12-07-2025, 05:46 AM
Absolutely Fantastic and Fabulous very Erotic Update!
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Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani
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12-07-2025, 08:30 AM
juice ke sath baki sabka bhi mixture hai jo Aarti ready ho gayi means Supriya ko Jai se door karna Supriya ki care karna
12-07-2025, 01:18 PM
Good update.
Suggestion: Arti is tired. Karuna arti ko happy karne k liye, offer karti hai, main bahut acha massage karti hun. When supriya returns from office, she sees karuna oil massaging arti's bare back. Karuna with her saree removed to prevent oil stain. Arti topless but hiding her front by towel. 
13-07-2025, 08:56 AM
꧁༺Nikita Nim༻꧂ 
13-07-2025, 08:57 AM
Waiting for new updates
13-07-2025, 11:13 AM
(This post was last modified: 13-07-2025, 05:52 PM by val.coutinho. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Super duper update..... Mast ekdum jabardast.... Ab ya toh Jai se Aarti ki sex karva do ya fir.... Jai ko nakara dikha ke Aarti se promise le lo ki Jai Supriya ke peeche nahi padega.....
Ek para mein aap ko changes karni padegi, jahan aap ne likha hai.... Jai ne Supriya ko apni bahon mein bhar liya aur Aarti ko kiss karne laga..... Yeh line kuch atpata lag rahi hai...... Kyu ki milne Aarti gayi hai Jai se toh Supriya beech mein kahan se aa gayi... Please yeh changes kijiye
Val
13-07-2025, 04:43 PM
Waiting for update
13-07-2025, 06:49 PM
Sriya Ji, Aarti and Iqbal ke bhi sex scenes hone chahiye ab to
13-07-2025, 07:47 PM
(13-07-2025, 11:13 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Super duper update..... Mast ekdum jabardast.... Ab ya toh Jai se Aarti ki sex karva do ya fir.... Jai ko nakara dikha ke Aarti se promise le lo ki Jai Supriya ke peeche nahi padega..... Thank you... maine update kar diya.. kayi baar likhte hue bas Supriya hi likha jaa raha tha aur main baar baar theek kar rahi thi.
13-07-2025, 08:43 PM
(13-07-2025, 07:47 PM)Sriya2 Wrote: Thank you... maine update kar diya.. kayi baar likhte hue bas Supriya hi likha jaa raha tha aur main baar baar theek kar rahi thi. Welcome Sriya..... Koi baat nahi mistakes hoti hain... Hum readers ka bhi toh is story par kuch hadd tak haq hai na.... Toh kuch galati mile jise theek kiya jaa sakta hai wahi toh kar rahe hain...... Bas ab agle update mein aap kya diversion deti hain is story ko wahi dekhne/padhne ki lalsa hai..... Jaldi update de dijiyega..... Waiting eagerly
Val
13-07-2025, 08:59 PM
Supriya waise atul bhi kya kahi muh maar raha hai apni biwi ki tarah jis tarah se vo adhe me wapas cahal gaya ise to yahi lagta hai
14-07-2025, 03:28 AM
Aarti ne to story ko pura gram kar diya dekhte hain next updates me Aarti kya kya dhamake karti hai
14-07-2025, 09:43 AM
(This post was last modified: 16-07-2025, 08:45 AM by Sriya2. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Update 69
Jai Aarti ke upar peeche se chhadha hua apna poora dam laga kar use chod raha tha. Pichle 25-30 minute se usne alag alag position mein Aarti ki achi tarah se rail bana rakhi thi. Ab tak toh koi bhi ladki kab ki jhad jaati par Aarti toh poora hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Jai aur Aarti paseeno mein tarr ho chuke they aur Aarti ki kaanpti hui siskiyaan poore room mein goonj rahi thi. Aarti - Unnnhhhh…. Unnhhhhh…. Mmmmmmm Jai - Bhabhi jeeeee…. Ahhhhhh…. Aaj aisa chodunga na ki bhaiya ko bhool jayoge…. ![[Image: videotogif-2025-01-08-13-50-46.gif]](https://i.postimg.cc/NLh8v0Sz/videotogif-2025-01-08-13-50-46.gif) Jai ne Aarti ke gaddedaar