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You publish the story of vikram from first as some of the user may not read and it's difficult them to understand the plot if you start from end.
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I said early every author is having his own imagination and his own writing ability. We are not paid subscriber to criticize anyone. If any issue in any Story inform the writer where he is lagging ior what can be added in polite way. It's writer choice. In this world nobody inferior or superior.my apologies if I rude to anyone.
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Hey bro take suggestions but ultimately you should decide how to right. All the fingers are not equal. Some like the story some not. If you decided You start the story
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Hey bro if I remembered the story ends with son knows about mom affair with vikram and vikram takes her to bedroom and son is planning for something.