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Rudra ka atank pakeezao par
#41
(08-09-2025, 04:44 PM)MRWOLF Wrote: Jis hisab se story jaa rahi hai do u think aisa possible hoga?? Jaisa charcter hai shazia ka do u think it is possible??? Apko lagta hai ki aisi sharef khatun apni marzi se sex karegi wo bhi kisi gair mard k 7???? 

Practical points bhi dekhna zaruri hai na dear...

Ap khud he sochiye ek pakiza aurat ka bas jism ki baat ni hoti rooh ki bhi baat hoti hai ye toh hum maze k liye thodi bohot cheezay add kar dete hai... Ki aisa tha waisa tha....

Par haqikat toh humesha vice versa he hoti hai unfortunately.... Always M .. man get's.... If u know what I mean...... 


Aur jaisa ki mene kaha ye ek real story hai....... Aur aage k updates hai mere pass samne wali se... Par jaldi he both of us will b busy....  Aur aap bane rahiye is story k 7 hoo sakta hai ki aap jaisa soch rahe ho waisa he hoo aageee..... Chances ho sakte hai....


NEVER LOOSE HOPES....

AND SPECIAL THANKS TO U FOR READING ALL MY STORIES AND SUPPORTING ME ...... IF U HAVE ANYTHING IN MIND MUJE PRIVATE MESSAGE KARIYE MAIN APKE LIYE KHASH USI HISAB SE LIKHUGAA ......JAISI APKO CHAHIYE WAISI

Wah kya baat hai.. Main apko bata dunga sir...
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(08-09-2025, 05:33 PM)Romeo32 Wrote: Amazing Writing Skills.Great Story.......
But koi toh hoga koi ladki hogi madarse mein jo rudra se mili hui ho or Shahida or Shazia ko trap karne mein help kare or wahan ki sari information rudra ko de

Ayee hayee dimag toh kafi tagda lagaya apne....

Juday rahiye dekhte hai kya hota hai and yes... Shahida par cheezay nahi aane de toh he better hai q ki wo ek buzurg hogai hai.... Wo maza nahi rahegaa.....

Aur main bhi as a reader baat krra hu naa ki as a writer.....

Ho sakta hai shahida ko bhi ragad de wo log....ya ho sakta hai nahi kare kuch....

Dekhte hai aage hota kya hai.... Maza aega kafi dil chasp banani hai kahani ko .... Q ki mere readers ne muje kafi request ki thi is story k liye......
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And yes jiski jo bhi khwaish hai main usko waisi story me tabdil karduga... I'll write for audiance par ek request hai register yourself......... Plz register yourself taaki apke comments muje acche Lage aur main story likhu.... Q ki bas log agar padhne lagege aur koi comments ni hoga toh maza ni aega..

cool2 cool2 cool2


U all r getting a writer who will write stories as per ur wish....
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#44
Your writing is excellent and amazing
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Fantastic story.
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(08-09-2025, 08:29 PM)Aparna Saha Wrote: Your writing is excellent and amazing

Thank u so much and enjoy 
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(08-09-2025, 08:46 PM)3 Idiots Wrote: Fantastic story.

Thanks dear 
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SALEEM BHI AB HAQ K SAATH PAR DAR BHI





 Saleem ne jab ye sab dekha toh uski himmat badh gai... Par wo dar bhi raha tha ki kya hoga kese hoga..... Wo log ab wapas madarse agae thae.........Sohaib saleem ko bula kar bohot zyada jhaadta hai ki ye hai sacchi jisko chupa rahe thae tum, bolo....... Saleem kuch nahi kehta bas nazrien neechi rakhta hai aur kehta hai... Sohaib sahab main dara huwa tha jab maine awaaz uthai thi tab muje jaan se Marne ki dhamki mili thi baal baccho wala admi hoon maaf kardijiye..... 


