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(25-07-2025, 01:29 PM)Raj087 Wrote: Then i must say you must be very beautiful like Neetu..hence you cannot imagine anyone else.... your way of description shows how elegant you yourself must be...i will post one pic below let me know your thoughts
Hi Raj
Haha, just one pic? You’re really setting the bar low, aren’t you? I was half-expecting a whole collection of photos to match my elegance, after all, I do have some high standards to maintain.
But hey, I’ll take a peek at what you’ve got. I promise I won’t be too critical!
Just kidding though, I might not be as beautiful as you’re imagining...
-- Shailu
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![[Image: IMG-20250725-133303.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/jvJ3RkGJ/IMG-20250725-133303.jpg) .
I would have imagined Neetu something like this the first day when they all had dinner...and she was wearing Ghagra...after the heavy Dinner their was a bit of fullness in her belly which makes it a very raunchy visual as it looks so soft yet bit full and also tempting to simply hold a feel the softness...
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This is what i was trying to explain the other day what do you think
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“Come on, Ravi, eat. You won’t get anything better than this anytime soon.”
Her words were a playful challenge, but beneath that,
There was something softer, almost an invitation.
Ravi took the cue and dug in, his eyes twinkling as he sampled the food.
“Mmm, this is delicious, Babhi,” he said between bites. “I think I need to come over here more often for lunch.”
Neetu smiled, taking a small bite herself, her lips curling into a subtle smile.
“Well, I can’t promise I’ll always look this good while serving you,” she teased, the flirtation still dancing in her tone.
Ravi's grin grew wider, the playful mood settling between them like an unspoken bond.
“Oh, I think I’d manage to appreciate the meal even if you weren’t dressed like this, Babhi,” he said with a wink.
Neetu chuckled, shaking her head, but deep down, she felt the stir of something more than just playful banter.
There was something in the way they interacted, something electric, something that could spark if either of them let it.
She glanced at him, her lips parting slightly as she considered her next words.
But just then, Ravi’s teasing continued.
“Well, now that I’ve had your food, I suppose I can’t escape, can I?”
He said, leaning back in his chair with a playful look.
Neetu tilted her head, her eyes narrowing with a half smile.
“Not unless you want to miss out on dessert,” she teased, her tone shifting just a little
"Rasmalai!!!" she said with a wink "Do you really want to miss that?"
A reminder that the game they were playing was still very much in motion.
"I don't miss it even in my dreams... " He laughed
As they continued eating, the atmosphere remained charged, their conversation light and easy,
But layered with a playful, teasing energy that neither of them could ignore.
Every glance, every word between them felt like it carried something unspoken, something both exciting and dangerous,
But neither of them was ready to acknowledge it
At least not yet.
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(25-07-2025, 01:38 PM)shailu4ever Wrote: Hi Raj
Haha, just one pic? You’re really setting the bar low, aren’t you? I was half-expecting a whole collection of photos to match my elegance, after all, I do have some high standards to maintain.
But hey, I’ll take a peek at what you’ve got. I promise I won’t be too critical!
Just kidding though, I might not be as beautiful as you’re imagining...
-- Shailu
Your depiction of your charectors itself shows how very beautiful you must be... when you look at the mirror those thoughts i am sure flows in your mind looking at yourself...you have a class and a definite taste of beauty which i have understood clearly....
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(25-07-2025, 01:39 PM)Raj087 Wrote: .
I would have imagined Neetu something like this the first day when they all had dinner...and she was wearing Ghagra...after the heavy Dinner their was a bit of fullness in her belly which makes it a very raunchy visual as it looks so soft yet bit full and also tempting to simply hold a feel the softness...
I guess, your imagination is way beyond my creation.
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(25-07-2025, 01:46 PM)shailu4ever Wrote: I guess, your imagination is way beyond my creation.
-- Shailu
And why do you say that? Can you elaborate a bit...
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(25-07-2025, 01:44 PM)Raj087 Wrote: Your depiction of your charectors itself shows how very beautiful you must be... when you look at the mirror those thoughts i am sure flows in your mind looking at yourself...you have a class and a definite taste of beauty which i have understood clearly....
Hahaha...
Wow, you really know how to flatter! But I have to admit, I’m not sure the mirror always agrees with your description.
I’d say it’s more about the confidence that makes someone beautiful, don’t you think?
