Misc. Erotica Maid Shows Me Heaven
#81
This story is pure rubbish and a true waste of our time and your reader's time. 
The story suffers from a lack of narrative coherence, with a disjointed structure that fails to effectively build tension or develop its characters beyond superficial roles. Its reliance on expository dialogue through Uma’s narration feels forced and unnatural, undermining any emotional weight the story attempts to convey. 

The pacing is erratic, rushing through critical moments without sufficient buildup or resolution, which diminishes the impact of the plot. 

Additionally, the writing lacks stylistic finesse, with clunky prose and repetitive descriptions that fail to engage the reader or elevate the story’s themes. Ultimately, it’s a missed opportunity to craft a compelling or meaningful narrative, resulting in a forgettable and poorly executed piece.

Very very poor no wonder your stories get little attention. Believe me now?
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(14-06-2025, 11:53 AM)Rajeev Gupta Wrote: This story is pure rubbish and a true waste of our time and your reader's time. 
The story suffers from a lack of narrative coherence, with a disjointed structure that fails to effectively build tension or develop its characters beyond superficial roles. Its reliance on expository dialogue through Uma’s narration feels forced and unnatural, undermining any emotional weight the story attempts to convey. 

The pacing is erratic, rushing through critical moments without sufficient buildup or resolution, which diminishes the impact of the plot. 

Additionally, the writing lacks stylistic finesse, with clunky prose and repetitive descriptions that fail to engage the reader or elevate the story’s themes. Ultimately, it’s a missed opportunity to craft a compelling or meaningful narrative, resulting in a forgettable and poorly executed piece.

Very very poor no wonder your stories get little attention. Believe me now?

Thank You for taking time to read and comment  Namaskar
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(14-06-2025, 12:21 PM)sexypreeti Wrote: Thank You for taking time to read and comment  Namaskar

And thank you too for acknowledging that you are top 5 worst writers of all time with less viewership.  Big Grin
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(14-06-2025, 01:13 PM)Rajeev Gupta Wrote: And thank you too for acknowledging that you are top 5 worst writers of all time with less viewership.  Big Grin

I don't need to waste my time arguing with someone like you who calls his own stories "shit"  Big Grin
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We are not arguing, we are stating facts, I am a better writer than you. Your stories are ridiculously out of touch with reality, they are marred with non-cohesive connotations of an erotic story. It is full of bullshit and time wasting narrative that doesn't fit properly of a decent story.
That's the fact, if you keep forgetting, I will remind you once more.
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#86
Guy's please stop arguing and abusing each other.... Rajeev you felt it boring then it's better you stop reading and leave the story alone and let others who enjoy reading this story let them read it....

You being a writer should have not insulted another writer.... I think you lack the spirit to encourage other writers..... Maybe a suggestion would have been fine but insult is a no no from a writer atleast..... So I would suggest Preeti you continue and you Rajeev please stop visiting this thread...
Be an encouragement to others and not disgrace Rajeev Gupta......
Val Namaskar
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val.coutinho Wrote:Guy's please stop arguing and abusing each other.... Rajeev you felt it boring then it's better you stop reading and leave the story alone and let others who enjoy reading this story let them read it....

You being a writer should have not insulted another writer.... I think you lack the spirit to encourage other writers..... Maybe a suggestion would have been fine but insult is a no no from a writer atleast..... So I would suggest Preeti you continue and you Rajeev please stop visiting this thread...
Be an encouragement to others and not disgrace Rajeev Gupta......
It is okay Val, Let him express himself anyway he wants, It does not matter to me anyway  Namaskar
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(14-06-2025, 06:36 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Guy's please stop arguing and abusing each other.... Rajeev you felt it boring then it's better you stop reading and leave the story alone and let others who enjoy reading this story let them read it....

You being a writer should have not insulted another writer.... I think you lack the spirit to encourage other writers..... Maybe a suggestion would have been fine but insult is a no no from a writer atleast..... So I would suggest Preeti you continue and you Rajeev please stop visiting this thread...
Be an encouragement to others and not disgrace Rajeev Gupta......

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(14-06-2025, 06:36 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Guy's please stop arguing and abusing each other.... Rajeev you felt it boring then it's better you stop reading and leave the story alone and let others who enjoy reading this story let them read it....

