girl apne apne bhaiyo ki bike par aake beth jati hai... Lekin dono ki aankhon me apne apne partner ke liye naram feelings hoti hai, ladai me chot to arjun or zaheer ko bhi lagi thi isliye dono hi concern hoti hai apne lovers ke liye... Isi bich bike vrooommmm ki aawaz se aage nikal padti hai or gali ke bahar Jake gayab ho jati hai

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security officer Inspector aake report likhta hai,
Inspector
In logon ke peeche kaun hai, woh toh station pe pata chalega.

Gundo ko jeep me daal diya ja raha hai. Tabhi ek gunda jo abhi tak behosh tha, hosh me aata hai aur bas halki si hansi ke saath kuch bolta hai:

Gunda (halki si khansi ke saath)
Tumhe lagta hai… yeh sab yahin khatam ho gaya?

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Ghar ke andar sab kuch ajeeb sa khamosh tha. Raste bhar dono ne ek doosre ki taraf dekha bhi nahi. Ammu ka chehra thoda udaas tha, hostel ka violence scene abhi tak uske zehan me ghoom raha tha. Zaheer ka andaz aur bhi thanda tha, jaise uske andar bahut kuch chal raha ho par usne apne honton par taala laga rakha ho.

Zaheer bina rukhe seedha apne kamre ki seedhiyan chad gaya. Ammu uski peeth ko blank nazron se dekhti rahi aur fir chupchaap apne kamre ki taraf badh gayi.

Kamre me aakar Zaheer ne apna shirt uthara, jeans badli aur bed par baith kar gehri saans li. Thakan, gusse aur ek ajeeb si bechaini ka mixture tha uske andar. Usne aankhen band ki jaise bas sab kuch kuch der ke liye bhool jaana chahta ho.

Lekin jaise hi wo side me let kar neend lene hi wala tha, uske room ka darwaza knock knock ki awaaz se hil gaya.

Zaheer ne aankhen kholi, sir ghumaya aur kuch pal chupchaap us knock ko dekhta raha. Ek aur halki si knock hui, is dafa thodi dheemi, jaise saamne wala darwaza kholne se ghabra raha ho.

Zaheer dheere se uthkar darwaze ke paas aaya, haath handle par rakha aur andar hi andar socha… Ammu hogi kya?

Usne darwaza khola—

Zaheer ne darwaza khola toh saamne Ammu khadi thi. Uske haath me ek chhota sa first aid box tha. Uski aankhon me thodi thakaan, thoda bojh tha, lekin phir bhi usne bina kuch kahe box utha kar dikhaya jaise keh rahi ho yeh tumhare liye layi hoon.

Zaheer ne bas ek nazar us box par daali aur bina kuch bole palat kar bed par aake baith gaya. Uska chehra bilkul sookha hua, jaise andr se thoda thoda tut raha ho.

Ammu dheere dheere uske paas aayi. Usne box khola, cotton par dawai daali aur uske haathon par lagaane lagi. Zaheer apni aankhen uske haath par tikaye baitha tha, jaise pehli dafa mehsoos kar raha ho ki chot zyada andar lagi hai, dikhne wali to bas bahana hai.

Dono ke beech khamoshi thi. Na aankhon ka milaap hua, na zubaan se koi lafz nikla. Sirf ek thandi hawa thi jo kamre ki saari baat keh rahi thi. Jaise dono ke dil me ek badi kahwahat paal rakhi ho.

Dawai lagane ke baad Ammu box band karti hai, uthi aur wapas mudne lagi. Zaheer ne us waqt pehli baar apni zubaan kholi.

Zaheer
Ek baar fir soch lo Ammu.

Ammu ruk gayi, lekin palat kar uski taraf nahi dekha. Seedha darwaze ki taraf dekhte hue uski awaaz nikalti hai, halki si bhari hui.

Ammu
Kabhi kabhi sahi galat ka humein maloom nahi hota bhai… bas dil ki sunni padti hai. Humein lagta hai ki humara dushman galat hai, lekin hum khud ke andar kabhi gehrai se nahi dekhte.

Itna kehkar wo bina mudde hi darwaza kholti hai aur bahar chali jaati hai.

