Adultery Rich, hot, haughty married women trapped by old dirty cunning care taker (completed)
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I gave update to Video Games story also...please read and encourage guys
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#84
When will be the next update.....
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#85
Very hot
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(01-06-2025, 03:33 PM)opendoor Wrote: Roopali


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(30-05-2025, 11:23 AM)opendoor Wrote: guys, i received some constructive criticism about the clumsiness of the conversation between Narsing and Lakshmi.  I edited that part to make it clear who is talking what.. hope now its better..  i had to use hindi to get the right emotions out of Narsing, Lakshmi

Disappointed with this decision not every body knows hindi bro atleast put English conversation in bracket. Started very well and now only hindi readers will understand the story and others are going to miss the plot.

Most the writer start story in English section and after sometimes they change it to hindi it's better u can start in hindi forum if you want to write in hindi.
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(01-06-2025, 11:20 PM)needhotku Wrote: Disappointed with this decision not every body knows hindi bro atleast put English conversation in bracket. Started very well and now only hindi readers will understand the story and others are going to miss the plot.

Most the writer start story in English section and after sometimes they change it to hindi it's better u can start in hindi forum if you want to write in hindi.

relax bro.. i dont want this to turn into another language war :-)

the story is intended for global audience with some local flavor .. going forward conversations will be in english .. each can translate into their local language and enjoy...

but those who make noise should also have the courtesy to acknowledge the efforts of writers .. simple Like, Comment, Rate....
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#90
Bro , r we up fr some Booker prize lvl content...
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#91
When is update coming bro?
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#92
Please update this hot story.
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(02-06-2025, 11:55 PM)hotandluking Wrote: Please update this hot story.

please click on Like
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#95
very hot narration
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#98
Pics r too good bro , But pls not some r missing the sexy appeal of married 30s. Else perfect
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Note to my dear readers
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This is a slow burner, will need time to develop the story, this is not a regular slam bang type story.. lot of eroticism , seduction, voyeuristic activities and some rural forest centric mysteries will be there

as  a write this is a new gonre for me and i have to spend lot of time to think, gather thoughts and write the content and of course collecting right pics is a challenge.. as i am trying to keep the pics as natural as possible (devoid of AI , Photoshop)

please bear with me.. i will try to give atleast 1 update every week if not more... however it depends on your encouragement also.. if you click Like, Comment, Rate then i can speed up things
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(05-06-2025, 11:33 AM)opendoor Wrote: Note to my dear readers
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This is a slow burner, will need time to develop the story, this is not a regular slam bang type story.. lot of eroticism , seduction, voyeuristic activities and some rural forest centric mysteries will be there

as  a write this is a new gonre for me and i have to spend lot of time to think, gather thoughts and write the content and of course collecting right pics is a challenge.. as i am trying to keep the pics as natural as possible (devoid of AI , Photoshop)

please bear with me.. i will try to give atleast 1 update every week if not more... however it depends on your encouragement also.. if you click Like, Comment, Rate then i can speed up things

Photoshops often do the job buddy!! , unless johny sins represents some desi ramlal ,Or some handsome chiseled 70 yr old represents narsing...
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