[rp7575]

Story aap badiya likhte ho thank you

[HBK♡♡]

Wow awesome great update,
Supriya ki choot puri mast ho gayi

[samcoolpatil007]

Kitne logo ko lagta hai ki story has become boring since this chapter with Vikram has started.?

No excitement, nothing...

[Salma Khan]

Super hot update i like very much Vikram Supriya Chemistry and sex scenes

[Aman34]

Bhai yaar sex scene ko aur detail me likho please

[val.coutinho]

Kitne logo ko lagta hai ki story has become boring since this chapter with Vikram has started.?

No excitement, nothing...

Bhai writer ko apni story likhne do..... Story complete hone par hi kuch samaj aayega..... Beech mein hi conclusion par pahuch kar writer ka hausla mat kharab karo.....

Let's see where the story is leading to..... Then we can decide it's bad or good..... Romantic or slutty or boring.....

So far the story is going on good.... There's a bright side and a dark side to it...... Let's hope the ending is a happy one for all of them..... Especially for Supriya

[Sriya2]

Maine koshish toh kari thi Vikram ki story ko jaldi fast forward karne ki… tab bhi log khush nahi they…. Anyway…. Main aage ka suspense nahi spoil karungi… but wait and watch.


Ab main story jaldi se aage nikaal du toh mujhe aap kuch na kehna… waise aage bhi badani hai mujhe story, yahan toh stuck nahi rahungi na.

[qazmlp]

Bhai writer ko apni story likhne do..... Story complete hone par hi kuch samaj aayega..... Beech mein hi conclusion par pahuch kar writer ka hausla mat kharab karo.....

Let's see where the story is leading to..... Then we can decide it's bad or good..... Romantic or slutty or boring.....

So far the story is going on good.... There's a bright side and a dark side to it...... Let's hope the ending is a happy one for all of them..... Especially for Supriya

Happy Ending ek se zyada characters ke liye ho tabb sahi rahega, Supriya obviously, lekin saath me Atul, Iqbal, Disha aur Kirti bhi.

[sushilt20]

Superb update and nice story

[val.coutinho]

Happy Ending ek se zyada characters ke liye ho tabb sahi rahega, Supriya obviously, lekin saath me Atul, Iqbal, Disha aur Kirti bhi.

Sahi kaha aapne..... Main toh chahta hu ki yeh story agar love story ki taraf jaa rahi hai toh kisi ka bhi dil na toote.... Bas sab ko happy ending mile...... Seperation ke baad life partner bhi mile..... Kriti ko milni chahiye lekin rahul ho nahi..... Atul, Iqbal, Disha, sab ko...... 

Bas ab dekhna yeh hai ki Sriya is story ko kaise aur kab sahi mod par lati hai.... Kya gajab dhaati hai agle update se lekar end Tak.....

[val.coutinho]

Maine koshish toh kari thi Vikram ki story ko jaldi fast forward karne ki… tab bhi log khush nahi they…. Anyway…. Main aage ka suspense nahi spoil karungi… but wait and watch.


Ab main story jaldi se aage nikaal du toh mujhe aap kuch na kehna… waise aage bhi badani hai mujhe story, yahan toh stuck nahi rahungi na.

Sriya story acchi jaa rahi hai... Ab fast forward aur slow ya rewind mat karna.... Jaise aap likh rahi ho waise hi likhna.... Bas Vikram ka dark side nikal dena koi scene banake.... 

Aapki writing skills par koi shaq nahi hai..... Mujhe pata hai aap is story se hum sab readers ko khush kar dogi.....

[arvind274]

Nice.

[PINK ANGEL]

Nice ... Story aage badne lagi

[Rohanx40]

Hello Sriya2
agar yeh real story hai to jaise dil kare likhti jao hum readers ko koi right nahi story ko change kane ke bare me bolne ka jisse dil karta hai likhti jao story complete hone ke baad decide kar lege
But agar yeh story only entertainment ke liye likh rahi ho to slowly slowly details me likho jisse sex ke full maze le hum sabhi readers
Because sex stories me sex scenes important hote hai so please sex scenes detail me likho baki story ko fast forward karna ho to kar lo no problem

This is my humble request to you

[exbiixossip2]

next update

[Salma Khan]

Next updates please

[sexypreeti]

Maine koshish toh kari thi Vikram ki story ko jaldi fast forward karne ki… tab bhi log khush nahi they…. Anyway…. Main aage ka suspense nahi spoil karungi… but wait and watch.


Ab main story jaldi se aage nikaal du toh mujhe aap kuch na kehna… waise aage bhi badani hai mujhe story, yahan toh stuck nahi rahungi na.

Aapne jo likha hai aur originally planned tha, waise hi chalo...Please don't worry about "Individual" perspectives because it is impossible to satisfy everyone. So fast forward karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...

So far you must have already seen that the majority of your readers like it the way your story is going, so please continue that way without changing anything...

[val.coutinho]

Aapne jo likha hai aur originally planned tha, waise hi chalo...Please don't worry about "Individual" perspectives because it is impossible to satisfy everyone. So fast forward karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...

So far you must have already seen that the majority of your readers like it the way your story is going, so please continue that way without changing anything...

Thank you Preeti for supporting and joining us the majority readers list who are liking the story the way it's going ahead....

[Sriya2]

Thank you Val, Preeti and baaki sabhi ko 

 

Koi meri help kar sakta hai ye figure out karne mein - How do I add a poll on this thread?

[PINK ANGEL]

Logo ko khush krne ke chakkar m story ki lg jaygi pr loog fir bhi khush nai honge . You are writing good.
Kesi ki nai suno bs story aage bdati jao .
Next update jaldi Dene ki koshish krna