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Lovely story...... I know it's going to be a hotter story ahead in the future updates
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Very good few chapters
Sexy too. Hope this story gives us an amazing ride.
As is the customary for writers to make wimp husbands that the wife willy nilly betray, which is nearly every story. Can we have one where the husband slowly is made aware by the wife the demand of the job, how she must dress sexy and act sexy? that once she is out of the house she will show her cleavage and wear sexy clothes and get felt up. Maybe have an inner turmoil down this path for this couple. Maybe he will slowly help her buy dresses and stuff as it seems he is good guy that wants what his wife wants. Maybe rahman can help Fathima make his brother understand that this new sexy fathima is best of her and maybe in this process also help fathima become sexy.
Just my two cents (maybe five cents)
best of luck
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Hoping that this story wont stop abruptly
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Fathima is like an onion. Revealing her secrets and thoughts one after another.
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Will she get a house for her family in elite properties by adjusting with d'souza
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Dont have affair with rahman. Let her have the desires outside and earn more.
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As long as person like Robert exist, she can sale even 20L worth property to 1 crore
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A good beginning so far. Kindly fix the Update number. It should be 6 and not 5.
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Tonight!! Making it hotter ,, and fathima making a unexpexcted encounter.. any guesses?
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Fathima should join the game seriously.