12-08-2025, 09:46 PM
(This post was last modified: 26-09-2025, 04:10 PM by Chunky Pandey01. Edited 11 times in total. Edited 11 times in total.)
Hello everyone,
Mera naam Chunky Pandey. Me bahot saalon se story reader tha. Ab mujhe bhi story likhne me interest baad rahi hai
Mein ek story likh raha hu. Mein yeh story dusri site par read Kiya tha. Yeh story ka writer hai Prathima kavi. One of famous writer that time. Not sure unhone kuyn likhna band kardiya. Mei es story ko reference liya hai. Mein thoda aur exiting karke representation karneki koshish kartha hun hope aap sabhi reader ko pasand aye..
Story index
Update 1 Introduction
Story shuru karthe hain. Yeh story mein kirayedaar hein
1. Prathima kavi
![[Image: Screenshot-20250813-192749.png]](https://i.postimg.cc/8CNcSRYp/Screenshot-20250813-192749.png)
Age 28
Profession: counselor and fashion designer.
Description: working hone ke mutabik apne ap ko fit aur healthy rahane ke liye gym me mehanat karke body maintain karthi hun. dikhane mein apsara jaise bahut khoob.
2. Ashok
![[Image: Download-Ai-Generative-happy-business-ma...r-free.jpg]](https://i.postimg.cc/Xqr7L32m/Download-Ai-Generative-happy-business-man-in-a-suit-white-background-for-free.jpg)
Age 32
Profession: runs own businesses
Description : Prathima ka husband, Prathima and ashok dono gym jathe he. Ashok ka bhi well built body, gym mein paseena baha kar banaya hua fit sharir, aur chehre par ek aisi masoomiyat jo ladkiyon ko uski taraf kheechna jaanti thi.
3. suman
![[Image: images.jpg]](https://i.postimg.cc/MHmjkz0T/images.jpg)
Age:22
Profession: working as intern
Description : Wo ek saamaanya kad kathhi ki ladki thi. Aankhon par mota chasma laga tha, lambi si guthi hui choti thi.
Mere pados me ek aunty rahti hai. Meri unse theek thaak jaan pahchaan hai. Unse aksar baatein hoti rahti hai.
Ek din shaam ko office se ghar lauti thi, tabhi ghar ke main gate par wo mujhe mil gayi. Unke saath ek ladki bhi thi, koi 20-22 ki umar rahi hogi. Aunty ne bataya ki wo unki bhatiji Suman hai aur wo uski bua hai.
Suman ka college khatm ho gaya tha aur internship ke liye hamare shahar me kuchh mahino ke liye aayi thi. Is shahar me Suman ki bua ke sivaay koi uski jaan pahchaan ka nahi tha.
Suman kuchh mahine yahi rahne wali thi. Wo puraane design ke dheele dhaale salwar kurta pahne hui thi. Kul milakar wo ek boring si ladki thi. Wo mujhe dekhte hi meri fan ho gayi thi. Main us waqt office ke kapdo me thi. Ghutno tak tight skirt aur white tight shirt, aur khule straight baal.
Wo khud bahanji ki tarah lag rahi thi par shayad usko mera pahnava pasand aaya tha. Wo mere se baat karne me ruchi dikha rahi thi.
Main thoda thaki hui thi to maine usko dinner ke baad me milne ka bolkar ghar ke andar chali gayi. Uske baad main uske baare me bhool hi gayi thi.
Raat ko main apne pati ke saath tahalne ko nikli. Gate par dekha to Suman khadi thi. Usne bataya ki wo kaafi samay se mera hi wait kar rahi thi.
Maine uska parichay apne pati se karwaya. Hum log ab chalte hue garden tak pahuche.
Pati apni jogging ke liye alag chale gaye. Main aur Suman baat kar rahe the. Wo meri aur mere pati ki taarif kar rahi thi.
Suman: “Didi, aap dono ki jodi bahut achchhi hai. Dono bahut sundar ho”
Main: “Thank you. Dekho, hamari umra me jyada fark nahi hai to tum mujhe mere naam Pratima se bhi bula sakti ho.”
