23-08-2025, 10:31 AM
Eagerly Waiting for the next updates
Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani
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23-08-2025, 10:47 AM
Sorry @Sriya but please, Edit kar lo abhi to yeh Update No. 78 hai, 80 nahi
23-08-2025, 01:32 PM
(This post was last modified: 23-08-2025, 01:34 PM by Vensaur. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Kafi tight update tha aisa lag raha tha ki shaadi Supriya ki ho rahi hai aur phati Meri padi hai ?
Apne gaon ka character bahut acche se pakda hai hina ek Masoom bacchi Jo apna jivan maaze se jina chahti hai padhna chahti hai kuchh Banna chahti hai per kaise uske Ghar wale typical gaon Wale ki tarah bas uski shaadi karana chahte Hain aur tab tak usko bilkul in cheezo se dur rakthe hai jiss se uska man sex ki taraf na jaye Abbas kese apne bhai se bohot pyar karta hai par gaon mein apni ijjat banae rakhne ke liye apne aap per restrain Laga Ke Rakhta emotion show nahi karta bas akad Mai rehta hai hai uski biwi aur gaon walo ki baato se lagta hai uske andar bhi ek Janwar kaid hai jo Bahar a Gaya to vah kisi ko bhi chod dega kaise hona ki maa apni beti ko andar se tala laga ke sulati hai Amma typical gaon ki budhiya jo kabhi apni beti ki side leti kabhi Bahu ki beech beech mai theekhi baate bhi bolti lekin Dil ki saaf hai aur apne pawirar ki kafi chinta karti hai Phuphu aate hi usne apna character kafi robdar dikhaya jo usually badi nanad ka character hota hai gaon mai kese wo har baat par apni chalane ki koshish karti hai aur kabhi koi naa mane to apna muh fula leti hai xd Iqbal bahar to sher hai but apne bhai se kafi daarta hai ya yu kaho kafi izzat karta hai jo ki usually gaon mai dekha gaya hai ki kese bete ya chote bhai baap ya bade bhai ke aage muh pe tala lagye rehte hai Aur wo gaon ke ajeebon gareeb rasmai bhi kafi intresting thi bohot sare gaon mai aisa kuch na kuch hota hai jo basically mentally prepare kar raha hota ladke ladki ko suhagrat ke liye Supria ab kuch yu fas gayi hai ki jo usne sapne bhi nahi socha tha wo aaj usse karna pad raha ussne iqbaal ka lund bhi dekh raha to jaise jaise nikaah kareeb aayega tention badhta jayega aur Iqbal jo puri izzat karta tha Jane anjane mai Supriya ke kafi kareeb agya hai aur almost uska bhi wohi haal hai jo Supriya ka hai Kya wo khud pe kabu rakh payega aur matter sambhal payega ya control kho ke kuch aisa kar dega Jo uski mam ko Ma(D)am bana de beech mai apna D daal ke XD Last mai yehi kahunga gadhe ne kabhi nahi socha tha ki usko bhi kisi din Supriya se jhadne ka mauka milega haha
23-08-2025, 03:20 PM
Supriya ji yaha to lanka lagi atul ke sath divya ne kya kiya ye bhibdikha do vo bichara zinda bhinhai ki maar diyabgaya
23-08-2025, 04:35 PM
Hey Sriya, Lot of details and truly well researched your story seems to be. Never knew of such rituals too in marriages, the donkey dick one was hilarious. On the Atul Disha front or the Vikram-Isha one, I can understand why u do not want to shift the spotlight now from Supriya. It makes sense that way and keeps the story progressing along at a good speed, otherwise if you talk about the side characters, the focus and interest level will reduce. But do give some closure to those characters in an Epilogue if you can as well.
23-08-2025, 04:38 PM
(23-08-2025, 01:32 PM)Vensaur Wrote: Kafi tight update tha aisa lag raha tha ki shaadi Supriya ki ho rahi hai aur phati Meri padi hai ? Gadhe ki kismat nikal padi ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
23-08-2025, 06:37 PM
Shandaar update
23-08-2025, 10:07 PM
(23-08-2025, 04:35 PM)qazmlp Wrote: Hey Sriya, Lot of details and truly well researched your story seems to be. Never knew of such rituals too in marriages, the donkey dick one was hilarious. On the Atul Disha front or the Vikram-Isha one, I can understand why u do not want to shift the spotlight now from Supriya. It makes sense that way and keeps the story progressing along at a good speed, otherwise if you talk about the side characters, the focus and interest level will reduce. But do give some closure to those characters in an Epilogue if you can as well. Yeah she said she gonna write some new stories of other characters but for those who can't make it to that story I agree some sort of closure will be satisfying for us
23-08-2025, 10:10 PM
23-08-2025, 11:58 PM
24-08-2025, 04:08 AM
Awesome
24-08-2025, 06:50 AM
Very seductive update...
Waiting for next update...
24-08-2025, 03:30 PM
Shadi ke baad ke Riwaaz to double interesting hoge
24-08-2025, 10:17 PM
Hi, sriya
I am big fan of your writing, I have read alot of stories on various forums but this one is exceptional and awesome, in fact I made this is especially for you to reply. I am not able to follow the story since supriya gave blowjob to Mike, I guess since then your story has lost erotic sense, it has turned to old typical Bollywood tragedy romance, it has become mix of few Bollywood stuff, I am not able to understand where you are taking this story, it seems you are trying to gave romance tragedy but just to acquire readers you started with erotic writing and then eventually you are turning to unnecessary love stories...still hope to find some spark in upcoming episodes,hope you justify
25-08-2025, 12:22 PM
Yr riwaj Tao sai m unique tha abhi pta nai or Kia Kia riwaz dekhne ko meleng ge
25-08-2025, 05:36 PM
Waiting for update
25-08-2025, 11:08 PM
Waiting for next update..
26-08-2025, 12:59 AM
Waiting for updates
26-08-2025, 01:21 AM
This is a brilliant piece of work from the author who explores themes of trust and vulnerability through her writings. It acknowledges the deeper themes woven within a sexual context just like it is reality. Very nice update
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