Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

The Ride Back


They didn’t speak much after locking the house behind them.

“Shall I book the auto, Didi?” asked Ravi.  

His mind is occupied with those earlier thoughts.

Priya, just said "yes"

He quickly booked an auto without any delay

Ravi watched Priya hand the old-fashioned key back to the caretaker

Nod politely, and then walk ahead without turning.

Her face was unreadable.

Not cold. Not warm.

Just still

Like she was holding something tightly behind her calm.

And then, the auto came.

His heart jumped with an exciment and anticipation.

He watched her slide in first again, just as she had that morning.

But this time... this time Ravi knew every inch of that seat.

He knew what it meant when her thigh touched his.

He knew how his arm would fit beside hers.

He knew the scent of her hair would float to him again, inevitable.


He stepped in slowly

The cushion creaking under his weight.



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[shailu4ever]

They were sitting close... Again...



Not by force now.

But by habit.

And by something else neither of them named.

The auto jolted forward.

The engine buzzed.

Mumbai began to blur past.

And still, they did not speak.

Ravi told himself to relax. Look outside. Be normal.

But his body betrayed him.

His entire right side was on fire, where her shoulder brushed his,

where the edge of her arm rested against his,

where the slightest shift in posture made her lean just faintly into him.

She wasn’t pulling away.

Every pothole.

Every sudden turn.

Every tiny bounce

It was like the city itself had conspired to bring them closer.

And Priya, she didn’t move away anymore.



Her dupatta had slipped once

Falling between them

But she didn’t fix it.



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[readersp]

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Into it so much that I am holding my breath while reading!!! Superb!!!

[shailu4ever]

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Into it so much that I am holding my breath while reading!!! Superb!!!
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Hi readersp

I'm truly touched by your words

Thank you so much! 

It means a great deal to know the story had that kind of impact.

I am very much excited to give more updates.

Your encouragement genuinely inspires me to keep giving my best.  I am giving more updates soon.

Hope you will like them.

with warm regards

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

Her hair was tied


But loose strands brushed his neck now and then with the breeze.


She sat still, her eyes forward, her expression carefully composed.

But Ravi could see it

A different kind of tension in her jaw

In the way her lips stayed pressed together, in the slight tremble of her fingers resting in her lap.

She wasn’t comfortable.

Not because of him.

But because of herself.

Ravi swallowed. 

Looked away. 

Looked back.

He wanted to move his arm. Just an inch.

He wanted to lean slightly closer.

He wanted to speak

But his voice would crack, and he knew it.

So he stayed.

Breathing slow.

Every nerve tuned to her.


Another turn. This one sudden.

She shifted

Again her body pressed into his, not just at the shoulder now but across her side. 

Her hand braced herself

And landed briefly on his thigh.

His heart stopped.

Her fingers curled slightly. 

Not gripping. 

Just resting. 

As though they had found a place and couldn’t leave.

She didn’t pull away.


Not immediately.



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[shailu4ever]

They stayed like that


Maybe for two seconds. 

Maybe more.


Then slowly, so slowly, her hand slid away. 

Returned to her lap.

But she didn’t apologize. Didn’t glance at him.

Only her breathing changed.

Just slightly.

Ravi turned his head, inch by inch, unable to help himself.

And for a second, just one long, heavy second, she turned too. 

Their eyes met.

And in that second, Ravi saw it.

Not desire.

Conflict.

A war behind her eyes. 

A quiet storm crashing against a wall she couldn’t admit was already cracked.

And yet

She didn’t look away.

She just… looked at him.

As though she knew everything he felt.

As though she felt it too.

But had nowhere to place it.


The moment broke as the auto slowed down. 

A red light. 

The city loud again.

She turned her face away, gently adjusting her hair.


Ravi breathed again

Not realizing he had been holding it.

And in that breath was shame. 

And longing. 

And confusion. 

And heat.

They didn’t speak.

They didn’t have to.

The silence between them wasn’t awkward now.

It was dangerous.




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[shailu4ever]

The Ride Back  - Continued from the red signal


The world beyond the auto faded.

