Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

As she took the bite


A bit of the syrup from the dessert dripped down her chin, falling in a slow, tantalizing trail down her neck.

The darkened streaks of sweetness ran across the delicate curve of her collarbone

And then slipped between the soft fabric of her blouse, pooling just above her chest.


Ravi’s breath hitched,

His pulse quickening once more as his eyes fixed on the syrup now resting on her skin.

He couldn't help but notice how beautifully it contrasted against her smooth, warm complexion.

There was an invitation there, one she didn’t need to say aloud.

His gaze moved from the syrup to her eyes,

And she returned the look with a quiet challenge,

As if she knew exactly what he was thinking.

He reached forward instinctively,

His fingers trembling slightly as he tried to brush the syrup away from her skin.

But before he could even make contact, Neetu’s hand caught his, her touch gentle yet firm.

“No,” she murmured softly, the hint of a smile playing at the corners of her mouth.

“Fingers won’t clean it properly, Ravi. Don’t use your fingers. Don't even try with them.”

Ravi froze, his gaze still locked with hers.

A hint of understanding flickered in his eyes

And his lips curled into a grin as the message clicked.

She was leading him again, showing him the way.

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Slowly, he pulled his hand back

His breath now shallow, as he moved closer to her,

The distance between them practically nonexistent.

“Got it,” he murmured, voice rough with desire.

He leaned in slowly, his mouth hovering just above her skin.

The warmth of her body was intoxicating,

And the scent of her skin, mixed with the sweet aroma of the Rasmalai, made everything feel more intense.

Without breaking eye contact, he lowered his lips to her chest, where the syrup had fallen.

His first kiss was light, teasing,

As he brushed his lips against the soft swell of her chest, just where the syrup had pooled.

Neetu’s breath hitched as she felt the press of his lips against her skin,

And she let out a soft sigh, her eyes fluttering closed for a moment.

The sensation of his mouth on her was gentle,

But it sent a spark through her body.

She felt him take his time,

Savoring the taste of the sweetness against her skin,

As though each moment was an invitation for something deeper.

Ravi, not content to stop there, began to kiss his way down slowly,

His mouth following the trail of syrup down her chest.

He sucked lightly, his lips closing gently around the sweetness, pulling the syrup into his mouth as if it were a reward.

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His tongue followed

Tracing over the delicate curve of her skin

Licking up the last traces of sweetness from her collarbone.

Neetu let out a quiet moan, but she didn’t pull back.

Instead, she let herself lean into him, allowing him to get closer, feeling the tension between them thicken.

Ravi’s movements were deliberate, slow, and teasing as he moved upward,

Kissing a path along her jawline, savoring every inch of her.

Finally, he made his way to her lower lip, where the final trace of syrup had fallen, just a small drop resting there.

He paused, his lips hovering just above her lower lip,

His breath warm against her skin.

For a moment, they were still,

The world around them fading into the background as all that existed was the magnetic pull between them.

Neetu’s eyes met his, darkened with a mixture of desire and challenge.

“Well, Ravi,” she whispered, her voice tinged with amusement.

“I’m waiting. You missed a spot.”

Ravi chuckled softly,

The sound low and dark with desire.

“Wouldn’t dream of leaving anything unfinished, Bhabhi” he replied,

His voice dripping with playful intent.

He finally leaned in and kissed her lower lip

Not a full kiss, but enough to send a wave of heat through both of them.

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He kissed her softly

His lips brushing against hers before he sucked lightly on her lower lip

Drawing the syrup from her skin.

His tongue flicked out, tracing her lip gently before he kissed it again,

Savoring the taste of her skin and the sweetness that still lingered.

Neetu’s breath hitched again,

Her chest rising and falling as she felt the full intensity of his attention.

This was their first kiss, even though not full kiss.

The first time his lips met her lower lip.

The way he kissed her, so focused, so deliberate, made her pulse race.

He wasn’t just cleaning her up anymore,

He was tasting her, tasting her lower lip

Savoring her, exploring the way her skin responded to his touch.

When he finally pulled away,

His lips parted from hers, he didn’t speak for a moment.

The silence between them was heavy with everything that hadn’t been said,

Everything they hadn’t acknowledged yet.

