27-05-2025, 03:37 AM
Pain pain pain pain ......more more rahul
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Adultery Undercover Desires
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27-05-2025, 03:37 AM
Pain pain pain pain ......more more rahul
27-05-2025, 05:09 AM
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Ooooh, such good writing. I’m shaking in anger as I’m posting this. Man, Kavya was cold - didn’t just rip off the band aid, she tore him a new one and then some. Good that you didn’t make Rahul a wife beater. His morality was not compromised in this update. His honour and mental health? That may be dead… Danish is being rather upright for someone who made fun of Rahul’s inadequacy.
27-05-2025, 06:10 AM
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i really feel bad for rahul (a perfect and loving husband who was working hard for his family )
also i dont think ,its danish mistake for destroying rahul family ,its totally kavya mistake ,who did she allowed someone to seduce her and fuck her and made her fall in love with him and i hope kavya will pay the price for what she did to rahul waiting for things to turn ,where kavya will beg for forgiveness and thanks for not making rahul a cuckold let the story runs on emotions #justice_for_rahul #kavya_will_burn_in_hell
27-05-2025, 06:13 AM
very good story....
27-05-2025, 06:16 AM
very nice,hot story.
27-05-2025, 10:52 AM
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Kavya's pussy itching love,
Many relationships hurt It is good if Rahul is separated Kavya.... It is good if Tanish only fulfills Kavya's pussy desire Kavya's desire is justified Rakul is sinful Best writer best stories Complete this story when Kavya Tanish is married Kavya is a good woman Kavya is not a prostitute Don't make Kavya a prostitute.....please
27-05-2025, 03:17 PM
Damn, the way the writer brought out Rahul’s pain? Brutal but beautiful. You’re sitting there reading and suddenly you are Rahul — lost, betrayed, bleeding from a wound you can't even see....
They didn’t just cheat — they butchered his trust. This isn’t mere heartbreak; it’s soul-deep devastation. Rahul isn’t just hurting — he’s shattered, gutted by the betrayal of the two people he trusted more than anyone else in the world. His best friend — more like a brother — and his wife — the woman he built his world around — didn’t just cross a line, they set fire to everything sacred. This isn’t infidelity; it’s the collapse of everything he believed in. The silence now screams, the memories feel tainted, and the love they once shared has curdled into a cruel joke. His world hasn’t just cracked — it’s been reduced to ashes.
27-05-2025, 06:04 PM
Early update is appreciated
27-05-2025, 07:51 PM
matomaroi
27-05-2025, 10:40 PM
Great update
28-05-2025, 04:45 AM
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Bring out Feroze Bhai, the bull-like Pathaan who will
win over Kavya with his brutal lovemaking.
28-05-2025, 04:30 PM
For Rahul, this wasn’t just betrayal —
it was the kind of heartbreak that alters your sense of reality. Not strangers. Not enemies. But the two people he trusted the most — his wife and his best friend. The woman he built a life with… chose someone else while he was away trying to build a better future for them. And the man he treated like a brother… crossed a line he never should’ve even looked at. Rahul isn’t just hurting — he’s shattered. It’s not just loneliness he’s battling, it’s the collapse of everything he believed in. The love, the loyalty, the shared dreams — all feel fake now, poisoned by betrayal. Every memory stings. Every silence screams. The home he once felt safe in now feels like a graveyard of trust. And perhaps the cruelest truth of all — this destruction wasn’t caused by fate, or time… but by the very people he called his own.
28-05-2025, 09:37 PM
End of road for Rahul. Interesting. He got what he deserves.