gaand par apna bhaar daalte hue hue zor ke jhatke maare. Aarti ka haath side mein Jai ke haath ko dhoond raha tha, woh dard ke maare kuch kas ke pakad lena chahti thi. Par uska ahankar use Jai ko rokne nahi de paa raha tha. Use bhi bahut maza aa raha tha Jai ki is tabad tod chudai se. Aarti - Unnnnnnhhh…. Ssssssssssss….. aieeeeeee… Jai kuch pal ke liye ruka aur usne Aarti ki gaand par ek zor ka thappad lagaya, Aarti ki gaand ab tak poori laal ho chuki thi. Kuch der se Aarti ki ulte jawab bhi band ho chuke they, jaise woh aakhir Jai ke aage jhuk gayi ho - Ughhh... Bhabhi jee.... ab kaisa lag raha hai... bhaiya aise toh nahi karte honge... Aarti - Uhhhh... aahhhnnnn... ahhnnn... Jai aur karo na.... aur main tumhari bhabhi nahi hoon.... Jai ne Aarti ke peeche kheechte hue pakad liye aur fir se andar dhakke maarne laga - Toh kya bulayu aapko, meri jaaneman? ![[Image: tumblr_nzbrakJ3k31ujpqwxo1_500.gif]](https://i.postimg.cc/kMcGYVcZ/tumblr_nzbrakJ3k31ujpqwxo1_500.gif) Aarti ne apna muh bed ki taraf kar liya, woh apni cheekhe Jai ko nahi sunana chahti thi. Sach mein Jai ne jis tarah se aaj uski li thi, aaj tak uske pati bhi nahi li thi. Itna stamina ki woh 30 minute se bas bina ruke use chode jaa raha tha. Jai ne Aarti ke baal pakadte hue kaha - Boliye Aarti ji.... Aarti - Uhhhnnnn....mmmmm.... ahhhh..... Jai - Lagta hai bhaiya ne aapka chhed achi tarah khol diya hai itne saalo mein... chaliye fir aapki doosri gufa bhi tatoli jaye.... wahan toh bhaiya shayad nahi gaye honge... Aarti ek dam se kaanp gayi, usne kayi baar gaand mein sex karne ke baare mein socha tha par use khud ye bolte hue sharam si aati thi, aur uska pati toh khud se woh karne se raha tha. Jai ne apni do ungliyaan Aarti ke gaand mein ghusa di - Ufffff.... kafi tight hai... ab aayega maza... Aarti Jai ko apne upar se hatane ki koshish karne lagi - Jai... nahi ... wahan nahi... Jai - Kya hua... nikal gayi saari hekdi... ab toh ye ho kar hi rahega... Jai ne apne lund par thoda sa thook lagaya aur Aarti ki gaand mein apna lund ghusana shuru kiya. Jai ne Aarti ke haathon ko kas ke pakad liya taaki woh hil na paaye. Ab nikli thi Aarti ki asli cheekhen... ![[Image: rough-tough-touch-824-001.gif]](https://i.postimg.cc/9MzwHZBJ/rough-tough-touch-824-001.gif) Aarti - Ahhhh.... haramjaade... hatt jaa... ufff.... Jai ne apna sanyam banate hue Aarti ki gaand mein apna lund aur andar kiya - Aapke muh se gaaliyaan shobha nahi deti ..... Aarti - Uffff... Jai... behenchod... tel toh laga le... Jai ko Aarti ke muh se gaaliyaan sunne mein maza aa raha tha aur usne dheere dheere apni raftaar tez karni shuru kari - Ab toh aapka hi tel nikalunga... Aarti uske aage bilkul kamzor pad gayi thi, aur jaise hi Jai ne uski gaand mein dhakke lagane shuru kare, uski zor zor ki siskiyaan nikalne lagi. Aarti - Uhhhhhhnnnn.... maar diyaa.... aaahhhh... Jai ne Aarti ke haathon ko chhod diya aur uske baal pakadte hue poore dam se uski gaand ko chodne laga. Aarti ke haath toh aazad ho gaye they, par ab use gaand mein lund ke ghisne se ek alag sa hi maja aa raha tha, jaise usne aaj pehli baar sex kiya ho. Aarti aankhen band karke siskiyaan leti rahi - Unnnn... mmmm.... haan.... uff....... aaaaahh... Jai apna lund andar bahar karta raha aur Aarti ki kamar aur gaand bhi ab aage peeche hone lag gayi thi. Kuch minute mein usne ek baar fir Aarti ke andar visfot kar diya, is baar uski gaand mein apna maal nikalte hue. Aarti har jagah se buri tarah Jai ke safed chip chip paani se dhaki hui thi. Jai ne kuch second ka break lete hue Aarti ki gaand se apna lund bahar nikaala - Maza aaya na Aarti