You being a writer should have not insulted another writer.... I think you lack the spirit to encourage other writers..... Maybe a suggestion would have been fine but insult is a no no from a writer atleast..... So I would suggest Preeti you continue and you Rajeev please stop visiting this thread...
Be an encouragement to others and not disgrace Rajeev Gupta......

I totally agree. However, the problem with this stupid writer is that he is first jealous of other successful stories. Secondly, he did criticize other stories of other writers, including mine, so I am just giving him what he deserves. I giving him the change of what he bought.  banana
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(14-06-2025, 06:50 PM)Rajeev Gupta Wrote: I totally agree. However, the problem with this stupid writer is that he is first jealous of other successful stories. Secondly, he did criticize other stories of other writers, including mine, so I am just giving him what he deserves. I giving him the change of what he bought.  banana

Rajeev.... If you totally agree then you should also remember that it's not a he and it's a she.... Yes the writer is a female so atleast have some respect.... And she is my good friend so it's a humble request that you read the upcoming updates silently or stop visiting the thread....
Also if someone is jumping in the sea that does not mean you also have to jump into the sea..... I hope you understand by what I meant.
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Maid Shows Me Heaven - Part 21

 
Thank you for all your messages, please read the previous parts so you can enjoy this better…
 
I remembered I had told them to come to work after Uma is back so I called their office. I told them to send the workers in the morning because I had change of plans. I was fine to get tired shuttling between two floors but not at the cost of letting them torment Uma.
 
I said “Uma I have taken care of the problem and they should all be gone by the time you come back after meeting Rizwan”. For the first time there was a twinkle in her eyes and she smiled. I said “now that everything is taken care of can we go to the pub and chill out”?
 
Uma said “no Krishna I don’t want to go there because I don’t like your friends. You already know what they did the last time”. I said “don’t worry, we will go somewhere else where only the two of us can enjoy. Remember next week my parents are going to be here so we will not be able enjoy like this”.
 
She agreed, I took her to my bathroom where we showered together enjoying one round of intense sex. After the bath I told her what to wear and both got dressed. We went to a different pub today hoping none of my friends would be there.
 
I asked for a corner table with a candle. I wanted to make it special for her so she forgets everything that happened today. I ordered some tasty chicken and beers and for sure we had a great time. I asked “since you are enjoying the music, can we go to the dance floor”?
 
Uma shrieked saying “no way Krishna, I don’t even know how to dance, I will never go. You can go if you want to”. I said “Uma look at everyone, they are just moving their body to the music. Come with me, you can do at least that”.
 
I pulled her to the dance floor despite her reluctance and held her waist moving with the music. She kept saying “please don’t embarrass me more Krishna, everyone is staring at me”. I said “everyone is staring at you because you are looking really hot and beautiful, just enjoy the attention”.
 
I didn’t let her go and kept shaking our bodies with the music for some time. Uma kept blushing all the while, after some time we sat at our table again. She said “Krishna I will never come out with you again”. I asked “Uma can I kiss you to make up for it”?
 
She said “no Krishna, not here in front of everyone, please don’t embarrass me even more”. Even before she completed her sentence, I kissed her lips. She stared at me with her face turning tomato red. I could see it in her eyes that if I tried anything more she would surely be in tears.
 
I quickly said “I am sorry Uma. I could not resist your beauty”. Uma stared back at me without saying anything. I understood she was at her breaking point because I had surely pushed her too much. She emptied her glass and said “Krishna I want to go home now”.
 
I settled the bill and we left from there. In the car she sternly said “Krishna I am never ever going to come out with you again. You seem to get some sort of a thrill in embarrassing me in front of everyone”.
 
I pulled over to the side of the road and said “Uma you have understood it all wrong, I have only been pushing you to bring you out of your shyness for your own good. I want you to come out of your shell and mingle with people, get comfortable with them, that’s all. Now I will no longer try anything. I am sorry”.
 
She sat quietly without looking at me, I continued driving and we reached home soon. No words were spoken between us, I got fresh and changed into my tracks and sat in the hall watching TV. Uma went to my room and freshened too and came back wearing a new transparent baby doll nighty.
 
