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Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani
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(13-08-2025, 06:08 PM)Sriya2 Wrote: Sorry for the delay. Last weekend I was very busy with Rakhi and then have been sick over the last few days. I will look to post soon but acknowledge the delay.

Sriya you need to take care of yourself and get well soon and become healthy once again..... The story can wait till then.... Once you have recovered and able to write and post the update then only do it.... Your health is more important than the story..... We will wait until then......

Get well soon
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Mtlb hadh he krdi apne sriya ji kb update krenge jb off khtm ho jaegha office ka itna bhi wait mt karwao yr ......krdoh update
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@Sriya health theek nahi hui abhi?
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Update 76

Supriya ek bus mein burqa pehne baithi thi. Bahar se uska chhehra nahi dikh raha tha tha par uske chhehre par dehshat saaf jhalak rahi thi. Aur aakhir kyu na jhalke, pichla ek ghanta uske liye kisi bhanayak movie ke drishyo se kam nahi tha. Supriya sochne lagi ki woh aaj yahan tak kaise pahuchi thi.

Vikram ke call karne ke 15 minute baad hi Iqbal wahan mandir mein unke paas pahuch gaya tha. Jaise hi Iqbal wahan pahucha Vikram use saari situation samjhane laga. Supriya ke dimaag ne toh kaam karna hi band kar diya tha aur use sahi se samajh nahi aa raha tha ki woh log kya baat kar rahe they aur aage kya hoga.

Iqbal - Saabji… bhagna kyu… aane do jisko aana hai, main sab ko dekh lunga… madamji ke liye toh main kisi se bhi bhid jayunga…

Vikram - Iqbal mujhe koi shak nahi is baat ka, par 10 mustando ke aage hum dono hi nahi tik payenge. Aur uske baad woh Supriya ka kya haal karenge, tum bhi samajh sakte ho... main apne liye nahi keh raha, bas Supriya ke khaatir is waqt yahan se nikal jaana hi behtar hai...

Iqbal ke chhehre par uljhan aur chinta saaf dikh rahi thi - Par saabji... wahan hi kyu jaana? Aur aapko wahan ke baare mein pata bhi kaise chala...

Vikram ne uske sawaal ko ansuna karte hue pucha - Tumne kisi aur se toh wahan ka zikr nahi kiya na?

Iqbal serious hote hue bola - Nahi saabji... kabhi bhi nahi...

Vikram - Toh bas fir wahi perfect jagah hai. Bas kuch mahino ki baat hai... jaise hi saara maamla thanda padta hai, main wahan aakar Supriya ko le jayunga...

Iqbal - Saabji par....

Vikram - Tum hi mujhe batayo... kya wahan koi bahar wala aakar tumhari marzi ke bina Supriya ko le jaa sakta hai?

Iqbal - Nahi saabji... woh toh mumkin hi nahi hai...

Vikram - Toh fir soch kya rahe ho, tum Supriya ko lekar wahan niklo... (Vikram ne Supriya ki aur dekh kar use pukara) Supriya... Supriya suno...

Supriya ne halke se sir hilaya, jaise kisi bure sapne se jaagi ho - Haan.... 

Vikram - Supriya... apna phone do mujhe... Iqbal tum bhi apne phone ki sim nikaal kar mujhe do...

Vikram Supriya ka phone lekar uske phone ki sim nikalne laga aur Iqbal ne bhi use apne phone ki sim de di - Main nahi chahta ki tum log wahan trace ho... Iqbal tum gaadi mein wait karo main 2 min mein Supriya ko lekar aata hoon...

Iqbal - Jee saabji...

Vikram Supriya ke saath akela wahan reh gaya tha, Vikram ne pyaar se uske dono gaalo ko pakda - Supriya... I know ye tumhe abhi mushkil lag raha hoga, par is samay tumhara yahan se nikalna kafi zaroori hai...

Supriya ki aakhen nam thi, aur honth kaanp rahe they - Mujhe toh kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha... ye sab kya ho raha hai... main aise kaise yahan se nikal jayu...

Vikram - Trust me Supriya... maine bhi nahi socha tha hum is halat mein honge... par abhi ye sab baat karne ka fayda nahi hai... hum jitni der karenge Isha ke logo ko utna hi time milega tum tak pahuchne ke liye...

Supriya ne halke se sir hilaya - Aap aa jayenge na... jaise hi sab theek hoga?

Vikram - Haan bilkul... ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai...

Supriya - Aur Atul aur baaki sab? Agar Isha ne unhe kuch kar diya toh...

Vikram - Woh sab main sambhal lunga... uske liye mera abhi ghar pahuchna bahut zaroori hai...

Supriya - Aur wahan koi gadbad ho gayi toh main kaise sambhalungi?

Vikram - Bas jaisi bhi situation ho tum bas us hisab se apne aap ko adjust karti jaana... baaki sab Iqbal sambhal lega... promise karo tum ghabrayogi nahi?

Supriya ne dheere se kaha - Promise...

Vikram - Chalo ab apne aasu pocho aur apne aapko sambhalo...

Supriya aur Vikram bahar chalte hue aaye aur Supriya sirf apne hand bag ke saath gaadi mein baith gayi. Use aisa lag raha tha jaise aaj woh dubara vida ho rahi ho. Jaise hi woh gaadi mein baithi Iqbal ne farrate se gaadi chalani shuru kar di.

Supriya peeche ki seat par pareshaan baithi thi, tabhi use kuch soojha - Iqbal... ek baar aap Vikram ke office ki taraf le lenge kya?

Iqbal - Madamji par... saabji ne bola hai ki seedha Lucknow se bahar nikalne ke liye...

Supriya ne usse pyaar se request kiya - Bas ek baar... please...

Iqbal - Theek hai madamji... jaisa aap kahe...