Neetu’s eyes fluttered open, her lips still swollen from the kiss, her breath shallow.

“Now, that,” she said softly,

A satisfied smile curling on her lips, “was more like it.”

Ravi smirked, his eyes dark with lingering desire.

“I’m glad you think so,” he replied, his voice low.

“I think I could practice this… for a long time Bhabi.”

Neetu’s smile deepened, a challenge hidden in the curve of her lips.

“I have no doubt, Ravi,” she whispered,

Her eyes glinting with mischief.

“But next time, you’ll have to be more thorough.”

-- oOo --

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[Raj087]

Its a Good update but somehow i don't agree with you...who on earth will allow a person to kiss directly on face and lips without any proper background ? Is Ravi a Greek God or a Charles Shobhraj that any women will get into his trap without any effort...well i look for stuff which have proper background here i found it missing... but what i appreciate his your charectors and your way of portraying them... story wise i somehow don't agree with this plot...its entirety my view and i can be wrong...but personally i would prefer more interaction and background before such move...you are a awasome writer and i truly mean it... please continue the way you see it blooming.. thanks again for your efforts...i truly appreciate

[shailu4ever]

Its a Good update but somehow i don't agree with you...who on earth will allow a person to kiss directly on face and lips without any proper background ? Is Ravi a Greek God or a Charles Shobhraj that any women will get into his trap without any effort...well i look for stuff which have proper background here i found it missing... but what i appreciate his your charectors and your way of portraying them... story wise i somehow don't agree with this plot...its entirety my view and i can be wrong...but personally i would prefer more interaction and background before such move...you are a awasome writer and i truly mean it... please continue the way you see it blooming.. thanks again for your efforts...i truly appreciate

Hey Raj

Thank you for your honest feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts,  it means a lot to me!

I understand your concerns about the kiss scene, and I’d like to offer some clarity. Ravi and Neetu have been exchanging looks, teasing messages, and building a growing tension for several days. They’ve shared intimate, flirtatious moments, and in this context, the kiss wasn’t something out of nowhere. It’s a natural escalation given the circumstances.

Ravi and Neetu have been exchanging looks and lots of teasing late night Messages.   

These days people meeting online and after a few flirting online messages, meet separately outside, I don't know about in India, but I have seen a of them in my close Indian circle there.

To clarify, I don’t believe that a woman would let someone get that close, especially with something as intimate as licking Rasmalai syrup off her cheek, unless she was very comfortable with the person to go all in.

You also have to understand and remember the scenes that preceded this scene, where they had a steamy late morning where they exchanged very intimate moments at the shower scene.  

The minute she let him kiss and lick the cheek where she put Rasmalai Syrup, she is more than willing to let him kiss her. If a woman let someone up to that extent, trust me, she lets him go all the way.

You can trust me in that, Being a woman I can confirm that. 

I wrote that kiss and lick of her cheek scene yesterday and you acknowledged that you liked it. If you approve yesterday's scene and progress, it is a clear go ahead at this point to go and cross the line, that shows the LONGING. 

They have "the longing" which has been building for last several days. And they have "The Opportunity". These two will lead them to the rest.

Trust me, as a woman myself, I can confirm that when a woman lets someone this far in, she’s already mentally and emotionally primed to take all the following steps. You can see this in how Neetu allows the kiss to happen after that intimate moment. This progression has been building between them for days, the longing, the chemistry, the opportunity, and now the actual connection.

I completely get that you might prefer more interaction or background before such a moment, but the tension between them was already in place. If you’re onboard with the previous scenes till my first post today,  particularly the intimate one with the cheek,  then the kiss itself is simply a logical continuation. Actually she has given a go ahead at that point itself.  They’ve both been waiting for this moment, and when it happens, it’s the culmination of everything that’s come before.

Again, I really appreciate your kind words about my characters and writing. Your feedback is valuable, and I’ll continue to work on making sure the progression of the story feels right. 

Thanks again for your support, I’m glad to have you as a reader.

PS:  I can prolong this for a few more days, but it only make it feels like dragging and we have yet to jump in to the main story.  

Please let me know your thoughts.

Best

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Hi everyone,

I want to take Neetu and Ravi’s relationship forward and have them cross the line.

