[jaksa]

Guys i had the outline of this update and next update 3 weeks ago.. even before posting the last update[42].

But my 9 hrs office work and coming back home late night around 10-10:30 PM.. to make it worse i have to travel between 2 cities every 2 weeks for work. 

This workload is sucking all my energy, although i completed 90% of this update[43].. i could not make myself to write the last 10%.. i just dont feel like writing due to this pressure.. 

But somehow i will try and manage to complete the story..

The only solution is permanently shift from my hometown to my work place.. Which will probably happen this month..

So, be patient.. i will let you know..

Update[43] will be posted today without GIFs Sad ..

Really appreciate your hard work  yr):
My message was just to trigger you and get a quick update sorry brother 

[hotandluking]

As I said,this is one of the best stories here.
It's sad that the writer cant update this awesome story frequently,or else,the potential of this story as a thriller/mystery/erotica is huge.
Absolutely great to read the latest update,keep up the good work.

[eslx1212]

The narration is good but her behaviour is so inconsistent with the earlier incident, especially the second round she herself willingly went for, that it is like looking at two different persons. Another thing is the length of the diary entries. Do people describe events at such length in their own diaries?

[kk007007]

The narration is good but her behaviour is so inconsistent with the earlier incident, especially the second round she herself willingly went for, that it is like looking at two different persons. Another thing is the length of the diary entries. Do people describe events at such length in their own diaries?

So now you want story in bullet points?  banghead:

Anyway she is confessing to srinu through her diary. so she wont hide anything

[Bobby9034]

Thanks for updating and bringing main focus back on Ganga.  I don’t know why Ganga is acting like sati savatri getting angry when she was more than willing , Yes she was forced initially but then took control so I didn’t like her self righteousness in blaming Javed and Chacha. I didn’t like Javed’s ILU too soft and Romeo style, took his macho ruthless side away, I was hoping it was a move but then he left .. KLPD so sad.  

[qazmlp]

Thanks for updating and bringing main focus back on Ganga.  I don’t know why Ganga is acting like sati savatri getting angry when she was more than willing , Yes she was forced initially but then took control so I didn’t like her self righteousness in blaming Javed and Chacha. I didn’t like Javed’s ILU too soft and Romeo style, took his macho ruthless side away, I was hoping it was a move but then he left .. KLPD so sad.  

I told this at the very start that I suspect Ganga has Split personality disorder from some childhood trauma that got triggered when Javed n Chacha tried to flirt with her.
But for a while now she has been justifying the actions of her alter ego and solidifying her own conscious purpose and motive by recording it in her diary. And the beauty of it is that she is very much aware when the alter ego takes over and observes its actions thoroughly. So in that sense this is a unique case of Split personality Disorder.

[erotichorny69]

Good mystery but there has been no sex for a long time,in this story.Bring some sex back into the story(No,that Lesbian thing doesnt count) and give faster updates please.The story is bang on,in terms of plot and twists but earlier parts of the story are full of sex.Bring that back as soon as possible.

[Navipal007]

I think she has Bi-Polar personality she herself don't know about. Like in the movie Fight Club.

[kk007007]

How many of you think there are too many stoylines and charaters?

[sadlura]

KK bro, ur story is magnificent. All those characters and filler stories are necessary to bring out your vision. You are doing this whilst managing you work and life is remarkable. Yes would like to see the whole thing unwrap faster but patience is required for us to enjoy such a masterpiece. I for one will wait loyally for the updates no matter how long it takes.

[eslx1212]

How many of you think there are too many stoylines and charaters?

I do. The flashbacks may be eliminated or greatly shortened if unavoidable. More of Ganga is preferable.

[LustyLeo]

The hero javed is back. Hope ganga forgive and give herself again to him for his love towards her.

[Navipal007]

I do. The flashbacks may be eliminated or greatly shortened if unavoidable. More of Ganga is preferable.

Me too bro. The woman cop is not needed as do Ganga's friend. Bring on as many male characters as you know why.

[hotandluking]

How many of you think there are too many stoylines and charaters?

Nothing like too many characters.
I like the format of the story as long as everything connects with Ganga. Favourites are Chacha and Sundari.
Rest,your choice to add or delete any character.

[sexypreeti]

How many of you think there are too many stoylines and charaters?

Are you fishing for ideas for your next chapters???

[khemucha]

How many of you think there are too many stoylines and charaters?

the story is loosing focus due to detailed flashbacks and sideshows ... the original story thread is still fascinating but it gets interrupted every now and then ... anyway its upto you to decide how to take it forward ... you asked so I responded ...

[Bobby9034]

Me too bro. The woman cop is not needed as do Ganga's friend. Bring on as many male characters as you know why.

 Word.

I’m also more interested in the men in Ganga’s life.  I want to know more about the thief and the low class men she meets up with at the seedy slum place.

The female cop, friend, cousin seems more for Sinu’s pleasure.  

But I absolutely love the detailed descriptions in the flashbacks, so don’t want that to go away.

The story seemed more crisp and focused in the beginning, I understand kk has the overall story in mind and all these side stories will eventually tie up together nicely, it would just be nice for Ganga to get some male action but I think it will be a lesbian hookup next.

[Ayush01111]

I have only one request as thix act finsh please don't forgive wife (galti ko maffi nahi ) Javed was right 2 time wife fucked javed and chacha ,please give streanth to husband and he can ask wife about this and divoce him please dont forgive

[kk007007]

I do. The flashbacks may be eliminated or greatly shortened if unavoidable. More of Ganga is preferable.

Me too bro. The woman cop is not needed as do Ganga's friend. Bring on as many male characters as you know why.

the story is loosing focus due to detailed flashbacks and sideshows ... the original story thread is still fascinating but it gets interrupted every now and then ... anyway its upto you to decide how to take it forward ... you asked so I responded ...

Guys this is a story.. Not porn where there is mindless sex without any context or background..

Moreover, Without ganga's back story or flashback how on earth will you understand why she is doing all the things in the story or will be doing in future? 

[kk007007]

Are you fishing for ideas for your next chapters???

Seriously 

Why would i ask you guys for ideas and tell you the same ideas again?

I am asking if readers are able to keep up with the story plot. Main and sub plots as well. 

Moreover, i am planning to introduce more characters in the story.