[siva05]

Kindly request you to provide subtitles to hindi convo, keep rocking

[val.coutinho]

It's really nice start for such a romantic story..... I hope the writer keeps writing it in the way he/she has written and not spoil it like yes mam bang bang type ...... The story is going on good and has a meaning to it just keep up to the meaning....
All the best writer....

[Naaz]

Hindi translation karke padhni padi
Uske bawajood bhi itni achi lagi story mano sab kuch saamne chal rahi ho
Itna details aur ache andaz me ek ek shabd ko piroya gaya hai ki tareef ke liye Shabd nahi hai mere pass
Kash ye story hindi me hoti

[Attitude Breaker]

Jab story complete nai karna rehta hai toh shuru hi kyu karte ho ?

[Sahil.A]

Jab story complete nai karna rehta hai toh shuru hi kyu karte ho ?

I agree brother… most so called authors on this forum fall in the same category… suffering from pre-mature ejaculation. Jitna jaldi ubaal aata hai utna jaldi thande hoke phusssss…. Isase acche to wo authors hain jo dheerey- dheerey updates daaltey hai lekin story badhaatey rehte hain… I understand everybody has busy life and this is nobody’s job but if you start a story, you should progress the story even if slowly… even if like an update every 2-3 weeks.

[naj0501]

Will update the story today

[naj0501]

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[naj0501]

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[Hotyyhard]

please add English words also so that all can understand

[Attitude Breaker]

Please give quick update so the readers can stick to the story or they will lose the intrest in it. Over all the story is good and has great potential in it. Rest it's in your hands on how well you can come up with

[naj0501]

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[naj0501]

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[siva05]

Words are faded, ranjeet is man of kindness. Liked the way you lead the story. Thank you

[Yash121]

Mind-blowing story

[Kobir99]

Good..

[Yash121]

Waiting for next update

[Yash121]

Waiting for next

[naj0501]

Thank you for the comments. It's really motivating. Will update the story tonight.

[naj0501]

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[Yash121]

Outstanding update