Adultery The Facilitator

[Ragasiyananban]

What next

[Yash121]

Waiting for next

[Harry Jordan]

Its been a while since I commented in this story so here we go. Last Week I did a re-read of the story from the start for my timepass and I once again applaud ClearLover for the wonderful setting and the character dynamic you have brought in this story. So I would like to share the perfect parts and the flawed part of the story from my perspective and opinion here. 


Kunal : Now what can I say , I liked Kunal as a character in this story because to some extent he was breath of fresh air from the "Submissive Cuck Husband" roles we usually see in stories like this. But in all honesty , the damage to his character was indeed severe considering in the early chapters he expressed the need to see his wife and her lover be intimate , thus showing that there is an ounce of "cuckold" in him. But then the character took a detour and then decided to stand and defend his identity. But the damage was already done , and now many readers only see him as the looser in this whole situation. Though I disagree , I think the detour ended a boon to the character because now it has the potential to truly be an important aspect to the story. Like the last chapter said , he can be the hero of his own story. Finally find the truth and be free. In a way the recent chapters regarding him was more of a masochist porn story where he is constantly being insulted for his existence. There is a whole lot of flaws in his character when it comes to his identity , he is often portrayed simple but at times accepts the blame for something he never did. His repressed personality suddenly takes a u turn in the recent chapters and he starts to act a lot more "chauvinistic" than before , thus ruining the character from the early chapter where he was never that guy. In a way I hope when the author resumes , we eventually see whether Kunal gets his justice or not.


Priya : She is undoubtebly the title character , but that doesn't mean she is a good person. Basically she is the expected Villain of the story. Whatever this family has endured and has eventually broken apart , it is all her doing. Because she wanted revenge against Esha for ruining her career and life. And she has left no stone unturned making sure her life is a shambled mess. Esha is now a divorcee , did infidelity , got pregnant with another man's child while married and now barely gets to see her own son. And in a way I like her character as a villain because she is unapologetic regarding her actions. She just wants to play Esha's god and control her life in all aspects not caring what she looses or whether she suffers. For Priya , Esha is her favorite toy , sometimes she will take care of it , while other times , she will ruin it out of frustration. She is the ultimate position of power at this moment , controlling people's life and playing with them as puppets. Maybe she knows she has unknowingly ruined Kunal's life but she doesn't care. That is why she is the Facilitator , she easily deleted Kunal from Esha's life and replaced him with Aniket , but that also created a small bug in the existence of Aditya who Esha had to loose temporarily. That is an unexpected setback she has faced in her game of control. The flaws in her character is somewhat minimal since her actions suits her personna of being the villain of the story. Now how Kunal takes his revenge on her or will he take any revenge on her. That remains to be seen , or read in this case LOL. As a reader the only future I can feel for Priya is a complete redemption for her character and transformation for her to see the error in her ways OR the consequences become soo severe for Priya that her character and her mentality is assasinated in a brutal way possible.


Esha : I honestly laugh everytime I read her arc as a wife. She is not a wife , she is a slut doing the chores of a wife. That is Esha's identity. Apparently she was loyal and did 'Love' Kunal , but then Aniket entered her life with his big cock and she simply said FU to Kunal and claimed her so called 'Freedom' she was missing in her life. And bare in mind , this is the same woman who had a 'Love' marriage , that's right , 'Love' marriage with Kunal. The very Kunal she was smitten by in her college days , the very Kunal with whom she dreamed of a life and built a family with. In a blink of an eye , Esha simply left him and jumped on Aniket's cock and thrived in the pleasure he gave her.  And throughout her character arc , not once did she show any remorse or guilt towards Kunal , even when she was feeling guilty of her actions , her point of concern was only Aditya. Not once did she thought about Kunal's emotions or what he will go through. Even during her divorce process , her only concern revolved around Aditya and then without even a single thought about Kunal , she enjoyed her sexual moments and romantic bliss with Aniket without a worry. Even in her dual mind episode , she confessed that she wished she never met Aniket. Not that she loved Kunal , she never thought about her own old moments with Kunal , even during that manic episode her mind was engulfed by the sex she had with Aniket and how much of a bigger and better fucker he was. Two times , two times Esha claimed she still loves Kunal in a way , but not one of her actions or her thought process has shown that she loved him. The only time she showed some concern was when she refused to screw Kunal over to gain full custody of Aditya. That is the only time I saw Esha show some level of concern or feeling towards Kunal. Other than that , she has completely ignored Kunal from her life despite claiming he still matters. Atleast with Priya , she is honest about her hatred. But Esha , she is a different level of a hypocrite. I hope in the future chapters , the consequences of her actions eventually take effect and we see her face some level of tough situations that she has to face.