Zaheer uske jaane ki aahat sunta rehta hai, uski parchai ko dekhte rehta hai. Uski aankhon me ek ajeeb si soch, ek uljhan baithi reh jaati hai… jaise uske dil me pehli baar shak apne hi jazbaton par hua ho

Raat ka mahaul bhaari tha. Neeche se aati khamoshi ghar ko aur bhi gehra bana rahi thi. Upar ek kamre me Zaheer aur Ammu apne jazbat me uljhe hue the, toh doosre ghar me Shanu aur Arjun ka mahaul bilkul alag tha.


Arjun bed par baitha tha, haathon par khun ke chhote chhote nishan abhi bhi dikh rahe the. Shanu ek bowl me garam paani aur first aid box lekar uske saamne baithi thi. Lekin dono ke chehre par gusse ki halki si parchhai thi.

Shanu
Tu samajhta hi nahi Arjun. Har waqt tu apni zid me andha ho jaata hai. Har ladayi ka jawab sirf muqabla aur aggression thodi na hota hai.

Arjun ne uski taraf dekha, aankhon me chingaari thi.
Arjun
Aur tu har baat me mujhe hi doshi bana deti hai. Agar main na hota toh aaj sab kuch bikhar jaata. Main hi tha jo samne khada raha.

Shanu ne uske haath ko zor se pakda aur cotton se dawai lagayi, thoda jor se dab gaya toh Arjun ke chehre pe dard ubhar aaya.
Shanu
Dekha? Yeh hi hai teri problem. Dard mehsoos karta hai lekin maanega nahi. Dil ke andar kya chal raha hai, kisi ko bataega nahi. Bas sabko door dhakel dega.

Arjun ne dard ke bawajood uski aankhon me dekha.
Arjun
Aur tu kya karti hai? Har waqt mujhe rokti hai, mujhe samjhati hai jaise main baccha hoon. Main jo kar raha hoon uske peeche wajah hai, samajhne ki koshish kab karegi tu?

Shanu ne halki si taanashe saans li, cotton side me rakha aur uske haath par ointment lagane lagi.
Shanu
Wajah ke naam pe tu apni zindagi aur dusron ki zindagi risk pe daal deta hai. Tu apne gusse ko reason bana ke sab justify karta hai. Lekin sach yeh hai ki kabhi kabhi tu apne dil ke darr ko aggression ke peeche chhupa leta hai.

Arjun ki aankhen ek pal ke liye naram hui, phir usne zubaan ko phir se teekha kar diya.
Arjun
Aur tu kabhi maanegi nahi ki main sahi bhi ho sakta hoon. Tere liye main hamesha woh ladka hoon jo galat decisions leta hai.

Shanu ne uska haath bandage karte hue dheere se kaha.
Shanu
Nahi Arjun… tu mere liye woh bhai hai jo kabhi apne dil ko samajhna hi nahi chahta.

Room ke andar behes aur dawai ki khushbu ek saath ghul gayi thi. Dono apni apni baaton me uljhe hue the, jaise dono ke paas sach ho, lekin dono ek doosre ka sach sunne ko tayyar na ho.

Room ke andar ki hawa pehle se hi garam thi, dono apne apne lafzon se ek doosre ko chubhte ja rahe the. Shanu uske haath par bandage lapet rahi thi, par zubaan se teer chalana band nahi kiya tha. Arjun bhi peeche hatne wale me se nahi tha.

Arjun ek pal ke liye chup hua, phir uske chehre par ek kasak si aayi. Usne neeche nazar daali aur phir Shanu ki taraf dekh kar teekhi awaaz me bola.

Arjun
Ek baar mujhe to bata deti ki tu us Zaheer se…

Uski zubaan wahi atak gayi. Shabd adhure chhod diye, lekin baat poori samajh aa gayi thi. Room me ek dam se gehri khamoshi chha gayi.

Shanu ke haath ruk gaye. Uski aankhen pal bhar ke liye jhuki, jaise guilt ki chhaya uske chehre par nikal aayi ho. Uski saanson ka wazan badh gaya, par usne kuch nahi kaha.

Arjun ka gussa usse andar se tod raha tha. Uski awaaz abhi bhi bhari thi, lekin andar ka dard nikal kar lafzon me aa gaya.

Arjun
Jab ek bhai apni behen ka MMS dekhe to uspe kya bitti hai, yeh tu nahi samjhegi Shanu.

Ye lafz sunte hi Shanu ka chehra ek dam badal gaya. Uski aankhon me guilt ke saath gusse ki aag jal uthi. Aankhen laal ho gayi, jaise koi purana zakham khol diya ho.