This is the first time I saw her wearing this and I was in awe of her sexiness. I was surprised when I noticed that she wore this dress without any inners, one because it is quite transparent leaving nothing to imagination and second it barely covers her butt.
 
She came to me and asked “can I bring you a beer Krishna”? Without looking at her and said “no”. She brought a beer anyway and sat with me. She said “please understand Krishna, a lot happened today with me. I know you took care of it but I also need time to get over it”.
 
“You cannot keep pushing me to do things while ignoring what I am going thru. Please give me time and I will do anything you expect from me. If public display or experiences excites you then I am ready to strip naked in front of everyone right now”.
 
Her words hit me like a tornado and made me realise what a cold blooded asshole I had become. I switched off the TV and turned to her, I said “Uma I am really sorry, I didn’t realise and blindly went ahead with my asks without thinking about you. I am really sorry darling”.
 
I took the beer from her hand and asked “now where is your beer”? Uma said “Krishna I will have from yours only” and took a sip from my hand. I felt very relieved that things were getting back to normal between us again.
 
I looked at her and was dying to smooch her but I was not sure to proceed or not. She looked at me and gave me a long smooch, she said “Krishna when we are alone you don’t need to hesitate or wait for my permission”. We both smiled, I said “understood darling”.
 
The beer was over soon so I asked for another one. She seductively said “Krishna the beer can wait, I cannot…” and placed my hands on her boobs. She came closer and hugged me and kissed my lips. After the kiss she removed my clothes and waited for me to remove hers.
 
This did not strike me at first and I kept staring at her, she asked “Krishna you want to do it with my clothes on”? I felt like an idiot and came to my senses, I quickly removed her nighty. From there on I did not need instructions and we had wild sex on the sofa.
 
She made me cum in her mouth and sucked me dry. Then she brought another beer and we sat together fully naked sipping it. I asked “Uma did you ever think about completing your studies”. Uma said “what use are studies for me now Krishna”?
 
I said “Uma I don’t want to see you working as a maid forever. I want you to study and become something big in life”. Uma had tears in her eyes and she hugged me burying her face in my chest. I raised her face and smooched her and asked “now what happened darling? Did I say something wrong again”?
 
She softly said “Krishna you are truly god sent for me otherwise who would worry about me like this”. I said “Uma don’t think about all that. See we have so many family businesses, if you study then maybe you can help me manage things more effectively”.
 
She said “fine Krishna I am ready to study further but only on one condition. You will not stop me from continuing to serve as your maid”. I naughtily smiled and said “all conditions accepted Uma, otherwise how will we both survive without each other” followed by a wink.
 
Uma said “please be serious Krishna, how can I study now? I have not even completed my 12th class”? I said “here in the city everything is possible Uma”. She mockingly said “Krishna you expect a grown up woman like me to go sit with kids in the classroom now”?
 
I said “Uma who is asking you to go to college? You can enrol in distance studies and study from the comfort of your home”. Her eyes lit up like a 1000watt bulb, she screamed saying “Krishna is that even possible”?
 
I said “yes Uma, it is definitely possible. Tomorrow after you come back from your date with Rizwan I will help you with this”. Uma naughtily smiled and said “ok Krishna. I will be back very soon because I cannot wait to start again”.
 
I said “no you will not come back till I call you because I want the workers to be gone before you come. I will call you and only then you come back”. She agreed, we had a few more beers and then went to bed.
 
Today she was wild like a tigress in bed pushing me beyond my limits making love three more times till I was fully drained out. I had to stop her before we finally slept. Next morning Uma did not let me have sex with her till Mary came.
 
She said “save your seeds Krishna, Mary needs them more than I do”. Mary also came much earlier today and we had threesome sex back to back thrice. Uma ensured I released my seed inside Mary’s womb every time to increase the chances of getting Mary pregnant.
 
Then we had our first threesome bath together including one more round of intense threesome sex under the shower. Then Mary got ready and left, Uma served me breakfast which we again ate together. Uma wore jeans with a deep neck top with matching inners and heels.
 
This time she got ready without my help selecting what to wear and was looking much more sexier and confident than before. She softly asked “Krishna can I take 4 condoms today”? I teasingly asked “Uma are you sure you will need so many”?
 
