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You could have expanded the sex between Mahima and the old man when he fucked her the first time. She couldn't have simply taken his supposedly big cock despite using oil just like that...There is a lot more that you could have built upon there...
Just my thoughts...
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those who like the story may hit Like button please
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మీరు తెంగ్లీష్ లో రాస్తుండేసరికి నాకు చదవడం కొంచెం స్లో అవుతుంది.
స్టోరీ బావుంది.
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బాగా రాస్తున్నారు.
కథ బావుంది.
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Absolutely wonderful and stunning story. Great going buddy.
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Absolutely outstanding and extraordinary writing ✍️
The following 1 user Likes KGB's post:1 user Likes KGB's post
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Great going! Terrific and interesting update
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Thanks everyone for great support
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Very much interesting and exciting writing
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Marvelous and fabulous writing ✍️
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Absolutely wonderful and stunning story writing.