This is my perspective regarding the characters in the story. To me I see the story has many flaws but the biggest plus point to this story is how there is no "good" character to the extent. Every character has some flaws and issues that makes it hard to pick a side. At times I feel Kunal should die or commit suicide and put an end to his suffering. There are also moments where I think Esha should suffer a miscarriage for the blatant betrayal and heartbreak she has committed. And then sometimes I hope Priya gets the harshest treatment imaginable and die a slow and painful death. But like I said , it is the nature of the story and that is where the author has succeeded in. The story focuses on human emotions and it does a great job bringing that emotion out of the readers when reading this story.


MY TAKE ON THE FUTURE OF THE STORY :

Now this is just my perspective and not what I want the author to do. This is basically a short idea I have in my mind ever since I read the story. Lot of you know I have started a story of my own in my thread and co-incidentally many of the early chapters were similar to this story. Maybe it clawed into me at that time I don't know LOL but regardless this is what I envision the future chapters of the story.


There has to be some sort of unique route with the story if you want the story to stand out and ever since the reading till the last chapter update , I cannot help but see that this story has perfectly set up a romantic angle that can culminate between Priya and Kunal. And that can be very unique compared to the love stories we know today. They aren't exactly the match made in heaven , they're not the perfectly compatible individuals. But their characters can go through an interesting dynamic if they go through a romantic angle with each other. This can open a different aspect to the story where Kunal will finally get an improvement arc on himself and finally see his flaws and rectify it and be a better version of himself. His outreach and outlook towards life and lifestyles change and thus he finds a different perspective where he finds a deeper connection with Priya than he did with Esha. And at the same time , Priya too understands the importance of a relation and sees the positive side of a married life and thus her perspective towards marriage as being a product of 'Patriarchy' and 'Chauvinism' changes and see that there are men like Kunal who are willing to make a relationa and marriage work. Maybe being with Kunal , Priya realizes that Esha never actually cared for Kunal as a person and Kunal has more qualities as a person than her percieved mind of an average guy has. So their dynamic eventually uplifts each other and eventually Esha is the one who ends up being the looser of the story as she looses Kunal for good and has to raise Aditya in a shared custody situation. On the context of the story , the initial belief that Kunal was being replaced by Aniket in Esha's life is shattered and the reality was that it was Esha that was replaced by Priya in Kunal's life. The story can eventually end when Esha visits Kunal's place to leave Aditya there and she sees how Priya has replaced her in the house she once built with Kunal. That way she can eventually realize her mistake and find closure and both couple ends up having their happy ending. That is just my perspective , because the story lover in me sees the potential a Kunal and Priya romance can bring here. A unique love story between a repressed man and a dominant woman but rather than the power dynamic , their relation is built on feelings and other emotions. A unique take from the usual 'Girl Boss' stories. Where the qualities of a submissive man is highlighted and how a relation like that under some circumstances can actually work wonders. 


This is just my take , that's it from me. I wish clearlover well and I pray he recovers soon and eventually FINISH HIS STORY.



Wishing nothing but the best for not just the Author , but all the readers as well.

