[raja shri]

Hi kk brother..
Is there any hope for an update this weekend?

[kk007007]

too many female characters, i m not sure what's the point of diverting focus from ganga

Few thoughts!

OP - This was a great story, one of the best! Detailed, erotic and slow. Loved every bit of it.

Now, coming to critique:

1. Too many female characters - This is Ganga's story (no not even Sreenu's) and most of the readers like to have one central character - The fire of out Loins. Please don't dilute that with side characters.
2. Divulging in past puts a Dampner on what's happening in the present - We loved the way Ganga behaved, but what are we trying with the past stuff here - yes, there is a hidden desire, but story (mostly) should move forward.
3. Slow updates - Kills the joy! Maybe not huge ones, but once a two week or so could be a good pace.

Too many females? There is no such..   

Anyways i understand your favorite is ganga.. mine too! 

But there is reason for everything.. All threads will tied up

[Nobita]

Please give an update today bro

[pro10]

Hoping for an update today. We are starved og GANGA in action bro.

[Andy Smith]

Is there any chance of a update today bro?

[hotandluking]

For the last few parts,story is moving forward but there is no actual sex.
To the writer--make it happen.
A long sex scene with Chacha or even Sundari+a male character.

[pro10]

so no update again?

[Andy Smith]

When will the next update come kk bro

[tomdickharry2024]

Eagerly waiting for updates KK bro!

Want to know who the mystery man was with Ganga on the bus..

[Baburao12]

I used to think I am the worst writer when it comes to delivering the updates but kk bro is giving serious competition to me, ?

[Baburao12]

What could be great is security officer gather usual suspects to identify ganga to identify who hit the srinu, one after another suspects are brought before ganga , and the last one happens to be the chacha. But instead of saying he was the one was responsible for srinu she just let's him go saying he is not the one. Unkown to security officer both exchange double meaning dialogue, smiles, she gives him peek at her cleavage. And once outside the security officer station chach confronts her asking why she let him go? Then in response ganga takes chacha to her home and has great sex again with him in her house.

[raja shri]

Waiting for your next update Bro...

[Andy Smith]

Bro update?

[tomdickharry2024]

KK bro! eagerly waiting to know what happens on the Bus journey.

Hope there's updates this week...

Thank you!

[Baburao12]

Waiting for chacha

[Andy Smith]

Will any update come this weekend

[Andy Smith]

Bro waiting, is there any chance for any update this week?

[val.coutinho]

Hi .. Anushka here…
I am for real..
I am married and I live in Mumbai with my hubby..
After reading stories here I believe to some extent stories are true.. and to that extent I believe my hubby do not satisfy me..
Also every now and then we end up having fights..
I really want to make him a high time cuck so that he can realise what exactly a sexual pleasure means..

If anyone can help me in making him a cuck. Please message me .. Will share my telegram id on message.. Thanks..

Hi Anushka 
Do you really think making your husband a cuck will solve your marital problems ??

[Abhi T]

Bro yaar yah theek nahin Hai hafte mein ek update ka bolkar kahan gayab ho jaati Ho please at least reply to karo

[srider69]

Seems like no author has time to write anymore. Such a tragedy that the enthusiasm and zeal dies down despite all the encouragement they garner.