Adultery The Facilitator

[Ragasiyananban]

What next

[Yash121]

Waiting for next

[Harry Jordan]

Its been a while since I commented in this story so here we go. Last Week I did a re-read of the story from the start for my timepass and I once again applaud ClearLover for the wonderful setting and the character dynamic you have brought in this story. So I would like to share the perfect parts and the flawed part of the story from my perspective and opinion here. 


Kunal : Now what can I say , I liked Kunal as a character in this story because to some extent he was breath of fresh air from the "Submissive Cuck Husband" roles we usually see in stories like this. But in all honesty , the damage to his character was indeed severe considering in the early chapters he expressed the need to see his wife and her lover be intimate , thus showing that there is an ounce of "cuckold" in him. But then the character took a detour and then decided to stand and defend his identity. But the damage was already done , and now many readers only see him as the looser in this whole situation. Though I disagree , I think the detour ended a boon to the character because now it has the potential to truly be an important aspect to the story. Like the last chapter said , he can be the hero of his own story. Finally find the truth and be free. In a way the recent chapters regarding him was more of a masochist porn story where he is constantly being insulted for his existence. There is a whole lot of flaws in his character when it comes to his identity , he is often portrayed simple but at times accepts the blame for something he never did. His repressed personality suddenly takes a u turn in the recent chapters and he starts to act a lot more "chauvinistic" than before , thus ruining the character from the early chapter where he was never that guy. In a way I hope when the author resumes , we eventually see whether Kunal gets his justice or not.


Priya : She is undoubtebly the title character , but that doesn't mean she is a good person. Basically she is the expected Villain of the story. Whatever this family has endured and has eventually broken apart , it is all her doing. Because she wanted revenge against Esha for ruining her career and life. And she has left no stone unturned making sure her life is a shambled mess. Esha is now a divorcee , did infidelity , got pregnant with another man's child while married and now barely gets to see her own son. And in a way I like her character as a villain because she is unapologetic regarding her actions. She just wants to play Esha's god and control her life in all aspects not caring what she looses or whether she suffers. For Priya , Esha is her favorite toy , sometimes she will take care of it , while other times , she will ruin it out of frustration. She is the ultimate position of power at this moment , controlling people's life and playing with them as puppets. Maybe she knows she has unknowingly ruined Kunal's life but she doesn't care. That is why she is the Facilitator , she easily deleted Kunal from Esha's life and replaced him with Aniket , but that also created a small bug in the existence of Aditya who Esha had to loose temporarily. That is an unexpected setback she has faced in her game of control. The flaws in her character is somewhat minimal since her actions suits her personna of being the villain of the story. Now how Kunal takes his revenge on her or will he take any revenge on her. That remains to be seen , or read in this case LOL. As a reader the only future I can feel for Priya is a complete redemption for her character and transformation for her to see the error in her ways OR the consequences become soo severe for Priya that her character and her mentality is assasinated in a brutal way possible.


Esha : I honestly laugh everytime I read her arc as a wife. She is not a wife , she is a slut doing the chores of a wife. That is Esha's identity. Apparently she was loyal and did 'Love' Kunal , but then Aniket entered her life with his big cock and she simply said FU to Kunal and claimed her so called 'Freedom' she was missing in her life. And bare in mind , this is the same woman who had a 'Love' marriage , that's right , 'Love' marriage with Kunal. The very Kunal she was smitten by in her college days , the very Kunal with whom she dreamed of a life and built a family with. In a blink of an eye , Esha simply left him and jumped on Aniket's cock and thrived in the pleasure he gave her.  And throughout her character arc , not once did she show any remorse or guilt towards Kunal , even when she was feeling guilty of her actions , her point of concern was only Aditya. Not once did she thought about Kunal's emotions or what he will go through. Even during her divorce process , her only concern revolved around Aditya and then without even a single thought about Kunal , she enjoyed her sexual moments and romantic bliss with Aniket without a worry. Even in her dual mind episode , she confessed that she wished she never met Aniket. Not that she loved Kunal , she never thought about her own old moments with Kunal , even during that manic episode her mind was engulfed by the sex she had with Aniket and how much of a bigger and better fucker he was. Two times , two times Esha claimed she still loves Kunal in a way , but not one of her actions or her thought process has shown that she loved him. The only time she showed some concern was when she refused to screw Kunal over to gain full custody of Aditya. That is the only time I saw Esha show some level of concern or feeling towards Kunal. Other than that , she has completely ignored Kunal from her life despite claiming he still matters. Atleast with Priya , she is honest about her hatred. But Esha , she is a different level of a hypocrite. I hope in the future chapters , the consequences of her actions eventually take effect and we see her face some level of tough situations that she has to face.