           Yours Truly

 HARRY JORDAN 

[aravindkkumar08]

Harry Jordan it's a good climax many wishes for. Hope author may give permission to you to finish the story. Spoiler alert: some of them not the way you think. They want husband Tobe cuck. Or husband my die etc. overall this is my perspective and I am individually not blaming anyone.

[LustyLeo]

I thought we got an update @harry you fooled me.

[aravindkkumar08]

Atleast it's good to get fooled.

[LustyLeo]

priya already not interested in marriage and she wants to have multiple partners and enjoy various big sized cocks. How she will accept to be wife of a wimp.

[Harry Jordan]

priya already not interested in marriage and she wants to have multiple partners and enjoy various big sized cocks. How she will accept to be wife of a wimp.

There is more to life than "Big Size Cocks" and "Being a Wimp". Kunal has already stated he isn't a Wimp before the divorce so the love angle can work. Hell Priya can be the one to transform Kunal from being a chode to a real maverick in bed. It can be possible.

[Yash121]

Outstanding story

[Losliyafan]

Where is the author(s) ?????????????????

[Harry Jordan]

Where is the author(s) ?????????????????

No idea , its been a month since he gave a last update regarding his typhoid sickness. I hope he is doing well. Regardless , I think the readers here should not keep high hopes on whether this story will continue. The author did promise but judging his inactivity , I believe this story is paused for now. Whether the story gets updates or he returns and completes it , only the future can tell.

For now , its better to be just optimistic and not expect anything happening soon.

[Harry Jordan]

Just a quick question to readers. Just for fun. Who do you think is the worst female character in this story? Is it Priya or is it Isha? Regardless the answer , explain why she is the worst. I wanna see some perspectives of these characters.

[RCF]

Just a quick question to readers. Just for fun. Who do you think is the worst female character in this story? Is it Priya or is it Isha? Regardless the answer , explain why she is the worst. I wanna see some perspectives of these characters.

Female character who causes pain to others with no purpose is the worst character so I guess you got my point.

[Harry Jordan]

Female character who causes pain to others with no purpose is the worst character so I guess you got my point.

Loud and Clear , got it!

[Harry Jordan]

Hey guys , like all the readers here , I am a big fan of this story as well. But it seems like the Author has either abandoned this or going through something. Regardless it just seems that the story might stay unfinished for a long time because the author haven't visited the sight for like a month now. I hope everything is alright with him right now and hopes one day he completes this story.

But lately , it has been bothering me on how this story has been incomplete , so , in the middle of writing my own "Love Sex and War" saga , I spend some time with this one and in a short span decided to write my own version of how this story can go forward and in the end conclude. Note that I am not taking over the story , just sharing my perspective on how this story can conclude and thus I roughened the plot with lesser words and illustrated it in short.
Keep in mind , I am sharing this with everyone not to offend the author , but to just provide some sort of temporary closure for the incomplete story and to keep hope that one day the author returns and completes the story.

                                                                                                                                                                 STORY FORWARD

Kunal learns that Priya is responsible for his marriage going into shambles so he decides to get close to her. But Priya doesn't bother reciprocating or caring about Kunal and Kunal realizes his shortcomings. Realizing that he cannot get close to Priya being an average family man , Kunal decides to push a transformation in himself. He starts a workout routine and eventually builds up a physique and endurance on his own. This also helps in coping with his own hurt and heartbreak with Esha. A friend character is introduced and he helps Kunal get hook up for casual small dates. These small hookups help Kunal manage his sanity.

Upon going through this transformation phase , he realizes the shortcomings he had in his marriage. He understands that had he done this sooner in his marriage , Esha would've never even considered an affair with Aniket. Understanding his own actual mistakes in the past , he starts to develop a fresh perspective in life. He succeeds in  getting close to Priya and Priya is also impressed by the change in Kunal. She believed that Kunal was just some average guy and was always skeptical why Isha would fall for him in the first place. But spending time with Kunal up close , Priya learns how different is Kunal in the inside and outside. Despite being raised in an orthodox family setting , Kunal shares liberal values and often initiates the importance of a shared responsibilities.