Iqbal ne gaadi modte hue Vikram ke office ki taraf kar li. Supriya bas wahan pahuch kar Atul se baat karna chahti thi, aur use jo kuch hua uske baare mein batana chahti thi. Aisi achanak gayab hone se pata nahi Atul uske baare mein kya sochne wala tha. Kuch hi der mein gaadi Vikram ke office ke paas pahuch rahi thi, wahan pehle se neeche kaafi bheed ikhatta thi.

Bheed dekh kar Iqbal ke maathe par bal padta jaa raha tha - Madamji yahan kuch gadbad hai... gaadi mod lu kya?

Supriya - Nahi bas... thoda sa aur paas...

Iqbal ne gaadi ko thoda aur paas kiya, aur Supriya ne apna sir khidki se bahar nikal kar bheed mein dekhna shuru kiya. Use wahan Atul dikh gaya! 4-5 hatte katte log use pakad kar ghere khade they. Aur office ke baaki log ye sab tamasha dekh rahe they. Thodi der par Disha bhi khadi thi.

Disha ki nazar bhi Supriya par padi, aur woh tez kadmo se uski aur aayi. 

Jaise hi Disha uski khidki tak pahuchi, Supriya ke rundhe hue gale se thodi si aawaz nikli - Disha... ye sab kya... Atul...

Disha - Supriya tum batayo... ye sab kya ho raha hai... aisa lag raha hai woh log tumhe dhoond rahe hai... kya hua hai?  

Shayad itni bheed mein bhi kisi ne Disha ko Supriya se baat karte hue dekh liya aur uski aur ishaara kiya. Woh 4-5 log Atul ko chhodte hue unki gaadi ki aur chillate hue jhapte.

Aadmi - Woh rahi... woh rahi... rok use...

Iqbal bhi zor se chillaya - Madamji!!! Ye isi taraf aa rahe hai... hume nikalna hoga...

Iqbal ne jaldi se gaadi ko reverse mein chalaya, aur thoda peeche hote hi gaadi ko udata hua wahan se nikalne laga. Supriya ne peeche palat kar dekha, kuch log ek doosri gaadi mein unka peecha karne lage they.

Iqbal gusse aur tanaav mein bola - Maine bola tha na, yahan aana sahi nahi hoga...

Supriya Iqbal ki ye halat dekh kar buri tarah ghabra gayi thi - Ab kya karenge Iqbal...

Iqbal apni aawaz mein thodi narmi laaya - Aap ghabrayo nahi...

Iqbal ek ke baad ek mod leta hua wahan se tezi se nikalne laga. Supriya ko ab peeche aati hui gaadi toh nahi dikh rahi thi, par use pata tha ki woh jyada door nahi honge. Thodi der baad Iqbal ne gaadi ek jagah lagayi.

Supriya - Yahan kyu gaadi rok di...

Iqbal - Madamji.. unhe is gaadi ka number dikh gaya hai... hume ise yahin chhodna hoga...


Supriya - Ab aage kya?

Iqbal ne gaadi ki dikki kholi aur usme se ek kaala burqa nikala - Madamji aap ye pehen lo... aapki laal saree kisi ka bhi dhyan kheech legi apni aur. Supriya ne jaldi se kaala burqa apne kapdo ke upar daala, woh upar se neeche tak isme dhak gayi thi, bas bahar se uski aankhen nazar aa rahi thi.

Iqbal - Aur apni chappal bhi utaar kar ye jooti pehen lijiye... aapki chappal kuch jyada hi chamkili hai...

Supriya - Ye mere aayegi bhi?

Iqbal - Try toh kariye....

Iqbal ne jhuk kar Supriya ko jooti pehnani shuru kari, woh badi mushkil se Supriya ke pairo mein fasi. Supriya burqe ko sahi se sambhal nahi paa rahi thi, aur woh baar baar uski aankhon paa aa raha tha- Mujhe isme kuch bhi nahi dikh raha...


Iqbal - Aap bas mera haath pakad lo... 

Iqbal ne Supriya ka haath kas ke pakad liya aur woh use kahin le jaane laga. Supriya ko sahi se samajh nahi aa raha tha ki woh log kahan jaa rahe they. Supriya bas Iqbal ka haath pakde use saath khichi jaa rahi thi, use Iqbal par poora bharosa tha.

Kuch hi der mein use aisa laga jaise woh kisi bus adde par ho, aur Iqbal ne use dheere se kaha - Ye is bus mein chhadna hai hume, aap pehle chhadiye..

Supriya ko sahi se samajh nahi aa raha tha par Iqbal ne uski kamar pakadte hue use bus mein upar chhada diya aur fir uske peeche aate hue use ek khidki wali seat par bitha diya aur woh uske saath mein baith gaya. Supriya ko burqe ki jaali se bas halka fulka hi dikh raha tha, bus jaldi hi khachakach bhar gayi thi.

Supriya aage wali seat ki railing ko pakad kar kas ke baithi hui thi, Iqbal usse theek sata hua saath mein baitha tha. Bus ab chalne ko shuru hi hui thi ki ek dam se bahar kuch shor sharaba hua. 2-3 log conductor ko dhakka dete hue bus mein chhade aur idhar udhar dekhne lage.

Conductor - Kya hai ye sab

Supriya ke kaano mein ek aadmi ki aawaz aayi - Aye... kisi laal saree wali ladki ko dekha hai yahan...

Conductor - Jo hai tumhare saamne hai na...

Aadmi ne ek aur laal saree wali aurat ko dekhte hue kaha - Ye wali nahi... thodi jawan si...

Conductor - Aur toh koi nahi...

Aadmi ne Supriya ki aur ghoor kar dekha, Supriya ne apni aankhen neeche kar li - Aur ye jo burqe wali hain? Apne burqe upar karo...

Shayad bus mein Supriya ke elawa bhi 2-3 aur aurate thi jinhone burqa pehna hua tha.