29-05-2025, 01:52 AM
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CHAPTER – 54
Scene: Aftermath – A Difficult Road Ahead The apartment felt eerily quiet in the days after Rahul walked out. His absence lingered in every corner, every object that once belonged to all three of them. Kavya hadn’t touched his room since the night he left, and neither had Danish. Both knew that silence didn’t mean peace — it meant pain suspended in the air. Kavya had barely slept. Danish tried to stay strong for both of them, but even he knew the damage was done. The only way now… was forward. One evening, they sat on the balcony, watching the sun melt into the Mumbai skyline. Kavya rested her head on Danish’s shoulder. Her voice trembled as she finally broke the silence. Kavya: "Danish… it’s time. I need to tell my parents everything. And… I need to speak to Rahul again. I can’t keep hiding anymore." Danish looked at her — weary but proud of her courage. Danish: "Are you sure you’re ready for that? You know your parents... they won’t take this easily." Kavya nodded, her eyes welling up. Kavya: "No, they won’t. But I’ve lived my whole life trying to meet everyone’s expectations. This one… this is for me. For us. I have to do it." Scene: Kavya Calls Her Parents Kavya sat by the window in the dimly lit living room. Her phone screen glowed with her mother’s contact name. Her thumb hovered over the call button. After a deep breath, she tapped it. The dial tone rang in her ears like a ticking bomb. Kavya’s Mother (cheerfully): "Hello beta! Finally! We’ve been waiting to hear from you. How’s Rahul? He must’ve come back now, right?" (“Hello dear! Finally! We've been waiting to hear from you. How’s Rahul? He must be back now, right?”) Kavya (quietly): "Ma... ek zaruri baat karni hai... par please, beech mein mat tokna." (“Mom... I need to talk to you about something important... but please, don’t interrupt.”) Kavya’s Mother (concerned): "Kya hua beta? Sab theek toh hai na?" (“What happened, dear? Everything alright?”) Kavya: "Nahi Ma... sab kuch theek nahi hai. Rahul aur main... hum dono ke beech sab kuch sahi nahi chal raha." (“No, Mom... everything isn’t fine. Rahul and I... things haven’t been going well between us.”) Kavya’s Mother (startled): "Kya?! Tum dono ke beech? Tumne kabhi kuch bataya hi nahi!" (“What?! Between the two of you? You never said anything!”) Kavya (voice trembling): "Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha kaise bolu. Par ab aur jhooth nahi bol sakti. Ma, main kisi aur se pyaar karti hoon." (“I didn’t know how to say it. But I can’t lie anymore. Mom, I’ve fallen in love with someone else.”) (Stunned silence.) Kavya’s Father (angrily joining the call): "Kya?! Yeh kya bakwaas hai? Tum ek shaadi-shuda aurat ho!" (“What?! What nonsense is this? You are a married woman!”) Kavya: "Papa, please suno. Jis insaan se pyaar karti hoon... uska naam Danish hai." (“Papa, please listen. The man I love... his name is Danish.”) Kavya’s Father (yelling): "RAHUL KE DOST KA NAAM DANISH HAI! Tumne uske saath...! Tumhara dimaag thik hai?!" (“Danish is Rahul’s friend! You were with him…? Are you out of your mind?!”) Kavya (teary-eyed): "Main janti hoon yeh galat lagta hai. Par yeh mera sach hai. Aur main is sach se bhaag nahi sakti." (“I know it sounds wrong. But this is my truth. And I can’t run away from it anymore.”) Kavya’s Mother (disbelief and pain): "Par beta... Rahul ne toh tumhe sab kuch diya. Tum dono ki shaadi mein toh sab kuch theek tha!" (“But dear… Rahul gave you everything. Everything seemed fine in your marriage!”) Kavya: "Sab kuch sirf dikhawa tha Ma. Rahul hamesha busy rehta tha, emotionally kahin nahi tha. Main akeli pad gayi thi. Danish ne mujhe woh sukoon diya jo Rahul kabhi nahi de paya." (“It was all just for show, Mom. Rahul was always busy, emotionally absent. I felt completely alone. Danish gave me the peace Rahul never could.”) Kavya’s Father (with rage): "Toh ab tum keh rahi ho ki tum apne pati ko chod kar ek M u s l i m ladke se shaadi karogi?!" (“So now you’re saying you’ll leave your husband and marry a '. man?!”) Kavya (calm but firm): "Main sirf itna