Shanu ne zor se uska haath chhoda, jisme abhi bandage adhoora tha. Usne Arjun ki taraf dekha, nazron me jalan thi, phir bina kuch kahe kursi se uth khadi hui.

Shanu
(andar hi andar ubalti hui, bas itna kaha)
Bas Arjun… bas.

Aur wo gusse me kadam patakti hui room se nikal gayi. Darwaza zor se bandh hua, aur kamra ek dam se khali aur bhari lagne laga. Arjun usi bed par baitha reh gaya, aankhon me ek ajeeb si udaasi aur gussa dono ek saath.

Subah ka mahaul thoda thanda aur bhari tha. College ke andar sabko kal raat ke hostel wale scene ki khabar mil chuki thi. Canteen ki fight abhi thami bhi nahi thi ki hostel ke violence ne puri campus ki hawa ko aur garam kar diya tha.


Principal ka office us waqt bilkul courtroom jaisa lag raha tha. Samne Principal aur Election Committee ke do–teen senior professors baithe the, aur unke saamne khade the Arjun aur Zaheer.

Dono ke chehre par abhi bhi kal ki maar–pit ke nishaan dikh rahe the. Arjun ke haath par bandage, Zaheer ke chehre par chhoti si kharoch. Lekin dono ke expressions ek jaise the—juki hui nazrein, lekin dil me ek rebel aag.

Principal ki awaaz tez aur narmi–sakhti ke beech ki thi.

Principal
Jo kuch bhi kal canteen me hua, aur uske baad hostel me jo kuch hua… usne hum sabko sharminda kiya hai. Election ek healthy competition hona chahiye, lekin tum dono ne use dushmani bana diya.

Committee Member
Aur tum dono ke beech ki personal rivalry ab college ke discipline ko tod rahi hai. Ye warning hai tum dono ke liye. Last warning. Agar ab dobara aisa kuch hua toh suspension aur election se direct disqualification hogi.

Arjun ne aankhen neeche kar rakhi thi, par uske chehre par zidd ki halki si parchhai thi. Uske andar se awaaz aa rahi thi jo bhi ho, peeche nahi hatna.

Zaheer ne bhi apna sir jhuka rakha tha, par uske hoth kas ke band the. Uske andr ki aag uske chehre ki jawline aur tez saanson me saaf nazar aa rahi thi.

Principal ne dono ki taraf haath uthakar final line kahi.
Principal
This is it. Tum dono ko ek mauka diya ja raha hai. Use barbaad mat karna.

Room ke andar khamoshi chha gayi. Arjun aur Zaheer ne ek pal ke liye ek doosre ki taraf dekha—nazren mili nahi, takraayi thi. Fir dono apni apni khamoshi me doob gaye.

Committee ne papers band kiye, aur unhe ishaara kar diya ki jaa sakte ho. Dono ne bina kuch kahe ek saath office ka darwaza khola aur bahar aa gaye. Corridor me kadam chal rahe the, lekin dono ke dil me ek hi jazba tha—yeh ladayi ab rukegi nahi.

College canteen ka mahaul us subah ajeeb si garmiyo se bhara hua tha. Har table par ek hi topic chal raha tha—kal raat hostel me kya hua, aur subah principal ke office me Arjun aur Zaheer ko jo sunaya gaya.

Ek corner ki table par kuch seniors baith ke chai pi rahe the. Unki baatein tez awaaz me canteen me goonj rahi thi.

Senior 1
Dekha tha kal hostel ka scene? Lagta hai ab ye election bas naam ka hai. Arjun aur Zaheer dono ki ladayi ab seedha khoon–kharaabi tak aa gayi hai.

Senior 2
Arre sunne me toh ye bhi aaya hai ki principal ne last warning di hai dono ko. Lekin tujhe lagta hai wo rukne wale hain?

Dusri table par juniors gossip kar rahe the, aankhen chamak rahi thi jaise koi filmi drama unfold ho raha ho.

Junior 1
Mujhe toh lagta hai Zaheer jeetega. Uske paas poore hostel ka support hai.

Junior 2
Nahi yaar, Arjun ko underestimate mat kar. Usne kal jo stance liya tha na, log uski himmat pe fida ho gaye hain.