Suman: “Theek hai Pratima. Darasal main ek chhote shahar se hu. Aap itna sundar dikhti ho, itne achchhe kapde pahanti ho. Main bhi ab office jati hoon, to is tarah jana chahti hoon”
Main: “Tum ekdum seedhi sadhi rahti ho, tumhe is tarah rahna theek nahi lagta?”
Suman: “papa mummy hamesah padhayi ko kahte rahte the, isliye saara dhyaan padhai me hi lagaya. Kabhi sajne sawarne ka socha hi nahi. Kapde bhi mummy hi kharid laati hai. Mujhe to jyada pata hi nahi chalta”
Main: “Ab to tum job karogi, phir sab tumhi ko karna padega. Dheere dheere sikh jaogi”
Suman: “College me sab ladkiya ban thhan ke aati thi. Main aese simple rahti thi. Meri koi saheli hi nahi banti thi. Ladke bhi saare un modern ladkiyo se baat karte the”
Main: “Ab to padhai bhi khatm ho gayi, ab to koi chinta nahi. Tumhe agar modern banna hai to ban jao”
Isi tarah kuchh din gujre, usme koi badlaav to nahi aaya par wo ab mujhme apna dost dhundhne lagi thi. Swabhav ki wo achchhi thi to mujhe bhi achchhi lagi.
Ek week chala gaya tha aur aur hum log roj shaam ko saath me walk karte. Mujhe usme ek saheli mil gayi thi to pati dusre din se hi alag se walk karne chale jate the.
Suman mujhse ab gulmil gayi thi. Roj wo meri kisi na kisi chij ko lekar meri taarif karna nahi bhoolti. Aakhir ek week baad usne apne dil ki khwahish rakhi.
Suman: “Kuchh time pahle mujhe shadi ke liye dekhne kuchh ladke bhi aaye the. Kisi se koi jawaab hi nahi aaya.
Abhi gharwale ladka dhoondh rahe hai. Pata nahi koi badsurat ladka naa pasand kar le wo ab”
Main: “Aesa kyu bol rahi ho, koi achchha ladka mil jayega”‘
Suman: “Samajh hi nahi aa raha, kya karu. Aap hi meri madad kar do na. Mujhe bhi dikhne pahanne me apne jaisa modern bana do”
Main: “Theek han kar dungi. Tumhe intership ke paise to milte hai na. Thoda kharcha hoga par tum bhi modern ban jaogi”
Suman: “Paiso ki chinta nahi. Maine paise bachaye hai, ab to thode paise kamane bhi lagi hoon”
Main: “Main tumhe 5 chije batati hoon, inko tum theek karlo. Pahle to apna purane zamane ka chashma hata kar koi modern frame ka chashma lo. Ho sake to contact lenses lagwa lo”
Suman: “Theek hai, mere pados ki ladki ne bhi contact lense lagwaye the. Main wo karwa lungi”
Main: “Dusra, apne baalo me hamesha choti ghunthna band kar do. Baal straight karwa lo, taaki kabhi khule bhi rakh sako. Chahiye to kabhi rubber band ya clip se bandh lo. Ya phir bun bana lo”
Suman: “Mujhe aapke khule baal bahut pasand hai. jab aap bun banate ho aur do jhulfe saamne se nikalti hai to aap kayamat lagti ho”
Main: “Ab jyada maska mat lagao. Teesri baat suno. Beauti parlour regular jaya karo aur make up lagaya karo. Waise tumhari skin achchhi hai to jyada jarurat nahi padegi”
Suman: “Main kabhi beauti parlour nahi gayi. Bas baahar se dekha hai aur ladkiyo ko baat karte suna hai”
Main: “Theek hai ek baar jaogi to sab pata chal jayega. Chauthi baat, apne kapde badalne hoge. Ye dheele simple kapde chhodo. Tumhara figure achchha hai. Kurta pahanna hai to thoda tight pahno. Comfortable ho to jeans, skirt aur shirt bhi pahan sakti ho. Dress kharido to modern design wali lo. Jaruri nahi chhote kapde pahno, par design modern ho”
Suman: “Mujhe aapke kapde bahut pasand hai. Mujhe aese hi chahiye”
Main: “Aakhiri point. Aese paav ghasitate hue mat chalo. Adaa ke saath chalo aur baat karo. Maine jo baatein kahi hai unko apnane ke baad tum me confidence aa jayega aur chaal apne aap badal hi jayegi”
Mera naam Chunky Pandey. Me bahot saalon se story reader tha. Ab mujhe bhi story likhne me interest baad rahi hai
Mein ek story likh raha hu. Mein yeh story dusri site par read Kiya tha. Yeh story ka writer hai Prathima kavi. One of famous writer that time. Not sure unhone kuyn likhna band kardiya. Mei es story ko reference liya hai. Mein thoda aur exiting karke representation karneki koshish kartha hun hope aap sabhi reader ko pasand aye..