Ye sunte hi ek aur aadmi bol pada - Ye kya badtameezi hai... tum hamari aurato ke burqe utaaroge...

Ye sun kar aur bhi log bhadak gaye they - Haan.. abhi bulayo hawaldar ko...haan haan... dhakke maaro inhe neeche...

Aadmi sab ko bhadakte dekh thoda peeche hatt gaya - Acha theek hai… apna number conductor ko de raha hoon, kisi ke paas bhi koi khabar ho toh is number par call karna… das hazar inaam milega…

Woh aadmi conductor ko apna number dene ke baad bus se neeche utar gaye aur bus chalne lagi. Par Supriya ka dil abhi bhi tez tez dhadak raha tha. Agar aaj uska burqa neeche ho jaata toh shayad.....

Supriya ne paaya ki tension ke maare usne Iqbal ka haath kas ke pakda hua tha. Iqbal usse dheere se fusfusaya - Aap ghabraye nahi... bus hum nikal hi gaye hai yahan se...

Supriya ne apne haath ki pakad dheeli kari, uske haath paseene se bhara hua tha. Bus ab full speed chalne lagi thi aur kuch 15-20 minute baad highway ki sadak tak pahuch gayi thi. Supriya ki aankhon mein abhi bhi dehshat si hi thi, par itni saari bhaag daud ke baad woh buri tarah thak chuki thi aur uski aankhen band hone lagi thi.

Dheere dheere uska sir Iqbal ke kandhe par latak gaya aur uski aankh lag gayi.

Par sapne mein use aaram kahan tha. 5-7 mardo ne use ghera hua hai, aur uske haath aur pair pakde hue hai. Koi uski choochiyan choos raha hai toh koi uski gaand daba raha tha. Saare mardo ne apne lund bahar nikaale hue they aur woh uske shareer ke alag alag hisso par chhu rahe they. Ek ek karke sabne apne lund uske muh mein daalne shuru kiye. Aur fir ek mota sa lund uske chhed mein teji se ghus gaya.

Supriya cheekhti hui jaagi, uska chhehra paseeno se tarr tha. Iqbal ne Supriya ko pakadte hue poocha - Aap theek ho na...

Supriya tez saans lete hue boli - Haan... kuch nahi... bas sapna tha.. thodi paani milega kya?

Iqbal - Haan bas abhi jaisi hi gaadi rukti hai... main paani leta hoon...

Saath baithe aadmi ne Iqbal se poocha hua - Kya hua? Sab theek hai....

Iqbal - Jee jee... bas aadat nahi hai isko bus mein safar ki... thoda jee kharab hai...

Ek aur aurat haste hue boli - Acha... hawai jawaj mein baithe hai kya teri zoru...

Iqbal haste hue bola - Haan amma... yehi samaj lo... hawai jahaj mein hi baithe hai...

Sab log hasne lage par Supriya toh jaise apni uljhano mein khoyi hui thi. Usne burqe ki jaali se bahar ki aur dekha, bahar ab koi shehar nahi balki jungle sa tha. Andhera bhi hota jaa raha tha. Itna afra tafri mein use toh ye bhi nahi poocha tha ki woh jaa kahan rahi thi.

Bus mein gaane chal rahe they, shayad uski halat par haste hue:

Bharam Bhaap Ke 
Sharam Dhaap Ke
Karam Naap Ke 
Bhaaga Re 
Karam Naap Ke

Supriya ne apna dimaag band karne ki koshish kari par woh band hi nahi ho raha tha. Woh Iqbal ki aur hui aur usse halke se poocha - Hum log kahan pahuchne wale hai?

Iqbal - Bas abhi Bareilly rukegi ye bus...

Supriya - Hum Bareilly jaa rahe hai kya?

Iqbal - Nahi madamji... mere gaanv jaa rahe hai... gaanv ke naame se aap pareshaan mat hona... ab gaanv kya aur shehar kya, sab kuch mil hi jaata hai wahan bhi... 

Supriya - Bareilly se kitni door hai aapka gaanv?

Iqbal - Wahan se do dhai ghante aur aage hai... aap thak gaye ho toh raat kahin ruk jayenge aur fir subah nikal lenge...

Supriya - Nahi... main nahi thaki...

Iqbal - Raat ho chali hai... mera khayal se itni raat ko wahan pahuchna bhi theek nahi hoga... kahin ruk hi lenge...

Supriya - Jaisa aap theek samjhe...

Lagbhag 15-20 minute baad bus ruki aur Supriya aur Iqbal bus se neeche utar gaye they. Ab Supriya ko shayad burqe se pehle se thoda behtar dikhne laga tha. Woh khud se neeche utar paayi par neeche utarne mein uska burqa thoda sa upar ho gaya aur uski laal saree chamak gayi.

Ek aurat ki aawaz aayi - Ayee.. isne burqe ke neeche saree pehni hai...

Supriya buri tarah sakpaka si gayi aur usne jaldi se apna burqa neeche kiya. 

Iqbal - Haan woh hamare yahan pehente hai...

Aurat - Kahin ye woh toh nahi jise woh log dhoond rahe they...

Iqbal - Amma sathiya gayi ho kya... chalo apne kaam se kaam rakho..

Iqbal ne fir se Supriya ka haath pakad liya aur use apne saath lete hue chalne laga - Aap ghabraye nahi... kuch nahi hoga...

Aate jaate log burqa pehne hue bhi Supriya ko ghoor rahe they aur kuch toh fabtiya bhi kas rahe they - Burqe ke neeche kya hai, burqe ke neeche… Din mein chupayo, raat ko dikhayo… haath itne gore gore hai, choochiyan kaisi hongi iski… raat ko toh sab upar se neeche tak utar jaata hoga…

Ye sab sun kar Supriya ki toh halat kharab hoti jaa rahi thi aur Iqbal bhi situation ko samajhta hua kisi tarah se apne gusse par kaabu rakh raha tha, un sab logo ki baaton ki nazar andaaz karte hue.