Ek teesri table par kuch ladkiyan chhupke se Ammu ki taraf dekh kar fुसफुसा rahi thi. Ammu chupchaap ek corner par Shanu ke saath baithi thi, lekin uski aankhon me clearly tension thi.

Girl 1
Tumhe nahi lagta is rivalry ka asli reason election se zyada personal hai?

Girl 2
Haan, mujhe toh lagta hai dono ke beech ek ladki ka matter bhi hai…

Uski baat puri hone se pehle hi Shanu ne us taraf dekha aur ladkiyan turant chup ho gayi.

Tabhi canteen ke door se Arjun andar aaya. Uski entry ne turant sabka dhyaan kheench liya. Uske kuch supporters turant khade ho gaye, jaise uski himmat badhane ke liye.

Thodi hi der me doosri taraf se Zaheer bhi canteen me aaya. Uske saath bhi kuch ladke the, hostel ke dost, jo uski tarafdari kar rahe the.

Puri canteen ek dum se do camps me divide ho gayi—ek taraf Arjun ka support, doosri taraf Zaheer ka. Beech me hawa me ek ajeeb si khamoshi thi, jaise ek spark aur chingari is crowd ko blast karwa degi.

Arjun aur Zaheer dono ne ek dusre ko dekha. Sirf ek chhoti si nazar—na smile, na salam—sirf woh takraav jo ab college ke har student ke liye gossip ka naya masala ban chuka tha.

Canteen ka mahaul waise hi garam tha, sab nazar se ek dusre ko naap rahe the. Ek pal ki khamoshi aisi thi jaise sab ek spark ka wait kar rahe ho. Aur woh spark zyada der tak rukhi nahi.


Ek ladka, jo Zaheer ke group me tha, zor se bola.
Zaheer ka stand clear hai. Agar leadership chahiye toh uske paas strength aur support dono hai. Dusre log bas nautanki karte hain.

Arjun ke supporters turant bhadak gaye. Unme se ek ne table par haath patka.
Nautanki? Jisne kal hostel me apni jaan ki parwaah kiye bina sabko bachaaya, usse nautanki bol rahe ho?

Ye lafz bas hawa ko aur tez kar gaye. Dono groups me hungama mach gaya. Kursiyan khisakne lagi, awaazon ka level badhne laga.

Ek ladka Arjun ki taraf ishara karke chillaaya.
Tere leader me bas gussa hai, dimaag zero!

Arjun khud apni jagah se uth gaya, aankhen laal, jawline tight.
Aur tumhaara leader? Jo sirf dhamki dena jaanta hai? Ye leadership hai?

Zaheer bhi apni seat se uth kar seedha Arjun ke saamne aa gaya. Uske supporters uske peeche khade ho gaye.
Zaheer
Mujhe lecture mat de Arjun. Main sach bolta hoon, isliye tumhe problem hai. Tumhari problem ye hai ki tum khud ko sabse bada hero samajhte ho.

Arjun
Aur tum? Tumhe lagta hai college tumhare baap ki jagir hai?

Dono ke supporters ek dusre ko dhakka dene lage. Tables hilne lagi, kursiyan girne lagi. Ek pal me canteen ek wrestling ground ban gaya.

Shanu aur Ammu dono corner me baithi thi, dono ki aankhen shock aur gusse se bhar gayi thi. Shanu turant khadi hui, Ammu ka haath pakda aur bola.
Shanu
Chal, is jung ka hissa ban’ne ka koi matlab nahi.

Ammu ne sir hila kar haan kaha. Usne ek baar peeche mud kar Arjun aur Zaheer ko dekha—dono ek dusre ke saamne gusse se jal rahe the. Uski aankhon me dard tha, phir usne palat kar Shanu ke saath canteen se nikal jaana behtar samjha.

Peeche canteen me awaazein abhi aur tez ho rahi thi—lafzon ka war, dhakka-mukki, aur students ka divide. Aur beech me Arjun aur Zaheer… jaise do sher ek hi jungle ka haq maang rahe ho.

Raat ke andheron me security officer station ka interrogation room apni hi garmi phailaye hue tha. Chhat se latakti tube light halki halki blink kar rahi thi, aur ek purane pankhe ki awaz puri khamoshi me goonj rahi thi. Table ke ek taraf inspector baitha tha, saamne hostel se pakde gaye gunde jhuk kar baithe hue the.

