Adultery My wife through the lens of CCTV

[aravindkkumar08]

As a reader even this episode unable to digest. How husband keep quiet after seeing brutal seen and sleep peacefully. He decide to see rather than act. Hey bro why don't you try to write about husband decide to reveal to his wife what he see in cc tv and divorce her.

[khemucha]

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Even my own director isnt this particular about getting his tasks done and he pays me.

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The only way you can maintain your sanity and motivation and enjoyment of writing is to ignore all such comments. This is the cost one pays on interactive forums. Unlike others where months can pass between one chapter and the other.
The way I have seen other writers cope with this is to either ignore such posts, or respond with a bland "Thank you for your interest".
and interact with only to serious or critical commentators. Getting embroiled with the "next" brigade, is a loosing proposition. There's that saying "never wrestle with a ..."
So just carry on at the pace that you are comfortable with. Never write for readers, write for yourself. A good story will always attract readers.

[sexypreeti]

The only way you can maintain your sanity and motivation and enjoyment of writing is to ignore all such comments. This is the cost one pays on interactive forums. Unlike others where months can pass between one chapter and the other.
The way I have seen other writers cope with this is to either ignore such posts, or respond with a bland "Thank you for your interest".
and interact with only to serious or critical commentators. Getting embroiled with the "next" brigade, is a loosing proposition. There's that saying "never wrestle with a ..."
So just carry on at the pace that you are comfortable with. Never write for readers, write for yourself. A good story will always attract readers.

Very well said 

[khemucha]

Chapter 20 : April 19th - The Aftermath

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As I watched, I felt an unexpected sensation stirring in my pants. I looked down and realized with a jolt of horror that I was erect. The sight of Dhristi, my beloved Dhristi, used and abused in such a way, had somehow aroused me. The guilt washed over me like a cold shower, dousing the flames of anger that had been burning in my chest.
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It was as if my body had turned against me, betraying the very essence of what it meant to be her husband.
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Yet, the very act of watching her in this compromised position was feeding a dark, insidious hunger within me.

As the minutes ticked by, my anger grew. It was not just at Lakhan, the monster who had violated her, but at Dhristi herself. How could she just lay there, allowing herself to be used and discarded like that? A part of me, deep down, felt betrayed. Our marriage vows had been desecrated by his brutish hands, and yet she made no effort to clean herself, to erase the evidence of his touch from her body.
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As the clock struck 6:15,  and I stepped through the door, my heart racing with anticipation. Dhristi looked up at me, her eyes wide and slightly glazed over. She offered a smile that didn't quite reach her eyes, a facade that she had perfected .

"Hey," she greeted me, her voice a little too soft, a little too tired. "I'm just going to lie down for a bit. I'm not feeling too well."

"Of course, Dhristi," I said, my voice heavy with concern. "Let me know if there's anything I can get for you."

She retreated to the bedroom while I saw the recording of me watching TV completely oblivious of what happened on the same couch I was sitting on. Dhristi's tactics to avoid any sexual approach from me were becoming clearer. The way she would suddenly claim exhaustion or illness was a clever ploy. It had worked for a while, keeping my suspicions at bay, but now the pieces of the puzzle were falling into place with a sickening thud.

Dinner had been a silent affair, the weight of the unspoken hanging heavy between us. Dhristi had barely picked at her food, pushing it around her plate with a plastic smile that didn't fool me for a second. Her eyes had been elsewhere, lost in a world I was not welcome to enter. I had tried to engage her in conversation, to bring back the spark that had once danced in her eyes when she looked at me, but she had responded with monosyllables, her gaze never quite meeting mine.

Post dinner, I saw me sleeping and immediately started snoring. The camera in night mode cast a pale, blue glow across the room, turning everything into a surreal tableau of shadows. Dhristi sat in the dim light, her eyes brimming with unshed tears as she stared at the sleeping form of her husband. The digital recording was silent, but the tension was almost palpable, a mute symphony of emotions playing out in the stark contrast of light and dark.

Her gaze lingered on my chest, rising and falling with the steady rhythm of my sleep. Her eyes were a pool of conflicting emotions - guilt, anger, fear, and something else. Something that made my stomach clench as I watched from the screen. It was as if she was looking at a stranger, a man she didn't recognize anymore. Or perhaps she was looking at a man she never knew she could betray.

Dhristi's hand hovered over her own body, her fingers tracing the path Lakhan's had taken earlier. Her touch was feather-light, almost reverential, as if she was trying to understand the alien sensations that had taken over her body. Her eyes filled with tears that spilled over onto her cheeks, leaving a glistening trail in the soft glow of the moonlight. Was she crying for what had been done to her, or for the part of herself that had enjoyed it?

The post event watching husband is headed to a dark place if he is not careful ... if Lakhan had defeated Dhristi then, he seems to be defeating the surveillance video watching husband now ... is this darkness necessary to give him the motivation of watching the rest of the videos ... if that's your plot, will he be able to get out of it ... how?