Sohaib kehta hai toh kya ye kisi ki bacchiya nahi hai??..
Saleem rota hu maafiya aur minnate krta hai uska zameer jaag gaya tha usme ab himmat agai thi par usko dar bhi lag raha tha ki aage kya hogaa....


 Sohaib kehta hai saleem dekho main jaanta hu tum par zimmedari agai hai kaafi... Tumhare walid k inteqal k baad par saleem agar tum himmat har jaoge aise bacchiyo ko hawale krdoge toh kese chalega tum he bataoo......


Saleem - huzur main bahar jab madarse k tam jham me laga rehta hu tab meri biwi aur bacche akele hote hai Ghar... Wo logo ne dhamki di thi Ghar aakar muje.... Jab mene security officer complaint ki thi, aap he batiye main kya karu......


Sohaib sochta hai aur kehta hai hmmm dekhte hai saleem bhai ab toh main sabki hifazat ka zimma bhi leta hu.....aur bhay mukht karna hoga is jagah ko.... Aur jo apke saath kabhi sabhi aate hai wo hai apko begum ?


Saleem - jii ha Sohaib Bhai wo hai humari begum... Wo bachiyo ko urdu ki class padhati thi.... Par humare khud ka bhi  baccha hogaya jo chota hai kaafi is wajh se wo kabhi sabhi he aa pati hai..... Sohaib bhai ap ek baar security officer station ka mamla dekhlijiye aur mla sahab se bhi baat karlijiye muje dar lagra hai.....


Sohaib - darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai apko... Aur ap mere  chote bhai hai toh nazar jhuka kar baat na kijiye... Hum sab praband krege dikkat ki koi baat nahi hai....


 Aur BAATIEN khatam hoti hai


Shazia kehti hai Sohaib se ki jii ze saleem kehraha tha dekh lijiye security officer station toh ek baar hum check krle kya... Q ki shayad kuch ho naa jae...wo logo ne chodh diya hoga toh??? Hum dekhle kya???


Sohaib kehta hai begum jaege hum dikkat naa le aapp...dekhte hai par Aise kese chodh dege usko... Uspar case hoga..... 

Shazia - par security officer keh rahi thi sir apke aane ki koi zarurat nahi hai hum theekane laga dege iskoo... Aap sochiye aur ye dar saleem ka aur upar se aaj ladkiyo k 7 aisi harkat hui hai ..... Aur bhale he wo rudra ka thikana dusre raste par hai lekin jab bhi hum Ghar jaate hai uske kuch ladke dikh he jaate hai.....



Sohaib bhi gor o fikar krta hai aur kehta hai begum dekhege hummm.....

Aur kuch der hone k baad wo log nikal jaate hai security officer station ki kya hora hai waha dekhne.....
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AL-HAQ COMITTEE KA KESHAV SE TAKRAAV





Puri committee jaati hai security officer station dekhne ki kya huwa hai... Aur kya karwai kari ja rahi hai shazia ne devi ko call kardiya tha aur mla ko bhi message drop krdiya tha shazia ne pura tam jham ka intezaam kardiya tha.... Aur jaise he wo log security officer station pohocte  hai waha se keshav deepu ko chudhwa kar le he jaraha tha ki Sohaib ne dekhliya.....


Aur Sohaib ne pakad liya deepu ko.... Aur ek baat jab bhi aisi mardo ki ladai ya mardo ka maslah hota tab comittee ki aurtay gadi main he rehti hai total 2 guns thi unke pass aur front seat par driver hota jiske pass bhi gun thi safety reason k wajh se..... Halaki ab tak kabhi aisi nobat nahi aai thi unlogo ne Aaj Tak 12 madarso me kaam kiya tha ..... Par Sohaib ko safety ki chinta thi.... Bohot zyada....


Sohaib ne deepu ka haath pakad liya tu bahar... Constable ne dekhliya sir par haath pit kar ander bahga.... Keshav k saath 4 ladke thae total... Sohaib k saath 5 mard aur jaise he haath pakda tha mla aur kuch log bhi waha agae.... Aur devi k admi bhi waha par poch gae yani ki Keshav pura ghir gaya thaa.....


