Adultery Rich, hot, haughty married women trapped by old dirty cunning care taker (completed)

[hotandluking]

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Request to the writer: Please ignore such harsh comments and please continue the story.

[opendoor]

Roopa

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Mandakini

[opendoor]

Mahima

[Kgngff]

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WTH ., U wanna fall under the wrath of that old hungry chacha or What ....

[RCF]

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He is commenting on all stories in negative way..Ignore him and continue the story.

[BadeGANDu]

Update bro

[Pinkboy]

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Please continue the story. 

[Jackie Chan.]

Absolutely top quality writing

[Mrchu*]

This story is erotic to be honest but the creativity & developement part is varying from good to quite bad.

[Kerry Watson]

Simply the best story

[Ruksana Parveen]

Awesome and fabulous update

[Vermc185747]

What an updates bro, fl with the negative comments andainly i wanto see mamdakani and roopa with oldan and swaping with their husbands too please write broo

[Mrchu*]

Constantly swinging between good and grossly under developed updates.

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[Kgngff]

This drency looks fertile...  
Whos it

[opendoor]

Thank you all for your comments guys. I must confess I dragged Mahima episode...initial plan was to limit to 2 episodes..but seeing the good response I was carried away and wrote more episodes...effecting the story development...there is a fine line between sticking to original ideas and getting carried away by readers good response

Now onwards story will focus on old man and the two rich ladies .... Sorry , there won't be any threesom with husband's or other unnecessary Cambo

[Mrchu*]

Thank you all for your comments guys. I must confess I dragged Mahima episode...initial plan was to limit to 2 episodes..but seeing the good response I was carried away and wrote more episodes...effecting the story development...there is a fine line between sticking to original ideas and getting carried away by readers good response

Now onwards story will focus on old man and the two rich ladies .... Sorry , there won't be any threesom with husband's or other unnecessary Cambo

U r wrong . The last mahima update was nice & descriptive. The one b4 that was bogus. So its not for mahima but overall an oscillating one from very beginning to present.

[Basic]

First of all writer you are good. Don't be upset.

[Kgngff]

There has to b ups n downs .. ,& 1 has to himself write to get that
Bro OD is putting his efforts , there r updts almost regularly... ,
Feedback sud be ok but we as readers hv to be a bit understanding