15-05-2025, 05:31 PM
You are best writer i have ever seen on this earth believe me or not. No one can compete but in this story. Ye jo aur larkiya ap na dal di. Maheen should be one and only.
(15-05-2025, 11:52 PM)effie Wrote: Ab story kaafi intense ho gayi hai Priya ki death ke baad. Lagta hai Karan Maheen se apne insulat ka badla lega shayad usse emotionally manipulate kare ya phir uske saath hard, dominating sex kare. Ab mazeed twists aur bold scenes hi expected hain.
But please update kal dene k koshish karna
(15-05-2025, 11:58 PM)effie Wrote: Pink bhai ab ap comment par reply q nahi karte pehle jab b ap comment par reply karte tu dil khushi se garden garden ho jata tha aur ab tu ap ghum hee ho jate hai
(16-05-2025, 06:16 AM)pinkbaby Wrote: Thanks for liking story.
Commenta py reply deta to rahta hon.
Baqi yeh zaroori nahi ky meri tmaam stories aik jaisi hi hon aik jaisy hi theme py aor style py.
Yeh kuch alag hai jisy aap dost pasand bhi kr rahy hain.
Keep supporting please
Pinkbaby
(16-05-2025, 06:16 AM)pinkbaby Wrote: Thanks for liking story.I think you are right mana k ap dominance sex k king hai but this is going out class really different iss me jo soft sex hai yeh bilkul naye vibe de raha hai aur bahut acha lag raha hai
Commenta py reply deta to rahta hon.
Baqi yeh zaroori nahi ky meri tmaam stories aik jaisi hi hon aik jaisy hi theme py aor style py.
Yeh kuch alag hai jisy aap dost pasand bhi kr rahy hain.
Keep supporting please
Pinkbaby
(16-05-2025, 12:34 AM)Sana Shah Wrote: Maybe ab shayed Karan k zarye Maheen ki woh next level humiliation start ho jiske lye Pinkbaby janey jatey hain apni stories me, Like Ek Ajab si pyaas, Major Saab, Mr. R & Seema.
(16-05-2025, 05:34 PM)Ayush01111 Wrote: Please maheen ko shirf abhi jab tak vinod wapas nahi ajata tab tak usko kisi ke sath na dikhao or vaise bhi vinod ki wife rahi nahi to kyu na maheen ki shadi official vinod se karwa do
(16-05-2025, 08:53 PM)Sahil.A Wrote: Awesome story! Waiting to see the relationship dynamics after Priya’s death. Just hoping there will be no marriage scenario between Vinod and Maheen. I am personally looking forward to more liberated and freely out-going character evolution for Maheen. Just my own preference.