keh rahi hoon ki mujhe apne dil ki baat sunni hai, Papa. Mujhe Danish ke saath apna jeevan bitaana hai." (“All I’m saying is that I have to follow my heart, Papa. I want to spend my life with Danish.”) Kavya’s Mother (crying): "Tumhe apni Maa ki kasam Kavya... please wapas aa jao. Tum galat kar rahi ho." (“I swear on your mother, Kavya… please come back. You’re making a mistake.”) Kavya (voice breaking): "Agar yeh galti hai Ma... toh main yeh galti apni marzi se kar rahi hoon. Main thak gayi hoon sabse ladte ladte. Is baar main apne liye jeena chahti hoon." (“If this is a mistake, Mom… then I’m making it by my own choice. I’m tired of fighting everyone. This time, I want to live for myself.”) Kavya’s Father (cold and stern): "Agar tumne yeh kadam uthaya, toh humare liye tum mar chuki ho." (“If you take this step, you’re dead to us.”) Kavya (long pause, then a soft whisper): "Phir main tum dono se vida leti hoon... Ma, Papa. Mera pyaar paap ho sakta hai... par jhooth nahi hai." (“Then I say goodbye to both of you… Mom, Dad. Maybe my love is a sin in your eyes… but it’s not a lie.”) Click. The call ended. Kavya’s hands dropped to her lap, still trembling. Her tears flowed freely — not just from sadness, but from release. The weight of years of pretending, of trying to be perfect, had finally been shed. Now, all that remained was truth — and the uncertain road ahead. Scene: Kavya Calls Rahul to Talk About Divorce It had been a week since Rahul walked out of the house. The silence between them had grown heavier with each passing day. Danish had kept to himself, giving Kavya the space she needed. But that space was filled with dread. Kavya stood on the balcony, the late evening breeze brushing against her face, her phone clutched tightly in her hand. She had stared at Rahul’s name for what felt like an eternity. Her thumb finally moved. Phone ringing. Rahul (picking up, voice tired and cold): "Bolo." (“Speak.”) Kavya’s voice cracked at the sound of him — the man she had once loved, perhaps still did in some corner of her heart. Kavya (softly): "Rahul... main... main baat karna chahti hoon. Face to face. Sirf ek baar." (“Rahul... I want to talk. Face to face. Just once.”) Rahul (long pause): "Ab baaki kya reh gaya bolne ko, Kavya?" (“What’s left to say, Kavya?”) Kavya (almost pleading): "Reh gaya hai... bohot kuch. Tumse sach-much maafi maangni hai. Aur... ek faisla lena hai." (“A lot is left. I need to truly apologize to you. And... make a decision.”) Rahul (sighs): "Kahaan milna hai?" (“Where do you want to meet?”) Scene: Café by the Sea – The Final Conversation They met at a quiet café near the sea, where they'd once come in happier times. Rahul was already seated, staring blankly at the waves. Kavya approached slowly. Her footsteps felt heavier than ever. Kavya (sitting down, avoiding his eyes): "Thank you for coming." Rahul didn’t respond immediately. His face was pale, hollow. The sparkle in his eyes had dulled. Rahul (flatly): "Just say what you came to say." Kavya swallowed hard. She placed a folded piece of paper on the table — a drafted divorce petition. Kavya (voice trembling): "Main yeh... yeh sab khatam karna chahti hoon, Rahul. Officially. Hum dono deserve karte hain ek nayi shuruaat." (“I want to end this, Rahul. Officially. We both deserve a new beginning.”) Rahul (eyes widen, hands clenched): "Toh bas itna hi tha? Ek din bola pyaar karti hoon, agle din divorce de diya?" (“So that’s all it was? One day you said you loved me, the next day you're handing me a divorce?”) Kavya (tears forming): "Pyaar kiya tha tumse, dil se. Par hum dono kho gaye the ek doosre mein. Aur tum toh... kaam mein hi ghoomte rahe, Rahul." (“I did love you, from the heart. But we lost each other. And you... you were lost in your work, Rahul.”) Rahul (gritting his teeth): "Aur uska solution yeh tha? Mere dost ke saath rishte bana lo?!" (“And the solution to that was what? Sleep with my best friend?!”) Kavya winced, but didn’t flinch. Kavya (firmly): "Main galat thi. Bilkul thi. Par main jhooth nahi jee sakti thi, Rahul. Main Danish se pyaar karti hoon." (“I was wrong. Completely. But I couldn’t