[veenaimo]

This is pure masterclass...

[veenaimo]

For a story of this kind the amount of appreciation the write get is too little, unfortunate !!!

[Paty@123]

Update plz

[Ayush01111]

For a story of this kind the amount of appreciation the write get is too little, unfortunate !!!

Its like its a humilation fpr sun story where he is been tourcured and forced to reader to like it readers like adultrey and revenge if she or he had shown that son revenged with his mother not fuck his mom but destroyed venket anna then every one like it and i want to tell thwre is 0.22% pepolle have tis tyoe of fantasy and reqders of thsi story max 0.3% so this is great for writer curently writer if shift little bit story and make revenge and make son little stronger see how story review changes

[veenaimo]

Its like its a humilation fpr sun story where he is been tourcured and forced to reader to like it readers like adultrey and revenge if she or he had shown that son revenged with his mother not fuck his mom but destroyed venket anna then every one like it and i want to tell thwre is 0.22% pepolle have tis tyoe of fantasy and reqders of thsi story max 0.3% so this is great for writer curently writer if shift little bit story and make revenge and make son little stronger see how story review changes

In the realm of erotica, vengeance and revenge have no place. As a consumer of erotica for over two decades across various platforms, I can confidently say that those who seek revenge are merely posturing to appear strong, while in truth, they are not.

[nishantsagar60]

Waiting for next update.

[nishantsagar60]

Its like its a humilation fpr sun story where he is been tourcured and forced to reader to like it readers like adultrey and revenge if she or he had shown that son revenged with his mother not fuck his mom but destroyed venket anna then every one like it and i want to tell thwre is 0.22% pepolle have tis tyoe of fantasy and reqders of thsi story max 0.3% so this is great for writer curently writer if shift little bit story and make revenge and make son little stronger see how story review changes

This is indeed a great story. There are very few stories with this level of humiliation and control. But I don't get the point that why anyone have to put or imagine himself as protagonist . One can put himself as the antagonist too and enjoy the story. Here if you don't like the son's character then enjoy the alpha nature and manipulation of venket. It feels so overwhelming to have a cousin and his mother as your slaves. And don't talk about morals because the moment you came on this site you already compromised with that. So either enjoy this masterpiece or don't read if you don't like. But let the writer play with his imagination don't demotivate him.

[Ayush01111]

This is indeed a great story. There are very few stories with this level of humiliation and control. But I don't get the point that why anyone have to put or imagine himself as protagonist . One can put himself as the antagonist too and enjoy the story. Here if you don't like the son's character then enjoy the alpha nature and manipulation of venket. It feels so overwhelming to have a cousin and his mother as your slaves. And don't talk about morals because the moment you came on this site you already compromised with that. So either enjoy this masterpiece or don't read if you don't like. But let the writer play with his imagination don't demotivate him.

Its open pleatform where i can suggest or agree or dis agree with writer why you have a problem i dont like that son should get dominated so i said why you geting mix in it you can enjoy my comment and i am not dominating writer i am just telling him if he shift story slitely toward sun he may get more response becuse after some point people get boar after continue domination of one caracter people enjoy when dumb caracter fight back in his role and revenge it and revenge is not like fighting revenge may be son van make venket imputant afyer some time and fuck venket wife or gf and share video or can fuck his mom and make mom to send away venket anna if this come afyer some point people will love it more

[Mortalbeast]

Nice fucking hot Update...... Eagerly waiting for the Shopping mall episode of venkat with my Mom

Thanks bro...

[Mortalbeast]

For a story of this kind the amount of appreciation the write get is too little, unfortunate !!!

Thanks bro for appreciating this thread.

[Mortalbeast]

This is indeed a great story. There are very few stories with this level of humiliation and control. But I don't get the point that why anyone have to put or imagine himself as protagonist . One can put himself as the antagonist too and enjoy the story. Here if you don't like the son's character then enjoy the alpha nature and manipulation of venket. It feels so overwhelming to have a cousin and his mother as your slaves. And don't talk about morals because the moment you came on this site you already compromised with that. So either enjoy this masterpiece or don't read if you don't like. But let the writer play with his imagination don't demotivate him.

Very well said my friend. Only if, some readers understand that there is more than one perspective. Most importantly to have tolerance. This platform is place for us unanimous user's enjoyment. 

I feel sad, when people bring morals and societal rules to a platform like xossipy. 

Now writers have to pay the price for this. Xossipy team monitors and doesn't allow few genre of stories. I had to tone down and remove elements fearing this thread might not get taken down. 

Hope readers will understand that and let Writer give his perspective. Of course suggestions and discussions are necessary to improve the story but it shouldn't force writer to completely change the plot.

We are like a community and should behave like that. Still, I'm thankful that there are many users who understand basic principles of eroticism and don't let morals come in the way.

[sumo34]

++++ reps

[sexypreeti]

Very well said my friend. Only if, some readers understand that there is more than one perspective. Most importantly to have tolerance. This platform is place for us unanimous user's enjoyment. 

I feel sad, when people bring morals and societal rules to a platform like xossipy. 

Now writers have to pay the price for this. Xossipy team monitors and doesn't allow few genre of stories. I had to tone down and remove elements fearing this thread might not get taken down. 

Hope readers will understand that and let Writer give his perspective. Of course suggestions and discussions are necessary to improve the story but it shouldn't force writer to completely change the plot.

We are like a community and should behave like that. Still, I'm thankful that there are many users who understand basic principles of eroticism and don't let morals come in the way.

Hey Buddy, 
Please continue with what you have in mind. You are good and this story is one of its kind on this forum. It is very possible that people who have an issue accepting what you have portrayed, never came across something like this before. 

It is also impossible to satisfy everyone because each person will carry their own tastes and different scenarios/ outlook in mind. 

So please go with what you have planned and as always - Keep up the outstanding work  clp); clp); clp);

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-Preeti

[Ayush01111]

Ok mortalbeast i will now not intrupt in your story write what you want i am sorry i think i hurted you i am sorry once again

[Abrar_1988]

Nice story. One of its kind. Please update.

[veenaimo]

Waiting for an update

[exbiixossip2]

next update come fast
hot to hot bro..

[Badla]

Need update

[Badla]

Update plz

[veenaimo]

Does the author got offended by few messages by others.. ? please come back