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The Final Reveal
Her eyes wide with curiosity and anticipation.
She slowly moves towards his waist.
He still has one piece of clothing left on his body.
Abhi's briefs
She reaches out his waist
Her hands trembling slightly as she hooks her fingers into the waistband of Abhi's briefs.
She pulls them down slowly,
Her eyes never leaving his face.
When his briefs pass his hips
His length springs free
Standing proudly upright.
Madhavi's eyes widen in astonishment
As she gets her first look at Abhi's dick.
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She gasps, her hand flying to cover her mouth
As her eyes flick between his length and his face,
Checking for his reaction.
Abhi grins, a mixture of pride and amusement in his expression.
"Abhi, you are... you are very big," Madhavi stammers,
Her cheeks flushing with surprise and a hint of apprehension.
Abhi chuckles
His chest swelling with pride at her reaction.
"I know," he says
His voice filled with confidence. "Don't worry, I'll be gentle."
Madhavi nods, her eyes still fixed on his length.
She reaches out tentatively,
Wrapping her hand around him member.
Abhi sucks in a sharp breath,
His body shuddering at her touch.
Madhavi looks up at him,
A small smile playing on her lips as she explores his length,
Her hand moving from base to tip.
"It's way bigger than my husband's," she muses,
Her voice filled with wonder.
Abhi's grin widens at the comparison,
His body growing even harder under her touch.
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Gravity of Desire
He leans down to kiss her
His tongue exploring her mouth as her hand continues to stroke him.
His kisses trailing downward from her breasts.
He presses a soft kiss onto
Her stomach
Her hip
Her thigh
His hands still cupping and caressing her breasts.
Madhavi spreads her legs, giving Abhi access to her most intimate area.
He looks at her pussy for the first time
His eyes wide with wonder and desire.
She is very wet there.
He admires her folds, so soft and delicate
The sight of her arousal makes him hungry for more.
Abhi positions himself between Madhavi's legs,
His hard dick pressing against the entrance of her clit.
He looks into her eyes, seeking permission and shared desire.
Madhavi nods, a small smile playing on her lips, urging him on.
Abhi takes a deep breath, his body trembling with anticipation.
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He begins to press into her
Slowly and gently
giving her time to adjust to the sensation.
Madhavi's eyes widen as she feels him enter her
Her breath hitching in her throat.
"He's very big," Madhavi comments, her voice a soft whisper.
Abhi swallows, a mixture of pride and concern in his expression.
"Are you okay?" he asked
Holding himself still
Allowing her to adjust to his length and width.
Madhavi nods, "I'm okay. It just takes a moment to adjust."
She reaches up to run her hands through his hair, "It is just touching somewhere / something deep inside"
"Never had this kind of sensation... Abhi..." She gasps.
Urging him on. "You can move."
Encouraged, Abhi begins to move,
His hips rolling in a tentative rhythm
As he explores the sensation of being inside her.
He starts with small, careful movements
Gradually increasing their depth and intensity as he grows more confident.
Madhavi wraps her legs around him, urging him deeper.
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She moans at the new sensations
Her body welcoming him.
Abhi's breath comes in ragged gasps,
his forehead pressed against hers
As he focuses on the incredible feeling of being inside her.
"You feel amazing," he whispers,
his voice strained with emotion. "So tight and wet and warm."
Madhavi smiles,
A flush spreading across her chest and face.
She pulls him down for a kiss
Her tongue exploring his mouth as her body accommodates his.
Abhi's movements become more assured,
His hips rolling in a steady rhythm as he makes love to her.
He varies his thrusts, trying out different angles and depths,
Responding to Madhavi's moans and gasps of pleasure.
He reaches down to touch where their bodies are joined
His fingers brushing her clit as he continues to move inside her.
Madhavi's breathing quickens,
Her nails digging into Abhi's back as she nears the peak of pleasure.
Abhi can feel her inner muscles tightening around him
Her body squeezing him deliciously.
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"Abhi," she gasps
"don't stop. Oh god, I'm close."
Her words spur him on,
Abhi's hips moving faster
His breath coming in ragged pants.
He focuses on bringing Madhavi to orgasm
On feeling her climax around him. Madhavi cries out
Her body tensing as waves of pleasure crash over her.
Abhi groans, feeling her tighten around him
Her body pulsing with her orgasm.
