ARJUN vs ZAHEER

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Update 75




INT. DELHI GUEST HOUSE – LOBBY AREA – NIGHT (Immediately After Ceremony)
Shanu aur Zaheer apne medals haath me le kar guest house ke lobby me enter karte hain. Unke chehre par halka sa exhaustion hai, lekin aankhon me abhi bhi adrenaline hai – jaise victory ki chamak andar tak baith gayi ho.
Tabhi unka college ka staff coordinator, Professor Rawat Sir, aur unke saath ek aur ma'am – Mrs. Mehta – unhe lobby me hi rok lete hain.
Rawat Sir (smiling, slightly dramatic tone)
Bas! Aaj ke baad mujhe kisi assignment, kisi draft, kisi rehearsal ki baat mat karna tum dono!
Mrs. Mehta
Seriously, you both have done more than enough. Jaipur Pink City College has never seen a moment like this. You made us proud!
Zaheer modestly muskuraata hai. Shanu hair ke loose strand ko kaan ke peeche set karte hue halki si aankh jhukaati hai.
Sir 1 (with warmth)
Aur isliye...
Collage ki taraf se ek chhoti si gift.
Kal ka poora din sirf tum dono ke liye hai.
Jahaan jaana chaho… jo khaana chaho… tumhari marzi. Trip, food, shopping – no questions asked.
Ma'am 1 (wink deti hai)
In fact, I suggest… aaj ki raat bhi waste mat karo.
Guest house ke room me medal leke selfie kheenchne se behtar hai…
Rawat Sir (grinning)
India Gate pass hi hai. Night view, light show, ice cream.
Go. Live this moment.
Kal ka din tum dono ka hai. Celebrate karo jaise jeet koi aur nahi, tumhare liye bani thi.
Shanu aur Zaheer ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain – ek aisi khamosh language jisme excitement, relief, aur ek hint of curiosity hai.
Zaheer (half smile)
Ice cream toh banti hai.
Shanu (halki hansi ke sath)
Aur thodi hawa bhi… iss medal ke weight se neck pain ho raha hai.
Dono staff members unhe blessing ke sath chhod dete hain.
Zaheer aur Shanu lift ki taraf badhte hain – apne rooms ki taraf tayyari ke liye, lekin andar hi andar unka dimaag already India Gate ke night breeze me bhatak raha hota hai.

INT. PRATAP KA GHAR – LIVING ROOM & KITCHEN – NIGHT
Dinning table saaf ho chuka hai. Plates stack ho chuki hain, sab log apne-apne comfort zone me bikhre hue hain jaise ek lambi jeet ke baad sabko ab bas sukoon chahiye.
Living room me:
Pratap aur Azhar ek sofa pe thoda jhuk kar baithe hain, haath me chai ki garma-garam pyali, beech me centre table pe namkeen aur biscuits.
Pratap (nostalgic laugh ke sath)
Yaad hai Azhar… woh summer camp ke din? Tune apni cycle ki bell ke jagah puri mouth organ bandhi thi...
Azhar (has ke haath utha ke)
Arey! Aur tujhe yaad hai tu ladkiyon ko impress karne ke liye bhangra kar raha tha… aur apna pajama phat gaya!
Dono ek saath phat ke hans padte hain.
Living room me hansi ka ek lahar ghoom jaata hai.
Thoda door Arjun corner me sofa pe baitha apne phone ka signal check kar raha hai. Baar-baar screen par 'Out of reach' likha aa raha hai.
Arjun (under his breath)
Yeh dono jaake planet Mars pe toh nahi chale gaye?
Kitchen me:
Madhu chulhe par chai ke liye doodh ubalne de rahi hoti hai. Ammu bartan ka paani giraakar plates ko sukha rahi hoti hai, aur Asma spoon aur bowls ko stack kar rahi hoti hai tray me.
Unke haath kaam me magan hote hain, lekin kaan puri tarah se Pratap aur Azhar ke laughter ki taraf lage hote hain.
Azhar (living se loud voice)
Aur phir jab tu cycle se gira tha, toh bola tha ‘Earth ne mujhe khud se chipka liya’...
Madhu ki aankhon me aansuon jaisi muskan aa jaati hai. Ammu aur Asma ek dusre ki taraf dekh kar hans padti hain.
Asma (softly)
Uncle logon ki stories me toh Netflix fail ho jaaye.
Ammu (chuckles)
Aur background music bhi free me mil raha hai.
Madhu (teekhi muskaan ke sath)
Chup karo dono… warna wo log meri stories bataane lagenge college ki… phir mujhe chhupne ki jagah nahi milegi.
Tino ek saath hass padti hain, utensils ka khanakna aur unke beech ka laughter… kitchen me ek warm, soft glow create karta hai. Jaise ghar ek zinda kahaani ho, jisme har room apna chapter likh raha ho.
Living me:
Pratap aur Azhar ke haath me chai thandi hone lagti hai, lekin yaadein garam hoti ja rahi hain.
FADE OUT on laughter, the clinking of cups, and the smell of chai.
[b]INT. PVR CONNAUGHT PLACE – NIGHT SHOW – HALL[/b]
Movie ka interval hua hai. Screen par "INTERVAL" likha aata hai.
Shanu popcorn ka box uthati hai aur Zaheer ko deti hai.
Shanu (teasingly)
Tumhari choice surprise kar gayi mujhe. Action nahi, ek romantic comedy?
Zaheer (laughs)
College ne bola ‘jo marzi ho’... maine socha tumhari marzi ho.
Shanu (mocking seriousness)
Toh tum meri marzi me jeena seekh gaye ho?
Zaheer (softly, uski aankhon me dekhte hue)
Seekh raha hoon…
Ek pal ke liye dono chup ho jaate hain. Lights abhi bhi dim hain, lekin unke beech ek warm spotlight jaisi energy jag chuki hai.

Montage again:
Movie ke emotional scene pe Shanu thoda sa emotional ho jaati hai, Zaheer quietly uske shoulder tak popcorn le jaata hai jaise scene divert karna ho.
Movie ke comedy punch par dono ek saath has padte hain, log peeche mur kar dekhte hain.

EXT. INDIA GATE – DELHI – NIGHT
Hawa me dilli ki raat ka ek alag hi nasha hai. Safed floodlights me chamakta hua India Gate ek dum postcard jaisa lag raha. Log chaaron taraf selfie le rahe hain, bachche bubble guns chala rahe hain, vendors golgappe aur chana chaat bech rahe hain… aur is bheed me do chehre alag chamak rahe hain.
Zaheer aur Shanu crowd ke beech khade hain, dono casuals me – Zaheer ne hoodie ke upar college jacket daal rakhi hai, Shanu black kurti aur denim jacket me thandi hawa se thoda sa apna scarf sambhalti hai.
Shanu
Yeh sab kuch college ki taraf se mila hai? Really?
Zaheer (muskurata hua)
Official treat. Tumhara performance bhi ussi list me tha.
Shanu uski taraf dekh ke sirf ek chhoti smile karti hai. Phir achanak ek golgappa wala unke samne aa jata hai.
Vendor
Bhaiya, didi… banayein spicy ya medium?
Zaheer shanu ki taraf dekhta hai jaise permission maang raha ho.
Shanu
Tumne Delhi ka asli taste chakha hai?
Zaheer (shrug karta hai)
Aaj se pehle sirf Jaipur ki chaat thi… chalo, aaj record break karte hain.

Montage starts:
Shanu golgappa kha ke aankhon se pani nikalti hai, aur Zaheer has has ke dobhar ho jaata hai.
Zaheer moong dal chilla ke ek bite ke baad aankhein band karke dramatise karta hai – “yeh toh divine hai”.
Dono cotton candy share karte hue walk karte hain India Gate ke baju se, jaise time slow motion me chal raha ho.
Ek random dhol wala pass se jaata hai, Shanu lightly beat pe step karti hai, Zaheer uska haath pakad kar usi rythm me ghumta hai

EXT. INDIA GATE – LATE NIGHT (NEARLY EMPTY STREETS)
Raat ke 2 baj chuke hain. Crowd ab kam ho gaya hai. India Gate ke samne bench par dono baith ke ek final kulhad wali chai le rahe hai
Shanu uski taraf dekhti hai – ek second ke liye kuch kehna chahti hai, lekin sirf ek muskaan ke sath apna sar uske shoulder pe rakh deti hai.
[b]Camera zooms out slowly – India Gate ke peeche deep silence, zameen par chai ke drops, aur bench par do silhouettes, ek pal me ruke hue.[/b]
[b]EXT. TWO CITIES, ONE NIGHT — PARALLEL SEQUENCE[/b]
Moonlight softly kisses two rooftops — one in Delhi, one in Jaipur.
Do alag sheher. Do alag chhat.
Lekin dono jagah ek hi cheez chal rahi hai — ek ladka, ek ladki, aur ek melted si ho rahi ice cream ke beech kuch adhoore se jazbaat.

SCENE 1 — JAIPUR – AMMU KI CHHAT
Chaand thoda zyada chamak raha hai aaj.
Arjun slowly railing ke paar se chhupte chhupate chhat par chadh raha hai. Haath me ek brown bag jisme ice cream ka dabba hai. Uske shoes halki si awaaz karte hain, lekin uski har move rehearsed hai.
Ammu chhat ke kone pe railing se lakeet chaand dekh rahi hoti hai.
Arjun
Peeche se aaunga, tum chillaogi… to main fir se nahi aaunga.
Ammu (without turning)
Agar ice cream hai to chillaungi nahi. Agar nahi hai… to chhath se dhakka de dungi.
Arjun aankhon me ek victorious smile ke sath uske paas aakar baithta hai.
Ammu (looking at the bag)
Melt toh nahi ho gayi?
Arjun
Ice cream ho ya feeling… agar time pe mil jaye, to melt hone ka dar nahi hota.

SCENE 2 — DELHI – INDIA GATE KE BAAJU KA BENCH
Shanu aur Zaheer ek lambe din ke baad ek street cart se softy leke bench par laut rahe hain.
Zaheer
Yeh toh melt hone wali hai. Jaldi khao warna sirf cone bachega.
Shanu
Ice cream ho ya feeling… agar time pe mil jaye, to melt hone ka dar nahi hota.
Zaheer rukh kar uski taraf dekhta hai — impressed.
Zaheer
Kya line thi. Note kar loon?
Shanu (laughs softly)
Kisi se churaayi hai… apni toh hai nahi.
SCENE 1 – JAIPUR CONTINUES
Arjun aur Ammu ek purani iron bench par baith jaate hain. Ice cream unke beech me hai, aur dono wooden spoons se baar baar chhoti chhoti bites le rahe hain.
Ammu (mock serious)
Tum hamesha raat me hi aaoge kya?
Arjun
Tum sirf raat me hi asli lagti ho… bina mask, bina logo se ladti, sirf… tum.
Ammu kuch nahi bolti. Sirf ek spoon aur ice cream ka cut le kar moon ki taraf dekhne lagti hai.

SCENE 2 – DELHI CONTINUES
Shanu ek spoon se zaheer ke ice cream se thoda portion uthakar apni ice cream me laga deti hai.
Zaheer
Chori?
Shanu
Milaane ka naam chori nahi hota.
Zaheer (softly)
Toh main bhi kuch mila doon?
Shanu aankhon me dekhti hai — ek moment ke liye sab slow ho jata hai.

SCENE 1 – JAIPUR
Ammu (softly, without looking)
Kya milaoge?
Arjun
Waqt… thoda waqt chura kar tere dinon me mila doon?
Ammu ki aankhon me ek halka moisture aata hai… wo usse dekhti nahi, sirf apni spoon Arjun ki taraf badha deti hai — jaise keh rahi ho, haan, thoda aur sahi.

SCENE 2 – DELHI
Shanu
Kal ke din me thoda tum ho sakte ho?
Zaheer
Kal ka nahi pata… par aaj ka har pal hoon.
Dono simultaneously ice cream khaate hain. Background me ek street singer guitar bajata hai, Tera hone laga hoon… ki halki tones me.

SCENE 1 – JAIPUR
Chaand ke neeche, Arjun slowly Ammu ke kandhe se lag kar baith jaata hai
Aur dono ek chhup-chhupa ke milaye gaye pal ko chew karte hain — melted ice cream jaise… thoda meetha, thoda thanda, thoda sambhal ke.

SCENE 2 – DELHI
India Gate ke peeche, Zaheer bench ke peeche haath rakh ke thoda close ho jaata hai Shanu se. She doesn’t move away.