Kuch der chalne ke baad woh log kisi building ke andar ghuse, shayad bus adde ke paas hi koi sasta sa hotel tha.

Iqbal - Ek raat ke liye kamra chahiye....

Aadmi - 200 rupay... 

Iqbal - Haan... ye lo...

Aadmi ne burqe mein Supriya ki aur dekhte hue kaha - Miya biwi ho? 

Iqbal ne rukhi si aawaz mein kaha - Haan....

Aadmi - Kahan jaa rahe ho...

Iqbal - Aap se matlab?

Aadmi - Aree aajkal bade kisse hote hai na... bhaga ke le jaate hai burqe mein...

Iqbal - Hum aapko waise lagte hai kya...

Aadmi - Nahi nahi... par hume toh poochna hota hai na... aadhar card waigera kuch hai...

Iqbal - Aadhar card kaun saath mein lekar chalta hai....

Aadmi - Hmmm... chaliye apni begum se bulwa dijiye taaki hume tassali ho jaaye...

Supriya ne situation ko samajhte hue apni aawaz thodi kadak karte hue boli - Ye kya tamasha laga rakha hai... aapko miya biwi ko kamra dene mein dikkat hai toh hum kahin aur chale jaate hai... chaliye jee...

Aadmi ghabrahe hue bola - Aree nahi nahi... bas woh mohtarma ek kaand ho gaya tha peeche kahin par... koi ladki bhaga laaya tha... aap ye lijiye kamre ki chaabi...

Iqbal ne kamre ki chaabi li aur woh dono ek kamre ki aur ho liye. Kamre mein ghuste hi Iqbal ne lock lagaya aur Supriya ne apne sir se burqa hataya. Itna kharaab sa kamra hone ke bawajood use aisa lag raha tha jaise usne saalo baad saans li ho.

Supriya ne gehri saans li - Ufff... aisa lag raha tha jaisa dum ghut raha ho andar...

Iqbal ne ek pal ke liye Supriya ke masoom se chhehre ki aur dekha aur fir apni aankhein neeche kar li - Aap aaram kijiye... main kamre mein hi khana le aayunga…

Supriya - Par itna kharcha kaise...

Iqbal - Aap is sab ke baare mein mat sochiye... 

Supriya ne kamre mein andar aakar dekha, kamre mein ek hi double bed tha, uski bhi chaddar maili si thi. Use toh kaafi mehnge mehnge hotels mein thehrene ki aadat pad chuki thi, aur ye toh... Par jo bhi tha, use filhaal toh isi mein adjust karna padega.

Iqbal - Main bahar se khana lekar aata hoon… aap itne haath muh dho lijiye…

Supriya ek dam se ghabra si gayi - Yahan akele aapke bina? Hotel wale kamre mein khana nahi pahucha sakte kya?

Iqbal - Madamji ye waisa hotel nahi hai… mujhe lekar hi aana honga… aap befikr rahiye main shuddh shakahari khana layunga…

Supriya ko khane ki chinta nahi thi, bas yahan akele rukne ki. Kahin Iqbal ke jaate hi koi aa gaya toh? Par usne kisi tarah se saahas baandha - Theek hai, par aap jaldi aana…

Iqbal - Bas yun gaya aur yun aaya… aap kamra band kar lena aur mere elawa kisi ke liye mat kholna…

Supriya ne haan mein sir hilaya aur Iqbal ke jaate hi kamre ka lock laga diya. Apne aap ko akela paa kar woh bathroom mein gayi, woh subah se ab tak toilet nahi gayi thi. Thodi der baad woh apna chhehra dho kar bed par baithi thi. Uski aankhein bhari ho chali thi, poore din ki maansik aur sharirik ladayi ne use thaka diya tha.

Par tabhi darwaze par zor zor se khatkhatane ki aawaz aayi. Supriya ki aankh khuli aur woh ghabra si gayi. Woh apne aap ko darwaze ke paas laayi, is darwaze mein bahar ki aur dekhne ke liye koi eye hole nahi tha.

Woh soch hi rahi thi ki woh kya kare ki use bahar se Iqbal ki aawaz aayi - Madamji… main hoon… kholiye…

Supriya ne rahat ki saans li aur Iqbal ke liye darwaza khol diya. Iqbal ke haath mein 2 plastic bag they jiske andar newspaper aur plastic ki thaili mein khana packed tha. Aur saath hi paani ki bottle bhi.

Iqbal ko dekh kar Supriya ne chain ki saans li - Kafi time lag gaya aapko…

Iqbal - Haan… thodi bheed jyada thi wahan… ye lijiye, main aapke liye le aaya hoon…

Supriya - Aaiye saath mein kha lete hai na…

Iqbal - Nahi nahi.. pehle aap kha le… fir main baad mein kha lunga…

Supriya - Aapne bhi toh subah se kuch nahi khaya hai... saath mein khate hai nahi toh main bhi nahi kha rahi...

Iqbal Supriya ke is lehze se thoda sa hairaan ho gaya, par use achha bhi laga - Aap bhi na... bilkul bachhon ki tarah zidd kar rahi hai... acha chaliye...

Supriya - Zidd nahi hai... bas jaise aapko meri fikr hai usi tarah mujhe aapki...

Iqbal muskurate hue bola - Theek hai... aapki baat maan li...

Dono bistar par baith gaye aur Iqbal ne newspaper ko failate hue khana us par rakh diya. Supriya aur Iqbal ek doosre ke aamne saamne baithe khana khane lage. Supriya ko itni tez bhook lagi thi ki woh bina kuch kahe bas chup chaap khana khaye jaa rahi thi. Ek hi plate par khate hue, beech beech mein unki ungliyaan choo jaati, aur Supriya jhat se apna haath peeche kheech leti.