Story index
Update 1 Introduction
Story shuru karthe hain. Yeh story mein kirayedaar hein
1. Prathima kavi
![[Image: Screenshot-20250813-192749.png]](https://i.postimg.cc/8CNcSRYp/Screenshot-20250813-192749.png)
Age 28
Profession: counselor and fashion designer.
Description: working hone ke mutabik apne ap ko fit aur healthy rahane ke liye gym me mehanat karke body maintain karthi hun. dikhane mein apsara jaise bahut khoob.
2. Ashok
![[Image: Download-Ai-Generative-happy-business-ma...r-free.jpg]](https://i.postimg.cc/Xqr7L32m/Download-Ai-Generative-happy-business-man-in-a-suit-white-background-for-free.jpg)
Age 32
Profession: runs own businesses
Description : Prathima ka husband, Prathima and ashok dono gym jathe he. Ashok ka bhi well built body, gym mein paseena baha kar banaya hua fit sharir, aur chehre par ek aisi masoomiyat jo ladkiyon ko uski taraf kheechna jaanti thi.
3. suman
![[Image: images.jpg]](https://i.postimg.cc/MHmjkz0T/images.jpg)
Age:22
Profession: working as intern
Description : Wo ek saamaanya kad kathhi ki ladki thi. Aankhon par mota chasma laga tha, lambi si guthi hui choti thi.
Mere pados me ek aunty rahti hai. Meri unse theek thaak jaan pahchaan hai. Unse aksar baatein hoti rahti hai.
Ek din shaam ko office se ghar lauti thi, tabhi ghar ke main gate par wo mujhe mil gayi. Unke saath ek ladki bhi thi, koi 20-22 ki umar rahi hogi. Aunty ne bataya ki wo unki bhatiji Suman hai aur wo uski bua hai.
Suman ka college khatm ho gaya tha aur internship ke liye hamare shahar me kuchh mahino ke liye aayi thi. Is shahar me Suman ki bua ke sivaay koi uski jaan pahchaan ka nahi tha.
Suman kuchh mahine yahi rahne wali thi. Wo puraane design ke dheele dhaale salwar kurta pahne hui thi. Kul milakar wo ek boring si ladki thi. Wo mujhe dekhte hi meri fan ho gayi thi. Main us waqt office ke kapdo me thi. Ghutno tak tight skirt aur white tight shirt, aur khule straight baal.
Wo khud bahanji ki tarah lag rahi thi par shayad usko mera pahnava pasand aaya tha. Wo mere se baat karne me ruchi dikha rahi thi.
Main thoda thaki hui thi to maine usko dinner ke baad me milne ka bolkar ghar ke andar chali gayi. Uske baad main uske baare me bhool hi gayi thi.
Raat ko main apne pati ke saath tahalne ko nikli. Gate par dekha to Suman khadi thi. Usne bataya ki wo kaafi samay se mera hi wait kar rahi thi.
Maine uska parichay apne pati se karwaya. Hum log ab chalte hue garden tak pahuche.
Pati apni jogging ke liye alag chale gaye. Main aur Suman baat kar rahe the. Wo meri aur mere pati ki taarif kar rahi thi.
Suman: “Didi, aap dono ki jodi bahut achchhi hai. Dono bahut sundar ho”
Main: “Thank you. Dekho, hamari umra me jyada fark nahi hai to tum mujhe mere naam Pratima se bhi bula sakti ho.”
Suman: “Theek hai Pratima. Darasal main ek chhote shahar se hu. Aap itna sundar dikhti ho, itne achchhe kapde pahanti ho. Main bhi ab office jati hoon, to is tarah jana chahti hoon”
Main: “Tum ekdum seedhi sadhi rahti ho, tumhe is tarah rahna theek nahi lagta?”