Uma blushed and said “I know I will need three for sure, but if you don’t call by lunch time then…”. I winked at her giving her my consent. She put them in her pocket and we left in my car. We smooched and I dropped her at Mary’s store and got back home.
 
The same team of workers came in to work along with the supervisor Shiva. They were all looking around and I already knew why. Uma was not to be seen, and I kept pushing them to ensure they completed all the work today itself.
 
Shiva not being able to contain his curiosity finally asked “why is madam not to be seen today”? I casually said “madam has gone out to finish some urgent work”. They finally finished by 3pm and left with their eyes still wandering around looking for Uma.
 
After they left, I called Uma to tell her about it. She answered while panting hard “Rizwan is again working on me Krishna... Wee.. should be done in 30mins maxx…”. I hung up and understood they were having sex another bout of sex and maybe that extra condom did come handy.
 
I went to the store and called her. She came out soon after wearing a light orange slightly transparent salwar kameez suit showing the faint outline of her inners. Uma quickly sat in the car still panting heavily.
 
She said “thank god you came Krishna because if you had been more late then you might have had to carry me out of Rizwan’s place”. I asked “why what happened today Uma? Did someone catch you or…”?
 
She said “Krishna let’s quickly get home because I badly need a shower, then we will have lunch and I will tell you everything”. We got home and she went straight for her shower removing her clothes on the way.
 
She called me to join but I refused because I wanted to save my energy for what was coming soon. Uma finished her bath and wore a similar bright red baby doll nighty like last night but this time with inners.
 
She warmed the food and we ate together with her sitting on my lap and feeding me. After lunch I showed her the fully furnished quarters where she was going to live while my parents were around. She excitedly touched and felt everything like a kid in a toy store.
 
She said “I cannot believe this is going to be my house and I am going to live here Krishna”. I said “now you can arrange all your stuff in these wardrobes”. Just then my phone rang, it was the neighbourhood grocery delivery guys.
 
To Be Continued…
 
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Very good
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(15-06-2025, 12:12 PM)Saj890 Wrote: Very good

Thank You  Namaskar
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Nice update..... Keep going the same way..... I find the story is interesting..... Just make sure to make one bout of sex with emotions and sound per update to keep the erotica alive.....
Val Namaskar
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(15-06-2025, 05:09 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Nice update..... Keep going the same way..... I find the story is interesting..... Just make sure to make one bout of sex with emotions and sound per update to keep the erotica alive.....

Thanks Val, 

It all depends on the story, but I will try... Smile
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great story man and great buildup will make anyone horny
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(16-06-2025, 06:57 PM)usman19921 Wrote: great story man and great buildup will make anyone horny

Thank You  Smile
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Maid Shows Me Heaven - Part 22

 
Thank you for all your messages, please read the previous parts so you can enjoy this better…
 
She said “I cannot believe this is going to be my house and I am going to live here Krishna”. I said “now you can arrange all your stuff in these wardrobes”. Just then my phone rang, it was the neighbourhood grocery delivery guys.
 
I had ordered all the stuff you would need for a functional house including bathroom and kitchen. I told Uma to wait in my bedroom while I sorted everything with the delivery guys. After they left I went to Uma and said “please arrange everything in my parent’s room and yours”.
 
She came back about an hour later saying “I have arranged everything just like in your bathroom”. I said “good the appliances and cutlery for your house is also out for delivery and should arrive anytime now”.
 
She said “Krishna why would I need all that when I can cook here in your kitchen”? I replied “Uma I want to make your house fully self-sufficient”. The stuff soon arrived and I had them deliver everything directly to her place.
 
There were two delivery guys, one was middle aged and one in his early 20s, I did not bother to ask their names but both were surely drooling over Uma. They were staring at her as if they had never seen any woman like her before.
 
I let Uma take charge because this was her house. Uma was coordinating nicely with both of them totally lost in the work and ignorant that she was still in her baby doll nighty of course with inners this time but still was lots of eye candy for them.
 
They took turns working closely (physically closely too) with her frequently touching her assets without eliciting any reaction from her. Just then I got a call on my cell and stepped out of that place door but still keeping an eye inside.
 
Uma was standing on a step stool while both of them stood on either sides of her handing her the items which she wanted to arrange herself. When the elder one was not handing her anything his hands were resting on her waist or butt.
 