He continues to move through her orgasm
drawing it out
Until Madhavi's body goes limp beneath him
Her breaths coming in satisfied gasps.
Abhi kisses her deeply
His heart pounding in his chest.
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As Abhi's lips lingered on hers
His body pressing against hers... harder and harder
The heat between them was undeniable.
Madhavi could feel the weight of him
The powerful intensity of their connection building with every breath.
She arched her back slightly.
Her body is warming up again, preparing for her 2nd round.
She is getting hot and again.
The sensation of his body against hers is intoxicating.
Her hands roamed over his back...
Feeling the muscles beneath his skin
The heat of him seeping into her, warmer again and making her heart race faster again.
Abhi pulled back for just a moment, his eyes dark with desire, and looked down at her.
Madhavi’s body was completely exposed to him now, every curve, every inch of skin laid bare.
He couldn’t stop himself from admiring her
How beautiful, how perfectly she fit beneath him
How her body responded to his every touch.
His fingers traced the curve of her jaw, down her neck,
Before moving lower, brushing over her breasts once again
The soft skin begging for his touch.
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Hey everyone!
Okay… deep breath.
This is my very first time writing an intimate romance scene. (Please be gentle with me!)
I might’ve fumbled a bit, maybe a clumsy hand here, a rushed heartbeat there, but that’s where you come in.
Spot any awkward moments, weird phrasing, or places that need a little extra heat (or sweetness)?
Let me know
I’m all ears and open to all kinds of feedback.
After all, Abhi’s romantic journey is just heating up… and trust me, he’s not done yet.
Abhi has plenty more romantic adventures coming his way.
So don’t be shy.
Please drop those likes, leave your thoughts, and tell me what worked (or didn’t).
I’m dying to know what you think!
-- Shailu
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Hi All
Just a heads-up, I’ll be a little busy as I’ll be going out today.
I’ll give you updates later tonight.
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You could have made it a little more bigger and erotic...but it doesn't matter because it was your first time...now Madhavi and abhi are open now...so now bring some wild sex between them
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(28-06-2025, 05:18 PM)Yash121 Wrote: You could have made it a little more bigger and erotic...but it doesn't matter because it was your first time...now Madhavi and abhi are open now...so now bring some wild sex between them
Hi Yash121
Thank you for the feedback!
I appreciate your honesty.
I’ll see how I can adjust that, maybe I can apply it to the previous updates I’ve given as well.
Since it was my first time, I’m glad to know what areas can be improved for next time.
-- Shailu
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I am still waiting for hear from others. Please let me know, I can rewrite the previous posts as needed.
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It's awesome. There are still a lot more sessions between these two. Would like to see if this new added confidence helps Abhi with other girls.
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(29-06-2025, 04:26 PM)Kamandalam Wrote: It's awesome. There are still a lot more sessions between these two. Would like to see if this new added confidence helps Abhi with other girls.
Hi Kamandalam
I'm so glad you liked it!
You're right, there’s definitely more to unfold between Madhavi and Abhi.
It is the first time for them.
Also, this is the first time romantic intimacy for Abhi with anyone. So definitely it is a lot for him also on his first time romance. I will slowly make him explore more and more options.
I’m really looking forward to let Abhi try his luck with other girls, with new confidence builds more boldness in him.
Thanks so much for your thoughtful insight.
It really encourages me to keep going!
Please keep giving more and more feedback, as we move forward.
-- Shailu
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Hi all,
After considering the feedback and reviewing the updates myself, I’ve decided to continue with more posts on this.
I’ve just edited and updated the post number 187.
I’ll be sharing more posts soon related their first romantic intimacy.
Hope you enjoy them!
Thank you.
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Madhavi’s breath hitched as he touched her
Her chest rising and falling with the increasing intensity of their shared desire.
The urgency was palpable now, the need between them sharp and undeniable.
Abhi’s hands were now on her hips, guiding her to move with him,
His lips trailing down her neck
Leaving a path of heated kisses as his body began to align with hers once more.
The moment was almost too much to bear, the anticipation thick and heady in the air between them.
He moved between her legs again
His body hovering just above hers as he kissed her once more, slowly, deeply, as if memorizing every detail of her.
His hands moved down, gliding over the smooth skin of her thighs, feeling the tremble of her body beneath his touch.