Iqbal ki nazar kabhi Supriya ke chehre ki taraf, kabhi uske khule hue baalon par tik jaati jo uske galo se latak rahe they. Ek pal ko Iqbal ke hothon par halki si muskaan aa gayi, par usne turant hi apna dhyan plate ki taraf kar liya. Supriya bhi khate-khate jaise uski nazaron ko apne upar mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.

Supriya - Kya hua... aap ruk kyu gaye... khaiye na...

Iqbal - Kaisa laga khana aapko?

Supriya - Bahut acha... aapko acha nahi laga kya?

Iqbal - Aapko acha laga toh mujhe kaise pasand na aata...

Ab Supriya ka pet thoda bhar gaya tha aur use fir se aage ki chinta satane lagi thi - Yahan se ab aage kahan jayenge? Aapka gaanv kahan hai?

Iqbal - Aapne Amroha ka naam suna hai?

Supriya ne dimaag par zor daala - Shayad... pakka nahi pata...

Iqbal - Dilli se bahut door nahi hai... bas usi ke paas mera gaanv hai.. ab waise shayad use gaanv nahi chhota shehar hi kahenge...

Supriya - Wahan aap kya bolenge... main kaun hu?

Iqbal - Wahin soch raha hoon... kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha... mere khayal se toh hume wahan jaana hi nahi chahiye...

Supriya thoda muskurate hue boli - Kyu aapko apni biwi se darr lagta hai, kahin unhe kuch aisa waisa na lage...

Iqbal ek pal ke liye ruk gaya aur nighahen neeche kar li - Madamji... shayad main aapko pehle khul ke nahi bata paya... woh wahan nahi hai?

Supriya - Toh kahan hai? Apne mayke gayi hain kya?

Iqbal - Nahi... ab woh bas meri yaadon mein hai... use guzre hue saalon ho chuke hai aur main tabhi ke baad se kabhi ghar nahi gaya...

Supriya ekdam se chaunkte hue boli - Kya!!?? Par aapne toh kaha tha...

Iqbal - Woh mere liye toh abhi bhi wahin hai...

Supriya Iqbal ki aankhon mein dekh rahi thi, jahan ek toofan sa aaya hua tha - Kitne saal ho gaye is baat ko?

Iqbal - Yehi koi 10 saal...

Supriya - Ohhh.... aur aap tabhi se ghar nahi gaye?

Iqbal - Jee haan... mere khayal se aapko wahan le jaana sahi nahi hoga...

Supriya - Par Vikram ne kaha tha...

Iqbal ki aawaz thodi uchi ho gayi - Par aap hi bataiye... wahan jaa kar kya bolenge... aap meri ho kaun? Main apni malkin ko apne saath bhaga laaya?

Supriya ek dam chhup pad gayi thi, fir woh sochte hue boli - Aap aisa kijiye... aap mujhe yahin chhod kar apne ghar nikal jaiye... main sab manage kar lungi akeli...

Iqbal - Nahi madamji... mera woh matlab nahi tha... main toh bas aapke baare mein hi soch raha tha...

Supriya - Mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha main kahan jayu... main soch rahi hu ki ek call apne ghar Jhansi laga lu kya?

Iqbal - Saabji ne bola tha ki woh log wahan bhi pahuch gaye honge... mere khayal se ye karna sahi nahi hoga...

Supriya ki halat fir se rone wali ho gayi thi - Toh aap hi bataiye main kya karu? Isse toh

Iqbal - Aap ghabraiye nahi, jab tak aap mere saath hai, main aapko kuch nahi hone dunga... aap roiye nahi...

Supriya ne apne aap ko sambhala aur bistar se newspaper aur khane ki panniyo ko sametne lagi.

Iqbal - Areee. Aap ye sab chhodiye... aap bas aaram kijiye... 

Supriya - Nahi... isme kya...

Iqbal - Aap kafi thak gayi hongi... aap yahan upar bistar par so jaiye... main neeche ek chaddar bicha kar so jayunga...

Supriya - Aree nahi... zameen par kaise soyenge aap... main so jaati hoon neeche...

Iqbal - Madamji... aap meri baat maaniye... mujhe aadat hai sakht zameen par sone ki... mujhe aise neend nahi aane wali is gadde par...

Supriya ne pareshaan hote hue Iqbal ki aur dekha. Use acha nahi lag raha tha ki Iqbal is tarah zameen par soyega, par saath hi un dono ka is chhote se double bed par sona bhi toh kitna ajeeb sa hoga. Usne na chahte hue bhi haan mein sir hilaya.

Thodi der baad kamre ki light band thi, Supriya bistar par kambal od kar leti thi, aur Iqbal zameen par neeche. Supriya ko neend nahi aa rahi thi, uske dimaag mein yehi chal raha tha ki is samay Vikram aur Atul kaise honge, pata nahi sab log uske baare mein kya soch rahe honge. Woh kaise yahan fas gayi thi is janjaal mein. Aur aage ka raasta bhi kuch saaf nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Supriya ne bed se neeche jhaanka toh Iqbal usse peeth karke leta hua tha. Woh uske liye kitna kuch kar raha tha, bina jhijhke apna sab kuch chhod kar us yahan tak le aaya tha. Aur abhi bhi uske aaram ke liye apne aaram ka tyaag kar raha tha. Woh na hota toh shayad woh ab tak kabki un logo ke haath lag gayi hoti.

Supriya apne khayalo se jhoojhti hui jaane kab so gayi. Aur shayad raat ko hi sapne mein use aage ka raasta thoda sa samajh aaya.