Lekin Keshav ko pata ni tha ki sab isi k saath hai... Keshav kehta hai abbe aee hath chood.... Sohaib keshav se kehta hai oye sun bich me naa aana ye apradi ke....


Sohaib usse ek dhakka deta hai keshav ka ek ladka aage badhta hai utne me peeche se devi k ladke unko pakad lete hai... Keshav dekhta hai ki ye kyaa.... Keshav kehta hai rukjao aur kehta hai galti karra hai tu bohot pastaegaa...... Sohaib kehta hai tu shayad neekhi kehna chahta hai galti nahi...... Aur utne me insceptor aata hai ki kya huwa aree mla sahab aap... Aur Sohaib usko pura incident batata hai.... Mla bhi nazar nahi mila raha tha keshav se....



Keshav kehta hai q be din bhar gae tumhare bhi.... Yakub usko kehta hai chupp ekdum.... Keshav kehta hai ye sahi hai ab toh aur wo saleem ko dekh leta hai.... Aur Keshav kehta hai ki Ohoo saleem bhaiyaa wahhh galti kiye hum tumko chance deke abhi ragde ge barbar tumhari joru ko.... Aur ye sab record hora tha..... Keshav kehta hai bohot ladkiyo ko ragda tumhare madarsay se ab aur ragdege ek ek ladki par ye chaaro chadh jaege.... Aur religion par bhi gaaliya deta hai...


Utne me jitne log thae sabne milkar itna mara Keshav ko aur sabko jiski hadh nahi keshav ka ek daat bhi Tut Gaya tha..... security officer ne is situation me keshav ka saath diya he nahi q ki  record hora tha sab par jaise taise churwaya ......


Saleem ne keshav ka collar pakad kar security officer station me legaya .... Ye lijiye sahab video recording bhi hai ab toh sab pesh hoga court main......


Insceptor ne rudra ko call lagane ka moka he nahi diya kisi ko bhi..... Aur usne jaan buj kar camera par haath mara 2 se 3 baar ki aree ye band kijiye ki usko problem naa ho ....


Inspector ka naam tha inspector ali.... Usko rudra par pehle se he thasan thi... Q ki uski biwi jab gai thi madarse tab ek baar rudra k londe ne Holi k waqt uski gaand par paani ki thaili fek kar mara tha...par insceptor ko koi saboot na mila khass par pata sabko tha....


Usne rudra se shikayat ki toh rudra ne kaha abbe oo insceptor saboot laae ho?? Naaa he naa chalo jaao...ali ne usko kaha tha ki jis din saboot mila usdin wo ladka bachega nahi ... Rudra ne kaha dhamka rahe ho kaa be aur ali ko bohot zaleel karke waha se nikal diyaa......


Keshav aur uske dosto par fir hogai... Aur kese toh rudra ko is baat ka pata laga wo soch raha tha ki normal baat hogi wo cocaine k nashe main tha.... Usko sab baat choti he lag rahi thi...... Rudra kehta hai aree koi baat nahi jaege sasura.... Humari aulaad hai aur haste haste he jhulay par Sogaya.....


Keshav ka bohot bura haal tha insceptor ali usko medical k liye tak nahi jaane de Raha tha .... Wo ishara karta aur koi na koi usko aakar marta peeche se ki ladkiyo par bolega dharm par bolega..... Ye pehli baar huwa tha ki rudra k bete par kisi ne haath daala tha....
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fishing fishing


NOTE YE STORY KAAFI BADHI HOGI ISME AAP BE WAJUD KE SEX KI UMEED SE AAE THAE TOH YE STORY APKE LIYE NAHI HAI.....


EKDUM PRACTICAL AUR SYSTEMATIC HOGA SAB Q KI BOHOT HE TRUE GHATNA HAI YE... JO BHI AYODHYA SE HAI..... AUR AISI KISI GHATNA K BARE ME JANTE HAI.... WO LOGO KO PATA HOGA....