But I’m glad my characters gave off that vibe! You must have a pretty good eye for beauty and class yourself.
And just so you know, compliments like that are hard for any woman to resist, you're definitely on the right track!
-- Shailu
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(25-07-2025, 01:50 PM)shailu4ever Wrote: Hahaha...
Wow, you really know how to flatter! But I have to admit, I’m not sure the mirror always agrees with your description.
I’d say it’s more about the confidence that makes someone beautiful, don’t you think?
But I’m glad my characters gave off that vibe! You must have a pretty good eye for beauty and class yourself.
And just so you know, compliments like that are hard for any woman to resist, you're definitely on the right track!
-- Shailu
You are absolutely right...The way a women carries herself is her beauty and sensuality...by the way mirror never lie...it shows how you are exactly... that is why wildlife and birds appear so very poetic and beautiful because they are what they are...they don't pretend..same is your charectors it has a truth in their elegance beauty and sexuality...That truth in your write-up is actually hooking me here apart from the story line.... Beauty is in the truth....
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(25-07-2025, 01:49 PM)Raj087 Wrote: And why do you say that? Can you elaborate a bit...
I didn't not imagine like this. You went way ahead and imagined post dinner visuals, I didn't even write them. Hahaha
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(25-07-2025, 02:04 PM)Raj087 Wrote: You are absolutely right...The way a women carries herself is her beauty and sensuality...by the way mirror never lie...it shows how you are exactly... that is why wildlife and birds appear so very poetic and beautiful because they are what they are...they don't pretend..same is your charectors it has a truth in their elegance beauty and sexuality...That truth in your write-up is actually hooking me here apart from the story line.... Beauty is in the truth....
Hi Raj
I see you’re quite the philosopher! I love the way you connect beauty with truth and nature, very poetic.
And I have to admit, I’m flattered by your take on my characters! But as for the mirror... well, it does have a way of showing the truth, doesn’t it? Still, I’ll let the characters take the credit for the elegance and sensuality.
You’re the one reading between the lines! Seems like you’ve found the hidden magic in my words, and I couldn’t be more thrilled.
This messages makes me more motivated to write. Thank you very much
Warm regards
-- Shailu
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I am glad that my messages serve as a motivation to you...I am eagerly waiting for the next updates... you said today you are on it hence i am also waiting...lets see how you craft the idea i gave you in my private message....As you told you are going to make it organic....
So keeping fingers ?
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(25-07-2025, 04:09 PM)Raj087 Wrote: I am glad that my messages serve as a motivation to you...I am eagerly waiting for the next updates... you said today you are on it hence i am also waiting...lets see how you craft the idea i gave you in my private message....As you told you are going to make it organic....
So keeping fingers ?
Hahaha, and I am eagerly waiting for the pictures of your imagination
The updates are coming... right away...
-- Shailu
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The Tempting View
As the last traces of their meal lingered in the air,
Neetu stood to clear the table, her every move still mesmerizing,
Though she didn’t let on that she knew the effect she was having on Ravi.
Her body was fluid, unhurried, as she reached for the plates with elegance and ease,
Her saree shifting with the graceful sway of her hips.
But as she bent slightly to pick up the plates, the fabric of her pallu shifted
Slipping off her shoulder without warning, trailing down her chest and around her waist.
Exposing the delicate curve of her collarbone and the smooth expanse of her breasts
Where the low neckline of her blouse revealed just enough of her skin to make Ravi’s pulse quicken.
She didn’t immediately adjust it, though.
She simply stood there, her posture relaxed, as if waiting.
The tension between them thickened instantly, and Ravi’s breath hitched.
His eyes, despite his best efforts to focus elsewhere,
Locked onto the exposed curve of her breast and the cleavage in between her soft, full, breasts,
Just above the plunging neckline of her blouse.
The fabric was thin, enough to show the soft swell of her chest beneath,
And he could feel his heart hammering in his chest, a tug of desire pooling deep inside him.
Neetu caught his gaze with a slow, teasing smile, her eyes glinting with a mixture of mischief and knowing.
“Ravi...” she purred, her voice almost a challenge. “Do you like what you see?”
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Ravi’s lips twitched into a grin
Though it was tinged with both flirtation and the kind of mischief that made Neetu’s heart race.
His voice, when it came out, was low and filled with a playful heat.