Supriya jab uthi toh subah ho chuki thi aur kamre mein bahar se roshni aa rahi thi. Supriya hadbada kar khadi hui. Iqbal ab neeche nahi leta hua tha, aur usne kamre mein idhar udhar dekha, woh wahan nahi tha. Supriya thoda sa ghabrayi par fir subah ke saare kaam niptatane ke liye woh bathroom mein ghusi.

Jab woh bahar nikli toh Iqbal jaduyi tareeke se wapis aa chuka tha aur bistar par baitha hua tha - Good morning madamji...

Supriya ne muskura kar use jawab diya - Good morning... kahan chale gaye they aap...

Iqbal - Bas naashta lene gaya tha... ye lijiye garam garam samose aur jalebi...

Supriya ne halki si shikayat bhari aawaz mein kaha - Aap mujhe jaga sakte they jaane se pehle...

Iqbal - Bas mann nahi kiya aapko jagane ka... aap soti hui itni achi lag rahi thi na...

Supriya ke chhehre par ek sharmili si muskaan aa gayi - Shukriya...

Woh bistar par baithi aur ek jalebi utha kar khane lagi. Kal se woh ek hi jodi kapdo mein thi, aur uske paas aur kuch bhi nahi tha. Par woh log yahan jyada samay nahi ruk sakte they.

Supriya ne khaate khaate kaha - Iqbal... maine socha hai... hume aapke ghar hi chalna chahiye...

Iqbal - Madamji aap samajh kyu nahi rahe ho...

Supriya - Ek toh aap mujhe madamji bolna band kariye aap... koi bhi sunega toh use kitna ajeeb lagega... aap mujhe Supriya bula sakte ho...

Iqbal - Madamji...

Supriya ne use tokte hue kaha - Fir se wohi...

Iqbal - Main koshish karunga... ekdam se toh shayad nahi ho paayega...

Supriya - Haan... poori koshish karni padegi... chaliye ab bas yahan se nikalte hai... seedhe aapke gaanv...

Iqbal - Mere khayal se hum log dilli chalte hai... wahin kahin chhup jayenge...

Supriya - Acha yahan se toh bahar nikalte hai na...

Iqbal ne haan mein sir hilaya aur kuch der baad Supriya ne fir se apni laal saree ke upar woh kala burqa daal liya tha aur woh dono kamre se bahar nikal gaye. Iqbal thoda aage aage aur Supriya uske peeche.

Jaisi hi woh hotel ke reception par pahuche, unhone dekha ki 2 hatte katte aadmi reception par khade aadmi se tez aawaz mein baat kar rahe they.

Aadmi use apne phone par ek photo dikhate hue - Gaur se dekh, dekha hai ise?

Reception wala aadmi - Nahi dekha bhai... bata toh diya...

Aadmi - Mera number note kar, aur kuch bhi alag sa lage toh mujhe call kariyo...

Aadmi ne mud ke Iqbal ki aur dekha, jaise use uska chhehra kuch jaana pehchana sa lag raha ho. Supriya ne bhi us aadmi ki aur dekha, ye wohi aadmi tha jo bus mein use dhoond raha tha. Use dekhte hi Supriya ki halat kharab ho gayi aur usne apni mutthi kas ke beench li. Usne apni saans bilkul rok li jaise woh insaan use uski saanson se hi pehchaan lega.

Woh aadmi Iqbal ko ek nazar dekhte hue wahan se bahar nikal gaya. Iqbal ne hotel wale ko payment kari aur woh dono hotel se bahar aa gaye.

Supriya ne fusfusate hue kaha - Ye log yahan tak kaise pahuch gaye?

Iqbal - Pata nahi madamji...

Supriya dheemi aawaz mein par gusse mein badbadayi - Maine kaha na mujhe madamji mat bulayo...

Iqbal - Jee...

Supriya - Bas hume aapke ghar ki taraf hi chalna chahiye... hum log wahin safe rahenge...

Iqbal - Mujhe bhi aise hi lagta hai... par wahan...

Supriya - Par war kuch nahi... wahan main dekh lungi sab...

Iqbal aur Supriya fir se ek baar bus adde ki taraf chal pade. Woh dono Amroha ki aur jaati hui ek bus mein chhade aur is baar Supriya apne khayalo mein nahi khoyi hui thi balki kafi satark thi. Burqe ke andar se hi sab kuch dhyan se dekhti hui.

Bus ne jaldi hi chalna shuru kar diya aur lagbhag do dhai ghante baad Iqbal ne bus conductor ko beech raaste bus rokne ke liye kaha. Supriya dekh rahi thi ki yahan koi bus station toh nahi tha par shayad yehi uske ghar ke sabse paas ki jagah thi.

Supriya aur Iqbal bus se neeche utre. Iqbal ne wahin paas mein ek rickshaw wale se baat kari aur woh dono us rickshaw mein baith gaya. Rickshaw kafi sakdi si thi, toh woh dono ek doosre se chipak kar baithe they. Rickshaw chalte hue kafi hil rahi thi aur Supriya ko aisa lag raha tha ki kahin woh gir na jaye. Usne apna ek haath peeche le jaate hue ladki ke fatte ko kas ke pakad liya.

Rickshaw wala - Babuji... kiske ghar jaa rahe ho...

Iqbal dheere se bola - Naqvi sahab ke yahan...

Rickshaw wala - Jee babuji... aap unke rishtedaar ho?

Iqbal dheere se budbudaya - Kaka ki aankhein kharab ho gayi hai shayad...

Rickshaw wala - Kuch kaha kya?

Iqbal - Nahi nahi... chaliye...

Rickshaw patli patli galiyon ke beech mein se hoti hui jaa rahi thi. Jyadatar ghar yahan pakke hi they, aur waise nahi jaise Supriya ne gaanv ke naam se soche they. Bas sadak kafi kharab thi, balki thi hi nahi. Log apne gharo ke bahar khade unhe hi ghoor rahe they, aur kuch bachhe rickshaw ke saath saath chalte hue Supriya ke burqe ko chhoo rahe they. Iqbal ne unhe daant ke bhagaya.