This is my perspective regarding the characters in the story. To me I see the story has many flaws but the biggest plus point to this story is how there is no "good" character to the extent. Every character has some flaws and issues that makes it hard to pick a side. At times I feel Kunal should die or commit suicide and put an end to his suffering. There are also moments where I think Esha should suffer a miscarriage for the blatant betrayal and heartbreak she has committed. And then sometimes I hope Priya gets the harshest treatment imaginable and die a slow and painful death. But like I said , it is the nature of the story and that is where the author has succeeded in. The story focuses on human emotions and it does a great job bringing that emotion out of the readers when reading this story.


MY TAKE ON THE FUTURE OF THE STORY :

Now this is just my perspective and not what I want the author to do. This is basically a short idea I have in my mind ever since I read the story. Lot of you know I have started a story of my own in my thread and co-incidentally many of the early chapters were similar to this story. Maybe it clawed into me at that time I don't know LOL but regardless this is what I envision the future chapters of the story.


There has to be some sort of unique route with the story if you want the story to stand out and ever since the reading till the last chapter update , I cannot help but see that this story has perfectly set up a romantic angle that can culminate between Priya and Kunal. And that can be very unique compared to the love stories we know today. They aren't exactly the match made in heaven , they're not the perfectly compatible individuals. But their characters can go through an interesting dynamic if they go through a romantic angle with each other. This can open a different aspect to the story where Kunal will finally get an improvement arc on himself and finally see his flaws and rectify it and be a better version of himself. His outreach and outlook towards life and lifestyles change and thus he finds a different perspective where he finds a deeper connection with Priya than he did with Esha. And at the same time , Priya too understands the importance of a relation and sees the positive side of a married life and thus her perspective towards marriage as being a product of 'Patriarchy' and 'Chauvinism' changes and see that there are men like Kunal who are willing to make a relationa and marriage work. Maybe being with Kunal , Priya realizes that Esha never actually cared for Kunal as a person and Kunal has more qualities as a person than her percieved mind of an average guy has. So their dynamic eventually uplifts each other and eventually Esha is the one who ends up being the looser of the story as she looses Kunal for good and has to raise Aditya in a shared custody situation. On the context of the story , the initial belief that Kunal was being replaced by Aniket in Esha's life is shattered and the reality was that it was Esha that was replaced by Priya in Kunal's life. The story can eventually end when Esha visits Kunal's place to leave Aditya there and she sees how Priya has replaced her in the house she once built with Kunal. That way she can eventually realize her mistake and find closure and both couple ends up having their happy ending. That is just my perspective , because the story lover in me sees the potential a Kunal and Priya romance can bring here. A unique love story between a repressed man and a dominant woman but rather than the power dynamic , their relation is built on feelings and other emotions. A unique take from the usual 'Girl Boss' stories. Where the qualities of a submissive man is highlighted and how a relation like that under some circumstances can actually work wonders. 


This is just my take , that's it from me. I wish clearlover well and I pray he recovers soon and eventually FINISH HIS STORY.



Wishing nothing but the best for not just the Author , but all the readers as well.

           Yours Truly

 HARRY JORDAN 

[aravindkkumar08]

Harry Jordan it's a good climax many wishes for. Hope author may give permission to you to finish the story. Spoiler alert: some of them not the way you think. They want husband Tobe cuck. Or husband my die etc. overall this is my perspective and I am individually not blaming anyone.

[LustyLeo]

I thought we got an update @harry you fooled me.

[aravindkkumar08]

Atleast it's good to get fooled.

[LustyLeo]

priya already not interested in marriage and she wants to have multiple partners and enjoy various big sized cocks. How she will accept to be wife of a wimp.

[Harry Jordan]

priya already not interested in marriage and she wants to have multiple partners and enjoy various big sized cocks. How she will accept to be wife of a wimp.

There is more to life than "Big Size Cocks" and "Being a Wimp". Kunal has already stated he isn't a Wimp before the divorce so the love angle can work. Hell Priya can be the one to transform Kunal from being a chode to a real maverick in bed. It can be possible.

[Yash121]

Outstanding story

[Losliyafan]

Where is the author(s) ?????????????????

[Harry Jordan]

Where is the author(s) ?????????????????

No idea , its been a month since he gave a last update regarding his typhoid sickness. I hope he is doing well. Regardless , I think the readers here should not keep high hopes on whether this story will continue. The author did promise but judging his inactivity , I believe this story is paused for now. Whether the story gets updates or he returns and completes it , only the future can tell.

For now , its better to be just optimistic and not expect anything happening soon.

[Harry Jordan]

Just a quick question to readers. Just for fun. Who do you think is the worst female character in this story? Is it Priya or is it Isha? Regardless the answer , explain why she is the worst. I wanna see some perspectives of these characters.

[RCF]

Just a quick question to readers. Just for fun. Who do you think is the worst female character in this story? Is it Priya or is it Isha? Regardless the answer , explain why she is the worst. I wanna see some perspectives of these characters.

Female character who causes pain to others with no purpose is the worst character so I guess you got my point.

[Harry Jordan]

Female character who causes pain to others with no purpose is the worst character so I guess you got my point.

Loud and Clear , got it!