We’ve spent enough time exploring this side arc, and I feel they’ve reached a point where the story is ready to move on. Their late-night chats have built a strong sense of longing and have gradually softened the boundaries between them. Plus, the fact that they’re alone together at home creates the perfect opportunity for things to progress.

They’ve already shared some pretty intimate moments earlier that morning, and I genuinely believe this is enough for two people who are drawn to each other. In my experience, things can happen even faster in real-life situations, so I don’t feel it’s out of place.

Also, the main story still lies ahead, and it’s time to move things forward to set the stage for that.

I don't want this drag and delay the main story further.

Please let me know your thoughts

If you are good with this, please give me a thumbs up here to the post.



With warm regards

-- Shailu

[Raj087]

Hey [Reader's Name],

Thank you for your honest feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts,  it means a lot to me!

I understand your concerns about the kiss scene, and I’d like to offer some clarity. Ravi and Neetu have been exchanging looks, teasing messages, and building a growing tension for several days. They’ve shared intimate, flirtatious moments, and in this context, the kiss wasn’t something out of nowhere. It’s a natural escalation given the circumstances.

Ravi and Neetu have been exchanging looks and lots of teasing late night Messages.   

These days people meeting online and after a few flirting online messages, meet separately outside, I don't know about in India, but I have seen a of them in my close Indian circle there.

To clarify, I don’t believe that a woman would let someone get that close, especially with something as intimate as licking Rasmalai syrup off her cheek, unless she was very comfortable with the person to go all in.

You also have to understand and remember the scenes that preceded this scene, where they had a steamy late morning where they exchanged very intimate moments at the shower scene.  

The minute she let him kiss and lick the cheek where she put Rasmalai Syrup, she is more than willing to let him kiss her. If a woman let someone up to that extent, trust me, she lets him go all the way.

You can trust me in that, Being a woman I can confirm that. 

I wrote that kiss and lick of her cheek scene yesterday and you acknowledged that you liked it. If you approve yesterday's scene and progress, it is a clear go ahead at this point to go and cross the line, that shows the LONGING. 

They have "the longing" which has been building for last several days. And they have "The Opportunity". These two will lead them to the rest.

Trust me, as a woman myself, I can confirm that when a woman lets someone this far in, she’s already mentally and emotionally primed to take all the following steps. You can see this in how Neetu allows the kiss to happen after that intimate moment. This progression has been building between them for days, the longing, the chemistry, the opportunity, and now the actual connection.

I completely get that you might prefer more interaction or background before such a moment, but the tension between them was already in place. If you’re onboard with the previous scenes till my first post today,  particularly the intimate one with the cheek,  then the kiss itself is simply a logical continuation. Actually she has given a go ahead at that point itself.  They’ve both been waiting for this moment, and when it happens, it’s the culmination of everything that’s come before.

Again, I really appreciate your kind words about my characters and writing. Your feedback is valuable, and I’ll continue to work on making sure the progression of the story feels right. 

Thanks again for your support, I’m glad to have you as a reader.

PS:  I can prolong this for a few more days, but it only make it feels like dragging and we have yet to jump in to the main story.  

Please let me know your thoughts.

Best

-- Shailu

I completely get your point...and if you remember i said i can be wrong... But what i felt was that bit more interactions were required in that scene...its just like serving a dosa in platter without preparing sambar...sambar enhances the taste of Dosa... description can be monotonous in slow burn treatment..what keeps engaging is a conversation through which emotions and desires are depicted for the readers...now coming to why i don't relate somehow is all the charectors are simply falling for Ravi married or unmarried...it seems husbands have no impact left in their life and as if they are looking for a guy like Charles Shobhraj who can be like a magnet and pull them out of their marital fidelity....i completely agree its quite possible but to create such a moment a strong background is required i can agree with one women geeting attracted but all your charectors walk in same path...

I know its your story and you have full right to create anything out of the charectors but if you just add few detail conversation and dailogues amongst the charectors then the background is established before action...its just a suggestion...

I won't intrude again please continue the way you think is best... your write-up is go very good i can't Stop my self from indulging into what i feel...

Thanks again for your efforts...i truly mean it...