PARALLEL DIALOGUE — BOTH SCENES
Ammu & Shanu (almost together in voiceover)
Kabhi kabhi… kuch cheezein chhupane me zyada sukoon hota hai.
Arjun & Zaheer (voiceover)
Aur kabhi… ek melted si ice cream sab kuch keh jaati hai.
[b]FADE OUT – SPLIT SCREEN — TWO CHHAATS, TWO CITIES, ONE SILENCE.[/b]

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[KK001]

I am shocked after reading zaheers speech about burkha , he was talking about how people dont  think highly  about girls who wear burkha. but mr. zaheer you don't discriminate , because  you are a hero . you treat every girl same way . remember college sports ?  what was your opinion  about women sports ? back then you didn't seems to apricate women's sports very highly.

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I am shocked after reading zaheers speech about burkha , he was talking about how people dont  think highly  about girls who wear burkha. but mr. zaheer you don't discriminate , because  you are a hero . you treat every girl same way . remember college sports ?  what was your opinion  about women sports ? back then you didn't seems to apricate women's sports very highly.

There are two different perspectives 
Zaheer joking about girls sports with his friends... I think it's just not big deal,we also make fun of our sister activities sometimes.... So he does

But my friend he is supporting the right of wearing burkha by women...
Ppl point out burkha as religious issue like veil...

[Greenwood]

Update 76



DELHI DAY OUT — SHANU & ZAHEER
TIME: NEXT MORNING, AROUND 10:00 AM
LOCATION: DELHI — STREETS, SHOPS, & LAUGHTER
Ek halka sa dhoop bhara subah, lekin hawa mein ek chilled sa excitement.
Zaheer ek cap ulta pehne, camera neck pe latkaye nikalta hai guest house se. Shanu cotton ka breezy kurta pehne, sunglasses lagaye uske peeche chal rahi hoti hai.
Zaheer
Tu late hi hoti hai. Mujhe laga main tujhe uthane gaya hoon,
Shanu (grinning)
Kya karein, Delhi me dosti bhi street smart honi chahiye.
SCENE: JANPATH MARKET — 11:00 AM
Loud colors. Chatpati bargaining. Street vendors ki awaaz.
Zaheer ek kurta stall ke saamne khada try kar raha hota hai.
Shanu
Yeh blue wala le le, isme tu less coach aur zyada cousin ki shaadi me dancer lagega.
Zaheer
Waise tujhe kya lagta hai, main dancer ban jaun?
Shanu
Pehlay thoda tu jeans dhang se pehnna seekh le, phir discuss karenge.
Dono ek dusre par choodi, jhumke, stole try karte hain… ek dusre ke liye nahi, sirf hassi ke liye. Zaheer ek golgappa stall ki taraf point karta hai.
Zaheer
Tu khila rahi hai ya main har baar sponsor hoon?
Shanu
chalo 1-1 golgappa race?
CUT TO: GOLGAPPA COUNTER
Golgappa wala shocked hai ki dono ek dusre se compete kar rahe hain. Zaheer aankh bandh karke paani puri kha raha hai, Shanu beech beech mein hasi chhupa rahi hai.
Zaheer (mouth full)
Paani thoda kam teekha bolo bhai… jal gaya hoon main!
Shanu (laughing uncontrollably)
Bas, tu toh ekdum viral video material hai!
SCENE: DELHI HAAT — 1:30 PM
Shanu aur Zaheer ethnic craft stalls me ghus gaye hain. She picks up a hand-painted jhola.
Zaheer
Yeh kya hai? Jungle book part 3 ka poster?
Shanu
Artist ki kalpana hai. Kuch bhi bol mat.
Zaheer
Tere jaisa hi hai… bright, confusing, aur sabka dhyan khinch leta hai.
Shanu thoda ruk ke usse dekhti hai. Aur phir aankh maar ke kehti hai—
Shanu
Bohot line maarne lage ho aajkal,
Zaheer (mock serious)
Main original hoon. Influence nahi deta, impact karta hoon.
SCENE: INDIA COFFEE HOUSE — 3:00 PM
Old-college vibe, filter coffee, wooden chairs.
Shanu ek purani diary kholti hai, kuch sketch bana rahi hoti hai. Zaheer coffee stir karte hue use silently dekh raha hota hai.
Zaheer
Sketch kis ka ban rahi ho?
Shanu (half smile)
Ek dost. Jo kabhi kabhi annoy karta hai… lekin Delhi jaisa hai… chaos me bhi fun.
Zaheer (softly)
Toh tu bhi Delhi jaise hai… thoda loud, thoda crazy… but yaad rehne layak.
Ek lamha rukta hai. Coffee ke beech ek khamoshi, jo zaroori thi.
SCENE: SUNSET VIEW — INDIA GATE LAWNS — 5:30 PM
Sunset ke saath Shanu aur Zaheer ek thali le kar lawn me baith gaye hain. Butter naan aur paneer ke beech ho raha hai dosti ka digestion.
Shanu
Tu aise hi hai ya Delhi ne kuch extra swag de diya?
Zaheer
Jis sheher me tu saath ho, wahan thoda swag toh banta hai.
Shanu aankhon me uski taraf dekhti hai… lekin kuch nahi kehti. Sirf ek bite uske plate me daal deti hai silently.
MUSIC MONTAGE — VIBEY TRANSITION
Dono metro ke glass ke bahar dekhte hue headphones share kar rahe hain.
Selfie lete waqt ek chaat wale ke saath photo photobomb ho jaata hai.
Ek kapde ki dukaan me dono ek dusre ke upar kapda lapet ke naach rahe hote hain.
LAST SHOT — METRO PLATFORM — NIGHT TIME
Zaheer aur Shanu side by side khade hote hain. Metro ke aane ki aawaaz door se aa rahi hoti hai.
Zaheer
Yeh din repeat kar sakte hain?
Shanu
Nahi… next time upgrade karenge. Goa?
Zaheer smiles.
Metro aati hai… aur dono uss bheed me kho jaate hain.
FADE OUT.
[b]DELHI RAILWAY STATION – NIGHT DEPARTURE[/b]
TIME: 11:45 PM
TRAIN TO JAIPUR
Platform thoda khamosh tha. Midnight ke kareeb ki thakaan hawa mein ghuli hui thi, lekin station ki roshni ab bhi apne jazbe mein jagmag kar rahi thi. Train ready thi, green signal mil chuka tha.
Zaheer ek arm bag uthaye, aage badhkar Shanu ke liye reserved seat pe blanket set karta hai. Coach ke andar already college ke do staff members settle ho chuke hote hain – ek ne newspaper thela banake pillow bana liya, doosra ek corner me earpods laga ke aankhein bandh kiye baitha hota hai.
Shanu thoda daant kar bolti hai
Shanu
Tujhe lagta hai tu bada gentleman ban gaya hai?
Zaheer (thoda muskara ke)
Jab se tune compliment diya tha Delhi wale kurte wale look pe… tab se thoda improve karne ki koshish kar raha hoon.
Shanu usse side me dhakka deke window seat le leti hai. Zaheer hass ke uske bag ko adjust karta hai, phir khud bhi uske paas baith jaata hai.
TRAIN STARTS MOVING
Dono ke pair thoda thoda chill lagne lagte hain, toh Zaheer ek bada kambal nikaal ke dono pe wrap kar leta hai.
Kambal ke andar, unke haath ek doosre ko dhoondh lete hain.
Unki ungliyan ek doosre me halke se ulajh jaati hain — bina kisi zaroorat ke explanation ke.
Zaheer (softly)
Kaafi kuch ho gaya in 3-4 dino mein na?
Shanu (smiling)
Pehle toh laga tha boring honi wali trip hai… lekin phir Dilli ne sab plan ulta kar diya.
Zaheer
India Gate… golgappe… tu sketch bana rahi thi coffee house mein…
Shanu
…aur tu bina bataye photo le raha tha. Mujhe maloom hai.
Zaheer thoda jhuk ke kehta hai
Zaheer
Woh candid tha. Artist ko candid mein hi khoobsurat dikhte ho.
Shanu uski taraf dekh kar aankhon se kuch kehna chahti hai… par keh nahi paati. Sirf uska haath aur tight ho jaata hai.
MUSIC FADES IN – LOW INSTRUMENTAL PIANO
FLASHBACKS (SOFTLY OVERLAID ON SCREEN):
– Zaheer and Shanu laughing during golgappa competition
– Metro me ek headphone share karte waqt chhoti si jhatak se dono ka sir mil jaata hai
– Shanu ki diary me Zaheer ka sketch
– India Gate ke saamne dono ki ice cream waali baat
– Delhi Haat me rang birange kapdon ke beech ek dusre ko khojne jaise pal
BACK TO TRAIN – NIGHT
Kambal ke andar woh dono ab ek dusre ki taraf slight lean kar ke baithe hote hain.
Zaheer ka sir Shanu ke kandhe pe aa jata hai. Shanu uski taraf dheere se jhuk ke, cheek pe apna head rest kar leti hai.
Kambal ke neeche dono ke haath ab bhi ek dusre ke haathon me locked hote hain… warm, quiet, still.
Train platform se nikal chuki hoti hai… khidki ke baahar Delhi ki roshni dheere dheere peeche chhootti ja rahi hoti hai.
[b]FADE OUT — TRAIN’S SOUND FADING INTO NIGHT[/b]
[b][b]MIDNIGHT — AMMU KI CHHAT PAR[/b][/b]
TIME: 1:15 AM
Sky full of stars. Summer wind thoda halka. City ki awaazein ab sirf door ka ek faint hum ban gayi hain. Chhat pe ek chhoti si string light jhalak rahi hai. Arjun slowly upar aata hai… haath me two ice creams ka box aur ek chhoti plastic spoon ka packet.
Ammu chhat ke kone pe railing se tik ke baithi hoti hai. Hair tied in a bun. Ek white kurta pehna hai aur uski aankhon me ek shaant si thakan. Arjun ke kadam ki awaz sunte hi woh peeche mud kar dekhti hai.
Ammu
Itni raat… ice cream?
Arjun (thoda cheeky)
Kuch pal sirf thandak ke saath ache lagte hain… aur kuch bas tere saath.
Woh uske paas aake baith jaata hai. Ice cream ka box kholta hai aur ek spoon uske haath me pakda deta hai. Ammu kuch nahi kehti… bas ek chhoti si muskaan
Dono kuch der bina bole ice cream khate hain. Sky ki taraf dekhte hue.
Phir Arjun dheere se bolta hai
Arjun
Woh raat…
Ammu ki aankhon me woh yaad jaag jaati hai. Ice cream ka spoon haath me hi ruka reh jaata hai.
Arjun (continuing)
Woh raat… meri life ki sabse saaf raat thi. Jahan sab kuch tha… par kuch bhi nahi tha.
Ammu (softly)
Sab kuch… matlab?
Arjun uski taraf dekh ke halke se hansa
Arjun
Tu thi… ek bistar tha… tu mere itne kareeb thi ki teri saansen bhi alag se sun sakta tha.us raat main tujhe deserve karta tha.
Ammu ka chehra slowly blush se bhara jaata hai. Woh aankhen jhuka leti hai, par uski muskaan rukti nahi.
Ammu
Mujhe laga tu so gaya tha…
Arjun (laughs softly)
Nahi. Puri raat main bas tujhe dekh raha tha… ek aur baar kho jaata toh shayad wapas nahi milti.
Ammu uski taraf dekh kar sirf ek word bolti hai
Ammu
Stupid.
Woh dono thoda hansi me baat ko dilute kar dete hain. Ek comfort wali khamoshi inke beech aake baith jaati hai.
Arjun slowly apni jeans ki pocket se ek folded cigarette nikaalta hai.
Woh ek puff leta hai, aur aasman ki taraf smoke chhodta hai.
Camera pulls back.
Dono ek doosre ke paas baith ke thandi ice cream aur raat ki khamoshi share kar rahe hain. Ek door si train ki seeti aati hai. Koi alarm nahi, koi tension nahi. Bas ek quiet confession
[b][b]FADE OUT[/b][/b]
[b][b][b]EARLY MORNING — JAIPUR RAILWAY STATION[/b][/b][/b]
TIME: 5:35 AM
Platform par thoda rush hai, but morning ki halki-halki roshni mein sab kuch soft aur sleepy lag raha hai. Train se utarte waqt Zaheer ek hath se trolley bag kheench raha hota hai, dusre se apna backpack adjust kar raha hota hai. Shanu ne ek oversized hoodie pehna hai, baal loosely tied, aankhon mein neend ke nishaan par chehre pe ek sukoon bhari muskaan.
Taxi stand tak bina zyada baat kiye dono chal rahe hote hain.
Shanu (thoda neck stretch karte hue)
Bas ghar pahuch jaayein… toh ek proper bed pe letne ka mann hai.
Zaheer (thoda muskura ke)
Aur main toh sirf tujhe dekh ke thakawat bhool gaya tha.
Shanu uski taraf sideways glance leti hai… kuch kehti nahi, bas aankhon se hi keh jaati hai: stop being cheesy, idiot.
Taxi ride mein dono ek hi seat pe side-by-side. Kambal ab nahi hai, lekin unke beech ki warmth jaag rahi hai. Jaipur ki sadkon par taxi dheere-dheere chali ja rahi hai, aur dono window se sheher ki familiar galliyan dekhte hain… jaise kisi long dream ke baad apne ghar laut rahe ho.
CUT TO: STREET OUTSIDE THEIR HOUSES
Taxi rukti hai. Shanu aur Zaheer ke ghar paas-paas hain.
Taxi se utarte hain. Ghar abhi pura jaag nahi raha, but kitchen se kahin chai ka pehla boil hota hua sunayi deta hai.
Shanu bag uthate hue kehti hai
Shanu
Tera ghar idhar... mera udhar…
Zaheer (softly)
But tera chehra... woh yahin reh gaya hai mere saath.
Shanu ek second ke liye ruki. Uske steps thoda slow hue. Woh Zaheer ki taraf dekh ke halke se muskurayi… ek tired, loving, only-we-understand wali muskaan.
Kuch seconds ke liye dono aankhon se aankhon mein baat karte hain.
Kuch nahi bolte… sirf ek lamha chhod dete hain us raat, us safar, us haath-pakde huye kambal ke andar ke lamhe ko lock karne ke liye.
Shanu (soft whisper)
Bye, Zaheer.
Zaheer (holding the moment)
Goodbye nahi… see you very soon.
Shanu palat ke apne ghar ke gate me chali jaati hai… bag le kar. Zaheer abhi bhi wahi khada hai… tab tak jab tak uski jhalak andar nahi chali jaati.
CAMERA FADES — DIL MEIN HALKA SA BACKGROUND SCORE UTHTA HAI
[b][b]Woh safar khatam hua… ya ek naya shuru hua, ye bas un dono ko maloom hai.[/b][/b]

