Adultery My wife through the lens of CCTV

[tharkibudda]

I think I just want to clear some air right now as my comments have spiralled out of control.

First of all, i welcome criticism. If I go to a hotel and I dont like the biriyani they serve, I have every rights to criticize even if it was a free biriyani day. Whether I pay money or not, there should be criticism.

I also understand positive and negative criticism and both help me as a poster. I wouldnt even call myself a writer, I just post things with a barely enough storyline and depend more on the sex scenes. Calling me a writer is like calling a porn producer a filmmaker.

What interactive forums do allow is that u can send short updates which help in getting instant feedback and better dopamine boost compared to ISS and lit where u need to write a 2000 word chapter each time. But these forums comes with its own drawbacks as the comments arent moderated.

I too had criticized the works of others and asked for updates. For eg, I told aurelius that his watchman series had a lame ending and the last chapter needs to be reworked. I had asked some authors in lit if they are updating and only one answered back and she told me that she is busy with her personal life and mostly probably her story is dead and i never messaged her after that for this .

What made me pissed that some of the readers dont take time to provide positive or negative criticism which is what a writer needs and only asks for updates and then get pissed that the updates arent regular or big as they wish. and now they are throwing words like overconfidence, ego etc when called out.

I post here only as a form of entertainment. I could use this time to learn some courses or spend more time with family. I do it just as a way to blow off some steam. I dont want to be answerable to nameless faces who only are there to be disappointed with what I give out. not because I'm giving a bad work but because they want more and not satisfied over the time I actually spend online. Its not a compliment, but a false sense of entitlement which I have seen them show to people like airhostesses, waiters etc just because they can without repercussion.

From now.I wont spend anytime arguing with such people. I wanted to ignore but unfortunately, the life has taught me that the more I ignore, they dont stop but get more emboldened and by the language they used after I told them several times sure speaks their innate nature of bullying than actually get what they are causing.

[tharkibudda]

As a reader even this episode unable to digest. How husband keep quiet after seeing brutal seen and sleep peacefully. He decide to see rather than act. Hey bro why don't you try to write about husband decide to reveal to his wife what he see in cc tv and divorce her.

As khemucha has already explained, he is seeing the entire thing on recorded video and in that he is actually seeing himself coming home, watching tv and sleeping. He had no idea that his wife was getting fucked while he was working at home and her frequent tiredness and headaches were a way to escape from his attention. 

As I had written before, he happened to watch these recordings while he was alone. he tried to call his wife but she didnt answer, he tried to confront the boss while he was out of station so he is stuck to watching the old recordings.

Initially he was completely angry over his boss but now he is conflcted seeing his wife respond to him.

He can take up the decision only when his wife comes back or if she comes back.

He can either divorce her, or use her to extract money through blackmail or be a cuck where he watches the videos while pretending to be oblivious of her affair. Its a decision which happens once he watches the story unfold through recordings of cctv..

[tharkibudda]

Looks like Lakhan did the same to the couple lived in the house earlier and it is the reason they divorced. Now its turn of Dristi. She should ask her husband to invite his boss for dinner and make him stay in her home and after her husband goes to sleep she spend full time fucking like rabbit with lakhan. Nice update.

TBH, Lakhan had zero idea about his house, wife and anything. It was through luck or chance he stumbled on this opportunity.

I had said before that someone can take that story up. It can be like the "construction guys" episode in literotica and old xossip.

Husband brings in men to remodel the house and the SoBo wife who married him for his wealth and came to small town gets seduced by the construction guys. 

It gives what the indian erotica readers love the most, Upper class wife seduced by ugly low class guys with an added spice of casteism and religion. 

in Literotica, Shiprat continued the story of aurelius and another lady continued a story of shiprat. So if any writer wants to write that story, I would be all ears.

[tharkibudda]

Because there is unrealistic approach to draw cuckold plot.

In real world even voyeur or cuck never acts this.

However natural response or try to get even or revenge which are so natural act in real life only found literotica forum into "LOVING WIVES" category.

I never found any other forum including this so I moved literotica years ago.


another point including this platform is full of sick hijadi who takes pleasure to write specific religion women degradation and same men weak or portraying as cuck.

many years ago, literotica too had having similar problem whether black people flooded with stories of only white women degration and white men cuck. That problem solved by readers who ignore reading that stories and gave negative ratings.