That last parts are well written and the last three paragraphs are perfect, but in the ones preceding that from the time he comes home, it might be a good idea to provide more explicit separation of the response of the husband then, visible in the video when all this was happening, and remembered by the husband now about her withdrawal and growing disconnect with him, and the husband now, who is watching the videos of what had transpired, specially in the scenes where he's watching himself and Dhristi interact in those days. The part where you talk about him remembering her avoiding sexual interaction is a bit more clear in this regard, but I had to read the one below twice or thrice to get what you are actually conveying.

e.g. "... pushing it around her plate with a plastic smile that didn't fool me for a second. Her eyes had been elsewhere, lost in a world I was not welcome to enter.  ..." - did not fool the husband for a second now or then? The realization that she was lost in a world he was not welcome to enter, did this realization dawn now or was it being felt then too. The way you have written these lines, it can be interpreted both ways and cause some confusion, because it does not make sense then, even if he had felt the growing aloofness.

Its an intricate dance you've chose to dance, almost Inception-like. See if you can dance it in distinct costumes(metaphorically speaking, of course), so that readers don't get confused between the two husbands - the one then and the one now. Its not that the one then was blind; he saw what was happening, but did not know the reason and was confused and did not know how to respond, and may be made a few mistakes of omission along the way. The tango between the two avatars of the husband can be as fascinating as the one between Lakhan and Dhristi.

[Dorabooji]

Looks like Lakhan did the same to the couple lived in the house earlier and it is the reason they divorced. Now its turn of Dristi. She should ask her husband to invite his boss for dinner and make him stay in her home and after her husband goes to sleep she spend full time fucking like rabbit with lakhan. Nice update.

[tomdickharry2024]

Superb story Tharkibuddha sir!

Eagerly waiting to see when Dhrishti switches from victim to accomplice! ::)
brilliant writing!

Thank you for your efforts!

[fasterboy]

As a reader even this episode unable to digest. How husband keep quiet after seeing brutal seen and sleep peacefully. He decide to see rather than act. Hey bro why don't you try to write about husband decide to reveal to his wife what he see in cc tv and divorce her.

Because there is unrealistic approach to draw cuckold plot.

In real world even voyeur or cuck never acts this.

However natural response or try to get even or revenge which are so natural act in real life only found literotica forum into "LOVING WIVES" category.

I never found any other forum including this so I moved literotica years ago.


another point including this platform is full of sick hijadi who takes pleasure to write specific religion women degradation and same men weak or portraying as cuck.

many years ago, literotica too had having similar problem whether black people flooded with stories of only white women degration and white men cuck. That problem solved by readers who ignore reading that stories and gave negative ratings.

[khemucha]

The husband here is not a cuck. He has just started seeing the recording of what his boss was doing to his wife, for the many past weeks. this is only the second day of his watching. After the first day of watching he had stormed to his bosses house, only to find that he was not there.

What the husband is watching now happened many weeks ago.

His arousal in the last update may be a result of seeing his wife lying sprawled on the couch, half naked with cum leaking out of her cunt. Like seeing a porn scene.

Let the author develop the story the way he wants to.

I don't fully understand why the wife had not confided with her husband when it happened the first time. But now she seems to be struggling with her mental disgust as opposed to her physical delight to the repeated violations.

The way it is developing, it seems her enjoyment will increase and so will her distance from her husband. The first few chapters chronicle this, when the husband had no idea what was happening. He was very busy in the office, assuming his boss liked his work, when in reality the boss was keeping him busy and sending him on trips to have more access to his wife who had by then started responding positively to him. The husband's confusion and feeble attempts to comfort her and get her to talk all fail. Its all in the first few chapters.

Now the wife has gone away and has forbidden him to contact her. Its after this that he chanced upon the CCTV recordings. He is still learning what all happened. His reponse is not fully formed as yet.

Lets see how the husband develops and what final moves he makes. Same goes for the wife.

[anushka]

Hope to get a very big update in this week…..

[Projectmp]

Hope to get a very big update in this week…..

Hope is a good thing Anushka ji.

[anushka]

Hope is a good thing Anushka ji.

Hehehe.. thats true…

[anushka]

Expecting a big update this time

[mr.commenter]

Because there is unrealistic approach to draw cuckold plot.

In real world even voyeur or cuck never acts this.

However natural response or try to get even or revenge which are so natural act in real life only found literotica forum into "LOVING WIVES" category.

I never found any other forum including this so I moved literotica years ago.


another point including this platform is full of sick hijadi who takes pleasure to write specific religion women degradation and same men weak or portraying as cuck.

many years ago, literotica too had having similar problem whether black people flooded with stories of only white women degration and white men cuck. That problem solved by readers who ignore reading that stories and gave negative ratings.