[Anum sheikh]

Muje to warm welcome ki umeed thi, but dono esay ay jesay chori kr k lot rhy

[Greenwood]

Muje to warm welcome ki umeed thi, but dono esay ay jesay chori kr k lot rhy

Ye sirf aadha update hai

[KK001]

There are two different perspectives 
Zaheer joking about girls sports with his friends... I think it's just not big deal,we also make fun of our sister activities sometimes.... So he does

But my friend he is supporting the right of wearing burkha by women...
Ppl point out burkha as religious issue like veil...

some times jokes brings out the person who they really are . 

But I agree with zaheer on one thing , that is burkha or any other things should not be imposed. like some part of the world its imposed on the other hand some parts of the world,  its banned. The ideal scenario should be , if any one want to wear it , let them wear . and if any one doesn't , let them be .

[Greenwood]

Update 77




PARALLEL — SHANU & ZAHEER KA GHAR
TIME: MORNING – 6:15 AM
INT. SHANU’S HOUSE – LIVING ROOM
Madhu ne abhi-abhi chai ka pehla cup rakha hai table par. Kitchen se halke se tadke ki awaaz aa rahi hai. Pratap akhbar padhne ki koshish kar raha hai, lekin aankhen baar-baar darwaze ki taraf ja rahi hain.
Tabhi gate ki ghanti bajti hai.
Madhu turant uthti hai. Gate khulte hi Shanu dikhai deti hai… thaki hui, par aankhon mein ek alag chamak.
Madhu (excitedly)
Shanuuu… aa gayi meri champion!
Pratap bhi turant uth jaata hai. Shanu ghar mein kadam rakhti hai aur dono parents usse galey laga lete hain.
Pratap (garv se)
Agle saal tere liye koi national level ka medal chahiye… tum dono ne college ka naam roshan kar diya.
Madhu (uska bag lete hue)
Pehle tu fresh ho jaa, main tere liye garam garam paratha banati hoon. Aur haan… jaane se pehle chai toh piyegi na?
Shanu halki muskurahat ke saath aankhon se haan karti hai. Par uske chehre par ek halka sa woh lamha bhi chhupa hai… jo usne train ke kambal ke andar mehsoos kiya tha.
INT. ZAHEER’S HOUSE – MAIN HALL
Azhar sofa par baith kar aaram kar rahe hote hain. Asma drawing room ke kone mein ek sketch book le kar kuch draw kar rahi hoti hai. Tabhi main gate se kuch halchal hoti hai.
Door khulte hi Zaheer dikhai deta hai — thoda dusty, ek shoulder par bag. Lekin aankhon mein woh thakaan nahi… sirf ek ajeeb si shaanti.
Asma turant uth jaati hai.
Asma (cheerfully)
Bhaaiii… welcome back!
Azhar ne aankhon se specs nikaale… aur aankhon ke kone thode naram ho gaye.
Azhar (khade hote hue)
Aa gaya mera sher! Zaheer, tu is ghar ki fakhar hai.
Woh usse gale laga lete hain. Us lamhe mein sirf fakhr nahi, ek unsaid emotion bhi tha — jaise unhone mehsoos kiya ho, ke unka beta thoda aur bada ho gaya hai… zindagi ke kisi aur rang ko chhoo ke aaya hai.
Asma (teasingly)
Bhaai… Delhi ki hawa lagegi toh waapas Jaipur boring nahi lag raha?
Zaheer (half-smiling)
Hawa toh achhi thi… lekin kuch yaadein chhod aaya hoon wahan.
Azhar uski aankhon mein kuch padh leta hai… ek pal ko sochta hai, fir kuch nahi kehta. Sirf uske kandhe par haath rakh kar andar le jaata hai.
CUT TO: PARALLEL SHOT
Shanu bedroom ke mirror ke saamne apna hoodie utar rahi hoti hai.
Zaheer washroom ke washbasin mein thande paani se mooh dho raha hota hai.
Ek jaisi muskaan, ek jaisi soch…
Dono ke man mein woh ek hi memory ghoom rahi hoti hai…
Woh raat… woh safar… woh aankhon ka vaada.
CAMERA FADES WITH A LIGHT BACKGROUND SCORE.
Soft vocals in the back — "Raahon mein the hum… aur manzil ek thi..."
SHANU’S HOUSE – OUTSIDE HER ROOM – LATE MORNING

Ghar ke andar ek sukoon bhari morning hai. Kitchen se Madhu ki halki si humming sunai de rahi hai, par drawing room abhi thoda khaali hai. Stairs ke corner se Arjun dheere dheere chal kar upar aata hai. Uski aankhen abhi bhi neend se bhari hui, lekin chehre par ek relaxed si muskurahat hai — jaise kal raat ki thakan ab kisi jeet ki mithaas ne dhak li ho.

Shanu ka room hallway ke end mein hai. Darwaza aadha khula hai, aur andar se kabhi-kabhi wardrobe ki khadbadahat, kabhi brush karne ki awaaz aati hai.

Arjun doorframe par ruk jaata hai. Thoda sa jhuk kar andar jhaankta hai.

Arjun (teasing tone mein)

Yeh room toh ab "Champions Only" zone ban gaya hai lagta hai…

Shanu mirror ke saamne apne baal baandh rahi hoti hai. Uski aankhon mein neend ab bhi baaki hai, par smile ek dum taaza.

Shanu (mirror mein usse dekhte hue)

Bhaiya, tumhe toh ab meri room ki dehleez par pair rakhne se pehle permission leni padegi. Medal-wali behen hoon main.

Arjun ek kadam aage badhta hai… aur bina kuch kahe usse gale laga leta hai. Tight. Protective. Proud.

Arjun (softly)

Tu jeet gayi, Shanu.

Shanu pehle thoda chokti hai… phir uski bhi baahen uske bhai ke gird bandh jaati hai. Moment kuch seconds tak ruk jaata hai… bas un dono ki saansen ek rhythm mein.

Shanu (smiling softly)

Tum bhi jeete, bhaiya. Tumhara match… tumhara plan… sab kuch.

Arjun

Lekin sabse badi jeet toh yeh hai… ki tu ab khud par vishwas karti hai.

Woh dono ab door hote hain thoda, lekin aankhon mein ek chamak hai… ek aisi chamak jo sirf khwaabon se bhari aankhon mein hoti hai.

Arjun seedhiyon ke railing ke paas jata hai aur udhar dekhte hue imagine karne lagta hai.

Arjun (dramatically)

Soch… ek din poora college ke har poster par likha hoga — Arjun Singh & Shanaya Singh – The Game Changers.

Shanu (joining in, hands crossed like a boss)

Aur niche tagline — "This brother-sister duo ne dho diya poore desh ko."

Arjun (raising brows)

Kya baat hai. Ab tu headline bhi likhne lagi?

Shanu (giggling)

Wait karo… ek din toh TV par bhi news chalegi. “Good morning India! Aaj ke special guests hain… national champions Arjun aur Shanu Singh.”

Arjun (mocking anchor voice)

Aur Arjun Singh ne kaha — ‘Meri success ka asli credit meri behen ko jaata hai’…

Shanu (teasing back)

Aur main kahungi — ‘Mujhe toh hamesha pata tha mera bhai kisi din chha jaayega’...

Dono achanak ek dum se hans padte hain. Woh hasi, jo sirf bachpan se saath bade hone wale do log share karte hain. Woh jokes jo kisi aur ke liye bekaar hote hain, lekin inke liye poori duniya ke barabar.

Arjun (still smiling)

Kaash yeh moment freeze ho jaye…

Shanu (playfully)

Nahi… better moments abhi aane baaki hain, bhaiya.

Ek comfortable silence. Koi pretence nahi, koi awkwardness nahi. Bas ek bhai aur behen — dono ek dusre ka fakhar.

Aur tabhi neeche se Madhu ki awaaz aati hai:

Madhu

Shanu, Arjun… breakfast thanda ho raha hai!

Shanu (shouting back)

Aa rahe hain, maa!

Phir Arjun uske sar par thapki deta hai.

Arjun

Chal, national champions… pehle paratha phaadte hain.
Shanu ek fake salute karti hai, aur dono saath mein seedhiyon ki taraf badhte hain… ek naye chapter, naye din, aur naye sapno ke saath.
ZAHEER’S ROOM – LATE MORNING – POST VICTORY DAY

Zaheer ka room hamesha ki tarah minimalist hai— corner mein rakha medal, ek folded team jersey, aur bed ke paas rakhha projector remote

Window ke pass Zaheer khud khada hai — ek haath se curtains ke beech se bahar dekhte hue, doosra haath uske folded arms mein chhupa hua. Aankhen shaant hain, lekin chehre par woh normal sa zaheer-wala neutral expression — na zyada khushi, na zyada udasi — bas ek subtle calm.

Tabhi knock hoti hai door par. Dheere se darwaza khulta hai.

Ammu (darwaze se jhaankte hue)

Allowed hoon ya abhi bhi celebration zone "Private" hai?

Zaheer, bina hile, bas halki si smile deta hai.

Zaheer

Tera entry pass kabhi expire nahi hota.

Ammu andhar aati hai. Uske haathon mein ek chhoti si bowl hai — kuch meetha, shayad gajar ka halwa — jo ghar mein sabko banake diya jaa raha hai.

Ammu (bowl uski taraf badhati hai)

Captain ke liye special treat.

Zaheer bowl le leta hai, par turant khata nahi.

Zaheer (looking at the halwa, teasing tone mein)

Agar haar jaata toh kya poison milta?

Ammu (sarcastically)

Agar haar jaate, toh mujhe banana hi nahi padta.

Zaheer halka sa hansa, aur dono aankhon se ek dusre ko dekhte hain… ek aisi familiarity ke saath jo waqt ne banayi ho — na zyada close, na door… bas theek theek.

Ammu side chair par baith jaati hai, uske opposite. Woh thoda casually room ka survey karti hai.