Inspector ne pehle toh normal sawaal kiye, lekin jab unhone ghuma phirake jawab dene shuru kiye, toh uski awaaz tez ho gayi.
Inspector
Seedhe seedhe bol do kisne bheja tha tumhe. Ye nautanki chalti nahi yahan.

Ek constable ne peechhe khade hote hote ek gunde ke kandhe par zor se danda patka. Gunda dard se thoda seedha hua, aur uske chehre ka rang badalne laga. Dusre do abhi bhi chup the, par teesra gunda — jiski aankhon me ajeeb si ghabrahat thi — woh bol pada.

Gunda
Saab… hum… humse galti ho gayi. 

Inspector ne aankhen tang ki aur aage jhuk kar gusse se bola.
Inspector (gusse me tez aawaz se)
Ise galti nahi, crime kehte hai behen ke lode... Jo kuch bhi janta hai chupchap bata warna yahi teri Maiya pel dunga

Gunda ne kuch pal ke liye hichkichahat dikhayi. Uske chehre par paseena aaya aur usne apni nazar neeche kar li. Phir dheere se lafz nikle, jo kamre ki hawa ko ek dum se badal gaye.

Gunda
Saab… woh…........

Inspector ki bhavein teekhi ho gayi, aankhen chhoti ho gayi jaise woh har lafz tod kar samajh raha ho. Usne turant pen uthaya aur constable ko ishara kiya.

Inspector
Poora sach likhwa. Aur jo naam isne liya hai, uski tasdeeq karni padegi.

Constable tez tez likhne laga. Kamre ke andar ab hawa me sirf ek baat ghoom rahi thi—ye koi chhoti moti ladayi nahi thi, iske peeche bada khel chhupa hua tha. Inspector ka chehra sakht ho gaya tha, uski aankhon me woh shikan bas ye keh rahi thi… ab asli kahani khulne wali hai.

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Update 105




Next din ka mahaul bilkul badla hua tha. Kal ki maar–pit aur security officer station ka darr ab bhi hawa me latak raha tha, lekin election campaign apni raftaar pakad chuka tha.

Campus ke central ground par Arjun ka group full swing me tha. Banners lag rahe the, posters chipkaaye ja rahe the, aur ek ek student se connect karne ka kaam chal raha tha. Ladkon ka group planning aur coordination me busy tha, aur girls wing ko handle kar rahi thi Ammu.

Ammu ne ek corner par chhoti si crowd ikatthi kar li thi—zyadatar girls hostel ki ladkiyan. Uska andaaz soft lekin confident tha, jaise wo sirf votes nahi balki trust jeet rahi ho.

Ammu
Tum sabke issues humne likh liye hain. Hostel me mess ka khana kaise improve hoga, night security kaise strong hogi, aur library timing extend karna… ye sab cheezein hum committee ke saamne leke jayenge. Aur main promise karti hoon… agar hum jeete, toh yeh sab cheezein zaroor badlenge.

Ek ladki, jiske chehre par thoda doubt tha, aage badhi.
Hostel Girl
Par ab tak toh har koi aisa hi bolta aaya hai… kya guarantee hai ki tum log sach me kuch kar paoge?

Ammu ke hothon pe ek seedhi si muskaan aayi. Usne us ladki ki aankhon me dekh kar narmi se jawab diya.
Ammu
Guarantee nahi deti, lekin yakeen dilati hoon. Main aur Arjun tumhare saath khade rahenge. Tumhari awaaz humari awaaz hogi.

Ye lafz sunke ek pal ke liye crowd ki energy badh gayi. Girls ek dusre se baat karne lagi jaise unhe pehli baar lag raha ho ki koi unki baat sun raha hai.

Arjun uske bilkul paas khada tha, thoda peeche haath baandhe, lekin nazar sirf Ammu par thi. Uske chehre par fakhr tha, jaise usse apna jawab mil gaya ho ki Ammu kyun alag hai. Kabhi kabhi wo uski baaton ko repeat karte hue ladkon ke group tak bhi pahunchata, taaki dono wings ek hi message carry karein.

Ammu ne jab ek aur ladki ko samjhaya, Arjun us waqt aage badha aur bola.
Arjun
Jo bhi tum sabki demands hain, unhe officially likhwa lo. Humari team ka ek banda tumhari side pe assigned hoga. Har complaint ki follow–up hogi. Ye bas ek election promise nahi hai… ye tumhari haq ki baat hai.