Uma looked at him and he quickly removed his hand but as soon as she turned away he placed it back gently caressing her butt cheeks. I kept looking from outside from a sharp angle so no one could easily spot me because something inside me said this was going to get interesting.
 
She turned to him again staring at him but he didn’t remove his hand, instead he rubbed her butt harder and even squeezed her butt cheeks gently. Now the young lad placed his hand on her legs feeling them up and down till her upper thighs.
 
She turned the other side to look at him, he smiled and winked at her. Interestingly not a word was spoken except the stuff to be arranged. Uma ignored both of them and resumed her work. The older guy got bolder and touched her pussy quickly rubbing it making her jerk.
 
She looked at him nodding a no to him. He instead felt her pussy again a little more longer this time and then licked his fingers. I think she must have been wet and he had found out when he touched over her panties.
 
He was tasting her juices while she kind of gave up and looked the other way. The boy came in front of her, his face was at the same level of her boobs. He directly cupped her boobs from over her clothes and buried his face in her cleavage.
 
Now Uma probably unable to contain her arousal held the back of his head tightly mashing him further against her tits. The older guy pulled her thong panty to the side revealing her pussy and leaned closer while trying to lick it from behind.
 
Uma now looked at the door and felt relieved not finding me there so she smiled turning back and arched her butt backwards more onto his face. The older guy seized this chance and spread her butt cheeks while hungrily licking her pussy and butt hole from behind.
 
The boy now had pushed her nighty and bra to her neck and was squeezing her naked boobs while also sucking her nipples. I could see her fully enjoying the foreplay with both these guys whereas she was uncomfortable with Shiva.
 
I guessed something was making her feel very comfortable with them maybe because she was not feeling threatened at all. After a few minutes the guy from behind had his mouth firmly against her pussy and she was pushing against him too holding his head with her hand.
 
Her other hand was pushing the boy hard towards her boobs while he sucked on them. Soon Uma had a strong orgasm and her body trembled crazily making her moan AhhhhhhHHHHHHHH!!!!!. Both of them held her tightly and lowered her making her lie on the floor.
 
The boy continued sucking her nipples while the older guy opened her legs and licked all her juices. She came around within seconds and sat up on the floor with both of them sitting on either sides of her with their cocks out. Uma stared at their cocks and nodded no to them.
 
The oldie took her hand and placed it around his cock. The young lad too quickly followed and placed her other hand around his cock. She immediately pulled back her hands saying “no I cannot do this, whatever happened till now, please forget it”.
 
I could easily see that her voice lacked any strong conviction. The old guy again placed her hand back on his cock saying “madam we helped you and satisfied you nicely right? Now please do something to help us also”.
 
Uma tried to remove her hand but he held it firmly stroking his cock now. The boy also followed suit while she kept saying “no please, I cannot do this, let me go”. Now her voice was clearly hinting at next to zero reluctance. The old guy put his other hand on her pussy rubbing it again.
 
Uma kept quiet and closed her eyes taking a deep breath. The boy also slipped closer to her squeezing her boobs with his other hand. Now is when I really observed their cocks clearly. The oldie had an average dick surely smaller than mine.
 
Surprisingly the young boy had a big fat cock easily 8” long and nearly 2” thick. Both let go of her hand and now she was herself holding their cocks and stroking them. The oldie turned her face to him and tried kissing her but she managed to just touch and go to avoid him.
 
The boy was sitting much closer to her on the other side. When she turned her face away from the oldie, he was right there and he managed to kiss her lips nicely. Surprisingly she did not move her face from his at all.
She continued for a few seconds even though he was not holding her face. After the kiss the oldie said “madam, can you please use your mouth now”? I was surprised that without any second thoughts she got on all fours and took his cock in her mouth giving him a blowjob.
 
The boy lay on the floor pushing his head back between her legs. He pulled her panty fully aside bringing his mouth to her pussy. He pushed her knees wider resulting in Uma literally sitting with her pussy on his mouth.
 
Sometime later the oldie stiffened releasing his juice in her mouth and she eagerly swallowed it till the last drop also licking it clean. Then she sat up still impaled on the boy’s mouth for a minute or more. Then Uma turned around and sat in 69 on him and started stroking his big cock with both her hands and also licking it with her tongue.
 