“I must admit, Babhi, you make it hard not to stare.”
His eyes never left her, drinking in the sight of her body
The way her blouse dipped low,
The soft roundness of her chest that was only barely concealed.
Neetu raised an eyebrow, her lips curling upward.
She tilted her head slightly, her gaze never faltering.
“Well, I hope you’re enjoying the view. But you should know, Ravi,” she said,
Her tone dropping just a fraction, “I am married and your Babhi… ”
Ravi took a small step closer, not breaking eye contact, a mischievous glint in his eyes.
“You know, I can’t help myself, Babhi. You’ve got a way of making everything look tempting.”
His voice was a teasing whisper now, a stark contrast to the tension he had just acknowledged.
Neetu, still holding the plates in her hands, gave a small laugh,
As though the situation amused her more than anything.
“Well, then I guess you’ll have to do something about it, won’t you?”
Her words hung in the air between them, a challenge she knew he would rise to.
Ravi didn’t wait for her to ask twice.
His eyes never leaving hers, he stepped closer.
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Reaching for the pallu that had fallen loosely around her waist.
As he reached for the silk, his hand brushed against the side of her left breast
Just above the low neckline of her blouse.
He didn’t pull away quickly.
Instead, his fingers lingered for a fraction of a second longer than necessary
Tracing the soft, warm skin of her breasts, just enough to make her breath catch in her throat.
Neetu’s gaze sharpened for a moment, but she didn’t pull away.
She simply watched him with an intensity that told him she was very much aware of the game they were playing.
Ravi's touch was slow as he pulled the fabric upward, Feeling the delicate warmth of her skin under his fingertips.
As he did, he let his fingers graze her skin again,
This time, his touch brushing softly along the edge of her blouse,
Just where the material of her saree met her skin.
He was deliberately teasing, his touch light, but the sensation of it against her chest made her pulse quicken.
Her breath faltered, but she held her composure.
She wasn’t about to let him think he was getting to her,
Even though she could feel the heat in her veins rising, the way her skin tingled under his touch.
“Ravi…” she breathed, her voice softer now,
Almost a murmur. “You’re getting a little too comfortable.”
His lips curled into a devilish smile as his hands continued to work the pallu back onto her shoulder.
“I’m just making sure it’s on properly, Babhi,” he said,
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His voice rich with flirtation. “But I can’t help it—this view is hard to resist.”
Neetu’s eyes narrowed playfully, though there was a hint of something deeper in her gaze.
“And I suppose you think you’re being charming?”
Ravi leaned in just a little closer, his fingers brushing against the soft curve of her shoulder,
The fabric of her blouse barely concealing the warm skin beneath.
“Well, when the view is this tempting…” He trailed off, letting the words linger,
His fingers now lightly caressing the fabric of her blouse as he adjusted the pallu over her shoulder.
Neetu’s eyes flickered as he touched her again,
His fingers grazing the edge of her blouse and the bare skin just below.
Her lips parted slightly, though she said nothing,
Allowing the heat of the moment to stretch between them.
Ravi’s hand brushed across her shoulder once more as he moved the pallu fully into place
His fingers lingering a second too long against the soft fabric, before gently smoothing it over her shoulder.
She finally exhaled, her breath steady, though the energy in the room had shifted.
She looked at him, her smile soft but knowing.
“I guess I should be grateful you’re so good at helping, Ravi,” she said,
Her voice still playful but carrying an edge of something more intense.
Ravi stepped back, but not without one last teasing glance, his voice low as he met her eyes.
“You’re welcome, Babhi. I always make sure my work is… thorough.”
Neetu’s lips curled into a smile, but there was something more mischievous beneath it.
“I think you’ve done more than enough,” she replied,
Her voice tinged with both amusement and the unspoken challenge that lingered in the air.
Ravi, now completely aware of the effect they were having on each other, gave a slight chuckle,
His heart still racing from the proximity. “I’m just getting started,” he said under his breath, but loud enough for her to hear.
The moment, however, had passed, leaving only the electric tension between them,
As Neetu returned to her task with a grace that only increased Ravi's admiration.
But in his mind, it was clear: this was far from over.
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Sweet Temptations
Ravi remained seated, still caught in the aftershocks of their earlier exchange, his mind not entirely focused on the plates in front of him.