The horns, the blur of bikes weaving past,

The rustle of drying clothes on balconies

All of it collapsed into a distant haze.

Inside this small, buzzing box of metal and vinyl,

Ravi could feel only her.

Her warmth, just beside him.

Her scent, clean and cotton, soft.

The faint rustle of her dupatta brushing his arm every few seconds.

She hadn’t moved away from him.

That was the only thought running in loops through his head.

She hadn’t moved.

The memory of her hand on his thigh earlier still hadn’t left him.

Nor had the way she looked at him after.

And now, sitting beside her again

Their arms and thighs grazing with every bump

He felt his body drowning in sensation, not lust, but an ache.

A slow-burning pull that whispered terrible ideas.

And in that moment… 

He did something.

Something Naughty...



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[shailu4ever]

Small.

Quiet.

Almost nothing.

He let his hand slide down to the edge of the seat between them.

Palm down. Elbow resting on his thigh. Casual.

Then came a bump.

Another light lift.

They moved together again.

Their shoulders brushing once more.


This time, Ravi shifted his hand.

Slowly.

Deliberately.

He flipped his palm upside.

Fingers relaxed. Spread. Waiting.

Another bump. Bigger.

The auto tilted.

Priya swayed.

And she landed, partially

On his open palm.

Not fully. Not all her weight.

But enough.

On his palm and his opened fingers

The curve of her ass pressed into his palm

Through the soft stretch of denim.

Involuntarily, his fingers grabbed the soft flesh.....




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[shailu4ever]

Her warmth bloomed through his fingers


Startlingly soft, impossibly close.

And for a second, just one dangerous, unforgettable second

Ravi felt everything.

The pressure.

The curve.

The heat of her body where it met his skin.

His fingers instinctively twitched

like his hand wanted to memorize her.

The texture of the fabric under her.

The way her body settled.

The silence between them turning liquid.

It was barely a moment.

But in Ravi’s mind, it stretched into eternity.

Then suddenly

She froze.

Her back straightened

Not subtly, but like a switch had been flipped.

Her muscles stiffened.

Her hand gripped the side rail.





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[shailu4ever]

And without a word


She lifted herself

Pulling her body away from his hand like it had caught fire.

The space between them widened.

She didn’t look at him.

But the temperature inside the auto dropped.

Gone was the warmth of accidental touch. The shared quiet of tension.

In its place, a new silence. 

Sharper. Closer to ice.

Ravi didn’t move.

His hand still rested on the seat

Now empty, now cold.

His chest tightened.

He dared to glance sideways.

Priya’s face was turned away. 

Her eyes on the road. 

Her jaw set. 

Her fingers interlaced in her lap now

Tight, firm, deliberate.

Not trembling. Not fidgeting.

But bracing.

Ravi swallowed.

He felt the weight of guilt hit his throat, thick and heavy.

He hadn’t touched her.

But he had… offered.

And she had seen it.



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[readersp]

The tension is becoming too much..I guess that is how it is going to go!!! Can you be a little more graphic in describing Priya..adds more to the plot.. only a request.. you are the creator!!! go ahead

[shailu4ever]

The tension is becoming too much..I guess that is how it is going to go!!! Can you be a little more graphic in describing Priya..adds more to the plot.. only a request.. you are the creator!!! go ahead

Hi readersp

I really appreciate you following the story and getting into the tension. means a lot. ?

And thank you for the feedback about Priya! 

You're absolutely right, fleshing her out more could really deepen the plot. I’ll definitely add more descriptive detail about her character in the upcoming parts. 

Love having you along for the journey! ?

Thanks a lot

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

And she had rejected it.


Clearly. 

Wordlessly.

Immediately.

The rest of the ride passed in a strange vacuum.

No words.

No glances.

Only the humming engine and the city lights flickering across her fair skin.

Ravi shifted

Pulling his hand back to his own lap.

The warmth was gone. 

But the memory of it wouldn’t leave.

Neither would the look he hadn’t seen

But felt, on her face.