HALAKI NAAM ALAG HAI CHARACTERS K PAR JISKO SATYA GHATNA PATA HAI WO SAMJH JAEGA.... AUR JEE HAA..... KAHANI DILCHASP HOGI YE SAB TOH BUILDUP HAI.......


PLEASE BE PATIENT AND ENJOY.... MAIN AGAR CHAHTA TOH BASELESS BAS AADI TEDI LIKH DETA JAISE KI....

KESHAV NE CHODDIYA... RUDRA NE CHOD DIYA SHAHIDA KO YE NA WO.... AUR YE SAB LIKH KAR KHATAM KAR DETA PAR NAHI...... 


EKDUM DEEP LIKHNI HAI MUJE YE STORY TOH JUDE RAHIYE AAP SABHI LOG.......


AUR YES MUJE PATA HAI KI HUM LOG MOOD ME HOTE THAE TOH LAGTA HAI AREE YAAR AAGE BADH JALDI CHUDAI PAR JAA.... PAR PRACTICALLY SOCHIYEGA AGAR WAISA HOGAYA NA MAZA MAR JAEGA ...


TOH HUMARA RISHTA BAS PANI CHUTTA RISHTA TUTA WAISA HOJAEGA.... AUR MAIN YE NAHI CHAHTA...


MAIN CHAHTA HU KI AAP SABHI EK EK WORDS KO FEEL KARE IS KAHANI K ... KI AISA HUWA OHO WAISA HUWA AB KYA HOGA..... NAA KI STUPID SEX KI UMEED RAKHE....
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Very nice story
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#52
Danshu aur dhamaka update
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#53
Very good story boss
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(09-09-2025, 03:54 AM)hfmwife Wrote: Very nice story

Thanks
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(09-09-2025, 12:54 PM)Writter Wrote: Very good story boss

Thanks
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(09-09-2025, 07:12 AM)Afruza Sumi Wrote: Danshu aur dhamaka update

Thank u and juday rahiye
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(09-09-2025, 02:42 AM)MRWOLF Wrote: fishing fishing


NOTE YE STORY KAAFI BADHI HOGI ISME AAP BE WAJUD KE SEX KI UMEED SE AAE THAE TOH YE STORY APKE LIYE NAHI HAI.....


EKDUM PRACTICAL AUR SYSTEMATIC HOGA SAB Q KI BOHOT HE TRUE GHATNA HAI YE... JO BHI AYODHYA SE HAI..... AUR AISI KISI GHATNA K BARE ME JANTE HAI.... WO LOGO KO PATA HOGA....


HALAKI NAAM ALAG HAI CHARACTERS K PAR JISKO SATYA GHATNA PATA HAI WO SAMJH JAEGA.... AUR JEE HAA..... KAHANI DILCHASP HOGI YE SAB TOH BUILDUP HAI.......


PLEASE BE PATIENT AND ENJOY.... MAIN AGAR CHAHTA TOH BASELESS BAS AADI TEDI LIKH DETA JAISE KI....

KESHAV NE CHODDIYA... RUDRA NE CHOD DIYA SHAHIDA KO YE NA WO.... AUR YE SAB LIKH KAR KHATAM KAR DETA PAR NAHI...... 


EKDUM DEEP LIKHNI HAI MUJE YE STORY TOH JUDE RAHIYE AAP SABHI LOG.......


AUR YES MUJE PATA HAI KI HUM LOG MOOD ME HOTE THAE TOH LAGTA HAI AREE YAAR AAGE BADH JALDI CHUDAI PAR JAA.... PAR PRACTICALLY SOCHIYEGA AGAR WAISA HOGAYA NA MAZA MAR JAEGA ...


TOH HUMARA RISHTA BAS PANI CHUTTA RISHTA TUTA WAISA HOJAEGA.... AUR MAIN YE NAHI CHAHTA...