Girls hostel ki ladkiyon ke chehre pe ab thoda confidence aane laga. Unhone sir hila kar haan karna shuru kar diya
Poora area posters, slogans aur chhoti chhoti teams se ghoom raha tha. Lekin beech me khade Arjun aur Ammu… jaise ek dusre ka silent support ho.

Campus ka kaam khatam hote hote shaam dhalne lagi thi. Posters lag gaye the, list ban gayi thi, aur girls hostel ki ladkiyan apna support dikhate hue wapas ja rahi thi. Crowd thoda thoda khisak gaya, bas kuch volunteers bache the jo samaan samet rahe the.

Ammu ne ek pal ke liye apna dupatta se pasina pochha aur seedha Arjun ki taraf dekha. Arjun ek wall ke sahare khada tha, lekin uske haath ka bandage halka sa khul gaya tha. Ammu turant uske paas gayi, uska haath pakad kar gusse–narmi se bola.

Ammu
Arjun… tu abhi tak yeh chot sambhal ke nahi rakhta? Kitni careless hai tu. Dard ho raha hai na?

Arjun ne bas uski taraf dekha, aankhon me ek naughty sa chamak tha. Usne hothon pe aadhi si muskaan laakar kaha.
Arjun
Dard toh bas tab hota hai jab tu door hoti hai… baaki sab toh manageable hai.

Ammu pal bhar ke liye uski aankhon me ghurti rahi, uske lafz uske dil tak utar gaye the. Ek dum se uske chehre ka gussa pighal gaya. Usne sir hila kar, par aankhon me pighli si narazgi ke saath bola.

Ammu
Tu har baar mere gusse ko kaise pighla deta hai, Arjun?

Ye kehkar usne nazar neeche kar li, lekin uski aankhon ke kone bheeg gaye. Pyaar ke aansu nikal aaye jo usne chupane ki koshish ki, par Arjun ne turant dekh liya.

Arjun bas chupchaap uske chehre ko dekhte raha. Uske hothon pe ek pyaar bhari smile aa gayi—woh smile jo sirf Ammu ke liye rakhta tha, jo uske dard ko shaant kar deti thi.

Dono ke beech us lamhe me koi aur nahi tha—na slogans, na posters, na election ka shor. Sirf ek narmi thi jo unke dilon ko ek doosre se jod rahi thi.

Canteen lunch break ke waqt usual shor–sharaba kar raha tha, tray ki awazein, ladkon ki hansi–mazaak aur khana lene ki line. Lekin jaise hi Zaheer apne group ke saath wahan enter hua, hawa me ek alag si energy bhar gayi. Uska chaal confident tha, jaise usne decide kar liya ho ki yeh lunch break sirf uska hone wala hai.


Wo seedha ek table par chadh gaya, uske shoes ki thap-thap canteen ke echo me gungunay. Peeche Shanu, Priya aur Taz uske support me floor par khade ho gaye—ek dum organized tareeke se, jaise yeh koi proper event ho.

Zaheer ne apne haath uthakar crowd ki taraf dekha aur thandi par authority bhari awaaz me bola.

Zaheer
To… aaj ka humara target hai canteen.

Uski awaaz ke sath hi canteen ka shor dheere–dheere kam hone laga. Students ka dhyaan uski taraf shift ho gaya. Koi apne tray ke saath khada reh gaya, koi plate ka morsel aadha kha kar hi ruk gaya, sab ke sab curious nazron se uski baat sunne lage.

Zaheer ne ek pal ruk kar sabhi chehron ko scan kiya, phir usne apni baat aage badhai.

Zaheer
Hum sab jaante hain ki yeh canteen sirf samose, kachori aur ek do cheezon tak limited hai. Aur jab humein kuch thoda alag, thoda better chahiye hota hai, toh humein college ke bahar bhaagna padta hai. Kyun? Kyun na yahin ek open area cafe ho… ek aisa jagah jo bade scale par ho, jahan pizza ho, pasta ho, shakes ho, fast wifi ho… har wo facility jo hum deserve karte hain.

Uski har line pe kuch students ne haan me haan milana shuru kar diya. Priya ne crowd ki taraf dekh kar supportive smile di, jaise unhe motivate kar rahi ho. Taz ne apne phone par already kuch designs aur proposals open kar rakhe the, students ke saamne projection dikhane ke liye ready.