She was so soft, so responsive
As his fingers brushed the delicate skin of her pussy lips
She gasped softly, a shiver running through her.
Madhavi could feel his breath against her ear, warm and heavy, as he whispered softly, “Shall we continue?”
She nodded, she is ready for her 2nd round.
His thick and long cock made her come too early.
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She never experienced this big dick in her life.
It is way longer and thicker than her husband's.
That sensation and that anticipation made her come sooner.
Now she is ready for her second round with anticipation and desire
Her fingers tightening on his back.
She wanted him completely, her body ached for him in a way she had never experienced before.
This time he entered with one thrust
As he entered her again, both of them gasped
Their bodies coming together in an aching.
His body moved against hers faster this time.
The heat of his skin meeting hers in a perfect, intimate alignment.
Abhi’s rhythm was steady, deliberate, his movements careful as if savoring every inch of their connection.
Madhavi’s hands moved to his shoulders, gripping him as her body adjusted,
The tension of the moment building to a quiet crescendo.
Each shift, each deep breath, brought them closer to something more, something that was theirs alone.
Madhavi’s breath caught as he moved deeper, her body arching toward him in instinctive response.
She could feel the warmth of his body growing by the moment.
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He put steady pressure inside her.
It is keep growing as a response to her moans
Her hips lifted to meet his
Her hands trailing down his back, urging him to go on.
He kissed her again, deep and slow, matching the rhythm they were finding,
Their movements blending seamlessly together.
The intensity of it was overwhelming.
Each touch, Each kiss, felt like it was drawing them closer
Unraveling something deep inside them.
There was no rush, no urgency, only the intimate rhythm of two bodies entwined,
Moving together in perfect harmony.
The world outside seemed to fade entirely, leaving only the sensation of skin on skin
The shared breath, the pulse of desire growing with every movement.
Abhi’s hands slid down to her hips, guiding her as they moved together,
The soft sound of their bodies mingling with the quiet, heavy silence that surrounded them.
The air between them was thick with longing, and the need to feel more, to experience more, was undeniable.
The rhythm between them quickened, then slowed,
A steady ebb and flow that made each second feel like a lifetime,
Each second of their union a moment that they both wanted to savor for as long as possible.
Madhavi’s moans, soft but filled with a hunger that matched his own. They are getting louder and louder
Encouraged him to move deeper, to move faster, to make each second count.
And as their bodies finally found a rhythm that brought them both to the edge
The tension, the pressure, built until it was unbearable.
Each thrust, each movement, brought them closer to that moment of release,
And as the pleasure washed over them both, their bodies moved together in one final, perfect union.
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Her pussy tightened around his member, signaling that she is getting to closer again
He intensified his moves, chasing his own release
His hips rolling in a desperate rhythm.
Madhavi wraps her arms around him
Holding on as Abhi finds his peak
His body tensing as he spills himself into her. Overflowing...
He collapses onto her, as she finished her second orgasm.
The world around them exploded in a wave of sensation, and for a moment.
There was nothing but the two of them
Completely intertwined, their bodies and souls in perfect harmony.
After the final wave of their shared release, Abhi remained on top of her for a few moments longer,
His body resting gently against hers,
As though not wanting to let go of the warmth and connection that lingered between them.
Abhi presses a soft kiss to Madhavi's forehead
A contented sigh escaping his lips.
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His breath was slow, deep, and steady
Madhavi’s fingers gently traced the muscles of his back,
Feeling the soft tremor of his skin beneath her touch.
She could feel his heart still racing, matching the rhythm of hers.
Madhavi shifted slightly beneath him
A soft sigh escaping her lips as she ran her fingers down his back,
Feeling the sweat on his skin, the warmth of their bodies still entangled.
She hadn’t realized how deeply her body had craved this connection until it had happened
Until they had come together in such a profound, intimate way.
She traced the lines of his muscles gently
Her touch tender, savoring the quiet, peaceful afterglow.
Abhi lifted his head slightly,
His dark eyes meeting hers with an expression that was a mixture of admiration,
Affection, and something deeper
Something unspoken, but real.
He tucked a stray lock of her hair behind her ear
His fingers lingering on her skin as he took in the soft glow of her face.
The world outside their small space no longer mattered.
Nothing else existed but the two of them,
The lingering warmth of their bodies, the soft rhythm of their breaths.
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