Ammu

Mujhe laga tu ab tak selfie leke medal ke saath reel bana chuka hoga.

Zaheer

Mujhe medal se zyada woh moment yaad rahega jab mera naam announce hua

Ammu (softly)

Wo moment... kuch aur hi tha.

Chhoti si khamoshi.

Ammu ek second ke liye atakti hai, phir aankhon mein thoda mischief le aati hai

Thodi der dono chup baithte hain. Ghar ke baaki hisse se kuch distant awaazein aa rahi hain — Asma ki loud voice, Azhar ki newspaper palatne ki khadbadahat — lekin is kamre mein bas ek halki si dhoop hai aur in dono ka aapas ka comfort.

Ammu (thoda personal, soft voice mein)

Tu hamesha aise calm kaise rehta hai, Zaheer?

Zaheer

Kya faayda tension leke? Pressure toh game ka hissa hai. Aur agar jeet se zyada peace important ho jaaye… toh calm hona seekhna padta hai.

Ammu (soft laugh)

Hamesha lagta hai tu sirf sportsman nahi, half-time philosopher bhi hai.

Zaheer

Aur tu?

Ammu (smirking)

Main? Main poori-time mystery hoon.

Zaheer thoda hansa, phir chair ki back pe lean karta hai.

Zaheer

Accha hai. Zindagi mein thodi mystery honi chahiye. Warna sab kuch boring ho jaata hai.

Phir dono ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain — ek aise nazar ke saath jisme curiosity toh hai, lekin jawab dhoondhne ki jaldi nahi.

Bas ek anjaani si understanding… jisme dono ko abhi tak yeh nahi maloom ki woh kis se kya chhupa rahe hain… ya kya feel karna avoid kar rahe hain.

Ammu khadi hoti hai.

Ammu

Baaki sabko bhi serve karna hai. Waise bhi... sabko lagta hai main aaj extra khush hoon.

Ammu ek second ke liye rukti hai. Phir smile deti hai.

Zaheer

Ja... warna halwa thanda ho jaayega.
Ammu nikal jaati hai, lekin jaate jaate ek baar phir peeche mud kar dekhti hai… Zaheer ab window ki taraf dekh raha hota hai, lekin uski aankhon mein kuch aur hi chal raha hota hai.
COLLEGE AUDITORIUM – DAY – GRAND WELCOME CEREMONY

Auditorium ka mahaul utsah se bhara hua tha. Rang-birangi lights, phoolon se saja hua stage, aur piche ek bada digital banner –

“Welcome Our Champions – Zaheer Qureshi & Shanaya Singh”

Student crowd ka shor, claps aur cheering auditorium ke har kone me goonj rahi thi. Dean, principal aur faculty sab front row me baithe the. Stage ke dono sides se gulab ke phoolon ki baarish ho rahi thi jab zaheer aur shanu ne stage par kadam rakha.

ANCHOR (mic pe)

Aur yeh hai woh pal... jiska poora college intezaar kar raha tha. Miranda House Debate Finale ke true heroes… please put your hands together for… Zaheer qureshi aur Shanaya Singh!

Taliyon ka toofaan auditorium ko hila deta hai.

Zaheer aur Shanu ek saath podium ki taraf badhte hain. Dono ke chehre par proud aur overwhelmed expressions. Shanu ek taraf white embroidered kurti aur jeans me radiant lag rahi thi, aur Zaheer classic navy blue blazer me dignified. Principal unhe garland pehnate hain, aur Dean medals aur certificates thamate hain.

DEAN (mic pe)

Zaheer, Shanaya… tum dono ne na keval hamare college ka naam roshan kiya, balki ek misaal ban gaye ho. Isliye college proudly announce karta hai… full scholarship for your next academic year! And a special grant for international level preparation.

Ek baar fir se auditorium gungun utha. Students seat se uth kar cheer karne lage.

CROWD (shouting)

Shanu! Shanu! Zaheer Bhai! Zaheer Bhai!

Phir students un dono se milne stage ke neeche bheed bana lete hain. Friends, juniors, even seniors – sab congratulations bol rahe the. Claps, high-fives, selfies – ek celebration vibe.

CUT TO – A CORNER NEAR THE STAGE

Arjun Singh, black kurta aur faded jeans me ek side khada tha. Uski aankhon me ek intense sa glow tha, lekin lips pe ek teasing smile. Usne slowly stage ki taraf badhte hue Zaheer ko dekha. Shanu abhi bhi students ke beech me busy thi.

Arjun Zaheer ke paas aaya. Crowd me halka sa space banta gaya.

Arjun

Mubarak ho, Zaheer. Aakhir tumne jeet hi liya… debate bhi… aur spotlight bhi.

Zaheer uski aankhon me dekhta hai, thoda surprise bhi, thoda alert bhi. Phir ek calm aur composed smile ke sath jawab deta hai.

Zaheer

Jeetne ki aadat purani hai, Arjun. Spotlight hum chase nahi karte... woh khud aa jaati hai.

Arjun ek step aur aage badhta hai, dono almost face to face hote hain. Unki body language relaxed hai… par aankhon me ek spark – woh dosti ka nahi… rivalry ka tha.

Arjun

Good. Aadat bani rehni chahiye… competition interesting banane ke liye.

Zaheer

Aur competitors bhi… warna game boring ho jaata hai.

Cameraman un dono ke saamne se ek slow motion shot capture karta hai. Crowd ke noise me ye ek silent, cinematic moment tha.

CAMERA POV – Arjun aur Zaheer ek dusre ke bilkul saamne, halki si muskurahat, zaheer ke haathon me medals, lekin aankhon me ek alag hi kashmakash. Rivalry ki ek unsaid declaration. Unke peechhe cheering crowd aur stage ke lights flicker kar rahe the.

FINAL SHOT – ZOOM OUT
Auditorium ka wide aerial shot – jaha stage par celebration chal raha hai, crowd excited hai, lekin frame ke beech me Arjun aur Zaheer ka face-off – ek aise dosti aur rivalry ka sanket jo kahaani me aage kuch aur bada leke aayega…

[Anum sheikh]

Wow, zberdast welcome

[Greenwood]

Update 78


Zaheer or shanu ko ab competition jeete huye 2 din ho chuke they,lekin abhi bhi collage me har jagah unhi ke charche chhaye huye they...

Sham ka waqt tha, hawa me halki si thandak thi. Zaheer ghar ke verandah me baithkar chai ki chuski le raha tha. Table par ek plate me garam samose pade the, jinse masalon ki khushboo uth rahi thi. Ammu ek taraf uske samne baith kar apni chai cup me ghoom rahi thi, aur Asma apne phone me busy thi, beech-beech me hansi chhodti ja rahi thi kisi meme par.
Zaheer cup table par rakhte hue bol utha
Aaj kal lagta hai hum celebrity ban gaye hain. College me jao to har doosra banda ruk ke bas baatein karna shuru kar deta hai.
Ammu halka sa hansi rok kar
Haan, waise college ka cover photo dekha? Tum dono ka itna bada photo… main to soch rahi thi tumhare autographs bikna shuru ho jayenge.
Asma ne phone se nazar uthayi
Aur bhai, tumhe dekh ke mere college ke dost bhi puchte hain… tum sach me mere bhai ho?
Zaheer ne hans kar ek samosa utha liya
Haan, lekin tum log samajh lo ki main ab free autograph nahi doonga. Fee lagegi.
Ammu ne aankh ghumayi
Aur fee me kya lega? Ek samosa?
Zaheer ne ek bite lete hue nakhre se bola
Kam se kam do samose… aur ek cup chai.
Teeno ki hansi verandah me gungunane lagi. Bahar suraj dheere dheere dhal raha tha, aur hawa me shaam ki mithas ghul gayi thi. Yeh wo lamhe the jo kisi medal ya trophy se zyada keemti lagte the—bas ek doosre ke saath hona, bina kisi wajah ke muskuraana.

Sham ka waqt tha. Ghar ki badi balcony mein dhoop ka rang dheere-dheere sona ban kar phail raha tha. Aangan ke ek kone se aati champa ke phoolon ki khushboo hawa mein ghul rahi thi. Madhu ek tray mein chai ke cups lekar aayi, jismein se ubalti hui chai ki bhaap dheere-dheere hawa mein ud rahi thi.
Arjun aur Shanu dono floor cushions par baithe the, beech mein low table, jis par biscuit ka plate rakha tha. Shanu haath mein cup pakad kar ek sip leti hai, phir aankhon mein woh glow aa jata hai jo ghar ki chai hi la sakti hai.
Camera ka focus Arjun par—wo cup uthata hai, par pehle apni ungliyon se uske rim ke paas ka condensation wipe karta hai, jaise apni soch ko settle kar raha ho.
Shanu
Tere match ka footage kal tak poore YouTube par viral ho jayega… ab toh tu star ban gaya hai, bhai
Arjun halki muskaan ke saath ek sip leta hai, cup ke upar se uski aankhen Shanu ko dekhti hain—ek aisa look jisme dikh raha tha ke shor sharabe ke baad ye shaant pal kitna mehsoos ho raha hai.
Peeche Madhu un dono ko dekh kar muskura rahi hoti hai, aur Pratap newspaper fold karke chair se uthkar join kar lete hain. Chaar cups table par, biscuit ki plate beech mein—sab ek saath baat karte hue, kabhi hansi, kabhi match ke moments yaad karte hue.
Camera dheere-dheere upar zoom out hota hai, sunset ki golden light un sab ke upar girti hai, jaise yeh pal hamesha ke liye frame ho gaya ho.

Us raat ki yaad ab bhi Shanu ke dil ke kone me mehfooz thi… jaise ek halki si garmahat jo thandi shaam me bhi mehsoos hoti hai.
Kamre ka andhera sirf table lamp ki mithi roshni se kat raha tha. Har cheez dheemi thi—samay, saansein, aur dil ki dhadkanein.
Zaheer uske saamne tha, lekin dono ke beech ki doori… jaise har lamha dheere dheere kam ho rahi ho. Shanu ko ab bhi yaad hai uski ungliyon ka halka sa sparsh, jo pehle toh bas ek jhijhak tha, phir jaane kab ek narmi me badal gaya.
Wo raat sirf baaton ka silsila nahi thi, wo khamoshiyon ki zubaan thi… aankhon ki guftagu thi. Zaheer ka chehra itna kareeb tha ki Shanu ko apne dil ki dhadkan uske kaanon me goonjti hui sunayi di. Us pal me koi shabd nahi tha, bas ek ahsas tha—gehra, sachcha, aur thoda sa darr bhara.
Usne apni palkein band ki thi… aur lagta tha jaise duniya ruk gayi ho. Us raat ka wo lamha Shanu ke liye ek raaz ban gaya—jo kisi ko samjhane ki zarurat nahi, bas mehsoos karne ki cheez hai.
Scene – Shanu’s Bedroom, Present

Kamre me halki si narangi roshni side lamp se aa rahi thi. Pankha dhimi awaaz me ghoom raha tha, par Shanu ne ek baar phir apni taraf se blanket khinch kar side me kar di. Uska dil shant hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha. Palat palat ke wo ek hi pal me do jagah jee rahi thi — yahan apne bistar par, aur wahan… us raat me.
Flashback Begins
Andhera thoda gaha tha. Window se thandi hawa aa rahi thi, lekin kamre me ek alag hi garmi thi. Shanu pichhe hatne ki soch rahi thi par pair apne aap aage barh rahe the. Zaheer bas ek kadam door tha.
Shanu
Tum… sach me yahan rukoge?
Zaheer (halki muskaan ke sath)
Agar tum chaho to…
Shanu ka dil tez dhadak raha tha. Uske haath apne aap Zaheer ke haathon me chale gaye. Unki ungliyan aapas me ulajh gayin jaise kabhi alag nahi ho sakti.
Shanu
Pata nahi… kyun lagta hai tum paas ho to sab kuch…
Zaheer (thoda dheere, jaise samjhate hue)
Bas keh do… aur kuch mat socho.
Usne dheere se Shanu ke baalon ko kaan ke pichhe kiya. Shanu ko laga jaise waqt rukh gaya ho. Kamre me sirf saanson ki halki awaaz thi.
Shanu (dheere se, nazar jhuka ke)
Tum itne… kareeb kyun aa rahe ho?
Zaheer
Kyuki tum door jaane nahi deti.
Shanu ne sir utha ke dekha. Us pal me wo dono bas ek doosre ki aankhon me kho gaye. Ek pal baad Zaheer ne apna haath uske gaal par rakha, jaise pooch raha ho ki main kar sakta hoon? Shanu ne jawab me palak bhi nahi jhapkai.
Hawa me ek pal ka sannata tha… phir sab kuch dheere dheere apni hadon se aage nikal gaya — baatein halki pad gayin, sirf ehsaas baaki rahe.
Flashback Ends
Shanu ne apne bistar par palat liya, aankhen band ki, par dil ka shor kam nahi hua. Usne apne aap se socha,
Ye sab sach me hua tha… ya bas ek lamha tha jo sapne me khil gaya?