Kuch hi der baad rickshaw ek bade se ghar ke saamne ruki. Shayad ye gaanv ke sabse bade gharo mein se tha. Supriya ko laga ki shayad woh galat jagah aa gaye hai, Iqbal ka ghar toh itna bada nahi ho sakta tha.

Par Iqbal ne Supriya ka haath pakad kar use wahin utaara aur rickshaw wale ke paise diye. Supriya bahar se us ghar ko dekhne lagi. Badi, unchi, majboot deewaren charon aur se ghar ko ghere hue thi, aur unka rang halka peela, dhoop mein sunehri tarah chamak raha tha. Bahar ke main darwaza kisi majboot lakdi se bana hua bada aur bhari tha, jis par nakashi ke patterns ukeere hue the.

Iqbal ne darwaze par halke se khatkhataya aur darwaza apne aap hi khul gaya. Iqbal ne kuch kadam andar liye aur Supriya bhi uske peeche peeche andar ho li. Andar kadam rakhte hi ek vishal sa aangan dikhai diya. Aangar mein ped paudhe aur fool lage hue they. Ghar ki deewaron par jaalidaar khidkiyan thi. Supriya ko ekdam se laga jaise ek khidki mein se koi jhaank raha ho.

Iqbal ne ghar ka darwaza band kar diya aur kundi laga li. Aur tabhi ek badi umar ki aurat aangan mein bahar aayi aur zor se boli - Kaun..... 

Iqbal - Amma ji... main...

Us aurat ke kadam Iqbal ko dekhte hi ruk se gaye aur uska rang ud gaya, jaise kisi bhoot ko dekh liya ho. Fir woh apne aap ko sambhalti hui Iqbal ki aur daudi - Iqbal.... Iqbal... tu aa gaya... beta...

Woh Iqbal ke seene se chipak gayi aur zor zor se rone lagi. Usne aawaz sun kar andar se do aur aurate bahar aayi. Ek thodi badi, par Amma ji se chhoti, aur ek bahut hi jawan si pyaari si ladki. Supriya un sab ko baari baari dekh rahi thi. Uska dil zor zor se dhadak raha tha. Usne toh Iqbal se poocha bhi nahi tha ki uske ghar mein kaun kaun hai.

Ammi ji - Rubbu dekh... dekh kaun aaya... Hina dekh... tera chacha aa gaya...

Shayad us jawan si ladki ka naam Hina tha, woh bhi bhaagi bhaagi Iqbal ki taraf gayi - Chachu.... 

Iqbal ki aankhon se bhi aansu beh rahe they - Areee Hina... itni badi ho gayi tu toh... kitne saal ki ho gayi... pehchaan mein hi nahi aa rahi...

Hina - Aap toh hum sabko bhool hi gaye they na.... abhi bas kuch din pehle toh mera uneesva janamdin gaya hai...

Woh dono Iqbal ko ghere khade they aur Amma ji uske chhehre ko haath laga kar choo rahi thi, jaise woh sach ho ya koi sapna. Shayad kisi ki nazar sahi se Supriya par padi nahi thi, siwaye us teesre aurat ke.

Ammi ji - Rubina tu bhi toh mil le... tera devar aa gaya.

Rubina - Ammi ji... par ye kaun hai iske saath...

Amma ji ka dhyan ab jakar burqa ode Supriya par gaya - Haan bhai... ye kaun hai... kisko le aaya saath mein...

Hina Supriya ke paas pahuch kar khadi hui aur use bareeki se dekhne lagi.

Ammi ji - Chup kyu khadi hai... bol... Hina, zara iska burqa upar kar...

Isse pehle ki Hina uska burqa upar karti, Supriya ne khud hi use upar kar diya aur teeno log uski sundar pyaari masoom si shakal ko dekhte reh gaye they. Burqa hatte hi andar uski laal saree bhi chamak rahi thi.  Rubina aur Amma ji ek dam dang khade Supriya ki aur dekh rahe they.

Ammi ji bhadakte hue boli - Kisko ye le aaya... ye toh hamare yahan ki lag bhi nahi rahi hai...

Isse pehle Iqbal kuch kehta uski bhabhi ne use kaat diya - Bolo bhi... itno saalo baad aaye ho, aur apne saath ye kisi utha laaye...

Ammi - Kaun hai ye chinaar... ye koi randi bazar toh hai nahi ki kisi ko bhi utha laayo...

Ye sab sunte hi Supriya ki aankhen neeche jhuki hui thi, pata nahi Iqbal ne kuch socha tha ya nahi, ya fir use hi kuch bolna padega.

Iqbal - Ammi ji kuch bhi bolte ho aap....

Ammi - Aree toh bata na... tera bhai ise kaat ke faink dega... tujhe pata toh hai...

Hina jo Supriya ke paas khadi use bareeki se dekh rahi thi, bol padi - Chachu... kahin ye meri nayi chachi toh nahi?

Iqbal jaldi se bola - Nahi nahi... 

Par Supriya ne use beech mein rokte hue apni kaanpti hui aawaz mein kaha - Jee... main aapki nayi.... chachi hi hoon...

Iqbal ne ekdam se jhatke se palat kar Supriya ki aur dekha, use toh ab tak nahi pata tha woh kya bolne wala tha, par madamji ye kya bol baithi thi.

Ammi ne Supriya ko ghoora aur fir Iqbal ki aur dekha - Chachi!!! Chachi hai ye iski!! Tune fir se... Lahol!!!

Ammi apna sir pakadte hue dhamm se aangan mein bichi hui ek charpai par baith gayi.
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(13-08-2025, 05:41 PM)khemucha Wrote: Nice development.