Shanu, bas cross arms kiye confident khadi thi, lekin uske chehre ki serious expression clearly dikhata tha ki wo Zaheer ke saath hai, bina kisi doubt ke.

Zaheer ne apne haath jor kar ek final punch diya.

Zaheer
Ye sirf ek cafe nahi hoga… ye humari jagah hogi. Ek space jahan hum apni marzi se baith sake, baat kar sake, apne ideas exchange kar sake… bina college ke purane system ke pressure ke. Ab decide aapko karna hai… kya aap ready ho iss change ke liye?

Canteen me taaliyan baj uthi, kuch log seeti bhi bajane lage. Zaheer ke chehre par ek confident muskaan aa gayi—usne janta ka pulse pakad liya tha.

Scene parallel chalne lagta hai—


Zaheer ki baat khatam hote hi canteen ka mahaul almost rally jaisa ho gaya tha. Students ki mixed reactions the—kuch full support me, taaliyan bajate, cheer karte… kuch bas skeptical faces ke saath chup baithe, soch rahe ki ye sab possible bhi hai ya nahi. Lekin ek baat clear thi, Zaheer ne apna agenda strong tarike se rakh diya tha.

Shanu, Priya aur Taz uske aas paas khade, uski speech ke baad crowd ke students ke sath engage karne lage—Priya softly convince karti, Taz apna phone ghuma kar mock designs aur menus dikhata, aur Shanu bas strong presence ke saath har objection ka answer deti. Zaheer neeche utar kar apni seat par casually baith gaya, lekin uski aankhen ab bhi us bheed par thi—usne feel kar liya tha ki hawa dheere dheere uske paksh me chalne lagi hai
Cut to… open lawn ke kone me Arjun ka camp.

Arjun aur uske group ne ek chhota sa stage jaisa banaya hua tha—sirf ek bench aur kuch charts, par uske around ka vibe organized aur grounded tha. Ammu saamne khadi thi, ladkiyon ko address kar rahi thi—uski awaaz me warmth aur sincerity thi.

Ammu
Humein sirf naye khane ya naye cafe ki zarurat nahi hai… humein suraksha chahiye, humein sunne wali awaaz chahiye. Hum chahti hain ki girls hostel ke liye ek proper grievance cell ho, jahan koi bhi apni problem bina darr ke share kar sake.

Girls hostel ki ladkiyan ekdum attentive thi, kuch ladkiyan toh literally aage badh kar apni baatein Ammu ko batane lagi thi—water supply issues, security guards ki attitude problems, late night gate policy… sab kuch. Arjun saamne khada, apni usual confident body language ke sath Ammu ko support karta hua.

Arjun
Aur yeh sirf hostel tak limited nahi hoga. Agar aapko koi bhi problem hai—canteen, library, faculty—hum ensure karenge ki aapki baat committee tak pohoch kar solve ho. Yeh election sirf jeetne ke liye nahi hai… yeh aapki awaaz banne ke liye hai.

Students ka group head nod karta, aur kuch ladkiyan literally feel karti thi ki pehli baar koi unke liye serious hai. Ammu unki baatein likh rahi thi, promise kar rahi thi ki unke issues solve honge.

Iss waqt parallel dikh raha tha—ek taraf Zaheer apna cafe aur modern facilities ka sapna bech raha tha, aur doosri taraf Arjun aur Ammu basic safety, rights aur problems ko address kar rahe the.

Aur sabse khaas baat… dono groups ke chhote spies dono camps me maujood the—ek dusre ke plans silently note karte hue. Rivalry ko aur hawa milne wali thi.

Dono hi groups apne apne speech ke baad collage me tehel rahe they ki dono ke raste cross hote hai,

Canteen ke bahar ke open corridor me dono camps samne samne khade the. Shor sharaba apni peak par tha—supporters ek dusre ko chillate, galiya dete, aur dhakka mukki karte. Beech me Arjun aur Zaheer ki aankhon ka contact—ekdum intense, jaise do shikari ek dusre ko tak rahe ho.

Background me sab kuch dheere chal raha tha—bachchon ki awazein stretch ho kar echo ban rahi thi, ek dum filmy slow motion.

Zaheer apni teekhi awaaz me chillata hai

Zaheer
Tu sirf lafzon ka sher hai Arjun… action me tu kabhi bhi zero hi rahega.

