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Shipra ki aapbeeti
Hello @devilnew when we see the next bigg updates
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Not able to login for the last few days. Looks like adds jyada ho gaye hai, aaj long time baad login hua hai. Website normally chalne lagegi toh updates writing start kar dunga
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Waiting for next update
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The site has become normal. So, the story is going to resume asap. I will start writing the next update somewhere in this week and will probably post that by the end of next week. I will also check the readers interest in the story before restarting the story.
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Anyone want to read next update of this story???
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Jhooth bolna band karo tum yah story likh nahin rahe ho copy pest kar rahe ho bakwas band karo Apne Dena update to do nahin to story delete kar do
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(07-09-2025, 03:17 AM)Devilnew Wrote: Anyone want to read next update of this story???

Read half of your story it's good continue karo
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(07-09-2025, 04:34 AM)Abhi T Wrote: Jhooth bolna band karo tum yah story likh nahin rahe ho copy pest kar rahe ho bakwas band karo Apne Dena update to do nahin to story delete kar do

Kya hua Bhai copy paste kar raha hai to kaha se kar raha hai wo bata do
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Shipra - a sex toy or slut
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(07-09-2025, 03:24 PM)Abhi T Wrote: Shipra - a sex toy or slut

Ye story bhi meri hi likhi hui hai and yahan par copy paste nahi ho raha, improvise kar raha hu... Dono stories me difference hai but tumne sahi se story padhi hi nhi to kaise pata lagega... 
Knowledge hona acchi baat hai magar knowledge adhoori nahi poori honi chahiye...
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Agar phir bhi kisi ko lagta hai ye story copied hai then aage kya hua ye wahi shaksh bataye...
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Now people are doubting the original writer
Arre writer ka name toh dekh lete dono jagah

More over wahan pe v writer na kaha hai edit kar ke kuch naya try kar rahe hai
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Improvise kar rahe ho to karo yaar kisne roka hai per Mera kahane ka to matlab yah hai ki likhna Hi Hai to kuchh nai story likho ek story ko kitni bar improvise karke likhoge
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(07-09-2025, 11:24 PM)Abhi T Wrote: Improvise kar rahe ho to karo yaar kisne roka hai per Mera kahane ka to matlab yah hai ki likhna Hi Hai to kuchh nai story likho ek story ko kitni bar improvise karke likhoge

You just go ahead and read other stories... I am not going to write stories for the sake of just one or two readers... Aur tum pehle bol rahe the main copy paste kar raha hu ab bol rahe ho kuch naya likhu... Have you written any story?? Do you know kitna time and mind lagta hai ek update likhne me specially jab images bhi upload karni ho and wo bhi story ke track se match karti hui... If you can't find anything new in the ongoing track, toh tumhe bata du ye forum par jitni bhi stories hai mostly sab me ek hi chutiyape wala concept hota hai, lowerclass boy and high class girl, that's okay, but hadd tab ho jaati hai jab bina hi pataye ladki har story me seedha badsoorat ladke ke neeche aa jaati hai... I am trying to write something different, with different flavour... Not with this chutiapa type updates and tumko ye sab repetitive lag raha hai... Go ahead and read other your type chutiyapa stories...
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Jab writer ke pass bolane ke liye kuchh nahin rahata to vah yahi bolate Hain tumne Koi story likhi hai se aage main kuchh nahin bolna chahun good bye
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(08-09-2025, 04:59 AM)Abhi T Wrote: Jab writer ke pass bolane ke liye kuchh nahin rahata to vah yahi bolate Hain tumne Koi story likhi hai se aage main kuchh nahin bolna chahun good bye

Tum jaise mahaan readers se aur ummeed bhi kya ki ja sakti... Kya khoob kaha hai kisine — samajh wahi paata hai jo us raaste se guzra ho, baaki sab sirf bakwaas hi karte rehte hain...
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In between, I have started working on next update, and will post that by upcoming Sunday...
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