She tried giving him a blowjob too but only managed a few inches because of his big size while she continued to stroke with her hands. The oldie got up correcting his clothes and got back to organising everything while both continued eating each other in 69 on the floor.
 
In a few minutes her body jerked and trembled again with a stifled moan Aaaaaaaaaammmmmmggggggggggg…. Mmph…. She pushed her pussy hard on the boy’s mouth surely experiencing another intense orgasm.
 
The boy also got his lucky chance to drink her juice directly from the source now. She quickly resumed sucking him and a few minutes later he too erupted in loads directly inside her mouth. Uma again quickly swallowed everything and licked him clean.
 
Now she got up and went to her bathroom and cleaned. The boy too got up and got dressed. When she came back both of them had finished organising everything. She said “Please don’t tell a word about this to anyone”.
 
The oldie said “madam, you have made my dream come true. you are a very special for me. I promise I will not tell anyone”. The boy said “madam today was my first time and you made it very special and memorable by making my fantasy come true. I too promise I will not tell anyone about this”.
 
All of them walked towards the main door and I too pretended to come in at the same time while still talking on the phone. I left with the guys after settling the bill while Uma came to the hall where I was working on my laptop.
 
It was nearing 6pm now, she brought me a beer and sat with me very quietly. She was not seeing me in the eye and constantly twiddling her fingers clearly lost in some thought. Now I decided to ask her directly and see what she would say.
 
I asked “So darling I see you really enjoyed a great time with both of them”. Uma stared at me shocked for a few seconds then she eased a bit. She softly said “I am sorry about it and will never do it again”. I knew I was pushing my luck but still I asked “when were you planning to tell me about it”?
 
She murmured something incoherently then she kept quiet. I waited pretending to work on my laptop. She softly said “yes Krishna, I admit that I enjoyed with them. I was very horny and desperate to enjoy sex with you but other things came in-between. So when they touched me the first time and then repeatedly I lost it”.
 
I said “these two are my regular delivery guys, when they come again next time will you again give in to your feelings and do it”? She said “Krishna I don’t know what to think or say, I will do whatever you tell me because I don’t want to ever cheat on you”.
 
I calmly said “Uma you have the right to live and enjoy your life. Now that you are with me, life is finally looking up for you. You are free to do what you want with whoever you want. I know you have never cheated me and you will never do it in the future also”.
 
Uma said “I don’t know what to say Krishna, despite you giving me all the freedom, I keep making the same mistakes repeatedly, first with Rizwan and today with these two. And despite this, every time you tell me I am not wrong”.
 
I smiled and said “see Uma, if you remember the first time after you enjoyed with Rizwan, when you told me about it, we enjoyed sex like crazy after that. If you ask me honestly, I am enjoying it as much as you. Today I was lucky to get a chance to watch you enjoying with both of them”.
 
“I enjoyed it so much that came even without touching my cock. I am sure you that have your answer now. Just remember to keep me informed and use protection always for your own safety, rest I will take care”.
 
She placed her hand on my crotch grabbing my cock over my clothes and said “looks like talking about me enjoying has made you really hard again, can I help you now”? I said “yes sure, but first tell me what happened today with Rizwan”.
 
To Be Continued…
 
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Maid Shows Me Heaven - Part 23

 
Thank you for all your messages, please read the previous parts so you can enjoy this better…
 
She placed her hand on my crotch grabbing my cock over my clothes and said “looks like talking about me enjoying has made you really hard again, can I help you now”? I said “yes sure, but first tell me what happened today with Rizwan”.
 
She got up and removed all her clothes and mine too and we sat together naked on the sofa sipping the same pint of beer.
 
In Uma’s words from here...
 
After you dropped me I went straight to Rizwan who was already waiting for me. On the way I met Mary and told her I will call after I am done with Rizwan. Today Rizwan was something else, we got inside the room and had 3 nonstop back to back rounds of sex.
 
Each round was much longer than yesterday as if he was on steroids or something. I was dead tired by the end of the third round, surprisingly today he himself brought condoms. Due to my tiredness, I had to take a quick nap to recover.
 