Ammu ka room andhera tha, sirf bed ke paas rakhi chhoti si lamp ki soft roshni poore kamre ko halki golden glow de rahi thi. Window se thandi raat ki hawa aa rahi thi, lekin uske dil me garmi thi… wo garmi jo Arjun ke saath guzari us ek raat ke baad uske andar bas gayi thi.
Woh pal use baar-baar yaad aa rahe the…
Jab Arjun ne usse apni baahon me kheench liya tha… uske saath blanket ke neeche ek dum shant, lekin dil ko hila dene wali nazdeekiyan mehsoos hui thi. Us raat Arjun ka saath kisi dream jaisa tha — unke beech lafzon ka silsila kam tha, lekin saansen tez thi, dhadkanein loud. Arjun ke haathon ka halka sa touch, uska cheek ke paas aana, aur phir wo cheek pe ruki hui halki si narmi… jaise duniya sirf un dono tak simat gayi ho.
Ammu ab jaanti thi… Arjun ka cuddle sirf ek aadat nahi, ek zaroorat ban chuka hai. Uske sine se lag kar sona… uske haathon ka weight apne upar mehsoos karna… aur raat bhar unki heartbeat sunte rehna.
Aaj, jab Arjun abhi tak nahi aaya tha, to bechaini uske chahre par clearly likhi thi.
Woh bed par karwat badalti, apne haathon me Arjun ka pillow daba leti… shayad thoda sa Arjun ki khushboo mil jaaye.
Ammu
Arjun… kahan ho tum…
Uski awaaz halki si toot rahi thi. Nazar bar-bar door ke taraf ja rahi thi, jaise wo bas abhi aayega.
Uske dimag me phir se us raat ka ek aur lamha flash hua…
Arjun ka apni ungliyon se uske baalon ko side karna, aur phir maang ke beech me apne hothon ka ek halkasa, sakoon bhara sparsh.
Woh mehsoos karte hue uski aankhein band ho gayi thi, jaise har sans, har lamha bas Arjun ke naam likh gaya ho.
Reality me laut kar, usne apni blanket thodi aur tight lapet li.
Thodi der baad usne phone uthaya, Arjun ka naam dekh kar screen ko bas chhup chap dekhti rahi… call karne ki himmat nahi hui.
Ammu ki aankhon me halka sa paani aa gaya.
Dil keh raha tha ke bas darwaza khule aur wo familiar kadam ki aahat sunai de… phir Arjun usse apni baahon me le le, jaise har raat karta hai.
Location: College Canteen

Time: Next Morning, 10:45 AM
Canteen ka mahaul usual tha — chai ki khushboo, pakode ka garam tel, aur students ki hansi-mazaak ka ek familiar sa shor. Corner wale table par Taz, Priya, Arjun, Shanu aur Ammu baithe hue the. Zaheer aaj campus me tha hi nahi, toh group ka mood kaafi relaxed tha.
Taz ek samosa tod kar Priya ki plate me daal raha tha, aur Priya thodi nakhre se muh bana rahi thi.
Taz
Tu kha le, waise bhi tu diet par sirf Monday ko rehti hai
Priya
Aur tu, tu kaunsi sports practice se aata hai jo itna khaata rehta hai
Shanu has ke chai ka sip le rahi thi, tabhi Arjun casually apna cup side me rakh kar Taz ki taraf jhuka.
Arjun
Waise Taz, kal practice me ball kaise miss ki tune? Camera me slow motion me bhi ajeeb lag raha tha
Taz ne aankh guma di.
Taz
Haan haan, tu toh Messi hai na, bas mujhe hi problem hai
Ammu chup chaap apni plate me spoon se kheer hila rahi thi, lekin Arjun ki ek chhoti si side glance us par pad gayi. Wo nazar sirf ek second ke liye thi, magar enough thi uske dil ki dhadkan thoda tez karne ke liye.
Shanu ne Ammu ko halki si kohni maari.
Shanu
Madam, aaj kaafi chup ho, ya phir tum bhi Taz ki practice pe hans rahi ho dil me?
Ammu ne normal tone me muskara ke jawab diya.
Ammu
Nahi, bas neend poori nahi hui
Arjun ne coffee ka ek sip le kar, jaise baat casually nikal di.
Arjun
Haan, raat ko phone pe late tak jagoge toh aisa hi hoga
Priya turant bol uthi.
Priya
Kis se baat kar rahi thi raat ko?
Ammu ne thoda sa sarcasm ke saath Priya ki taraf dekha.
Ammu
Tumhare bossy sawalon ka jawab dena mandatory hai kya?
Sab hans pade, lekin Arjun ke lips ke kone par ek chhupi hui smile thi, jo sirf Ammu ne notice ki.
Thodi der baad jab Priya aur Taz kisi aur baat me ulajh gaye, Arjun ne table ke neeche apne pair se halkasa Ammu ke sandal ko touch kiya. Ammu ne bas apna spoon cup me rakh diya aur casually dusri taraf dekhne lagi, jaise kuch hua hi na ho.
Phir bhi uske chehre par wo chhoti si blush aa gayi jo Arjun ke din ko banane ke liye kaafi thi.
Location: College Art Gallery Courtyard, late afternoon, 12:30 PM.

Weather: Hawa me halki si garmi, lekin saath me ek naram thandi hawa ka jhonka.
Mood: Cinematic + funny
Taz gallery ke saamne wale corridor ke railing par thoda jhuk kar khada tha. Haath me coffee ka cup, aankhon me udasi ka ek artist-type expression, jaise koi painting banane ka soch raha ho, lekin asal me wo bas free lecture ka maze le raha tha.
Achaanak hawa ka ek tez jhonka aata hai. Wo itna filmy tha ki Taz ne apni aankhein bandh kar di, jaise background me koi romantic OST baj raha ho. Coffee ka cup thoda sa hilta hai, uske baalon me hawa ulajh jati hai.
Aur jab usne dheere se aankhein kholi…
Door se ek figure uski taraf chal rahi thi… slow motion me.
Nikhat.
Aaj tracksuit nahi. Aaj sports shoes nahi. Aaj uski usual coach-type entry nahi.
Aaj wo ek georgette ki saree me thi — royal blue shade, jiska pallu halki si hawa me hil raha tha.
Uske kadam dheere the, lekin confident. Jitna wo paas aati ja rahi thi, utna Taz ka dimag blank hota ja raha tha. Saree ka pleats uske waist ke curve ko highlight kar raha tha, aur halki si heel pe chalne ki wajah se uski chaal me ek alag hi elegance thi.
Taz ki internal monologue start hoti hai —
Bhai… yeh wahi Nikhat hai jo kal mujhe push-ups karwa rahi thi?
Yeh koi Bollywood ka dream sequence chal raha hai kya?
Background me jaise koi invisible fan chal raha ho, uske baal aur pallu perfect timing me udte hain. Ek do ladke corridor me ruk kar dekh lete hain, lekin Taz ka focus 200% lock ho chuka tha.
Uske haath me coffee ka cup ab bas prop ban gaya tha. Uska dil ek dum se race lagane lagta hai. Honth thode khule, aankhon me wo slow zoom shot wala expression.
Nikhat ab itni paas aa gayi thi ki uski perfume ki khushboo hawa me mil rahi thi. Taz ne thoda sa seedha hone ki koshish ki, lekin uski ungli cup ke rim se phisal gayi aur coffee ka thoda sa drop uski shirt pe gir gaya.
Taz (under breath, panic mode me)
Bas yaar, ab embarrassing mat ho ja… sambhal…
Nikhat ne bas ek halka sa smile diya, jaise use pata ho ki uska slow motion entrance ne kisi ka din bana diya hai… aur shayad bigaad bhi diya hai.
Taz ke liye to scene wahi freeze ho gaya. Baaki duniya static, bas wo saree aur slow motion.

Nikhat ke kadam gallery ke marbled floor par halki si goonj chhodte ja rahe the. Uska har qadam Taz ki saanson ke beech rukawat ban raha tha. Saree ka aanchal halki si hawa me lehrata, uske perfume ki mahak ek meethi saaz ban kar Taz tak pahunch rahi thi.
Taz ka dil ek dum se tez dhadakne laga. Uski aankhon me ek ajeeb si chamak, gaalon par laali, aur hoton par woh halki si muskaan jo kabhi kabhi apne aap aa jaati hai… bina bulaye. Har pal me ek khumari ghul rahi thi.
Jab Nikhat uske bilkul kareeb se guzri, Taz ka saans ek pal ke liye ruk sa gaya. Uski palkein dheere se band ho gayi jaise woh us lamhe ko apne dil me band karna chahta ho. Uski imagination me Nikhat ki chal, uski kamar ka halkasa jhukav, aur saree ke kapde ka uski chaal ke saath lehrana,uske wo hilte bounce hote mote chuche, or ek halki si cleavage… sab ek tasveer ki tarah thahar gaya.
Uske hothon se ek halki si, behad dabe hue lekin mehsoos hone wali siski nikal gayi… jaise uske dil me ek naram si tees lag gayi ho, jo dard nahi deti… bas gehra sa asar chhod deti hai.
Aur jab usne palkein kholi, Nikhat aage nikal chuki thi… lekin uske dil me uske kadam abhi bhi ghoonj rahe the.

[Greenwood]

Update 79




Shaam ka waqt tha, aasman halke narangi aur surk rang se rang gaya tha. Hawa me thodi si nami thi jo kapdo ki khushboo ke saath milkar ek ajeeb sa sukoon la rahi thi. Ammu chhat par aayi, kapde utarne ke liye, dupatta sirf ek kandhe par halka sa gira hua, baalon me halki si uljhan jaise hawa ne cheda ho.
Wo apne kapde utar rahi thi tab ek chhat se doosri chhat par ek halki si chhalkang ki awaaz hui. Usne aankhon ke kone se dekha — Arjun apni usual style me aa raha tha, jaise har baar kisi adventure scene ka hero ban ke entry karta ho.
Arjun
Kya baat hai, aaj toh tum ne chhat pe akeli mulakaat ka plan bana liya?
Ammu ne aankh ghooma ke, kapde fold karte hue
Tumhe toh koi bhi chhat ka kinara, sirf meri taraf aane ka raasta lagta hai.
Arjun halki muskaan ke saath uske kareeb aaya, kapdo ke bundle ko uske haath se le liya
Aur tumhe toh lagta hai har baar mujhe bhagane ka chance mil jaye.
Ammu uske haath se kapde kheenchne lagi
Wapas do, tumse kapde girenge.
Arjun ne thoda sa jhuk kar, halki si khushboo lete hue fुसफुसाया
Gire toh sirf tumhari saans girti hai mere paas aake.
Ammu ka dil ek pal ke liye ruk sa, lekin usne aankh thodi tang kar ke kaha
Tumhara shauk na, ek din tumhe girayega…
Arjun halki si hansi ke saath kareeb aaya, itna ki hawa me dono ki saansen tak takra rahi thi
Girne ki aadat toh tab se hai, jab se tum pehli baar mili thi.
Ammu ne kapde kheench liye, lekin uske pair apne aap peeche nahi hile. Ek chhup si narazgi aur chhupi hui khushi dono ek saath thi. Hawa tez chal rahi thi, dupatta uske chehre ke paas udd ke Arjun ke haath me phans gaya.
Arjun ne dheere se wo dupatta khola, nazar uske chehre se ek pal ko bhi nahi hati.
Tumhara yeh rang… shaam se bhi zyada khoobsurat lagta hai.
Ammu
Tumhara koi kaam-dhanda nahi hai? Har shaam yahan tapak padte ho.
Arjun ek half-smile ke saath uske kareeb aata hai
Kaam to hai… tumse ladna, tumhe chidhana… aur kabhi-kabhi tumse thoda pyaar bhi kar lena.
Ammu ne kapde fold karte hue gusse ka drama kiya
Tum samajhte ho main tumhari baaton me aa jaungi?
Arjun ne halkasa jhuk kar uski aankhon me dekha
Main samajhta nahi… main jaanta hoon.
Ammu ne ek kapda uske seene par phenka
Zyada udne ki zarurat nahi, abhi tumhe niche gira bhi sakti ho main.
Arjun ne kapda pakad liya aur muskurate hue uski baat ka counter diya
Girakar tum khud sambhal logi na? Kyunki tumhari baahon me girna… utna bura to nahi hoga.
Ammu ne nazar churane ki koshish ki, par uski halka sa blush Arjun ne miss nahi kiya.
Hawa aur tez ho gayi, uske loose bal Arjun ke chehre ko chhu gaye.
Arjun ne thoda aur kareeb aakar fuskate hue kaha
Yeh hawa to tumhare saath milke mujhe pagal kar rahi hai.
Ammu ne usse thoda door karne ki koshish ki, par uske haath Arjun ke seene par ruk gaye.
Bas tumhara yeh confident chehra… isi wajah se tumhe zyada pyaar nahi milta.
Arjun ne uske haath apne seene se pakad kar neeche kar diye, phir uske kareeb thoda jhuk kar bola
Tum de do na… baaki ki duniya se mujhe kya lena.
Shaam ki roshni, hawa ka wo jhonka, aur dono ke beech ka wo chhota sa faasla… jaise waqt thoda ruk sa gaya ho.
Ammu ne halki si muskaan ke saath kapde utha liye
Bas… ab tum jao.
Arjun ne palat kar chhat ke kone ki taraf badhte hue kaha
Ja raha hoon… par kal phir aunga. Tum chahe chhup jao… main tumhe dhoond hi lunga.
Aur phir ek aur leap maar kar wo apni chhat ki taraf chala gaya, chhod kar jaata hua sirf uski muskaan… jo Ammu ka chehra saara shaam roshan rakhne wali thi.
Ammu ne halka sa aansu chhupane ke liye palak jhuki, fir palat kar neeche chali gayi.
Raat ka waqt tha. Sheher ke upar chand apni thandi roshni bikher raha tha, aur hawaa mein ek sukoon bhari thandak thi. Ammu apne kamre ki batti bujha kar bas bed ke kinare baithi hui thi. Table lamp ka halka sa narangi ujala uske chehre ko ek komal sa glow de raha tha. Parde halki si hawa ke saath dheere-dheere hil rahe the, jaise koi purani kahani suni rahe ho.