Even though Kunal's intention was to get close to Priya to understand the truth behind why Priya does all this. Kunal gets a fresh perspective of life from her point of view. They interact on their work processes. Kunal pulls some strings and provides Priya with offers on the fields she was once interested in. This sparks Priya to actually enjoy her profession. This makes Priya to get close and relate to Kunal as a person. This also shows Kunal the real errors he did in his marriage which resulted in its destruction. Kunal learns how he treated his marriage for most part as just responsibilities and thus never actually tried to live it and embrace it , he understood that inorder to give importance to family values , he left Isha on her own , abandoning their own relationship and giving importance to the chastity of the marriage. Kunal finally realize that even though Isha made the grave mistake of cheating , it was his abandonement and bland approach to their marriage which resulted in Isha making those mistakes. This results in Kunal understanding why Isha did what she did. Plus on being close to Priya , on finding the truth , Kunal learns the real truth about Priya. 

Kunal finds Priya's mother and eventually finds out the real story of Priya's life rather than what she told everyone. Priya's mother was actually an ex-prostitute who ran away with a wealthy man. But the wealthy man's family was against their relationship and the nature of the woman. One day , the wealthy man died leaving Priya's mother helpless raising an infant Priya , but the wealthy man left enough wealth for her to survive. Priya's mother cooked up a story claiming that Priya's father abandoned her mother so that Priya never goes in search for him. But this cooked up story results in a deep hatred towards men in Priya's mind which only grows as she ages up.

Kunal upon learning this and the truth regarding how Isha ruined Priya's thesis in their college days , makes him realized that Priya herself is a victim of her own trauma. And she is doing this , controlling other people's lives so that she can share her hurt and trauma with others. In Priya's  eyes , it is the world's fault because of her situation. If tomorrow the world learns that she is a Prostitute's daughter , she will not recieve the accolade and fame she has right now. Which is why she created a lie of a dead mother to gain sympathy from others. This revelation and the truth actually makes it worse for Kunal's mind as he realize he was falling for the woman who ruined his marriage. He starts to understand that despite of Priya's action , despite of the existence of a controlling , manipulative Priya , there is a lonely broken woman inside her that is always scared that one day her life will crumble down and she will have no one else to blame anymore. 

Thus , Kunal tries his best to make Priya see reason  , to understand that there is more to life than just looking into other people's lives and manipulating others. But Priya only partially sees his perspective and is still holding onto her insecurities and deep hatred she has for Isha along with deep misandrist thoughts. Priya often insults Kunal to the point one day she crosses the line and claims that despite all the changes , Kunal is still the same. She points out that even now if Isha returns to his life , he will welcome her back with open arms. This even though upsets Kunal , but it opens Kunal's eyes to his own perspective. He understands that a relationship between two people is more important than the responsibilities of a marriage because a marriage will work as long as both the people want it to work. He finally understands where it went wrong with Isha and thus he finds his closure in that failed marriage. Finally , Kunal is able to see the big picture and understand that he needs to move on. But he also know that he cannot truly move on with Esha and Priya being in close proximity in his life. Kunal eventually makes the decision , to move away , to settle in the USA. He meets up with Isha and the lawyers and forms a new agreement considering Aditya's care. Kunal gives the majority custody of Aditya to Esha and officiates an agreement that Esha will take care of Aditya and his studies until the higher education after which Kunal will welcome Aditya in the US for higher studies. He is also allowed to visit Aditya on a yearly basis on his choice whenever he likes. And inorder to have Aditya still be around in his homely environment , Kunal hands over the ownership of his apartment house in Mumbai to Aditya's name and since Aditya is still a child , Isha is given the temporary ownership of the house. Esha protests stating the house was Kunal's hardwork. But Kunal insists its for the best and that he needs to be away to finally move on.