ji.... saalo ka experience aaj kaam aaya... waise aap bhi kam nahi hai... mujhe bhi poora thaka diya... Aarti apni gaand ko masal rahi thi, aur tez tez saansein le rahi thi, uski gaand mein pehli baar lene se bahut buri tarah dard ho raha tha - mmmmm.... aahhhh..... Jai - Jyada dard ho raha hai kya... koi nahi pehli baar ka dard tha... ab toh aapka mann karega baar baar wahan karwane ka... bhaiya se na ho toh mujhe bula lena... Aarti apni gaand ko pakde hue dard se karaha rahi thi. Jai - Aaj aapki baari thi.... kal Supriya ki baari hogi... aapko lagta hai woh ye sab seh paayegi... Jaise hi Jai ne Supriya ka naam liya, Aarti ekdam se hosh se mein aayi, jaise usne realize kiya ho ki woh yahan aayi kyu thi. Aarti - Jai.... tumhe maine kaha tha na... Supriya ko bhool jayo... Jai haste hue bola - Use kaise bhool sakta hoon... usi ke chakkar mein toh ye sab hua hai... maana aap kamal ho... par abhi uska ras bhi mujhe chakhna hai... Aarti apna dard bhoote hue ekdam ekdam se bed se khadi hui aur apna phone uthate hue usne Jai ki nangi photo kheechni shuru kar di - Main Supriya ko sab bata dungi... ye saari photo dikha dungi... fir woh tumhara asli roop jaan jayegi... Jai ko yakin nahi ho raha tha ki Aarti abhi bhi yehi maan rahi thi ki woh aur Supriya lovers they. Par woh kaun tha Aarti ke is brahm ko door karne wala - Jaisa aap chahe... dikha dena unhe ye photos... Jai ne pose banate hue apna lund theek saamne kar diya taaki Aarti aur ache se photo kheech paaye - Par abhi toh wapas bed par aaiye na.... Aarti ka sir buri tarah jhanna raha tha, use aisa lag raha tha jaise woh abhi kisi buri sapne se jaagi ho. Usne Jai ko dekha aur fir apni halat ko, use yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki woh itni der se Jai ke saath bina kisi sharam ke ye sab kar rahi thi. Aarti ko table par rakhe juice ke glass dikhayi diye - Tumne kuch milaya tha na juice mein.... jisse main behak gayi... Jai - Areee... ye toh galat baat hai... sab kuch ho jaane ke baad aap mujhe badnaam kar rahi hai... aap ne hi toh saari shuruwaat ki thi... Aarti ke gaal buri tarah laal ho gaye - Nahi... woh toh main bas tumhe aazma rahi thi... Jai - Toh fir kaisa laga main aazma ke... job pakki hai meri? Aarti - Ahhh... pata nahi koi aadmi chaar chaar baar jhad kar kaise apna lund khada rakh sakta hai... tumne bhi kuch liya tha na... Jai muskura ke bola - Paanchvi baar karna hai toh bataiye... main toh uske liye bhi tayyar hoon... sach mein bhaiya hai bahut lucky.... ek taraf palang tod biwi aur doosri taraf jawan sexy behen... Aarti ne dard ke maare sahi se chala bhi nahi jaa raha tha, par usne dard mein kamre mein faile apne kapde dhoondne shuru kar diye they, aur woh Jai ki baaton par focus nahi kar rahi thi - Main jaa rahi hoon... aur mujhe ab rokne ki koshish ki na toh acha nahi hoga... Jai muskura ke bola - Aap fir mujhe galat samajh rahi hai... aap aayi apni marzi se thi... aur ja bhi apni marzi se sakti hai... Aarti dard se karahti hui fir se bed par let gayi. Usne abhi apne kapde poori tarah nahi pehne they aur use bahut dard ho raha tha. Par mann ke ek dabe hue kone mein shayad woh chahti thi ki Jai uske saath kuch aur kare. Jai ne uski gori nangi peeth par uske lambe baal faile hue dekhe aur woh khud ko uski peeth ko apne haathon se masalne se nahi rok paaya. ![[Image: 123.jpg]](https://i.postimg.cc/8kdP0rp6/123.jpg) ___________________________________________________ Doosri aur bahar Iqbal khada Aarti ka intezaar kar raha tha. Aarti ko andar gaye hue 2 ghante ho chuke they aur Iqbal itni der se hotel par nazar banaye rakha tha. Wahan bahut saare aadmi aur aurat aa rahe they, par unhe dekh kar Iqbal ko wahan ka mahaul kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Kafi der pareshaan khade rehne ke baad, woh thoda ghabrate hue hotel ke andar ghusa aur front desk par khade aadmi se poocha. Iqbal - Yahan... 