20-07-2025, 02:43 PM
super story
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Adultery My wife through the lens of CCTV
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20-07-2025, 02:43 PM
super story
20-07-2025, 03:37 PM
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20-07-2025, 04:36 PM
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Great update. The Manav is now getting troubled by her response to the copulation sessions. He's noticing it more. And there is more to notice. The aftermath of this visit and the next will be very interesting and exciting. I think the story is progressing at just the right pace.
And once again great work on the AI; wonderful choice of colour of her kurta. The second image in the update is lot loading. Can you fix it? There are also two deleted posts. Why? Hope Lakhan is enjoying her enough to make more time for her. I wonder when(of if) a full day visit would happen. Would be great to see her prepare herself for him and cook and serve lunch for him sometime in the future. And thanks for investing your time in this fantasy and sharing with us for ourr entertainment.
21-07-2025, 06:06 AM
(20-07-2025, 07:21 AM)Bigil Wrote: Wonderful bro. Let him do some foreplay next time and humiliate her husband and make her cooperate and finally beg for his monster dick and fuck her in every room of the house and in the bed while her husband sleeping next. Rightly said. He cannot force her and make her be like a dead log in bed. He has to make her fall for him for which he has to kiss every inch of her body and show her the pleasures that exist and make her feel that her husband had denied all these or never knew what a women want.
21-07-2025, 06:23 AM
beautiful narration
21-07-2025, 06:03 PM
(21-07-2025, 06:06 AM)Rangushki Wrote: Rightly said. He cannot force her and make her be like a dead log in bed. He has to make her fall for him for which he has to kiss every inch of her body and show her the pleasures that exist and make her feel that her husband had denied all these or never knew what a women want. Thanks bigil and Rangu As i said ,most erotica jumps from force to active participant within one session.. i want them to do slowly . As you can see, he came for a quickies and didn't even bother to remove her top, he thinks he owns her and only wants his enjoyment. Also shristi is also forced this time with threat of tearing her clothes, she enjoys but she knows it's wrong. It will take few sessions for her to finally leave out all her inhibition A lot of these cheating stories go stale because they move from reluctant to being a slut soon..
21-07-2025, 06:04 PM
(20-07-2025, 04:36 PM)khemucha Wrote: Great update. The Manav is now getting troubled by her response to the copulation sessions. He's noticing it more. And there is more to notice. The aftermath of this visit and the next will be very interesting and exciting. I think the story is progressing at just the right pace. Those empty posts are because if i upload in imgbb and then attach it gets deleted as you can see.. but if I directly upload to xosdooy , it remains . .. that's why I added as posts and then copied the url to my main story
22-07-2025, 12:15 AM
Hey author. Could you give a timeline of events? It’s a bit confusing as to when the moved into the new town, when the r**e happened, how long it went on for etc? When I read the first episode of home invasion, I thought that there was only one recording that was a large file? If there are more (I hope so) then it should be mentioned.
22-07-2025, 10:21 AM
Great , thank you
22-07-2025, 10:25 AM
(22-07-2025, 12:15 AM)Astroboy11 Wrote: Hey author. Could you give a timeline of events? It’s a bit confusing as to when the moved into the new town, when the r**e happened, how long it went on for etc? When I read the first episode of home invasion, I thought that there was only one recording that was a large file? If there are more (I hope so) then it should be mentioned. Thanks astro To be Frank, i never set the world before writing.. this is not like a English tv show , but like an Indian soap Opera.. if it clicks and if I'm enjoying writing , I'll write more , else i might try to end it soon .. So just for your sake , they spent around 6 months in Mumbai right after marriage, and then for first 2 months ,she didn't meet lakhan in this new house Since i said it had backups for upto 6 months , i can still stretch to another 4 months if needed. That's why I don't give any timeline so that I don't need to break it later As i said there might be a couple of characters introduced later but they will be part of how story ends.. i don't want this whole "wife fucks a new character after every 10 chapters"
22-07-2025, 10:29 AM
Very nice narration and at the sweet pace. You are keeping us hooked in anticipation of what happens next. Keep it up. You have shown subtle changes in Drishti's reactions very elegantly. Eagerly waiting for the next encounter on how she takes it further.
22-07-2025, 01:26 PM
Awesome
22-07-2025, 11:58 PM
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![]() resoudre equation en ligne Please note that I only wrote a long update because my family wasnt home last weekend and I had no other option to go out. Please dont expect the same every week. There might be week I cannot write any updates. I'm just a normal married family man like everyone else
23-07-2025, 12:48 AM
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23-07-2025, 02:16 AM
nice and slow, good story telling. Waiting for the next update...
23-07-2025, 07:33 AM
Splendid writing and loving the way the story is moving forward.
23-07-2025, 11:55 AM
23-07-2025, 01:28 PM
Excellent please update
25-07-2025, 08:03 AM
Please give a very big update as weekend is coming…
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