Suman: “papa mummy hamesah padhayi ko kahte rahte the, isliye saara dhyaan padhai me hi lagaya. Kabhi sajne sawarne ka socha hi nahi. Kapde bhi mummy hi kharid laati hai. Mujhe to jyada pata hi nahi chalta”
Main: “Ab to tum job karogi, phir sab tumhi ko karna padega. Dheere dheere sikh jaogi”
Suman: “College me sab ladkiya ban thhan ke aati thi. Main aese simple rahti thi. Meri koi saheli hi nahi banti thi. Ladke bhi saare un modern ladkiyo se baat karte the”
Main: “Ab to padhai bhi khatm ho gayi, ab to koi chinta nahi. Tumhe agar modern banna hai to ban jao”
Isi tarah kuchh din gujre, usme koi badlaav to nahi aaya par wo ab mujhme apna dost dhundhne lagi thi. Swabhav ki wo achchhi thi to mujhe bhi achchhi lagi.
Ek week chala gaya tha aur aur hum log roj shaam ko saath me walk karte. Mujhe usme ek saheli mil gayi thi to pati dusre din se hi alag se walk karne chale jate the.
Suman mujhse ab gulmil gayi thi. Roj wo meri kisi na kisi chij ko lekar meri taarif karna nahi bhoolti. Aakhir ek week baad usne apne dil ki khwahish rakhi.
Suman: “Kuchh time pahle mujhe shadi ke liye dekhne kuchh ladke bhi aaye the. Kisi se koi jawaab hi nahi aaya.
Abhi gharwale ladka dhoondh rahe hai. Pata nahi koi badsurat ladka naa pasand kar le wo ab”
Main: “Aesa kyu bol rahi ho, koi achchha ladka mil jayega”‘
Suman: “Samajh hi nahi aa raha, kya karu. Aap hi meri madad kar do na. Mujhe bhi dikhne pahanne me apne jaisa modern bana do”
Main: “Theek han kar dungi. Tumhe intership ke paise to milte hai na. Thoda kharcha hoga par tum bhi modern ban jaogi”
Suman: “Paiso ki chinta nahi. Maine paise bachaye hai, ab to thode paise kamane bhi lagi hoon”
Main: “Main tumhe 5 chije batati hoon, inko tum theek karlo. Pahle to apna purane zamane ka chashma hata kar koi modern frame ka chashma lo. Ho sake to contact lenses lagwa lo”
Suman: “Theek hai, mere pados ki ladki ne bhi contact lense lagwaye the. Main wo karwa lungi”
Main: “Dusra, apne baalo me hamesha choti ghunthna band kar do. Baal straight karwa lo, taaki kabhi khule bhi rakh sako. Chahiye to kabhi rubber band ya clip se bandh lo. Ya phir bun bana lo”
Suman: “Mujhe aapke khule baal bahut pasand hai. jab aap bun banate ho aur do jhulfe saamne se nikalti hai to aap kayamat lagti ho”
Main: “Ab jyada maska mat lagao. Teesri baat suno. Beauti parlour regular jaya karo aur make up lagaya karo. Waise tumhari skin achchhi hai to jyada jarurat nahi padegi”
Suman: “Main kabhi beauti parlour nahi gayi. Bas baahar se dekha hai aur ladkiyo ko baat karte suna hai”
Main: “Theek hai ek baar jaogi to sab pata chal jayega. Chauthi baat, apne kapde badalne hoge. Ye dheele simple kapde chhodo. Tumhara figure achchha hai. Kurta pahanna hai to thoda tight pahno. Comfortable ho to jeans, skirt aur shirt bhi pahan sakti ho. Dress kharido to modern design wali lo. Jaruri nahi chhote kapde pahno, par design modern ho”
Suman: “Mujhe aapke kapde bahut pasand hai. Mujhe aese hi chahiye”
Main: “Aakhiri point. Aese paav ghasitate hue mat chalo. Adaa ke saath chalo aur baat karo. Maine jo baatein kahi hai unko apnane ke baad tum me confidence aa jayega aur chaal apne aap badal hi jayegi”