Uska dil aaj shaant tha… lekin dimaag mein Arjun ki tasveerein bar-bar ubhar rahi thi. Un lamhon ki yaad, jab uska haath Arjun ke chhodne ke baad bhi uski ungliyon ka dard mehsoos kar raha tha. Uski chaal, uski khushboo, uska saans ka garam jhonka… sab kuch aise mehsoos ho raha tha jaise abhi bhi paas ho.
Ammu ne apni palkein jhuki, lekin Arjun ka chehra uski aankhon ke andar kaid sa tha. Dil ki dhadkan halki si tez ho gayi. Aur phir… ek pal ke liye usne khud ko bas uski baahon mein mehsoos kar liya. Wahi ehsaas… woh lamha… jaise waqt wahin ruk gaya ho.
Camera uski aankhon ke kareeb aata hai. Uske chehre ka wo komal sa rang, aankhon mein chhupi hui nami… aur phir ek aansu uski palak se dheere-dheere nikal kar gaal ki raah le leta hai. Slow motion mein wo aansu uski twacha par chamak raha tha, jaise chand ki roshni uske aansu ko apna rang de rahi ho.
Ammu apne bistar par baithi thi, aankhon mein udaasi ka bojh le kar. Samay kaise beeta, usne notice hi nahi kiya, bas dil mein ek hi soch chal rahi thi — Arjun ab tak kyu nahi aaya.
Tabhi, uske kamre ka darwaza dheere se khulta hai. Halke se light ka ek tukda andar girta hai, aur uske saath Arjun ki parchai. Jaise hi Ammu ki nazar us par padti hai, uske chehre par halki si muskaan apne aap aa jaati hai. Udaasi ke saaye dheere dheere pighalne lagte hain.
Arjun ek kadam aage badhta hai, uski aankhon mein sirf Ammu.
Ammu apni nazar thodi modti hai, par uske hothon ke kone pe ab bhi wo muskaan ki chaap hai.
Ammu
Tumhe aane mein itni der lag gayi? Main yaha intezaar karte karte… bas soch rahi thi ki tum aaoge bhi ya nahi.
Arjun halki si hansi ke saath uske paas aata hai, jaise har lamha bas uske kareeb hone ke liye tha.
Arjun
Thoda kaam atak gaya tha… par tumhare bina ek pal bhi sukoon nahi mila.
Ammu nakhre se usse thoda door baith jaati hai, jaise sach mein gussa ho.
Ammu
Haan, toh ab aisa kaam karna hi kyu jaha main dusre number pe aaun?
Arjun uske kareeb jhukta hai, halki si awaaz mein
Arjun
Meri zindagi mein tum hamesha pehle number pe ho. Bas kabhi kabhi waqt ne apna number ghusa diya.
Ammu uski baat sunke chup ho jaati hai, aankhon mein ek chamak aa jaati hai. Arjun uske haath apne haathon mein le leta hai, unhe dheere se apni ungliyon mein pirota hua.
Dono ke beech halki halki baatein shuru ho jaati hain — kab kaise mile, kitne lamhe yaadgar bane, aur aage ke sapne. Hansi, mazaak, kabhi halki si chhed-chhad, aur beech beech mein wo nazrein jo lafzon se zyada keh jaati hain.
Phir Arjun uske kareeb khinchta hai. Ammu apne aap ko rokne ki koshish karti hai par apni marzi se uske kandhe par sir rakh deti hai. Arjun apne dono haathon se use gher leta hai, jaise uske aas-paas ek suraksha ka daira ban gaya ho.
Unki saansen ek doosre ke kareeb ghulne lagti hain, aur kamra unke is sukoon bhare pal ka gawah ban jaata hai. Ammu apni aankhein band kar ke Arjun ke dil ki dhadkan sunne lagti hai, jaise wo uski har baat ka jawab ho.
Ammu Arjun ke seene se lagi thi, uska gussa jaise kahin pighal ke kho gaya ho. Bahar hawa halki si chal rahi thi, pardon ko dheere dheere hila rahi thi, aur unke beech sirf saansen aur dil ki dhadkan ka saath tha.

Arjun apni ungliyon se Ammu ke baalon ko halki si guthal raha tha, jaise har ek resha uski ungliyon se apne aap lipat raha ho.
Arjun
Pata hai, jab tum door hoti ho na… lagta hai jaise zindagi apna rang kho deti hai.
Ammu aankh band kiye hi halki si muskaan ke saath bolti hai
Ammu
Aur jab tum paas hote ho… toh mujhe apne saare gile shikwe yaad hi nahi rehte.
Arjun apne haathon ka halka sa kas lagata hai, jaise usse keh raha ho ki kabhi chhodunga nahi. Uska chin Ammu ke sar ke paas tikta hai, aur wo uski khushboo ko apne andar kheenchta hai.
Kuch pal dono chup rehte hain, par wo khamoshi bhi itni pyari lag rahi thi jaise ek adhuri kahani jo sirf unke dil samajh rahe ho.
Ammu apni ungliyon se Arjun ki shirt ke button ke paas halki si guthal karti hai, jaise bechaini ke saath uske kareeb aur khinch rahi ho.
Ammu
Tum late aaye, isliye aaj extra waqt yaha rehna padega.
Arjun halki si hansi ke saath uske kandhe par apna chehra rakh deta hai
Arjun
Main toh tumhare paas se ab jaana hi nahi chahta.
Dono ek doosre mein aur simat jaate hain. Arjun ka ek haath uske kamar par, dusra uske sar ko sambhale hue. Ammu uske seene pe apna galla rakh kar apni saansen uske saath mila deti hai.
Samay jaise ruk gaya tha. Bahar ki duniya, phone, responsibilities — sab kahin kho gaye. Sirf wo dono, ek chhoti si duniya mein, jahan ek cuddle mein saara sukoon, saara pyaar simat aata hai.
Arjun dheere se fuskarta hai
Arjun
Ammu… tum meri zindagi ka wo hissa ho jise main kabhi khona nahi chahta.
Ammu uske seene par apni pakad thodi aur mazboot kar leti hai, jaise keh rahi ho — kabhi nahi.
Or ammu arjun ko thoda sa push karke uske upar aa jati hai, arjun ke chehre par ek smile aati hai or ammu apne hath blanket ke andar le jakar apni shalwar ka naara thoda dhila karti hai arjun ko yeh sab chize dikhai to nahi de rhai thi lekin samajh sab aa raha tha, fir ammu ki ek deep breath jaise keh rahi ho ki aage ka kaam karo mister or arjun uski saanso ko samajh jata hai or ammu ki shalwar ko niche karta hua fir apne pero se ammu ke panjo tak pahucha deta hai... Ammu ab niche se sirf panty or upar ek purana suit jo ab tight ho chuka tha ammu ke body ke hisab se... Ammu apne suit ke piche ki lase bhi khol deti hai or arjun uske suit ko bhi pura nikal deta hai... Ab ammu sirf undergarment me arjun ke sath ek kambal me hoti hai... Ammu or jyada sabr ke mood me nahi lagti or arjun ki jeans bhi unbutton kar deti hai or arjun apne chutad utha kar us jeans ko bhi alag kar deta hai... Room me aati hi arjun ne apna shirt pahle hi nikal diya tha... Ab dono ek kambal ke andar semi nude pade they ek ke upar ek... Jaise koi miyaan biwi chudai ke baad ek dusre ko kas kar gale lag rahe ho... Dono ki body ki garmi ek dusre ko or jyada garam kar rahi thi... Dono waise hi kuch der pade rahe or in sab moments ki wajah se arjun ka wo rakshas fir se jaag chuka tha, jo ammu ko apne pet par feel ho raha tha.. ammu ne apna face jo arjun ke sine me daba rakha tha usko utha kar ek look arjun ki taraf dekha jaise keh rahi ho ki hadd hai, bas itne se hi yeh charge ho gaya... Or arjun ko smile karta pakar ammu bhi ek smile karti hai or thoda sa upar niche hokar us rakshas ko apni gufa par ache se set kar leti hai, ab dono hi semi nude ek dusre ko garam kar rahe they, or dono ke wo parts apni apni jagah le chuke they...
Raat ka waqt tha. Kamre ki roshni dheemi thi, bas ek side table lamp jal raha tha. Shanu bistar par adhi let ke apna phone haath mein liye hui thi, screen par Zaheer ka naam chamak raha tha. Call connect hote hi dono ki saansen halki si badh gayi — jaise sirf awaaz sunte hi pichli yaadein wapas aa gayi ho.