live a lie, Rahul. I love Danish.”) Rahul (voice cracks, deeply hurt): "Tum dono ne meri duniya ujad di, Kavya. Tum meri biwi thi... uska matlab nahi tha tumhare liye?" (“You both destroyed my world, Kavya. You were my wife… did that mean nothing to you?”) Kavya wiped her tears. Kavya (softly): "Isiliye toh maafi maang rahi hoon. Tum ek achhe insaan ho, Rahul. Tum deserve karte ho kisi aise insaan ko jo tumse poori tarah mohabbat kare. Main woh nahi hoon." (“That’s why I’m apologizing. You’re a good man, Rahul. You deserve someone who loves you completely. And I’m not that person.”) Rahul (broken voice): "Aur tum Danish ke liye sab kuch chor dogi?" (“And you’ll leave everything for Danish?”) Kavya (nods): "Chod diya hai." (“I already have.”) The sound of the sea crashing against the rocks filled the long silence. Finally, Rahul stood up. His eyes, red but dry, stared into hers one last time. Rahul (whispers): "Shayad ek din tum samjhogi ke tumne kya toda hai." (“Maybe one day you’ll understand what you’ve broken.”) He turned and walked away — no dramatic goodbye, no final words. Just the echo of shattered love in the sea wind. Kavya sat still for a long time. She didn’t cry now. Not because it didn’t hurt — but because some wounds go beyond tears. She looked down at the divorce papers. It was done.
29-05-2025, 06:47 AM
It was done. Looking forward to the aftermath. I’m wishing for the world to burn. Let’s see what the author has in mind. I have a question for the author: did you ever intend for the whole #justiceforrahul perspective? Most of the story discussed the bond between Kavya and Danish.
29-05-2025, 06:52 AM
Kavya is not looking for emotional relation or love. She needs only big circumcized cock.
Some day, she may sleep with Danish father and brother too. Let god give some peace to Rahul. Very good finish. Thanks for the story.
29-05-2025, 06:57 AM
i will be waiting for what rahul said
“Maybe one day you’ll understand what you’ve broken.” im feeling super bad for rahul ,she did the worst thing anyone can do to her husband fuck you kavya ,i hope karma will soon catch up and do justice #justice_for_rahul #fuck_you_kavya_you_will_burn_in_hell
I have not read this painful lust so far
One of the two is not angry .... Feel the pain Please end the story with Kavya - Tanish wedding And conclude like Rahul as a good life The best choice is ....please please please This is only my opinion Sorry if the writer is against the intention of
29-05-2025, 10:57 AM
People getting emotional, Earlier in the story comments were like "no worries if Rahul is busy, Danish will quench the thirst" once it happens readers are like slut, whore...lol
What do you expect..there are huge mistakes that Rahul made and he is paying for them now. 1. He never thought about satisfying his wife properly nor did he try to find if she is content, If women doesn't open up it is husband's responsibility to find out if she is happy. He failed miserably not only in honeymoon but all the time and never was able to bring her orgasm. 2. He left her alone all the time and worked late almost daily and came home late. 3. Who puts up his friend in his home first few months after marriage lol 4. Also both of them are at home all day with work from home while Rahul works late into the night 5. He left for trip with his wife and friend at home for so many months lol , the plot cannot get silly than this one. Its like giving keys of the house to the thief and expect not to get anything stolen. Now he is weeping like every body destroyed his life while he is the one to blame the most here....He is unfit for a marriage. On top he should have some common sense, even trusting some one should have boundaries. Yes, Kavya is a sinner and cheated her husband but Rahul left her no choice nor he gave any option to choose for her or reason to love him. Just because of marriage no one will be committed like forever with out getting their needs both physically and emotionally fulfilled. ~RCF
29-05-2025, 11:00 AM
Apni desiers ke liye kisi ko tod dena sahi nahi hai i pray fpr the rahul
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