Thanks Fasterboy. The story hasnt gone to CUCK stage YET. because he is only watching from a recording and he had made efforts to contact his wife and boss to demand explanation but couldnt reach them.

Unfortunately, in order to get viewership from indian readers , we need to follow the following formula

• Cheating wife
  
• Sanskari wife who ends up cheating
  
• Clueless husband who is weak in bed 
  
• Initial forced scenes and then full time indulgent
  
• Low class men with questionable hygiene but bigger dicks and god level stamina
  
• Of course, casteism and religion differences
  
• Cuck husband who ends up liking it
  

Unfortunately, Mine tick a lot of boxes because I too want to engage readers than write a masterpiece.

There was a female writer in literotica who wrote about stories of a sexually positive woman in her 20s indulging in casual sex with other men with no humiliation or forced kinks but she too changed to cheating wives after a while.

as they say "Jo dikhta hai, wo bhikta hai". Either u write stories in other genres hoping to convert ur readers to that or end up changing ur genre for ur readers

[tharkibudda]

The post event watching husband is headed to a dark place if he is not careful ... if Lakhan had defeated Dhristi then, he seems to be defeating the surveillance video watching husband now ... is this darkness necessary to give him the motivation of watching the rest of the videos ... if that's your plot, will he be able to get out of it ... how?

That last parts are well written and the last three paragraphs are perfect, but in the ones preceding that from the time he comes home, it might be a good idea to provide more explicit separation of the response of the husband then, visible in the video when all this was happening, and remembered by the husband now about her withdrawal and growing disconnect with him, and the husband now, who is watching the videos of what had transpired, specially in the scenes where he's watching himself and Dhristi interact in those days. The part where you talk about him remembering her avoiding sexual interaction is a bit more clear in this regard, but I had to read the one below twice or thrice to get what you are actually conveying.

e.g. "... pushing it around her plate with a plastic smile that didn't fool me for a second. Her eyes had been elsewhere, lost in a world I was not welcome to enter.  ..." - did not fool the husband for a second now or then? The realization that she was lost in a world he was not welcome to enter, did this realization dawn now or was it being felt then too. The way you have written these lines, it can be interpreted both ways and cause some confusion, because it does not make sense then, even if he had felt the growing aloofness.

Its an intricate dance you've chose to dance, almost Inception-like. See if you can dance it in distinct costumes(metaphorically speaking, of course), so that readers don't get confused between the two husbands - the one then and the one now. Its not that the one then was blind; he saw what was happening, but did not know the reason and was confused and did not know how to respond, and may be made a few mistakes of omission along the way. The tango between the two avatars of the husband can be as fascinating as the one between Lakhan and Dhristi.

Thank you for ur analysis and I want to tell a real life incident of a person I knew where his wife was cheating him for close to a year. He said that there were so many clues of what she was doing but he never connected those as being wrong but once he discovered her cheating, he realised that she was playing with him for a year.

The same was happening here, he assumed that she was being moody,tired, irritating etc because he made her in a rich colony where half the hpuses were empty and rest were high class to talk to her.  Manav is literally watching himself getting fooled by her in every recording and her changes.  

In the previous recordings, he saw her being completely helpless as Lakhan forced on her but this time she participated with his instructions and at night, she was crying not because she was violated because she might have enjoyed and Manav can sense that from the recordings which is making his anger waiver because all these times, his wife was a victim and now she is participating

[critic_honest]

Hi,

I came across this story, and I must say, it’s really gathering attention for all the right reasons.

First a note to you, dear Author:
I noticed in one of your comments, you called yourself an amateur and compared yourself to a porn producer. Please don’t do that. No one is born a storyteller. Everyone starts somewhere. What matters is your ability to evolve and clearly, you have what it takes. Your story has emotional layers, sex, excitement, innovative angles, tension and most of all 'a couple in Love'. That’s more than what many can manage. So I'll suggest, don't under estimate yourself.
It takes real brains to plot something like this and you are going good till now. Just try to take the comments in a positive way, it would make you sound more mature.

Now the Story:
Right from the beginning, the plot has been engaging and fresh. The CCTV angle was a brilliant out of the box idea. That initial moment where Dhristi had to quickly slip into her nightie while still wet was totally unexpected and incredibly realistic. It didn’t feel staged at all, which made it that much more intense and natural. I wish we could experience more of such natural exciting scenarios in future.