Shanu
Toh… aaj ka din kaafi bada tha tumhare liye. Congratulations, Mr. Successful.
Zaheer ki awaaz mein ek halki si muskaan thi
Zaheer
Thanks… lekin tumhari yaad ne aaj ka din aur bada bana diya.
Shanu ne halki si hansi chhupane ki koshish ki, par uski awaaz mein ek sharaarat aa gayi.
Shanu
Yaad sirf aaj aayi? Ya phir us raat ke baare mein bhi socha… jab hum dono ek hi bistar par…
Zaheer ki saansen thodi tez hui.
Zaheer
Socha? Nahi… woh raat toh meri yaadon ka permanent part hai.
Dono kuch pal chup rahe, lekin khamoshi mein bhi unka connection mehsoos ho raha tha. Tab Shanu ne apni awaaz thodi serious kar di.
Shanu
Zaheer… sirf yeh keh dena ki pyaar karta ho, iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum waqai pyaar nibhane ke liye tayyar ho.
Zaheer halki si curiosity se bolta hai
Zaheer
Matlab?
Shanu
Matlab, agar tumhe lagta hai ki tum sach mein mujhse pyaar karte ho… toh tumhe yeh prove karna hoga.
Zaheer
Prove kaise?
Shanu ne apne hothon par halki si muskaan laate hue kaha
Shanu
Himmat hai… toh aake mil le mujhse. Face to face.
Zaheer ne turant jawab diya, uski awaaz mein confident taana
Zaheer
Himmat toh bahut hai… lekin yeh bata, reward kya hai? Kyunki main khali-pili mehnat nahi karta.
Shanu ne phone ke dusre side pe ek pal chup reh kar halki si hansi di, jaise uske sawal ka jawab dena abhi nahi chah rahi ho…
Zaheer ke sawal par Shanu ki halki si hansi line ke doosre taraf gunguna gayi. Uske hothon ka curve uski awaaz me samajh a raha tha.
Shanu
Reward… tum apne aap soch lo. Waise tum jaante ho na… main sirf waada nahi karti, poora bhi karti hoon.
Zaheer ka dil ek pal ke liye tez dhadak gaya. Uski awaaz dheemi, lekin garam ho gayi.
Zaheer
Toh iska matlab… agar main aaya, toh mujhe woh sab milega jo main soch raha hoon?
Shanu ne halki si sharaarat ke saath awaaz kheench kar kaha
Shanu
Shayad… ya shayad usse bhi zyada. Bas tumhe himmat dikhani hogi.
Zaheer ne palang par apna sir tikaya, aankhein band karke uske alfazon ko mehsoos karta hua
Zaheer
Tum jaanti ho na… himmat meri pehchan hai. Lekin tum ready ho… main aaya toh waapas nahi jaane wala.
Shanu ki saansen halki si tez hui. Usne apni awaaz thodi halki ki, jaise koi secret share kar rahi ho
Shanu
Wahi toh dekhna hai Zaheer… tum sirf lafzon ke mard ho ya haqeeqat me bhi. Aur haan… agar aake mujhe chhua, toh wapas jaana tumhare liye utna easy nahi hoga.
Zaheer ne dheere se hansi di
Zaheer
Warning ya invitation?
Shanu
Jo tum samajh lo… lekin ek baat yaad rakh, us raat humne jo shuru kiya tha, wo adhura reh gaya tha. Shayad… tum aake use poora kar sako.
Zaheer ke hothon par ek seedha confident smile aa gaya
Zaheer
Bas… ab main intezaar nahi karne wala.
Phone ke dono taraf ek lamha aisa tha jaha dono ki saansen ek saath tez thi, jaise ek hi bistar par hone ka ehsaas sirf awaazon se ho raha ho.

[sushilt20]

Nice update and awesome story

[Greenwood]

Nice update and awesome story

Keep reading and permoting

[Anum sheikh]

I thought Kay ap ek achy musawar Bhi hongay, q Kay ap ka likha manzar tasveer ban kr ankho k samny aa jata hai. Kia he mahoool khaichty ho, such unbelievable

[Greenwood]

I thought Kay ap ek achy musawar Bhi hongay, q Kay ap ka likha manzar tasveer ban kr ankho k samny aa jata hai. Kia he mahoool khaichty ho, such unbelievable

Thanks a lot :)
Bahut shukriya apka is kahani se judne ke liye

[Greenwood]

Update 80




Phone cut hone ke baad aadhe ghante tak Zaheer apne kamre me idhar-udhar chakkar lagata raha. Dil me ek ajeeb si bechaini thi—jaise har second ke saath uska intezaar aur junoon badhta ja raha tha. Shanu ke shabd uske kaano me ghoonj rahe the… agar aake mil le mujhse… toh shayad jo adhura reh gaya tha, wo poora ho jaye.
Akhirkaar, usne faisla kar liya. Ek nazar ghar ke andar daali, sab so chuke the. Dheere se apne kamre ki roshni band ki aur qadam sambhal kar seedhiyan chadh gaya. Raat ka samay, ghar bilkul khamosh, sirf deewar ghadi ki halki si tick-tick chal rahi thi.
Chhat par pahunch kar usne gehri saans li. Thandi hawa uske chehre se takraayi, lekin uska dil abhi bhi garam tha—pyaar aur darr dono se. Samne andhera tha, aur us andhere ke peeche Shanu ka intezaar.
Zaheer ne dheere dheere kadam badhaye, aur chhat se chhat tak ke raste par chalna shuru kiya. Uska har qadam dhyan se rakha gaya, jaise koi chhup kar sapna poora karne nikal raha ho.
Lekin ek jagah uska paon thoda phisla, aur uske haath se ek phoolon ka gamla gir gaya. Mitti bikhar gayi, aur gamla neeche raste pe zameen se takra kar awaz kar gaya. Zaheer ekdam jam gaya—saansen rukh gayi, dil tez dhadkne laga. Usne turant neeche jhaanka, darr tha ki koi dekh na le.
Lekin kismat uske saath thi. Raat ke is waqt sab apni neend me doobe hue the. Koi bhi us awaz par bahar nahi aaya.
Zaheer ne halki si dua maangi aur phir sambhal kar aage badh gaya. Uski aankhon me ek hi manzil thi—Arjun ki chhat ke paar Shanu tak pahuchna. Har kadam ke saath darr bhi tha, lekin junoon aur excitement usse aage dhakel rahe the.
Chandni ki roshni me uski parchai deewaron pe khel rahi thi, jaise raat bhi uske raaz me shaamil ho gayi ho.

Zaheer sambhal kar Arjun ki chhat par utaar gaya. Uske dil ki dhadkan ab itni tez thi ki use lag raha tha koi sun lega. Usne aas-paas dekha, sab kuch khamosh tha. Sirf ek kone se halki si roshni aa rahi thi… aur wahi thi Shanu.
Shanu ne usse dekhte hi halki si muskaan di, jaise intezaar uska bhi utna hi tha jitna Zaheer ka. Usne ungli se chup ka ishara kiya aur dheere se uski taraf badhi. Zaheer apne aap ko rok nahi paaya—jaise hi wo kareeb aayi, usne ek jhatke me uska haath pakad liya aur apni taraf kheench liya.
Shanu uske seene se takra gayi. Dono ek pal ke liye sirf ek-doosre ki saansen mehsoos karte rahe. Raat ka andhera, hawa ka halki si gungunahat aur unke dil ki dhadkan ek hi taal pe chal rahi thi.
Zaheer
Mujhe laga tha main sapna dekh raha hoon… tum itni aasaan lag rahi ho is waqt ki jaise main tumhe hamesha ke liye apna bana loon.
Shanu ne uske gale ke paas apni ungli se halka sa circle banaya aur huskily fuskayi
Shanu
Aur sapne… kabhi sach bhi karne chahiye.
Uske hothon ki muskaan ab sirf ek nasha thi. Zaheer ne apna chehra uske aur kareeb laakar uski aankhon me dekha—un aankhon me sharaarat bhi thi aur ek gehri si pyaas bhi. Fir bina aur intezaar kiye, usne Shanu ke hothon ko apne hothon me le liya.
Wo kiss dheere se shuru hui, lekin pal bhar me junooni ban gayi. Shanu uske gale ko pakad kar aur kareeb kheench laayi, jaise uske aur uske darmiyaan koi faasla ho hi na. Zaheer ke haath uske kamar se lekar uske peeth tak ghoomte rahe, usse apne bilkul kareeb jodte hue.
Chhat ki hawa unke khud ke aag ke saamne thandi lag rahi thi. Unke beech ek aisa jazba tha jo raat ki khamoshi ko bhi tod raha tha.
Shanu uske seene se lag kar muskaan ke saath boli
Shanu
Bas… isi liye bulaya tha tumhe. Dekhne ke liye ki himmat sirf lafzon me hai ya tumhe sach me apni chahat nibhaani aati hai.
Zaheer ne uske bal ko apne ungliyon me uljha kar kaha
Zaheer
Aur ab tumhe samajh aaya?
Shanu ne uske hothon par phir se apna hoth rakh diya—jaise jawab shabdon me nahi, sirf ehsaason me dena tha.
Shanu ke hothon par dobara apne hoth rakhte hi Zaheer ka junoon aur badh gaya. Uske haathon ki pakad Shanu ki kamar par aur mazboot ho gayi, jaise usse apne se alag karna ab mumkin hi na ho. Shanu bhi uske baahon ke daayre me simat kar, uske gale ko apne dono haathon se gher gayi.

Unke beech ki kiss ab dheere-dheere aur gehri, aur zyada junooni ban rahi thi. Raat ka sannata unki saanson ki garmi me ghul jaa raha tha. Shanu ki ungliyaan uske baalon me ulajh gayi, kabhi uske gale ko kashti, kabhi uske seene par apni ungliyon ka halka pressure chhodti.
Zaheer apni ungliyon se uski peeth ke raaston ko mehsoos kar raha tha, kabhi halki si kas ke, kabhi uske kurte ki kapde ke neeche ungliyaan ghusaakar. Shanu ki dhadkan itni tez thi ki wo uske seene se lag kar mehsoos kar raha tha.
Dono thoda sa peeche hote, ek-doosre ki aankhon me dekhte — aankhon me junoon, ek paagalpan. Fir bina ek shabd kahe dobara ek dusre par toot padte. Unke hoth, unke chehre, unki gardan… har jagah unke chumban ki garmi fail rahi thi.
Shanu halki si hansi ke saath uske kan ke paas fuskayi
Shanu
Dekha… ab bhi lagta hai sirf lafzon ka pyaar tha?
Zaheer ne uske gale me apna chehra daba kar, uske kaanon ke neeche ek narmi bhara chumban diya
Zaheer
Nahi… ab lagta hai ki tum meri zarurat ho. Aur main tumhe chhod nahi sakta.
Shanu ne uske kandhe par apna sir rakh kar apni aankhein band kar li, uske touch me kho jaate hue. Uske haathon ne Zaheer ke seene par kas ke pakad liya, jaise keh rahi ho ki iss pal me bas dono hi hain — aur koi nahi.
Zaheer ne usse aur kareeb kheench kar apne se lipta liya. Uski baatein khatam, ab sirf unke haathon, hothon aur saanson ka silsila tha jo chhupkar raat ke andhere me ek doosre ka haq jata rahe the.

Zaheer abhi bhi Shanu ko apni baahon me liye tha, jab Shanu ne halki si sharaarat bhari nazar se uski aankhon me dekha. Usne uska haath apne haathon me mazbooti se pakda aur dheere se kheenchti hui boli
Shanu
Chalo… yahan chhat par thandi hawa se zyada mere kamre ki garmi pasand aayegi tumhe.
Zaheer thoda muskuraya, lekin uske dil ki dhadkan aur tez ho gayi. Dono sambhalte hue, dheere kadmon se chal kar andar aaye. Shanu ne apne kamre ka darwaza halki si aahat ke saath bandh kiya. Ab kamre ki roshni me sirf wo dono the — saamne–saamne, ek dusre ki pyaas bhari aankhon me khoe hue.
Shanu ne darwaza lagate hi bina kuch kahe usse apni taraf kheench liya, aur phir apni ungliyon ko uske seene par phirate hue seedhe uske hothon par apna hoth rakh diya. Kiss ab pehle se zyada intense thi, jaise dono apni puri raat ke intezaar ko ek pal me pura karna chahte ho.
Zaheer ke haath ab uski kamar se uske peeth tak phail gaye, usse aur kareeb kheench kar apne se chipka liya. Shanu uske gale ko apne hothon aur ungliyon se explore kar rahi thi, har chhoti chhoti jagah par apna nishaan chhodti ja rahi thi.
Zaheer ne uske balon me apna chehra daba kar kaha
Zaheer
Tumhe pata hai, main is pal ka intezaar kab se kar raha tha…
Shanu uske kan ke paas fuskayi
Shanu
Aur main tumhe aaj apni baahon se door bhejne wali nahi hoon.
Dono dheere dheere bistar ki taraf badhe. Shanu pehle baithe jaise usne Zaheer ko bulaya ho, aur Zaheer ne uske kareeb baithte hi phir se usse apni baahon me lapet liya. Ab unka har touch, har kiss aur zyada passionate ho chuka tha.
Shanu ki saansen tez, uske hoth Zaheer ke hothon, uski gardan, uske seene par baras rahe the. Zaheer ne uske haathon ko pakad kar bistar par dheere se pin kar diya, uski aankhon me dekhte hue
Zaheer
Ab tumse door rehna mumkin nahi hai.
Shanu ne aankhein band karke apna chehra uske kareeb laakar kaha
Shanu
Toh door jaane ka sochna bhi mat.
Aur uske baad dono ek dusre ke junoon me doob gaye — har lamha aur gehra, har touch aur tez, jaise dono apni mohabbat ko lafzon se nahi, bas apne jism aur jazbaat se bayaan karna chahte ho.
Bistar par girte hi Shanu Zaheer ke neeche simat gayi. Uske hothon se saans tez nikal rahi thi, aur har gehri saans ke saath uska seena upar–neeche ho raha tha. Uski body ki yeh harkat Zaheer ko aur madhosh kar rahi thi. Usne apni nazar uske chehre se lekar uske seene tak ghoomaayi, aur us pal uska junoon aur bhadak gaya.

