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(14-07-2025, 12:18 PM)Ayush01111 Wrote: Ab ye dono randiya atul ke sath sulah karengi jab sach samne aya maza aeyga par ab atul ko supriya ko hath bhi nahi lagana chaiye
Bhai atul ko to supriya ko khadi gaand ma lat maar kar ghar se bhaga dena chahiye.baki aisha hoga nhi dono nand bhabhi y bat daba lengi aur atul ko kanokan khabar tk na hogi
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(This post was last modified: 15-07-2025, 03:26 AM by Sriya2. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(14-07-2025, 09:44 PM)qazmlp Wrote: Fabulous update, and kudos to how you are building up the story so patiently and keeping the intensity intact with a great plot, dialogues and action sequences bcoz its now almost like a movie.Some B-town producer reading this could easily copy it for an A rated movie or the Ullu/ AltBalaji/Voovi/MxPlayer guys could take up as a project as wellllpll
Thank you so much. Mere mind mein toh main ek novel ya movie ka plot bana kar hi likh rahi hoon. Thank you for everyone’s patience with me.
Agar koi copy karega toh please mujhe royalty toh de dena :)
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Vikram expose ho gaya hai but lagta hai wo Supriya ko phir se control kar lega very nice update
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@Sriya update me kuch spelling mistakes hai like
Jai ne Aarti ke baal pakadete hu kaha - Boliye Aarti ji....
Ke baad (Abhi) aa gaya hai jaha Aarti hona chahiye tha so please check full update and edit
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Very nice update... Waiting for next update..
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(15-07-2025, 04:06 AM)Salma Khan Wrote: @Sriya update me kuch spelling mistakes hai like
Jai ne Aarti ke baal pakadete hu kaha - Boliye Aarti ji....
Ke baad (Abhi) aa gaya hai jaha Aarti hona chahiye tha so please check full update and edit
Very good Salma ji ...... Aap bhi bade dhyaan se story padhti hain.......
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(14-07-2025, 09:52 PM)arvind274 Wrote: Bhai atul ko to supriya ko khadi gaand ma lat maar kar ghar se bhaga dena chahiye.baki aisha hoga nhi dono nand bhabhi y bat daba lengi aur atul ko kanokan khabar tk na hogi
Or kuch dino me america wale clint se supriya chudwaigi
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(15-07-2025, 10:01 AM)Ayush01111 Wrote: Or kuch dino me america wale clint se supriya chudwaigi
In dono nanad bhowjai ko mil kar lakhnau me randi khana khol lena chahiye aur atul ko dalal bna dena chahiye
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(15-07-2025, 02:55 PM)arvind274 Wrote: In dono nanad bhowjai ko mil kar lakhnau me randi khana khol lena chahiye aur atul ko dalal bna dena chahiye
Kahe atul ko badnam kar rahe ho abhi tak ud bichare ka koibfosh bhi nahi hai
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Kamaal ka update dia maza hi aa gya kia erotic situation banai kase soch leti ap itna acha ek dam real jase
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(15-07-2025, 10:00 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Very good Salma ji ...... Aap bhi bade dhyaan se story padhti hain.......
Jab story etni perfect ho to dhyan to jata hi hai.........and perfect story me sab kuch perfect hona chahiye bas ishi wajah se bata diya
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previous update etna superb hota hai ki always next updates ki excitement double ho jati hai
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(15-07-2025, 04:06 AM)Salma Khan Wrote: @Sriya update me kuch spelling mistakes hai like
Jai ne Aarti ke baal pakadete hu kaha - Boliye Aarti ji....
Ke baad (Abhi) aa gaya hai jaha Aarti hona chahiye tha so please check full update and edit
Updated, thank you Salma! Sorry main is baar bahut ache se nahi pad paayi thi, aur thoda bahut scene rewrite bhi karna pada tha.
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(16-07-2025, 08:46 AM)Sriya2 Wrote: Updated, thank you Salma! Sorry main is baar bahut ache se nahi pad paayi thi, aur thoda bahut scene rewrite bhi karna pada tha.
Don't worry Sriya! galti se mistakes ho jati hai thanks for edit
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(16-07-2025, 06:58 AM)Salma Khan Wrote:
Jab story etni perfect ho to dhyan to jata hi hai.........and perfect story me sab kuch perfect hona chahiye bas ishi wajah se bata diya
Sahi kiya aap ne Salma ji....... Aur toh aur sahi kaha bhi hai.... Everything should be perfect for a perfect story.....
Thank you once again....
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Sriya you are awesome jabardast Update Aarti ki mast chudai kara di chut and gaand 2no ki opening ho gayi ab next time Aarti ki hosh me chudai karana because abhi to wo juice ke nashe me thi
Thank you very much for Aarti
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Shaandaar bahut badhiya aur bahut hi mast update.
But Iqbal ka puri story me aaise chutiya hi katega kya?
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Really Awesome Very Nice Excellent Update
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Truly very nice superb update
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