Maybe half an hour later I was woken up by the feeling of Rizwan eating my pussy again. After a few minutes he got on top and we had sex once more missionary style. I asked “Rizwan what happened to you today? Have you taken any pills”?
 
He said “I don’t know madam, I have been hard since yesterday after you left and had sex thrice with my wife last night imagining you and it was super thrilling. Today morning I did it again twice leaving her shocked. See madam even now I am hard. Can we please do once more”?
 
I shrieked “Rizwan I am really tired because of you, if you do even once more then I will surely pass out here. Then you can do the explaining to Mary”. He kept quiet and brought the dress and we did the trials. We were just in time when Mary walked in on us because it was nearing lunch time.
 
I saw you had not called so to buy more time I said “Mary I have asked Rizwan to make some more changes so I will take little more time. You carry on with your lunch, I will call you after I am done”. She looked at me strangely and whispered something in Rizwan’s ears and left.
 
After she left, I asked him what she said. He gave a sly smile and replied “Mary told me to stop getting naughty with you because you look awfully tired”. I was shocked that she had found out about me and Rizwan. Anyway Rizwan took me back inside the room and begged me to do once more.
 
I like him and as I have a weakness for him so I agreed to give him a blowjob to make him happy. To make it easier for me he lay on the mattress while I got between his legs. I sucked him for a long while but he showed no signs of cumming.
 
Now he again said “madam, please I beg, let’s do it once more”. I was feeling absolutely fine now and well rested so I agreed. This time we had sex while standing, he was literally bouncing me on his cock as if I was a weightless doll for a very long time.
 
After he had his release, he lowered me on my feet. I was so tired that I could barely stand. He made me lie down on the make shift bed and left. I saw the time and I was nearly 2.30pm and you still did not call. About 15minutes later Rizwan came to me and asked “madam how are you feeling now”?
 
I said “I am feeling much better now Rizwan”. Even before I completed talking, he flipped me on my chest and mounted me again going full speed like a machine again. I said “Rizwan, I cannot handle this anymore. I am really exhausted now”.
 
He begged “madam, please please this one last time only” and continued. Then by 3pm you called, seeing your name on screen I asked Rizwan so stop but he didn’t. Then I asked “how much time you need to finish Rizwan”? He said “only ten more minutes madam”.
 
So I answered your call while he was rocking me hard and told you to come in 30mins thinking I would also get some rest by then. Rizwan continued pounding me like a machine and I have never had so many orgasms ever before. He finished just 10minutes before you reached.
 
We quickly cleaned up and got ready. I said “Rizwan if you are going to do like today then I will never come back to you again”. He said “madam I am sorry, I have never seen anyone as beautiful and sexy as you, not even in the adult movies. See for yourself I am hard again” while placing my hand on his bulge.
 
I removed my hand and said “Rizwan you need to find another way because I cannot handle your appetite for sex”. He said “madam please understand, earlier Mary used to come 2-3 times every day, since 1 week she has also stopped coming. So what can I do now”?
 
I said “Rizwan I don’t know. You please find someone else because I surely cannot handle you”. Now my phone rang which is when you called and I rushed out of there. Rizwan kept begging me to come back again tomorrow, I left from there without answering anything. Then I met you and you know the rest”.
 
Uma’s narration ends…
 
I asked “Uma so what do you want to do about Rizwan then”? Uma said “Krishna I have his number, I will call him tomorrow morning after Mary leaves and then decide”. Uma was already stroking my cock now, she asked “Krishna do you want to go to the pub tonight”?
 
I said “I would love to but you only refused yesterday”. She said “forget yesterday Krishna, do you want to go today or not”? I excitedly said “yes Uma I am always ready”. She pulled me to my bathroom and we had a shower together along with one bout of crazy sex.
 
This time the surprising thing was that I lasted much longer than ever before. Then we got dressed, Uma wore a candy red frock with matching inners and black stockings, complimenting with heels. She used lipstick for the first time. I asked “Uma where did you get this”?
 
She said “Mary gave me a few along with nail enamel also and taught me how to use it”. I got into the car while Uma locked the house and gate and sat with me. She was carrying herself very confidently now and no longer shy. I was delighted seeing her quick transformation.
 