However, things took a very dark and disturbing turn with the incident where Lakhan bangd Dhristi the first time. I was praying if some event could have stopped that from happening but alas. It was difficult and uncomfortable to see her go through such a traumatic encounter. The energy changed completely, and I genuinely felt pain for her. (Thankfully, the narrative showed that her body started liking his brutality which kind of saved the day to little extent showing how the body sometimes reacts independently of the mind). But yeah, such incidents are tend to happen as its a reality so can't call it completely unrealistic, hence it didn’t feel totally implausible.
  (I initially had imagined a different direction, Maybe someone trying to approach Dhristi slowly & carefully while she was home alone . It would have been really interesting to see someone  trying to woo a woman who is so much devoted to her Husband) 
(On a second thought, being a woman like Dhristi & how carefully a village woman remains in real, wouldn't she have checked if Lakhan has already left and to quickly latch the door before undressing? Just a thought )


What I truly appreciate is how well you've captured emotional complexity, especially from Manav’s perspective. His pain, love, and confusion are portrayed so well that it shows the depth of his feelings for Dhristi and how broken he is by her suffering.

A lot of people may not understand or agree, but I personally feel Dhristi has shown remarkable strength. She's been fighting a war within herself, battling her body’s involuntary reactions during these forced acts. She has never willingly encouraged Lakhan, and yet, her poor body betrays her, which adds another tragic layer to her experience. And each time, after the act, her breakdowns show how deeply it affects her. She's not weak or characterless, she’s enduring something emotionally devastating, and her strength lies in surviving it day after day.
She is new to this kind of raw sex with such a big cock which she never thought existed and its like, her body never thought such wild make outs could have such an affect on her. Still each day, after Lakhan leaves, she goes into this depressive state which CCTV shows without a capture doubt which can't be a lie as she is not aware of CCTV.


Many readers are questioning Manav’s manliness, but I disagree. Like one of the readers already explained very clearly that he went to confront Lakhan right away after seeing the footage, even knowing his influence. That takes courage. The scene where he frantically calls the previous house owner, thinking maybe someone is spying on them, shows a man who's desperate, afraid, and trying to protect his wife. He acted out of love.
                       Readers need to understand that, all he has, at the moment is the CCTV footage and with time, things are becoming confusing for him. At first, he was understandably furious and was going through all kinds of emotions and still is,  but as he observes more footage, he’s entering a complex mental state where emotions like confusion, anger, guilt, and curiosity mix. He now is in analyzing state where he's even questioning himself when he finds arousal creeping in while watching footage. 
Important to note here is that, he never got hard when he saw Drishti getting brutally bangd .He started getting hard only when he felt, may be Dhristi's body also liking it. His hardness somewhere is linked with Dhristi's unwanted happiness. 
Just like Dhristi, he also is seeing for the very first time how raw and wild sex can be.
It’s not about perversion, it’s about the raw truth of how our minds and bodies can react when placed in unthinkable circumstances.
He sees that despite everything, Dhristi hasn’t become someone who’s chasing Lakhan or betraying her marriage. He sees the truth, the raw, painful reality of a woman who cries when she’s alone. This is at least comforting to him.




People forget that human physiology isn’t always under our control. Our minds might say one thing, but bodies don’t always comply. Similarly,  Manav's cock is not in his control and sometimes in life things can shock you and make you question your morals when doing unthinkable things. 
In a painful way, he’s learning more about himself, his limits, and his desires and so is Dhristi though unwillingly.  
                   BUT, the most beautiful thing author has managed to preserve is the love between Manav and Dhristi. Despite everything, that love still breathes through the cracks of trauma. Maybe Dhristi hasn’t spoken up yet because of guilt, shame, or fear of how her husband might see her. I hope we get to see her perspective soon.....

*****
- One suggestion, you don't have to explain your plot and reasons to each and everyone here. Also, you should restrict yourself from revealing story plots about what could happen in future. Let it remain a mystery. That’s part of the charm.

- Some readers claiming that Manav is slowly turning cuckold. I see no problem in that. It your story, write it in your way. One of the best stories on xossipy 'Knowing my wife...." was also based on cuckold, yet the character husband in there was more of a man than most of the men who claim to be one. He was a perfect husband in every way.
            Being a cuckold doesn't make anyone less of man. Being a cuckold doesn’t strip a man of love, strength, or character. It all comes down to how the story is told. So i suggest, please go along with the plot you have in mind.