MAIN CHAHTA HU KI AAP SABHI EK EK WORDS KO FEEL KARE IS KAHANI K ... KI AISA HUWA OHO WAISA HUWA AB KYA HOGA..... NAA KI STUPID SEX KI UMEED RAKHE....

Bura mat manana bro....is fourm pe hum sex story padhne ate hai na ki koyi novel.....jitna hot and erotic sex hoga story me utna hi famous hoga.. I think.....baki apki marji....keep going.. update dete rehna.
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(10-09-2025, 05:02 AM)Edens Wrote: Bura mat manana bro....is fourm pe hum sex story padhne ate hai na ki koyi novel.....jitna hot and erotic sex hoga story me utna hi famous hoga.. I think.....baki apki marji....keep going.. update dete rehna.

Start me he clear krdiya tha dude story lambi hogi kafi.. detailed me hogi which is called a novel yes... 


Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai let's c.... Q ki practical bhi honi chahiye story ye nahi ki bas pakad liya ragad diya... I don't support such nonsense...

Bura mat manna bro... Acchi lage toh padhte rahiye
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RUDRA KO JAB HOSH AYA 



Rudra thakur ko jab hosh aata hai aur usne keshav se laghbhag 2 dino se nahi Mila tha.... Wo puchta hai uske londe se kaha hai keshav..... Ek Banda kehta hai Malik chote malik wo Jail main hai..... Rudra kehta hai kyaaa ab tak aur uth jaata hai wo jhat se kapda pehen kar call lagata hai mantriyo ko ki aisi aisi baat hai aur security officer station jaata hai pehle uske saath 2 gaadi bhar kar ladke thae.....


Rudra security officer station jaa kar kehta hai kaha hai keshav gurrata huwa jaata hai insceptor ali kehta hai aree bhaiyaaji aap aiye bethiye... Rudra kehta hai aree insceptor zyada hoshiyaari nahi samjhaa.... Bata kaha hai mera ladlaa... Ali kehta hai court se zamant karwana ab usne aisi harkat krdi ki kya he kahu...


Wo chilla kar kehta hai tune kese bana diya case .... Wo kehta hai media ka mamla hojata video hai unlogo k pass.... Aur wo video batata bhi hai jisme ali cameray par haat marta hai keshav ko bachata hai usne puri tarah se perfect role play kiya tha......


Rudra kehta hai ehh sahi nahi haaaiiii.... Ali usko kehta hai koi saboot hai???? Rudra aankhien badi krke usko dekhta hai ki yehi baat rudra ne usko kahi thi.... Ali kehta nahi bhaiyaa ji aisa court kahega..... Rudra samjh jaata hai ali ne uske saath game kardiya thaa......


Utne me ek mantri bhi aajata hai aur insceptor usko salute krke saara incident batata hai ki ye ye baat thi.... Aur video bhi.... Wo mantri bhi kehta hai rudra ye kya hai kese keshav aisi baat kr sakta hai.... Aur side lejata hai rudra ko aur kehta hai ki rudra tum he batao kya kare ab ... Rudra kehta hai hume kach hu nahi pata hume humara keshav bahar chahiii bass ...... Mantri kehta hai samjho rudra...


Agar hum involve hogae toh party ki chabi bigad jaegi keshav unke dharm ko kya kya nahi bole unki bhasa nahi dekhe tum aur insceptorwa batahi raha tha ki eh toh kuch naahi hai... Video jo unke pass hai uhh bahot he bura hai.....


Rudra ekdum gusse se laal wapas jaata hai..... Rudra ab milta hai keshav se jail me keshav ka pura muu suja huwa tha daag bhi tuta huwa tha wo roo roo kar sab batata hai aur sabki shikayat krta hai..... Ki aisi aisi baat thiii...


Rudra ko bhi rona ajata hai beta ko aisa dekh kar..... Wo kehta hai ki inko toh bataege .....