1-2 ghante pehle ek madamji aayi thi kisi se milne... aapne dekha kya... Aadmi haste hue bola - Yahan toh bahut saari madamji aati hai... tum kaunsi wali ki baat kar rahe ho... Iqbal - Nahi... woh yahan kisi dost se milne aayi thi... saree pehne hui thi unhone... Aadmi aankh maarte hue bola - Sab dost se hi milne aati hai yahan... pati se milne kaun aayega... tum kaun ho uske? Kahin pati toh nahi ho? Iqbal - Nahi main toh unhe yahan lekar aaya tha... Aadmi - Acha driver hai... pareshaan kyu hota hai... aa jayengi jab khel khatam ho jayega... Iqbal - Matlab? Aadmi ne thodi dheemi aawaz mein kaha - Naya hai kya? Teri madamji chudwa rahi hongi kisi room mein apne aashiq se... aa jayengi... Iqbal gussa hote hue bola - Kya bakwaas kar raha hai... Aadmi - Tameez mein reh kar baat kar le... galat kaam tumhari madam kare... aur gussa tum hum par ho... Iqbal - Mujhe jaldi se bata woh kis room mein hongi... Aadmi ko bhi gussa aa gaya - Chal bahar nikal yahan se... jab aayengi teri madam tab pooch liyo unse ki kiske saath aish kar rahi thi... Hotel ke guards ke Iqbal ko dhakka dete ho bahar kiya. Iqbal pareshaan hota hua bahar nikla aur usne turant Supriya ko call lagaya. Uske paas toh Aarti ka phone number hi nahi tha jo woh unhe call karta. Supriya ne Iqbal ka phone aate dekh jaldi se uthaya - Kya hua Iqbal, sab theek? Iqbal - Madamji... aapki bhabhi ko lekar aaya tha yahan... kuch theek nahi lag raha mujhe yahan.... Supriya - Matlab? Ho kahan tum? Bhabhi toh apni dost se milne jaa rahi thi na... Iqbal - Jee. wahin lekar aaya tha... par ye hotel kuch galat sa lag raha hai... aap call karo unhe ek baar... woh theek toh hai na... Supriya ne jhat se Iqbal ka call cut kiya aur Aarti ko phone lagaya. Aarti ka phone silent par tha aur uske kapdo ke beech mein kahin daba hua tha toh use pata hi nahi chala. Supriya ne 2-3 baar try kiya, aur uske chhehre par pareshaani badti jaa rahi thi. Supriya ne fir se Iqbal ko call lagaya - Iqbal... tum mujhe address bhejo... main aa rahi hoon wahan... Iqbal - Nahi madamji aap kyu aayengi yahan... Supriya - Jaldi se mujhe address bhejo... behas ka time nahi hai... Supriya jaldi se office se nikli, use kuch soojh nahi raha tha ki kya hua hoga. Agar wahan kuch gadbad hui thi, kya woh Atul ko bhi phone karke bula le. Nahi agar sach mein kuch gadbad hui toh Atul shayad kuch na kar paaye. Supriya ne Vikram ko call lagaya, aur hadbadate hue boli - Vikram... aap free hai kya... Vikram - Supriya... kya hua... tum kafi pareshaan sound kar rahi ho... Supriya - Meri bhabhi... woh kisi se milne gayi thi... par wahan shayad kuch gadbad ho gayi hai... Vikram - Kaisi gadbad... Supriya - Pata nahi mujhe... bas kafi darr lag raha hai... aap aa sakte hai kya... Vikram apne office mein tha aur aaj ka din uske liye kafi busy tha, par Supriya ke liye toh woh kuch bhi kar sakta tha - Main pahuchta hoon wahan... tum mujhe address bhejo... Supriya ne Vikram ko address bheja, aur jaise hi Vikram ne woh address dekha woh apni seat se uth khada hua. Is hotel mein woh Jai ke saath kayi baar ja chuka tha. Use ye jagah kafi gandi si lagti thi, par Jai ko yahan ladkiyon ko chodne mein bahut maza aata tha. Kya ye bas ittefak tha ki Supriya isi jagah par jaa rahi thi. Vikram ne turant Jai ko call lagaya par Jai bhi apna phone nahi utha