But please, don’t ever take away the love between Manav and Dhristi. That’s the heartbeat of the story. The moment she becomes just another “characterless” woman, you risk losing the emotional weight you’ve built so carefully. Let love persist because that's what’s making this story shine despite the darkness.
Love should always perspire and i think till now, you are doing that beautifully.

Looking forward to the next update.
love,
❤️

[sexycharan]

Awesome writing. please continue.

[Andy Smith]

Request to author , please don't make dhristi a another characterless wife , let the love between the couple always remain strong , that will be the strongest point of the story

[tharkibudda]

Hi,

I came across this story, and I must say, it’s really gathering attention for all the right reasons.

First a note to you, dear Author:
I noticed in one of your comments, you called yourself an amateur and compared yourself to a porn producer. Please don’t do that. No one is born a storyteller. Everyone starts somewhere. What matters is your ability to evolve and clearly, you have what it takes. Your story has emotional layers, sex, excitement, innovative angles, tension and most of all 'a couple in Love'. That’s more than what many can manage. So I'll suggest, don't under estimate yourself.
It takes real brains to plot something like this and you are going good till now. Just try to take the comments in a positive way, it would make you sound more mature.

Now the Story:
Right from the beginning, the plot has been engaging and fresh. The CCTV angle was a brilliant out of the box idea. That initial moment where Dhristi had to quickly slip into her nightie while still wet was totally unexpected and incredibly realistic. It didn’t feel staged at all, which made it that much more intense and natural. I wish we could experience more of such natural exciting scenarios in future.


However, things took a very dark and disturbing turn with the incident where Lakhan bangd Dhristi the first time. I was praying if some event could have stopped that from happening but alas. It was difficult and uncomfortable to see her go through such a traumatic encounter. The energy changed completely, and I genuinely felt pain for her. (Thankfully, the narrative showed that her body started liking his brutality which kind of saved the day to little extent showing how the body sometimes reacts independently of the mind). But yeah, such incidents are tend to happen as its a reality so can't call it completely unrealistic, hence it didn’t feel totally implausible.
  (I initially had imagined a different direction, Maybe someone trying to approach Dhristi slowly & carefully while she was home alone . It would have been really interesting to see someone  trying to woo a woman who is so much devoted to her Husband) 
(On a second thought, being a woman like Dhristi & how carefully a village woman remains in real, wouldn't she have checked if Lakhan has already left and to quickly latch the door before undressing? Just a thought )


What I truly appreciate is how well you've captured emotional complexity, especially from Manav’s perspective. His pain, love, and confusion are portrayed so well that it shows the depth of his feelings for Dhristi and how broken he is by her suffering.

A lot of people may not understand or agree, but I personally feel Dhristi has shown remarkable strength. She's been fighting a war within herself, battling her body’s involuntary reactions during these forced acts. She has never willingly encouraged Lakhan, and yet, her poor body betrays her, which adds another tragic layer to her experience. And each time, after the act, her breakdowns show how deeply it affects her. She's not weak or characterless, she’s enduring something emotionally devastating, and her strength lies in surviving it day after day.
She is new to this kind of raw sex with such a big cock which she never thought existed and its like, her body never thought such wild make outs could have such an affect on her. Still each day, after Lakhan leaves, she goes into this depressive state which CCTV shows without a capture doubt which can't be a lie as she is not aware of CCTV.


Many readers are questioning Manav’s manliness, but I disagree. Like one of the readers already explained very clearly that he went to confront Lakhan right away after seeing the footage, even knowing his influence. That takes courage. The scene where he frantically calls the previous house owner, thinking maybe someone is spying on them, shows a man who's desperate, afraid, and trying to protect his wife. He acted out of love.
                       Readers need to understand that, all he has, at the moment is the CCTV footage and with time, things are becoming confusing for him. At first, he was understandably furious and was going through all kinds of emotions and still is,  but as he observes more footage, he’s entering a complex mental state where emotions like confusion, anger, guilt, and curiosity mix. He now is in analyzing state where he's even questioning himself when he finds arousal creeping in while watching footage. 
Important to note here is that, he never got hard when he saw Drishti getting brutally bangd .He started getting hard only when he felt, may be Dhristi's body also liking it. His hardness somewhere is linked with Dhristi's unwanted happiness. 
Just like Dhristi, he also is seeing for the very first time how raw and wild sex can be.
It’s not about perversion, it’s about the raw truth of how our minds and bodies can react when placed in unthinkable circumstances.
He sees that despite everything, Dhristi hasn’t become someone who’s chasing Lakhan or betraying her marriage. He sees the truth, the raw, painful reality of a woman who cries when she’s alone. This is at least comforting to him.