And yet…

Even in rejection, she hadn’t scolded.

She hadn’t said a word.

Which somehow made it worse.

The auto slowed.

Their building came into view.

As it stopped, she stepped out first. 

Not quickly. Not dramatically. 

But with a certain distance in her posture now

As though she had wrapped herself back into something familiar.

Ravi followed.

And just before the auto pulled away

He looked up at their apartment building

Wondering, was it all over now? 

Had he ruined something? 


Or… had he simply woken it up?





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[Raj087]

Beautifully explained every part of the auto journey.Now you can make it more seductive by making Priya wear some crop top at home so that Ravi can view more of her hips and belly button. That will add more spice and hotness to the story. Also Ravi convincing her for some modelling and reels. Add dailogues to make it more realistic. Your writing style is awasome.Its as if like i can see the characters in front of me... Brilliant!!!!!

[AB-the Unicorn]

It’s a silent melody of two hearts.

[shailu4ever]

Beautifully explained every part of the auto journey.Now you can make it more seductive by making Priya wear some crop top at home so that Ravi can view more of her hips and belly button. That will add more spice and hotness to the story. Also Ravi convincing her for some modelling and reels. Add dailogues to make it more realistic. Your writing style is awasome.Its as if like i can see the characters in front of me... Brilliant!!!!!

Hi Raj087,

Thank you so much for your lovely message. I really appreciate your kind words, it means a lot to know that the story and characters are coming alive for you the way I imagined. I'm glad you're enjoying the journey so far!

I completely get where you're coming from with your suggestion. It’s definitely an idea that adds spice and playfulness. But just to share a bit of where I’m headed creatively: I’m building Priya Didi’s character to have a certain grace and quiet strength. She usually dresses conservatively, and I feel that makes even the smallest glimpse, like a curve at the waist or a brief flash of her belly feel more striking and elevated. It’s about preserving that sense of beauty through restraint, which adds to her presence and the gradual build of her relationship with Ravi.

That said, I do want to keep the story engaging and erotic and romantic scenes unfold. So, until Ravi gets a chance to actually seduces Priya Didi and gets closer to her, I’ll be introducing other characters who bring in that erotic and romantic charm with flirtier and exposing energy to balance things out and keep the tone entertaining. 

@All please let me know if my direction and planning is incorrect.  I am still in my early stages or writing novels.

I am all ears and I am more than happy to listen and adjust the course of the story.

Thanks again for following along and sharing your thoughts. It really keeps me motivated to keep writing!


Warmly,

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

It’s a silent melody of two hearts.

Hi AB-the Unicorn

Thank you so much for that beautiful line - “It’s a silent melody of two hearts.”

I couldn’t have put it better myself. 

That quiet, unspoken connection between Priya Didi and Ravi is exactly what I’m trying to bring out in the story.

Those moments where feelings speak louder than words. I'm really glad it resonated with you that way.

Your message truly made me smile. Thanks again for reading and feeling the heart of the story.


Warmly,

-- Shailu

[Hotyyhard]

extortionary paced waiting for next

[shailu4ever]

extortionary paced waiting for next

Hi Hotyyhard

Thank you so much for your feedback! 

I am glad you’re finding the story gripping.  I am working on the next update now.  I should be uploading new updates in a little while.

Stay tuned, the next part is on its way!

-- Shailu

[shailu4ever]

After the Ride


They climbed the stairs without a word.

Two flights.

Ravi could hear their footsteps echo in the corridor.

His heartbeat thudded just beneath it

Louder than it should have been.

Priya walked two steps ahead.

Her dupatta fluttered behind her.

Her braid, thick and dark, swayed gently with each step.

She didn’t glance back—not once.

Outside flat 205, she unlocked the door like any other evening.

The key turned. The door opened.

She stepped in.

Ravi followed.

The door clicked shut behind them.

And still, no words.

The apartment lights were soft. Familiar.

The living room was just as they left it, calm, neat, unbothered.

But something had changed.

Not the walls. Not the sofa.



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