Adultery The Cheating Wife ?

[khemucha]

How many of you think there are too many stoylines and charaters?

the story is loosing focus due to detailed flashbacks and sideshows ... the original story thread is still fascinating but it gets interrupted every now and then ... anyway its upto you to decide how to take it forward ... you asked so I responded ...

[Bobby9034]

Me too bro. The woman cop is not needed as do Ganga's friend. Bring on as many male characters as you know why.

 Word.

I’m also more interested in the men in Ganga’s life.  I want to know more about the thief and the low class men she meets up with at the seedy slum place.

The female cop, friend, cousin seems more for Sinu’s pleasure.  

But I absolutely love the detailed descriptions in the flashbacks, so don’t want that to go away.

The story seemed more crisp and focused in the beginning, I understand kk has the overall story in mind and all these side stories will eventually tie up together nicely, it would just be nice for Ganga to get some male action but I think it will be a lesbian hookup next.

[Ayush01111]

I have only one request as thix act finsh please don't forgive wife (galti ko maffi nahi ) Javed was right 2 time wife fucked javed and chacha ,please give streanth to husband and he can ask wife about this and divoce him please dont forgive

[kk007007]

I do. The flashbacks may be eliminated or greatly shortened if unavoidable. More of Ganga is preferable.

Me too bro. The woman cop is not needed as do Ganga's friend. Bring on as many male characters as you know why.

the story is loosing focus due to detailed flashbacks and sideshows ... the original story thread is still fascinating but it gets interrupted every now and then ... anyway its upto you to decide how to take it forward ... you asked so I responded ...

Guys this is a story.. Not porn where there is mindless sex without any context or background..

Moreover, Without ganga's back story or flashback how on earth will you understand why she is doing all the things in the story or will be doing in future? 

[kk007007]

Are you fishing for ideas for your next chapters???

Seriously 

Why would i ask you guys for ideas and tell you the same ideas again?

I am asking if readers are able to keep up with the story plot. Main and sub plots as well. 

Moreover, i am planning to introduce more characters in the story. 

[sexypreeti]

Seriously 

Why would i ask you guys for ideas and tell you the same ideas again?

I am asking if readers are able to keep up with the story plot. Main and sub plots as well. 

Moreover, i am planning to introduce more characters in the story. 

Relax buddy, I was just pulling your leg 

[Abhi T]

Bro please ignore everyone you are a great writer please just update the story please please

[Nobita]

Very nice update....waiting for more

[Manwithlove]

You do whatever you want it's your story your thread do as you please kk but never stop that's all we want..
As for the story I think next one will be chacha in front of the door and she can't resist him cause chacha loves to force the fuck out of woman...and they have their bond too..

[primeOne]

When are you posting new updates?

[Chennai Veeran]

Seriously 

Moreover, i am planning to introduce more characters in the story. 

 already too much of characters. we forgot the where it all started.

[hotandluking]

Come on man,give us a proper prolonged sex scene with Chacha or someone.
Story is going fine but only as a story-plot.
It has become devoid of any sex scenes for the past few months.
Please,request you to consider this.

[kk007007]

 already too much of characters. we forgot the where it all started.

Yes.. this is a problem.

[Losliyafan]

Too many cook spoils the broth. Too many characters spoils the story.

[khemucha]

Guys this is a story.. Not porn where there is mindless sex without any context or background..


its disrespectful to assume people were asking for porn with mindless sex ... you asked so people responded ... if you did not agree you could have ignored ... why ask for a feedback on specific aspect if you can't digest the diversity of opinions ...

[Navipal007]

It seems people who voice their opinion and holds a different POV about something than you always has to face un-invited criticism.

[kk007007]

It seems people who voice their opinion and holds a different POV about something than you always has to face un-invited criticism.

When did i critize you buddy?

[intrepid]

Hi KKxxx,

Really good plot…please continue to write this suspense thriller, if the plot demands “sex,” then please make it sensuous rather than the standard big cock in tight pussy smut that’s on every porn website. Your story is unique, keep it unique with more drama than mindless fuck fest.

Hope you spelling and grammar check your work….”defense” is spelled with an S, not with a C. Really good, keep up the good work and write when time permits.
Thanks for the free entertainment!
Intrepid

[yogalu1982]

Bhai, waiting...

[bleedingheart]

Bhai har bar ek nai post dalne ke bad bol diya karo tentatively ki next post kab aayega. isse koi tumhe disturb nahi karega