raha tha. Jaroor kuch toh gadbad thi. Vikram turant hi apne office se nikla aur Hotel Santoor ki taraf jaldi se drive karte hue pahucha. Agar Supriya apne office se wahan jaa rahi thi, toh shayad woh jyada nazdeek tha us jagah ke. Vikram wahan jald hi pahuch gaya aur usne wahan bahar Iqbal ko khade dekha. Woh usse bas ek baar pehle mila tha, par usne use pehchaan liya. Vikram - Iqbal... kya hua.... Iqbal shayad Vikram ko nahi pehchaan paaya tha - Sirji... aap... Vikram - Main Supriya ka friend... usne mujhe yahan bulaya hai... kya maamla hai... Iqbal - Jee woh Supriya ki bhabhi andar gayi thi hotel ke... dost se milne... par ye log keh rahe hai ki.... aur mujhe bhi bahar nikaal diya... Vikram - Tum aayo mere saath.... Vikram jaldi se hotel ke andar ghusa, aur Iqbal uske theek peeche. Iqbal ko dekhte hi guard fir se use dhakka dene ko hue par is baar Iqbal ne dono guards ko ek ek mukka maar kar gira diya. Reception par khada aadma zor ke chillaya - Ye kya kar raha hai... Par Vikram ne use haath dikha kar roka - Suno. Jai hai kya yahan? Aadmi Vikram ko dekh kar ekdam se ruka - Sir aap.... Vikram ne ek kadak aawaz mein usse kaha - Maine kuch poocha na tumse... Aadmi atakte hue bola - Sir.... haan ... Room 405... Vikram - Unke saath kaun hai... Aadmi - Koi ladies thi... saree pehne hue... pehle nahi dekha unhe yahan... Iqbal ekdam se bola - Yahi toh poocha tha tujhse pehle.... jaroor woh Supriya ki bhabhi hongi... Vikram jaldi se room ki taraf chal diya aur Iqbal uske theek peeche peeche. Vikram ne Iqbal ki taraf palat kar dekha, usne apni mutthi kas ke baandh rakhi thi aur uske chhehre par ek alag hi gussa tha. Vikram Iqbal ko itne gusse mein dekh kar bola - Iqbal suno... mujhe ye handle karne do... tum yahin ruko... Iqbal - Par sirji... Vikram - Mujhe handle karne do ye... sab theek hoga... Iqbal ke phone par tabhi Supriya ka call aane laga - Madamji.... Supriya - Kahan ho Iqbal.... main yahan pahuch gayi... Iqbal - Main aata hoon aapko lene... yahan upar hai... Room 405 ki taraf jaa rahe hai.. Vikram jaldi se room ki taraf bada aur Iqbal neeche Supriya ko lene. Vikram ne room ke bahar pahuch kar zor ke khatkhaya. Kuch der darwaza nahi khula toh ek baar fir. Andar se Jai ki aawaz hai - Kaun hai be saala... bahar do not disturb ka board laga hai na... Jai ne ek tauliya lapete hue darwaza khola aur Vikram ko wahan dekh kar woh chaunk gaya - Dost! Tum yahan? Itni door baithe bhi tumne yahan ki khusboo soongh li... Vikram - Jai tu yahan kya kar raha hai... tere saath andar kaun hai? Jai - Aayo... tum bhi dekho... Vikram kamre ke andar aaya aur usne dekha andar ek jawan aurat jaldi jaldi apne kapde pehen rahi thi. Uske chhehre par darr saaf tha. Vikram ne apni aakhen Aarti se hata li aur kaha - Aap Supriya ki bhabhi hain? Aarti is tarah kisi aur anjaan aadmi ko kamre mein dekh kar buri tarah kaanp rahi thi. Aur ye aadmi Supriya ko bhi jaanta tha, ufff pata nahi woh kahan fas gayi thi. Aarti ne halke se apna sir hilaya. Vikram ne ekdam se Jai ko deewar ki taraf dhakela aur us par zor se chillaya - Tujhe pata hai tu ye kya kar raha hai... ye Supriya ki bhabhi hain... Jai haste hue bola - Toh? Kya hua... Tune bola tha na Supriya se door rehne ke liye... unki bhabhi ke baare mein toh kuch nahi kaha tha na... Vikram ne Jai ko ek zor ka ghoosa maara uske pet par - Haramipan ki hadd hoti hai Jai... Jai wapas nahi lad raha tha - Tu bhi le le maze... kisne roka hai... maine koi jabardasti nahi ki... inko bhi bahut maza aaya tha... Vikram ne Jai ko ek maar kar zameen par neeche gira diya. Aarti kamre ke ek kone mein khadi