People forget that human physiology isn’t always under our control. Our minds might say one thing, but bodies don’t always comply. Similarly,  Manav's cock is not in his control and sometimes in life things can shock you and make you question your morals when doing unthinkable things. 
In a painful way, he’s learning more about himself, his limits, and his desires and so is Dhristi though unwillingly.  
                   BUT, the most beautiful thing author has managed to preserve is the love between Manav and Dhristi. Despite everything, that love still breathes through the cracks of trauma. Maybe Dhristi hasn’t spoken up yet because of guilt, shame, or fear of how her husband might see her. I hope we get to see her perspective soon.....

*****
- One suggestion, you don't have to explain your plot and reasons to each and everyone here. Also, you should restrict yourself from revealing story plots about what could happen in future. Let it remain a mystery. That’s part of the charm.

- Some readers claiming that Manav is slowly turning cuckold. I see no problem in that. It your story, write it in your way. One of the best stories on xossipy 'Knowing my wife...." was also based on cuckold, yet the character husband in there was more of a man than most of the men who claim to be one. He was a perfect husband in every way.
            Being a cuckold doesn't make anyone less of man. Being a cuckold doesn’t strip a man of love, strength, or character. It all comes down to how the story is told. So i suggest, please go along with the plot you have in mind.

But please, don’t ever take away the love between Manav and Dhristi. That’s the heartbeat of the story. The moment she becomes just another “characterless” woman, you risk losing the emotional weight you’ve built so carefully. Let love persist because that's what’s making this story shine despite the darkness.
Love should always perspire and i think till now, you are doing that beautifully.

Looking forward to the next update.
love,
❤️

Thank you critic honest. You literally live upto your name.. this is the type of comments I need where i can reflect on the feedback and make sure that my story goes in right direction..

As you had noted ,i have seen in many of these "sanskari wife" stories where she is completely chaste until the first fuck and then she becomes a complete whore...it's as though a bigger dick can change her entire brain ..

That's why I'm taking it slow, where dhrusti goes through after the violation. She doesn't change just because he gives better sex but she has no choice.

As you said Manav isn't typical cuck because he tried to confront her and the boss. 

I also agree that I should not always listen to readers because many are in two camps, one group somehow empathize cheating and want that cheater to be punished at end .. another group loves the taboo cheating and wants more taboo degrading sex of the wives especially with low class Men etc.

As you had said , the initial one had to be forced because the entire story is about moral corruption and I also didn't want to make it too violent but at the same time , a tame surrender would spoil the tension. That's why in the next ones, she resists but I didn't make it too intense because i do understand some people love taboo but not violent sex .

I wanted to steer out but as I've listed in previous comment , there are few stereotypes for Indian wife story and I still check most of them.

As I wrote in another comment, this story is an inspiration from "who watches the watchman" by aurelius. Which ironically was conceived by another lit author and asked me if I can write. I wanted to make it more slow and intense because in watchman series, the story lost steam once she had sex and once she became a complete slut. 

I'll warn that my story will also lose steam soon once she becomes fully a slut and I'll try to bring it to conclusion because it's just a porn site with different positions.

Let's see how it all goes and i cannot guarantee if i might even complete it considering life can always throw a curve ball at you ..

[Gitaranjan]

Amazing narration

[Nesamanikumar]

You are awesome writer dude. Dont consider the negatvity. It is spread everywhere. Minds are corrupted these days. Cant help. You keep writing for your Fans.

[sunniappan]

Very good going

[kangaani]

Wonderful updates

[Chennai Veeran]

Marvelous

[Krish World]

Cant wait to read next

[Andy Smith]

Bro??

[Samadhanam]

Meticulous writing

[Dorabooji]

Dont change her as slut. Keep the thrill intact.

[jroy1984]

Update please.

[Andy Smith]

Dear author when will the update come