Zaheer ne apna chehra uske collarbone ke paas le jaakar halki halki chumban diye. Har chumban ke saath Shanu ke hothon se halki si siskari nikalti, jo uska jadoo aur tez kar rahi thi. Uske ungliyon ne Shanu ki kamar ko kas kar pakda hua tha, jaise usse apne se alag karne ka khayal bhi bardasht nahi tha.
Shanu apne haathon se Zaheer ke baalon me ulajh gayi, kabhi uske sir ko aur kareeb kheenchti, kabhi uske kandhe ko pakad kar apne neeche se uthne ki koshish karti, lekin phir dobara usi junoon me beh jaati. Uski saansen itni tez thi ki unki garmi Zaheer ke chehre ko choo rahi thi.
Zaheer apne hothon ko uski gardan se lekar uske seene ke paas tak le gaya, har jagah apni chaap chhodta hua. Shanu ki halki halki karah Zaheer ke liye sabse badi deewangi ban gayi thi. Usne phir uske hoth apne hothon me le liye—yeh kiss ab pehle se kahin zyada gehra, zyada madmast tha.
Shanu ke upper body parts uski tez saanson ke saath hil rahe the, aur unki yeh halchal Zaheer ko apne hosh kho dene par majboor kar rahi thi. Har baar jab wo uske seene se lipat jaata, usse lagta jaise zindagi ki sabse khoobsurat narmi usi pal me simat gayi ho.
Shanu ne bechaini me apna chehra Zaheer ke seene par daba liya, uski dhadkan sunte hue.
Shanu (fuskate hue)
Zaheer… mujhe lagta hai main tumhari ho chuki hoon.
Zaheer ne uske baalon me apne hoth rakh kar kaha
Zaheer
Aur main tumhe kabhi apne se alag nahi hone dunga.
Uske baad dono apne jazbaat me kho gaye—baatein khatam ho gayi, sirf chumban, touch aur ek doosre ka junoon reh gaya. Raat ka andhera, unki saansen aur dhadkane, aur dono ka pyaar… sab ek ho gaye.

Raat ka junoon dheere dheere sukoon me badal chuka tha. Bistar par Shanu Zaheer ki baahon me lipti hui thi, uska sir Zaheer ke seene par tikha hua, aur uski halki saansen ab bhi tez chal rahi thi. Har saans ke saath uska seena Zaheer ke seene ko choo raha tha, aur uski garmi dono ke darmiyaan fail rahi thi.
Zaheer apne ungliyon se uske balon ko guthal raha tha, kabhi halki si ungli uske gaal ke paas phirata, kabhi uske hothon ke kone par. Usne dheere se Shanu ka chehra upar uthaya aur uski aankhon me dekha—thodi thakaan, thodi sharaarat, aur bahut saara pyaar.
Zaheer
Tumhe dekh kar lagta hai jaise chand bhi tumse roshni udhaar leta ho.
Shanu halki si hansi ke saath uske gale me aur simat gayi.
Shanu
Aur tumhe dekh kar lagta hai jaise lafzon kaise bhi ho, tum mujhe hamesha fasa hi loge.
Usne apni ungli se Zaheer ke hoth trace kiye, fir sharaarat se apna hoth uske hothon ke kareeb le aayi bina kiss kiye. Zaheer uski iss ada se aur madhosh ho gaya, usne turant usse apne kareeb kheench kar ek gehra kiss kar diya.
Shanu ki siskari uske hothon me ghul gayi. Uski body ab bhi Zaheer ke touch se hil rahi thi, aur ye halka sa hilna Zaheer ke liye sabse bada nasha tha. Usne apni ungliyan uski kamar par ghumayi, usse aur kareeb kheench kar.
Shanu fuskayi
Raat to khatam ho rahi hai… lekin meri pyaas abhi nahi.
Zaheer ne uske hothon par halka sa bite karte hue kaha
Zaheer
Toh phir… aaj ki raat lambi kar dete hain.
Aur dono phir se ek dusre me doob gaye—kiss, chhed-chhad, halki si hasi aur seductive touch ke saath. Raat ne apne daaman me unke pyaar ko dobara samet liya, jaise waqt bhi inhe todne ki himmat na kar raha ho.
Subah ki pehli roshni khidki ke parde se guzar kar kamre me gir rahi thi. Shanu ki aankh dheere dheere khuli, aur usne dekha ki wo abhi bhi Zaheer ki baahon me lipti hui hai. Uska chehra Zaheer ke seene par tikha tha, dono ke saans ek rhythm me chal rahe the.

Ek pal ke liye Shanu muskurai—raat ki har yaad use madhosh kar rahi thi. Uske hoth ab bhi Zaheer ke hothon ka nasha mehsoos kar rahe the, uski twacha ab bhi uske touch se garam thi.
Usne dheere se blanket hatai aur nazar Zaheer par tik gayi. Uske pajame ke neeche ek noticeable bulge tha jo Shanu ke galo ko halki si laali de gaya. Usne apne daant se hoth dabaya aur halki si sharaarat bhari muskaan ke saath usse dekhti rahi.
Shanu dheere se uske kareeb sarak gayi, uska haath Zaheer ke seene se phisalta hua uske pet tak aaya. Zaheer ne aankh band rakhte hue bhi ek halki si muskaan di jaise usse sab mehsoos ho raha ho.
Zaheer ne dheere se kaha
Zaheer
Subah hui aur tum abhi bhi mujhe sata rahi ho?
Shanu ne uske gale me apna chehra chhupate hue fuskaya
Shanu
Mujhe tumhari aadat ho gayi hai… raat bhar bhi, subah bhi.
Zaheer ne use apne neeche kheench liya, dono ke beech blanket ke andar garmi aur aur zyada badh gayi. Shanu ki saansen tez ho gayi, uska seena uthta girta jaise kal raat ki yaadein phir se zinda ho gayi ho.
Dono ek dusre me simat kar, sharaarati kisses aur passionate hugs me kho gaye. Blanket ke neeche unka pyaar phir se ek naye junoon me dhal raha tha—yeh subah bhi raat ki tarah unke liye sirf ek aur nasha thi

Shanu ne blanket ke neeche apni ungliyon se Zaheer ke seene par halka sa circle banaya, phir uska haath dheere dheere neeche ki taraf sarak gaya. Zaheer ki saansein tez ho gayi, usne aankh khol kar Shanu ko dekha jo mischievous muskaan ke saath use chhed rahi thi.
Zaheer ne uska haath pakad kar apne hoth uske haath ki pith par rakh diye. Uske hoth ki garmi se Shanu ka badan kaanp utha. Zaheer ne usse apni taraf kheench kar blanket ke andar uske seene se lipta liya.
Shanu ki saansein itni tez thi ki uska upar ka badan uth–gir raha tha, aur wo Zaheer ke seene se lag kar usse aur bhi madhosh kar rahi thi. Uske hoth baar–baar Zaheer ki gardan par gir rahe the, kabhi hansi me, kabhi halki si sharaarat me.
Zaheer ne uske hoth apne hothon me le liye, aur dono ke beech ek gehra kiss shuru ho gaya. Kiss itna intense tha ki dono blanket ke andar apni saansein bhool gaye. Zaheer apne pajame ke bulge ko Shanu ke thigh ke against rub karne laga, jisse Shanu ne hoth dabate hue halki si moan kiya.
Shanu uske gale ko zor se pakad kar uske aur kareeb aa gayi, jaise uska pura badan Zaheer ke touch ko absorb kar raha ho. Dono ke beech blanket ke andar pure dry passion ki garmi bhar gayi thi.
Shanu ne uske kaan me fuskate hue kaha
Shanu
Tumhari yeh subah mujhe roz chahiye…
Zaheer ne uski kamar ko zor se daba kar jawab diya
Zaheer
Roz nahi, hamesha… tum meri aadat ban chuki ho.
Phir dono blanket ke andar simat kar aur bhi bold kisses aur teasing touches me doob gaye—subah ki roshni bahar thi, lekin andar unke liye abhi bhi raat ka junoon zinda tha.
Shanu blanket ke andar Zaheer ki kamar par dono baahen daal kar uske bilkul kareeb aa gayi. Uska badan puri tarah se Zaheer se chipak gaya tha. Zaheer ke pajame ka bulge ab uske lower body ke against press ho raha tha, aur dono ke badan apne aap hi halki halki moves kar rahe the.

Shanu ki saansein tez thi, uske hoth kabhi Zaheer ke seene par, kabhi uski jawline par ghoom jaate. Wo apni kamar ko dheere dheere hilati ja rahi thi, aur Zaheer apni eyes band karke uske touch me doobta ja raha tha.
Zaheer
Tum mujhe pagal kar rahi ho Shanu…
Shanu hansi daba kar uske kaan me fuskayi
Shanu
To fir pagal ho jao… mujhe yeh sab pasand hai.
Zaheer ne uski kamar pakad kar apne bulge ko aur zor se uske hips ke against press kiya. Blanket ke neeche dono ke badan garmi se bheeg gaye the. Shanu ne halki si moan ki aur apne nails se Zaheer ki peeth ko scratch kar diya, jaise uske junoon ko aur bhadka rahi ho.
Unke beech grinding aur tez ho gayi, dono ek dusre ke saath rhythm me chal rahe the. Shanu ke lips Zaheer ke lips se chipke rahe, kabhi halki si bite, kabhi intense deep kiss. Uska upper body tez saans lene ki wajah se uth–gir raha tha, aur har baar Zaheer usse aur tight pakad kar apne kareeb kheench leta.
Shanu
Zaheer… stop mat karna…
Zaheer ne uske hothon par phir se apna hoth rakh diya, aur blanket ke andar unka passion aur bhi wild ho gaya. Har move, har kiss, har touch ek dusre ko aur zyada possessive aur addicted bana raha tha.

Blanket ke neeche dono ke badan lagataar ek dusre se rub ho rahe the. Shanu apni kamar aur tez hilane lagi, uski halki si moan Zaheer ke hothon me dab gayi thi. Uska badan garmi se tap raha tha, aur uske sharp nails baar–baar Zaheer ki peeth me utarte ja rahe the.
Zaheer uske hips ko zor se pakad kar apne bulge ko bar–bar uske against grind karta raha. Har thrust ke saath unki saansein aur tez hoti gayi, blanket ke andar ek alag hi rhythm ban chuka tha.
Shanu
Zaheeer… ahh… main…
Zaheer ne uske hoth dabakar kaha
Zaheer
Main bhi… roko mat…
Unke moves aur fast ho gaye, dono poore control se bahar jaa chuke the. Blanket ke andar garmi aur unke badan ka sweat mix ho gaya tha. Shanu ka upper body fast saans lene ki wajah se uth–gir raha tha, jisse Zaheer aur madhosh hota gaya.
Phir ek dum se dono ek saath climax ke kareeb aa gaye. Shanu ka badan zaheer ke against tightly chipak gaya, uski moan zabardasti Zaheer ke hothon me daba di gayi. Zaheer ka bulge shanu ke against hard press hota raha jab tak uski saari energy nikal na gayi.
Aur fir… kuch seconds ke liye sab rukh gaya. Sirf dono ki bhari bhari saansein aur dil ki tez dhadkan sunai de rahi thi. Blanket ke andar dono ne ek dusre ko aur tight jhappi me le liya.
Zaheer ka bulge ab dheere dheere thanda ho chuka tha, kyunki dono apne apne jagah se puri tarah release ho gaye the. Shanu ne apna thaka hua chehra Zaheer ke seene par rakh diya, aur wo halki halki muskaan ke saath aankhen band kar gayi.
Zaheer ne uske baalon me ungliyan phirate hue dheere se kaha
Zaheer
Meri reward tum khud ho… aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe.
Shanu muskaan rok na paayi aur uski baaton me doob gayi. Blanket ke andar dono ab shant aur sukoon se ek dusre ko cuddle karte rahe, jaise duniya unke liye wahi ruk gayi ho.

[Manju roy]

Kahani to bhut mast hai Khas kar shanu or zaheer ka ab bas unke bich romance ko or badho or sex dikhao

[Anum sheikh]

awesome update full of love ?