Kunal finally confesses his feelings to Priya , tells her that he has fallen for her but he understands if she doesn't love him back after knowing the truth about her. Kunal emotionally states that he only wishes the best for her even though she ruined his life. Kunal wishes that one day Priya will find true love and will experience the wonderful feeling of love and thanks Priya to make him understand the importance of a relationship. Kunal leaves Mumbai with another broken heart but finding the much needed closure he wanted in his life.

Priya eventually has a talk with her mother and learns that Kunal knows the truth about her. She realizes that Kunal could've destroyed her after knowing her truth but he didn't , understanding that his feelings for her was genuine. A few days later , she gets a mail from MIT with a job offer she always dreamed of. She also learns Kunal's involvement in making this dream happen as Kunal has settled in Boston in USA where MIT is. Finally realizing how much Kunal cared for her , Priya starts to finally reciprocate Kunal's feelings and thus goes to USA and confess her love back to him. They happily embrace and start a life together with a fresh perspective with Kunal stating they can marry when Priya wishes to. 

When all of this was happening , things were going intense in Esha's life. Esha was lost in her pregnancy care and the untapped love she was feeling for Aniket. So when she saw a changed Kunal in one of those unexpected visit during Aaditya's care , she was shocked at first. A part of her was surprised that her average husband could transform like this , while another part of her was greatful that Kunal was finally moving on and not suffering from her mistakes. But when Kunal really started to ignore Isha and see that he no longer shows the feelings he once had for her , this started to make Isha feel disomforted. And then when she witnesses Priya's affair with Kunal , this creates a twinge of jealousy and anger in her. Esha is convinced that Priya ruined her marriage because she wanted Kunal in her life and Priya didn't care to correct as long as Esha suffered believing it. Despite all the struggles , Isha gives birth to a girl Amrita , Aniket is joyous to be a father. But that is the only good news in her life as a month later her child's birth , she recieves the heartbreaking news of her father passing away from a heart attack. Despite her best efforts to visit him one last time , Esha's mother chastises her and blames her for his passing , claiming her affair brought deep shame and depression in him which detoriated his health and sent him to his death. And with that , Esha ends up loosing her parents support and involvement in her life. Aniket regardless showers her with love and care and in return Esha starts to form a more deeper bond with him.

Aniket's family is introduced and they too are skeptical of Esha and her involvement in Aniket's life. Aniket realizes he needs to have a stronger relation with her and he cannot have their child born without them becoming a couple. Aniket talks with Kunal to fast track their divorce and Kunal happily agrees , the divorce is officiated and Aniket marries a five month pregnant Esha in a lavish setting in the city. Some of Aniket's family welcomes her after childbirth. Esha could no longer work in her bank considering the nature of her divorce and her affair being public. Aniket's family insist that the women in their family don't work so she can live her life in royalty like others. This doesn't bode well with Esha and her mindset. And thus for the first time in her mind , she could see the difference between the marriage with Kunal and a life with Aniket. With Kunal , she had an identity of her own , building a person for herself. But in Aniket's high life , she was just a showpiece , a mere decoratory piece for lavish parties. Aniket realizes the turmoil in Esha and thus decide to invest and create a small start up in Esha's name much to the dislike of his family members. Esha feels happy that Aniket understands her turmoil to which Aniket states he learned it from Kunal , claiming that as one of the positives he saw in Kunal.

But soon tragedy strikes as Aniket dies in a car accident leaving Esha traumatized , she was all alone with no Priya to help her as she already moved to USA and now was left to care for both Aditya and Amrita on her own. Esha goes through the worst phase of her life in this period feeling lonely and built up with pressure raising two kids on her own. She returns to Kunal's apartment that now she owns temporarily to handle her finances to get some reprieve. The start up suffers some hurdles but she manages to make it work. Just as things were somehow getting better for her , Aniket's family shows up claiming Esha to be a bad influence and that they need Amrita's custody and the Startup control to them as it was made with Aniket's money. All of this new problems overwhelmed her which resulted in her health starting to detoriate. But as things were getting out of control , Priya returns to Mumbai becoming Esha's savior once again and pushes back Aniket's family's torment. Esha feels happy that her old friend returned to save her from the darkness again as they rejoiced. That is when another truth is revealed , Esha's startup would've failed a long time ago but it was saved by Kunal who helped get new contracts behind the scenes to her firm. Kunal has built a wonderful life for him in Boston and was living happily with Priya. Priya also reveals that she is three months Pregnant with Kunal's child and she married Kunal in an intimate destination wedding in Venice last year after a long thought. 