She said “Krishna let’s go to the same pub where your friend’s hangout”. I asked “Uma are you sure you want to go to that same place especially after what happened last time”? She confidently said “yes Krishna, I think I can handle myself now”.
 
I was surprised to hear her say this, we went to the same place and when we were walking towards the entrance everybody’s eyes were on Uma while she held my arm around her waist. She too looked around meeting everyone’s gazes and did not twitch at all.
 
We reached the table where my friends were seated and they all stood up showing respect with their eyes glued on Uma’s dress. We all sat down with Uma by my side. All my friends complimented her in the local lingo saying she is looking beautiful and hot and she confidently answered back thanking them.
 
We all got busy chatting about various things, even Uma was busy talking to my friend Sachin. After sometime she nudged and winked at me asking me to escort her to the restroom. We went to the same special needs restroom like last time and had a wild bout of sex.
 
While getting ready I asked “Uma what happened to you today”? She said “your friend Sachin was rubbing my thighs while talking with me. He even touched my panty a few times despite me pushing his hand away. That got me crazily aroused and I badly needed a release so I called you”.
 
I asked “Sachin touched you and you let him”? She said “he did it even last time, remember I told you. Since you did not react or mind, so I thought why make a fuss at the table and ruin everyone’s mood, since no one saw it, I kept quiet”. I was shocked and speechless now.
 
We went back to the table and again the same sarcastic comments about Uma like last time repeated in English. Before I could say anything, Uma politely interrupted and said “I am sorry I don’t understand English very well yet, can you please tell me in the local lingo”?
 
I was already panicking where this was getting to. Sachin shamelessly repeated it verbatim in the local lingo. I looked at Uma expecting her to walk out of here. She calmly said “Sachin the first time I came here with Krishna, you felt up my butt. Today you felt up my thighs and panty”.
 
Everyone now stared wide eyed at Sachin who did not have a face to show. Uma continued “I did not object because I did not want ruin the mood on the table and also thought you will stop but you did not”. She looked at the others and said “I am sure you all have girlfriends, do you all feel fine sharing her with each other”?
 
Except the background music there was pin drop silence at the table. Uma said “are none of you man enough to answer my question? Your friend sitting next to you touches and fingers your girlfriend and you are going to keep quiet about it”?
 
Avinash my other friend quickly said “Uma we are all very sorry and apologize on Sachin’s behalf for what happened. We promise you that this will never repeat again”. Everyone except us got up and went to the exit pulling Sachin with them.
 
I looked at Uma and said “phew that was something Uma, I am out of words. I don’t think I could have handled it like this”. She said “don’t worry Krishna, you only taught me how to stand up for myself”. After about 15minutes later everyone came back.
 
Sachin immediately apologised to Uma and left. Everyone else sat at the table and now they were only talking in the local lingo engaging Uma. Soon the music got louder with some hit dance numbers playing. Uma turned to me and asked “Krishna do you want to dance with me”?
 
My head was already reeling with her new changed behaviour, without waiting for my answer she got up and pulled me to the dance floor. She made me hug her from behind like I always do at home while swaying slowly with the music.
 
She herself smooched me a few times in front of everyone and all eyes were on us. It did not matter a wee bit to her now. After sometime she asked “Krishna can we dance like that couple over there”? The couple she was pointing to were doing naughty stuff under the cover of dancing.
 
I was really shocked and shitting bricks now. Uma held my hand around her waist and started swaying her body and mine with the music also grinding her butt against my crotch very stealthily. The shy and uncomfortable girl from yesterday had suddenly transformed into a modern day bold woman without any worries or shyness.
 
This was much more transformation than I was expecting and right now I did not have the balls to stop her or tell her anything so I continued dancing quietly. After sometime she turned around and kissed me and said “Krishna do you want to go back to the table now”?
 
I said “yes, good idea Uma”. We sat again at the table while Uma poured another round of beers and looked at everyone. I saw all my friends were as dazed as I was because of her actions today. Soon I settled our bill and we left from there.
 
I remained speechless thinking about her till we reached home. After we got fresh and settled on the sofa, Uma brought a beer and sat in my lap. She said “Krishna I hope you did not mind my behavior with your friends today”?
 
To Be Continued…
 
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Uma becoming sluttier.
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