You seem to be very fond of this raand Supriya, protecting her for ever from facing any real consequences for her selfish actions. True, she lost Kriti's friendship, but did she care. Utla usko sunnane lagi, the bitch. Only good thing there was at least now Kriti is free of that Rahul character.

Aur Atul pe kaise jhapti thi kulta ek seedhe saadhe sawal pe. She projects her own degenerate thought process on others. And after finding the truth of D, not remorse, no self reflection, just ruthless and selfish pursuit of her own desires and ambitions. Her judgement is totally clouded and she is willing to be a kept woman with a figleaf of a fake marriage, knowing very well that Vikram will not break his marriage. What does that make her, his floozie in London.

You seem to be showing Vikram having genuine love for her, but he still does not want her to disclose anything to her husband. That's conradictory. kuchh to gocha hai. I hope bahut bada gocha ho.

Waise usko ek baar Isha ke gundo ke hawale karna chahiye. Justice will be served. Par aap ki chaheti hai woh to. No Papa ki Pari has ever been so pampered as you pamper your Supriya devi.

And you are right, any dalliance with Iqbal will have no affect on the story plot. In fact it will disturb it.. because Iqbal is playing a very good role here - the unquestioning support. A dalliance will disturb this equation. And with the maid also, another supporter. She seems possessive about Iqbal. So make your own call. All the more reasons for letting Isha's henchmen have her. Kuch readers ki IR ki chah kucch to shaant hogi.

I normally don't comment on other's comments, but I have to call out the double standards of many who chide others for not wanting the story to go the typical IR way. The trail of their comments on other threads give their game away. Arre bhai, some people get their rocks of on a mm-hf IR, some get it off on a hm-mf IR, some don't want either, and some like sexypreeti like all action, no matter the IR(I respect such even-handed debauchery approach and this user           is one of those who wants to see people fucking no matter what, so this part does not apply). Jisko jo bolna hi bolne do. Doosron pe katash na karo ... thats all I say. Writer wahi kare jo uksa man kare. Writer ke alawa koi bhi thread ka   thekedar na bane ... kitna achha hoga. Agar aap kisi ki mansikta pe sawal uthate hain to yaad rahiye, woh sawal aapki maansikta bhi darshata hai. So best to just leave mansikta out of the picture.

And how can I end my comment without my favourite plug. Aarti Bhabhi phir kab aa rahi hain. She lit up the scene. Need more of her ... and Jai.

Waise aapne pehli baar Atul ka kuch character dihkaya, the way he brushed Supriya's wild allegations aside. Are you saving him to be the ultimate spanner in Vikram's plans and Supriya's ultimate downfall? That would be unexpected but interesting.

Kuchh saalon pehale ek kahani pahdi thi - "Life of Mrs. Shailaja - Sleeping with the wrong men". Similar saga - young wife with loose morals. destroys home. Gets husband murdered. Gets it on with her father as a girl behind her mother's back destroying her mother's marriage, marries rich love-stricken fool in order to parade a father for her incestuous child sired by her father, fucked by a gold-digging employee who becomes her lover(and goes on to kill her husband), keeps fucking him even after finding out truth of husband's death, abandoned by lover who is now more interested in fucking her mother and her daughter as property papers are in their names, falls into lover's uncle lap who is a gangster, fucked by new lover's associates and there is even a nephew/son-in-law fuck thrown in somewhere.  Ends up getting fucked by own illegitimate son, who has become a monster and becomes his keep. Sorry  depressing end to the saga of lives destroyed by loose morals. Lets see yahan kya hota.


Haha... I enjoyed reading your comments.

Everyone sorry for the delay in posting, last 2 weekends par kuch na kuch tha, aur fir meri tabiyat bhi kharab thi. I am sorry for the delay in posting. Hopefully I will try to post sooner.
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Zabardast episode fully drama next update jaldi dena bht maza ana wala ab to
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Awesome going....Keeping the story flow steady and intriguing. All the Best,going ahead.
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जबरदस्त अपडेट...
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Heart 
Superb narration and Twist  yourock
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Feeling bad fkr atul
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Writer how could you harash a man who did nothing why he is geting targeting please next update me atul ko supriya jaise giri hui aurat se mukti dila do
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Hii mai ek silent reader tha khas aapki iss kahani pe comment karne ke liye ID banayi hai 
Last 2-3 week se ye kahani suru ki thi aur jo 2 kahani ka refrence diya tha starting mai uss mai se ek kahani "The Innocent wife" se maine xossip par kahani padha suru ki thi aur wo kahani mere dil ke kafi kareeb thi aur aapki iss kahani mai uske jaisa hi maza aa raha aur Recently mai ye meri Fav kahani hai.
Apke likhne ka andaz kafi reality ke karib hai aur jaisa apne kaha aur maine baki logo ke comment mai dekha Supriya ek massum ladki hai par ye kahani padh ke uske liye gaye faisle se logo ko uske prati nafarat paida karti hai jaisa ussne apne pati ke sath kiya wo sab padh ke mujhe bhi kafi dukh hota hai
But aapne character devlopment bhi kafi ache se kiya ki kaise Atul aur uske beech Sab dheere dheere khatam hone laga aur supriya phle mazbur hui aur ab wo maze le rahi kisi aur ke pyar mai. Lekin ab wo apne hi faisle mai uljhi hui hai.
Last Update meri umeed se kafi alag aur intresting tha Abdul ka character apne bataya tha ki grey hai so sab confirm nahi thhe ki uske aur Supriya ke beech kuch hoga ki nahi.
Meri req hai ki Apni health ka dhyan rakhiye ga aur iss kahani ko puri zaroor kariyega
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Bahut hi Shaandaar update...always next update ka interest bana rehta hai yeh bhi ek best quality hai writer ki
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This was the perfect plan for Supriya, first of all it was most important for Supriya to keep herself safe very nice update Sriya
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