Arjun ka gussa ekdam phat padta hai. Uski mutthi tight hoti hai, veins ubhar aati hain aur wo aage badh kar ek powerful punch throw karta hai—seedha Zaheer ke chehre ki taraf.

Camera angle ekdum dramatic—punch hawa chheer kar jaata hai, lekin…

Zaheer last moment me duck kar jaata hai.

Aur wo punch seedha jaake… Taz ke pet me lagta hai.

Taz ka chehra pehle twist hota hai—phir uske muh se ek zabardast ULTI nikalti hai, full slow motion me hawa me uchhalti hui… aur jaake seedhi… Priya ke chehre par girti hai.

Crowd ek pal ke liye shock me freeze ho jaata hai.

Priya ka reaction—ek dum horror movie style, aankhen phat jaati hain, haath face se door hota hai aur wo chillane wali hoti hai.

Uss moment ko dekh kar Ammu aur Shanu dono ek hi saath apne muh par haath rakh leti hain—unka expression ekdum ewww wala. Dono ko ulti jaisi feel hoti hai, aur bina kuch bole jaldi jaldi corridor se door nikal jaati hain.

Arjun uss pal me Taz ko ek weird si look deta hai—thoda guilty, thoda awkward.

Arjun (andar hi andar)
Yeh kya kar diya maine…

Taz uske pet ko pakad ke halka sa jhukta hai, phir ek bechaari si smile ke saath kehta hai jaise chhodo bhai, ab main aur nahi karunga.

Crowd me hasi ki ladi phoot padti hai, lekin tension abhi bhi hawa me lambi hai.

Tabhi Zaheer Arjun ke shoulder ko jhatke se pakadta hai, usse ghumata hai aur bas ekdum cinematic slow motion fight sequence start hota hai—dono ek dusre par punch, push, grab karne lagte hain. Crowd ek taraf hasi me hai aur doosri taraf intensity me cheer kar raha hai.

Canteen ke aas paas ka atmosphere ekdum Bollywood ke funny + action combo jaisa ban gaya tha—ek taraf ulta punch aur ulti ka comedy, aur doosri taraf Arjun vs Zaheer ki asli fight ka high-voltage drama.

Arjun aur Zaheer ke beech slow motion fight start ho chuki thi.

Zaheer ne Arjun ko shoulder se ghuma kar wall ke against push kiya, Arjun ne counter me uske haath ko jhatka dekar sidha punch maara. Punch hawa ko chheer kar gaya, Zaheer neeche slip kar gaya aur dono table ke upar gir gaye.

Crashhhh! Steel ki trays, samose, thandi coffee aur chutney sab hawa me udhne lagte hain. Students apne phone nikal kar video banane lagte hain, har angle se slow motion reels capture ho rahi thi.

Ek ladka chillata hai
Bhai ye toh Instagram pe 1 million views le lega!

Ek aur ladki hass kar kehti hai
Reel ki caption hogi From Canteen to WWE!

Arjun aur Zaheer ek doosre ko dhakka dete, kisi ki plate girti hai, pani poori ka paani hawa me uchhal kar kisi aur ke kapdon par gir jata hai. Poora canteen ab comedy + chaos ka live stadium ban chuka tha.

Taz abhi bhi pet pakde hue awkward smile de raha tha, Priya tissue se apna face saaf karte karte gusse se almost fategi hi thi. Uski cheek par chutney chipki thi, jo aur bhi comedy lag rahi thi.

Crowd me shor tha—Maaro Maaro!… Arjun jeetega!… Nahi Zaheer jeetega!

Tabhi ek dum se entrance ke taraf se ek heavy authoritative awaaz gunji.

Principal
Enoughhhhhh

Principal apne haath se tables pe zor se thapp thappata hai, awaaz ek dum sharp echo karti hai.
Principal
Aaj tum dono ko disciplinary committee ke samne phir khada kiya jayega. Ek aur tamasha hua toh election kya, college me tumhari kursi bhi khatam!

Crowd ekdum silence me aa gaya. Students apne phone dheere se pocket me daal lete hain, jaise kuch hua hi nahi.
Arjun aur Zaheer dono thoda sa peeche hatega, lekin aankhen ab bhi ek dusre pe hi fix thi—jaise silently keh rahe ho yeh khatam nahi hua hai.

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Nice update

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