[shailu4ever]

I completely get your point...and if you remember i said i can be wrong... But what i felt was that bit more interactions were required in that scene...its just like serving a dosa in platter without preparing sambar...sambar enhances the taste of Dosa... description can be monotonous in slow burn treatment..what keeps engaging is a conversation through which emotions and desires are depicted for the readers...now coming to why i don't relate somehow is all the charectors are simply falling for Ravi married or unmarried...it seems husbands have no impact left in their life and as if they are looking for a guy like Charles Shobhraj who can be like a magnet and pull them out of their marital fidelity....i completely agree its quite possible but to create such a moment a strong background is required i can agree with one women geeting attracted but all your charectors walk in same path...

I know its your story and you have full right to create anything out of the charectors but if you just add few detail conversation and dailogues amongst the charectors then the background is established before action...its just a suggestion...

I won't intrude again please continue the way you think is best... your write-up is go very good i can't Stop my self from indulging into what i feel...

Thanks again for your efforts...i truly mean it...

Hi Raj

You are not intruding, you are giving your feelings. I can understand. You are just asking for some conversation there in that scene, right?

That's what I understood from your response. I can definitely add that. If it adds the required flavor by adding some conversation, I can definitely do that. I will update that scene later today.

Please let me know is that all you are asking for? Or anything else?

Thank you for your support. I don't want to disappoint you.


With warm regards

-- Shailu

[Jajinakajanare]

While the story is great, I feel this part is bit rushed...
Nevertheless.. would like to go with your flow ..

[Raj087]

Hi Raj

You are not intruding, you are giving your feelings. I can understand. You are just asking for some conversation there in that scene, right?

That's what I understood from your response. I can definitely add that. If it adds the required flavor by adding some conversation, I can definitely do that. I will update that scene later today.

Please let me know is that all you are asking for? Or anything else?

Thank you for your support. I don't want to disappoint you.


With warm regards

-- Shailu

No no... don't have to re-write just make it dialogue based in upcoming episodes so that the scenes are more realistic and relatable...thanks for your consideration...i am truly touched by your gesture ?

[shailu4ever]

Hi everyone

I see there are 3 of you gave me go ahead with this flow.

Two of you mentioned it's going too fast.

I will wait a little bit more before giving the next update to see which way to go.

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

While the story is great, I feel this part is bit rushed...
Nevertheless.. would like to go with your flow ..

Thank you very much your feedback. This is really helpful to shape up the story.

I will definitely keep it in mind as we continue with the story.


Warm regards

-- Shailu

[srinivasulu]

While the story mainly about the priya didi and Ravi. I feel the main character kept aside for long time. I am eagerly waiting how priya moves after that incident. Atleast make a chat conversation between them. Since she was already little jealous. Bring Priya as early as possible to the story. So that story will be more interesting and hot.
Ofcourse current story going well. Let them cross the line and Ravi can get more experience to handle Priya didi on bed.

[shailu4ever]

No no... don't have to re-write just make it dialogue based in upcoming episodes so that the scenes are more realistic and relatable...thanks for your consideration...i am truly touched by your gesture ?

Hi Raj

Thank you very much.  I will do my best in this area. 

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

While the story mainly about the priya didi and Ravi. I feel the main character kept aside for long time. I am eagerly waiting how priya moves after that incident. Atleast make a chat conversation between them. Since she was already little jealous. Bring Priya as early as possible to the story. So that story will be more interesting and hot.
Ofcourse current story going well. Let them cross the line and Ravi can get more experience to handle Priya didi on bed.

Hi Srinivasulu

Thank you for sharing your thoughts! You’re absolutely right that the story between Priya and Ravi is the main focus. 

Neetu and Sirisha were introduced to add some extra heat to the plot, which is why I’ve been speeding things up a bit between Neetu and Sirisha. 

However, I understand it might feel a bit rushed, so I’ll take a step back and figure out how to bring things back to even for Neetu and Sirisha's arc.  I will also bring the main story line soon to front line. 

I appreciate your patience, and I’m excited to get Priya and Ravi’s journey back on track soon. Stay tuned for what’s next!


-- Shailu

[magneticpersonality]

Dear Shailu,

Your commitment towards the story and consistency in giving updates is highly appreciated.

From my point of view, the level of excitement and anticipation was much on the higher side while the story was exclusively focused on Priya. Particularly, the Auto journey was one of the best parts of the story.