zameen ki aur dekhne ke elawa kuch nahi kar paa rahi thi... Jai - Ahhh... ab ye sab karna bhi galat hai tere liye... tune jo kiya usi ko wajah se mujhe ye sab karna pada... Vikram - Maine kya kiya?!!! Jai - Itno saalo ki dosti ke baad bhi tune ek ladki ki liye mujhse jhooth bola... jabki tu uske saath so raha tha... Vikram - Main Supriya se pyaar karta hoon samjha... aur uski family meri family jaisi hai... tujhe ye sab karne se pehle dar baar soch lena chahiye tha. Vikram ke neeche gire hue Jai ko kick kiya. Is beech Supriya aur Iqbal bhi bahar aa gaye they aur Supriya jaldi se room mein ghusti Aarti ke gale lagi. Supriya - Bhabhi!!! Aap theek toh hai na.... Supriya ko wahan dekh kar Aarti buri tarah chaunk gayi aur usne bhi Supriya ko gale laga liya. Aarti ki aankhon se aansu behne lage they. Vikram - Supriya... tum bhabhi ko lekar jaayo... main yahan sab sort out kar lunga... Supriya room mein situation ko samjhane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha, Jai wahan kya kar raha tha? Uske aur bhabhi ke beech kya hua tha? Aur Vikram Jai ko kyu maar raha tha? Vikram ne Supriya ko fir se bola - Supriya... jayo tum yahan se... Par beech mein Jai bol pada - Supriya jee... jaane se pehle sab sach toh jaan kar jaiye... Supriya - Kaunsa sach? Jai - Vikram ka sach... aur kya... Vikram ne Jai ko ek aur maara aur Supriya ki aur ghoor kar dekha - Supriya... maine kaha na tum jayo yahan se bhabhi ko lekar... Supriya Jai ki baat sune bina nahi jaana chahti thi - Vikram... nahi... use bolne do.... Jai ko Vikram ki laat ghuso se dard ho raha tha par abhi use Supriya ko sab sach batana tha - Pucho apne Vikram se.... kitni ladkiyon ke saath humne ye sab kiya hai is hotel mein... aur sirf is hotel mein nahi, aur pata nahi kahan kahan.... Vikram - Supriya tum iski baaton par dhyan mat do... Jai - Pooch ke toh dekho.... Supriya ne Vikram ki aur dekha, jaise usse pooch rahi ho ki kya ye sach hai. Vikram ne koi jawab nahi diya. Jai ke chehre par abhi bhi thodi si muskaan thi - Aur ye bhi toh poocho ki iska aapke liye kya plan tha. Kaise isne aapko dheere dheere set kiya... Supriya ke pairo tale zameen khisak gayi thi, use yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki Jai ye sab kya bol raha tha Vikram ke baare mein. Supriya ke muh se halke se nikla - Vikram.... Vikram - Supriya... suno... I can explain.... Jai - Supriya ji... aur bhi bahut kuch hai batane ke liye... aaj jo hua uske baare mein bhi... aur fir aapki bhi toh kuch kahaniyaan hai batane ke liye... Supriya ke haath pair bilkul jaam pad gaye they. Aarti ne Supriya ka haath pakadte hue kheecha - Supriya... chalo... hume yahan se jaldi se nikal jaana chahiye... Aarti Supriya ko kamre se bahar kheechti hui le gayi, aur Iqbal un dono ke saath wahan se nikal gaya. Vikram kuch pal ke liye hotel ke room mein khada reh gaya tha, jab woh office se nikla tha, use andaza bhi nahi tha ki yahan kuch aisa ho jayega. Jai sarak kar bed par aa gaya tha aur muskurata hua Vikram ki aur dekh raha tha.
14-07-2025, 12:18 PM
Ab ye dono randiya atul ke sath sulah karengi jab sach samne aya maza aeyga par ab atul ko supriya ko hath bhi nahi lagana chaiye
14-07-2025, 09:44 PM
Fabulous update, and kudos to how you are building up the story so patiently and keeping the intensity intact with a great plot, dialogues and action sequences bcoz its now almost like a movie.Some B-town producer reading this could easily copy it for an A rated movie or the Ullu/ AltBalaji/Voovi/MxPlayer guys could take up as a project as wellllpll
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