Ya its like too boring and frustrating to read those same reli.gion type and degrading particular type of women and yes I generally skip them but this whole english section is full of that
Hope people start feel bore and move on to next type of kink stories (I already saw how far they are going even they started imaging .... Iykyk)


This cctv story is good not that type atleast 
This is going good
But I really want to see more bull type stories not these cuck stories

[tharkibudda]

Happy Independence Day.. sad to hear that there will be no more updates this week.. Anyways, hope to get an update on Monday..

anushka
Expecting a big update this time

I'm sorry but these are the very languages used by a toxic manager at any office. "Sad to hear your grandma's loss. I hope to get the reports by Monday", "Why are you taking a small user story, I expected you to take the bigger one". You are fooling noone just because of the language. These are the just recent ones but i get similar comments throughout the thread.

I wanted to spend some time with my family but still posted an update but all I get are backhanded complaints. I dont understand the audacity people have in a free site where noone gets paid to write this. If you are hoping or expecting, keep it to yourself. Such comments provide nothing to the authors just some discouragement on to why they are even writing ? Is it because we are writing in a sinful manner we can be bullied, if thats the case, then the ones who consume it shouldnt be the one to think of it

Why would you need weekly or big updates? There is no written contract here for anyone to keep writing. If you are happy with my writing, then give an encouraging comment or if you find fault, openly criticize them. But whats the need to keep typing "where is the update?" every other day.  Not only in mine, but almost in every other story,even the Shipra's ordeal, the author has clearly said he is having professional commitments but all people do is to bug him for about providing an update.

I was advised not to engage but this is seriously getting out of hand not just for me but every other authors in xossipy. Yes, this is not a polished site like literotica where they physically approve each post looking for grammar and storytelling and any tom,dick and harry can post here about any genre. But that doesnt mean that the readers should keep bugging them for updates. Some of them even DMed me directly asking why there was no updates.

I dont care if I lose followers or view counts for this, But I feel when i tell this, I have the confidence of other authors, that we dont want your begging for updates posts anymore. If you feel that in ur mind, then just write in a notepad and then dont save the file.not in this thread.  Keep it clean and decent.

[jroy1984]

I'm sorry but these are the very languages used by a toxic manager at any office. "Sad to hear your grandma's loss. I hope to get the reports by Monday", "Why are you taking a small user story, I expected you to take the bigger one". You are fooling noone just because of the language. These are the just recent ones but i get similar comments throughout the thread.

I wanted to spend some time with my family but still posted an update but all I get are backhanded complaints. I dont understand the audacity people have in a free site where noone gets paid to write this. If you are hoping or expecting, keep it to yourself. Such comments provide nothing to the authors just some discouragement on to why they are even writing ? Is it because we are writing in a sinful manner we can be bullied, if thats the case, then the ones who consume it shouldnt be the one to think of it

Why would you need weekly or big updates? There is no written contract here for anyone to keep writing. If you are happy with my writing, then give an encouraging comment or if you find fault, openly criticize them. But whats the need to keep typing "where is the update?" every other day.  Not only in mine, but almost in every other story,even the Shipra's ordeal, the author has clearly said he is having professional commitments but all people do is to bug him for about providing an update.

I was advised not to engage but this is seriously getting out of hand not just for me but every other authors in xossipy. Yes, this is not a polished site like literotica where they physically approve each post looking for grammar and storytelling and any tom,dick and harry can post here about any genre. But that doesnt mean that the readers should keep bugging them for updates. Some of them even DMed me directly asking why there was no updates.

I dont care if I lose followers or view counts for this, But I feel when i tell this, I have the confidence of other authors, that we dont want your begging for updates posts anymore. If you feel that in ur mind, then just write in a notepad and then dont save the file.not in this thread.  Keep it clean and decent.

Please remember... Overconfidence blinds even the brightest pen.. When a so called writer stops listening, their book becomes an autobiography of their ego.. The louder the arrogance, the smaller the imagination.. I have nothing more to say!

[jamanuram]

Seriously, people just sharing thoughts and request, you take it in wrong way, we all know it not paid or someone duty to update, but being a reader people sharing a request in a politely manner, and your response is great,

[Navipal007]

I don't understand what's the point of being so offensive. The readers are not bullying you, they are simply asking for updates which happen in every good story with a splendid writer. They are not spamming you or something. Why are you getting so angry about all this. If people are requesting for content that means they like your content. It should be taken as a compliment. Yeah and if you don't have time, simply say will upload later.

[anushka]

Okay … relax… I am sorry..
I was just curious and excited.. Thats why was asking for an update..
Take your time..

[khemucha]

The sense of entitlement in some who talk of overconfidence, ego and arrogance is truly mind boggling. Specially when it comes from someone who has never written a story. I have never seen any writers say such things. Writers understand the hard work that goes in, the fine balancing between real life and this fantasy world. Some writers can handle the unsatiable hunger for updates in stride while some get hassled. Some readers understand this and some don't. But to throw around terms like overconfidence, ego and arrogance regarding the frequency of updates without even a short story to one's credit - one has no option but to ask - kahan se milta hai yeh entitlement.

[Betacucky]

Damn. This got heated fast. Everyone just calm down and jerk off (women can flick their bean ofc) or something. I am sensing a lot of pent up energy.