Keshav sabka batata hai insceptor ali ki harkat, saleem ki harkat, Sohaib ne kya kiya tha... Saari harkat batata hai 


Rudra ek dum dheela padh Gaya tha wo wapas toh jaata hai bade mantri ko call bhi krta hai .... Par koi usko entertain nahi krra q ki wo video AL-HAQ committee ne news channel par dalwa di thi..... Aur bohot issues huwe thae...... Bade bade mantrio se jab pucha jaata wo kehte sakht karwai hogi....


Rudra ekdum bebas hogaya tha wo Tut chuka tha wo chah kar bhi  kuch nahi kar sakta tha q ki ayodhya me mandir banne ka samjhan hogaya tha danger horahe thae jo ab thande thae upar se keshav ka aise bayan jo instagram par, youtube par saari jagah fael gaya tha log usko gaaliya de rahe thae ......

Q ki usne religion ki ladkiyo aur unke religion k bare me bohot he buri buri baatien bol di thi......


Rudra bas wo video dekhta aur aankho se aansu behte saare mantrio ne use kuch karne se mana krdiya tha warna wo bakheda kaha kar deta.... Bohot bada par yaha manjra he ulta tha.....

Ab kya hota hai aage judee rahiyee......
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              RUDRA KI KOSHISH





 Rudra kafi deeno se naa kisi se kuch baat krta na khana na peena barbar kuch nahi chal raha tha.... Q ki uske jeevan main ye pehli baar huwa tha ki wo itna bebas tha aur wo chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paraha thaa..... Rudra ne kahi mantriyo se baat ki sab jagah se usko nirasha he mili....

Jo '. sangtan k mantri thae wo jab Delhi se wapas aee aur rudra ne jab sab bataya unhone kaha ki kuch praband karna hoga.... Aur tam jham me jud gae Keshav k liye... Mantri ji rudra ko mana nahi kar sakte thae q ki rudra ne saari cheezay sambhalta tha un ki..... 


Jab ek meeting bulai hai toh kaafi soch vichar samne aae jaise ki ..... Keshav ko pagal ghosit krde ya dabav me bulwaya gaya security officer ne bhi saath di ya aisi saari cheezay.... Par waqil log plan bhi drop karte.... 


Mantrio ko bhi samjh agaya ki agar madarse aur comittee case wapas lele toh kuch ho sakta hai.... Aur unko devi ka bich me aana bhi bohot bura laga tha ki apne he logo k khilaaf jaa rahi hai wo..... Par devi bhi powerful thi......




Mantri kehta hai ki hum devi se baat karege ki behtak bulai jae aur sullah karlete hai.... Rudra kehta hai mantri ji aise kese chor de hum unko... Humare ladke par baat aai hai ab.. apke itne kaam kiye hai humne .... Mantri kehta hai haa rudra chorne kaha keh rahe hai... Dabege unko par pehle apni gardan toh chudhwaa le.... Rudra bas haami bharta hai...


Aur mantri jii devi se baat krte hai ki aisi aisi baat hai solve karna chahte hai saare charges hatwana hoga badle me aur koi dikkat nahi aegi abse... Hum assurity dete hai..... Devi bhi Maan jaati hai q ki devi ko jab bhi koi religious kaam hota mantri ji usko support krte....


Devi baat krti hai shazia se ki aisi aisi baat hai aur shazia Sohaib ko batati hai... Wo log devi k  banglow jaate hai aur waha baat hoti hai Sohaib Maan jata hai par kehta hai ki aaj hum hai yaha par nahi rahege tab bhi kuch ho sakta hai isliye sullah he behtar hai hum sab case wapas lelege... Aur sullah k liye man liya jaata hai....


Devi bhi metting k liye keh deti hai mantri jii ko.....
Aur Sohaib peechle 1 mahine se ayodhya me he tha aur kab tak rehte wo log apne ghar se dur wo log Maan jaate hai ki samjhota hojana chahiye.... Aur meeting set hojati hai.....
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