But tragedy was not ending for Esha as she got the next big blow to her life. Due to her erratic complications in pregnancy with Amrita and her health condition detorriating after Aniket's death , Isha is being diagnosed with a terminal illness that is slowly killing her. And unfortunately there is no cure. Esha starts to believe this is her consequences for the beautiful life she once had that she destroyed herself. Priya feels guilty realizing that it was her uncaged revenge that has resulted in all this , but Esha consoles her , telling her she gets to live Esha's life now. Esha requests to meet Kunal one last time.

An emotional reunion happens between Kunal and Esha at a hospital. Esha apologizes for everything and that she wishes Priya gives all the happiness to him that she couldn't. Kunal in return consols her , telling her that if there is another life time , he would still want her as his wife. Esha requests Kunal to raise Amrita as his own child which Kunal agrees. Esha gives one last kiss to Kunal embracing their love for each other as she breaths her last breath. 

Esha dies in Kunal's arms as Kunal mourns her loss. Kunal performs her last rites and takes Aditya and Amrita permanently with him and Priya to Boston.

Few months later , Priya gives birth to a girl. Upon discussing on naming her , Kunal sujjested the name Eshana , which Priya tearfully accepts. Kunal and Priya form their happy family of Aditya , Amrita and Eshana together and live a happy life in Boston.

                                                                                                                                                               Epilogue

A very very old Kunal returns to Mumbai to finally sell off his old apartment for new development in the city. Aditya is grown up and is now a well reknown baseball player in the US. Amrita after learning about her true parentage returned to India and now runs her own business in Delhi. Eshana grew closer to be with her father Kunal and thus inherited his business in Boston and is now growing it to new heights. Priya died a few months before due to natural health causes after a lifetime of romance and togetherness with Kunal. With his final days approaching , Kunal visited the one place very close to him , the very same University where Esha and Kunal first met. Especially the specific garden with the lake where the first eye contact happened. Kunal with happy tears took his marriage rings with Esha from his pocket and tossed it into the lake with a promise that in the next lifetime they will have their happy life.

                                                                                                                                                               THE END

This is my perspective of how this story can move forward and in the end conclude in a more emotional way. Not to mention , this is just one way , my mind has made many outcomes on how this story can go. As a fan of the story , my wish is opposite to majority of the readers as I do want a happy ending for Kunal and Esha. I once again iterate this is just my perspective and my head cannon as a fan and I am just sharing this now because I want to motivate the Author to complete his story and that he eventually returns. 

What do you guys think? How is my take to this story?

I wish clearlover a good recovery and a healthy life and hopes that one day he will return and complete this. I just want to share my own version of how I would envision this story to move forward and conclude. I am sharing this only to keep the readers feel engaged that the story was good enough to discuss , not to take over the author's work. I share this today with the hope that we get to see how his story actually ends. This is just my fan version , a  "what if" story. 

Also , readers can check out my own story "Love Sex and War" in my thread , I post regular updates but at times take time due to my schedule. Hope you guys enjoy that too.

Wishing you all a great day and once again hoping that clearlover returns and finished his story.

            Yours Truly
 HARRY JORDAN 

[aravindkkumar08]

Hey buddy thanks for completing a story with satisfied ending. Now no need to wait for author for when he is going to finish the story.

[Ajay Kailash]

Final nail of kunal is still pending

[NovelNavel]

Waiting for climaxx

[subbulakshumi]

Clearlover not clear how to finish the story ??

[Ahimsai Arasan]

Dont write your own version of climax in the someone else story. That is not good manners. Let author complete his version.