Neetu’s every motion was a reminder of the way she had teased him,
The touch of her skin, the teasing words, the playful, sensual game they were playing.
He knew it wasn’t just about food, not even close.
There was something more, something unspoken that made the tension between them all the more thrilling.
Once she had finished tidying up, she turned to him with a soft smile.
“Ravi, why don’t you relax on the couch for a moment? I’ll bring you something sweet.”
Her voice was casual, but there was a hidden note of invitation in it, one he couldn’t miss.
He leaned back into the couch, his eyes following her as she moved toward the kitchen,
The sway of her hips hypnotic under the soft light.
His mind, still racing with the aftermath of their flirtations, had barely a moment to rest before she returned with a large, delicate bowl filled with Rasmalai, sweet, creamy, and inviting.
She also carried two small serving bowls, her hands steady but her gaze flickering back to him with a certain mischievousness.
“I thought you might like something sweet to finish the meal,” Neetu said,
Her tone playful as she placed the large bowl and small bowls on the coffee table in front of him.
She handed him one of the small bowls, offering a small smile. “Here. You should try this. It's one of my favorites.”
Ravi took the bowl from her, feeling the soft weight of it in his hands,
His eyes still tracing the elegant lines of her body as she settled beside him.
There was something in the air now, something deeper.
They weren’t just playing anymore.
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There was a quiet intimacy settling between them
The moment thicker with meaning.
Neetu took a bowl for herself, dipping her spoon into the creamy rasmalai,
Her eyes flicking to him with that familiar glint of mischief.
“Ravi,” she said softly, her voice lowering,
“I want to ask you something. If you answer genuinely... you’ll get a reward.”
Ravi’s curiosity piqued, his heart skipped a beat.
He knew her questions weren’t the usual ones, not with Neetu.
She didn’t ask just to pass the time.
Every question felt like a puzzle, and every answer felt like it would unlock something deeper between them.
He leaned forward slightly, eager. “A reward? Well, you have my attention.”
Her smile deepened, a playful edge to her words.
“It’s nothing big. Just... half of my rasmalai,” she teased, lifting her spoon to her lips.
But her eyes never left him, intense and searching.
“But first, answer me honestly. Tell me something personal. Something real. Something you’ve never shared with anyone.”
Ravi hesitated for only a moment.
He wasn’t sure where this would lead, but there was something about Neetu that made him want to be open.
To let her see him.
The way her voice held the promise of more, of something extra, was impossible to ignore.
He leaned back slightly, his gaze meeting hers as he thought of his answer.
“You want something real, huh?” he asked,
His voice softer now, more serious.
“Alright... here it is.”
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Neetu held her breath, watching him closely.
She was teasing, yes, but her eyes were fixed on him with an intensity that belied the playful tone of her words.
Ravi took a moment before speaking, his voice low but filled with a quiet honesty.
“I don’t often talk about it, but... sometimes I feel like I’m just drifting. Like I’m always chasing something I can’t quite reach. I don’t know if it’s a sense of purpose, or... or just a way to feel more grounded. But I think about it a lot—where I’m heading, what I’m really doing with my life. I guess I’m afraid of not finding it, of never really having a place to land.”
The vulnerability in his words hung in the air between them.
He’d said it all with no pretense, no masks.
It was a piece of him that not many people had ever seen, but with Neetu... it felt easy to share.
Neetu sat still for a moment, absorbing his words.
There was a depth to his confession that took her by surprise.
She hadn’t expected this side of him, this quiet yearning that he rarely revealed.
But the way he had spoken, the sincerity in his voice, had moved something inside her.
She felt a rush of emotion, a quiet ache that told her he wasn’t as carefree as he seemed.
Her heart beat a little faster as she set her spoon down, her fingers lightly tracing the edge of her bowl.
Neetu’s voice softened, a gentler edge now.
“That’s... I didn’t expect you to say that,” she admitted, her eyes warm.
“But I’m glad you did. It’s... beautiful in its own way. Even if you’re still figuring things out, Ravi... I think you’ll find your way. You’re stronger than you think.”
Ravi looked at her, the rawness of his words hanging in the space between them.
He could see the emotion flickering in her eyes.
She wasn’t just playing anymore either. She understood.
Neetu’s eyes never left Ravi’s as she slowly took the spoon in her hand,
Lifting the soft, delicate rasmalai to her lips.
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