However, the excitement graph went down once Srisha was introduced in the story. She is very much childish in nature, which is a turnoff. The portions of Srisha in the story were boring ones. Either sideline her completely or build a better character arc for her.

Neetu has the potential to deliver quality erotic adventures.

Kindly remember that Priya is the soul of this story.
I strongly believe that almost every regular reader of this story got attracted into this because of your narration style & well-designed personality & character of Priya. Please bring her back at the earliest.

[shailu4ever]

Dear Shailu,

Your commitment towards the story and consistency in giving updates is highly appreciated.

From my point of view, the level of excitement and anticipation was much on the higher side while the story was exclusively focused on Priya. Particularly, the Auto journey was one of the best parts of the story.

However, the excitement graph went down once Srisha was introduced in the story. She is very much childish in nature, which is a turnoff. The portions of Srisha in the story were boring ones. Either sideline her completely or build a better character arc for her.

Neetu has the potential to deliver quality erotic adventures.

Kindly remember that Priya is the soul of this story.
I strongly believe that almost every regular reader of this story got attracted into this because of your narration style & well-designed personality & character of Priya. Please bring her back at the earliest.

Hi magneticpersonality

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback. I truly appreciate your insights and the time you've taken to share them.

I’m really glad to hear that the parts focused on Priya, especially the auto journey, were a highlight for you. It’s always great to know what resonates with readers, and I’ll keep that in mind moving forward.

As for Sirisha and Neetu, they were introduced as diversions to build up the story’s tension and further ignite Priya’s arc. I understand your concern about Sirisha’s character feeling a bit childish, and I’ll definitely revisit her development to make sure she serves her purpose more effectively.

I also want to reassure you that Priya is absolutely going to return to center stage. She is, without a doubt, the soul of this story, and I am working on wrapping up Neetu and Sirisha's arcs as they were meant to be short-term distractions. Unfortunately, this led to a bit of a rush in their development, but I’m committed to balancing things better moving forward.

Priya will definitely be back soon and will take the lead role in the story again, so please stay tuned for that!

Thanks again for your valuable feedback and continued support. It means a lot to me as I work on refining the story.

Warm regards,

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Hi everyone,

I just wanted to give you all a quick update. 

Unfortunately, I’ve come down with a cold and cough, and I’m not feeling 100% at the moment. 

On top of that, we’ve been experiencing a lot of rain and bad weather here, which is making things a bit tougher to manage.


That being said, I’m doing my best to push through and keep providing updates as my health allows.

I really appreciate your patience and support during this time, and I ask that you bear with me as I recover. Your continued engagement means a lot, and I’m grateful to have such an understanding and supportive community!


Thanks again, and I’ll keep you all posted on any updates as soon as I’m able.

PS: For now, I will move forward with the story as I planned. The number of updates I can give may be less now, as I am really down.  I will still try my best.  

Take care,

Warm regards,

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

A Conflict of Desire and Duty


Neetu sat still on the couch, her fingers still grazing her lips,

The sensation of Ravi’s kiss lingering like a sweet ache.

She could still feel the burn of his touch on her skin,

And it made her pulse quicken again, even as her mind spun with guilt.

“What have I done?” she thought,

Her head swirling with confusion. “I kissed him. I actually kissed Ravi.”

Her fingers trembled slightly as they traced the outline of her lips.

The taste of him, sweet and warm, lingered, like a phantom she couldn’t chase away.

The kiss had been intense, yes—but the need it had awakened inside her was even more unsettling.

"It was just a kiss",  she tried to convince herself.

“Just a kiss.”  But that didn’t make the heat between them any less real.

That didn’t take away the fact that her body still burned, still longed for more.

Her mind jumped to Vamsi, to her husband, the man she loved, the man she had promised to be faithful to.

"I love him, don’t I?", she asked herself,

But the answer felt less certain now.

Vamsi was everything she had thought she needed, yet something had been missing.

A part of her that she had hidden away for so long, buried beneath the weight of her marriage, now demanded to be heard.

“But this?” The guilt swirled, but so did something else.

Something darker. “I’ve been pretending for so long that I don’t want this. But I do. I do want it.”

Her thoughts ran wild, each one crashing into the next.

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