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Gif aur dalo chudai wali edit karke
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Absolutely awesome and amazing update!
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kuch to thik par mujhe je samaj nahi a raha ki Iqbaal ko apne pakka chutiya bana kar pesh kiya hai ya readers ko Rahul ka character kuch khas nahi hai or uske sath sex seduce double meaning chat full sex kitni baar karwa chuki ho ... sab bakbaass
or jo iqbaal uski chori pakadta gadi me or ghar ke andar to maza kuch or hota wo use sex seduce karta or Rahul ko uski aukaat dikhata jab wo uski gaand marta.. harami ki jo uski Supriya ko chod raha hai ...
or phir wo sab supriya ko batata ki asli mard kya hota hai ....
apse baar baar kaha ja raha ki Rahul ko chhhod kar iqbaal ke sath sex sence karwao or tum ho ki Rahul ke sath lagi ho...
ek to long time laga deti ho update dene me or update bhi wo hi sab ghisa pita Rahul sex with Supriya ....
kya chutiyapan laga rakhha hai ...
jaise lagta hai ki koi new writer thread write kar rahi hai
abhi tumhe anubhav ki kami hai....
or old tread ko read kar ke apni soch badlo...
pichle update me laga ki ab maszid ke baad iqbaal or Supriya ki chat or sex seduce double meaning chat hogi what's up par phir wo dono apas me date karenge...
phir real pyar or real sex full enjoy ke sath...
par na jane kya Rahul,.. Rahul laga rakkha hai....
abhi aap nadan ho sikho kuch ..
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or agar mere kisi comment se meri pyari dost ke najuk se dil ko koi chot ya bura laga ho to mujhe maaf kar dena Sriya...
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par mera maqsad apko apke andar ka real writer ko jagana tha ....
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ab meri Sriya ek Sherni ke jaise tread me aag hi aag laga degi...
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hum apne writer ko bahut pyar karte hai...
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hame bhi bura lagta hai jab hum apne kisi comment se apni Gudiya Sriya ko naraj kar dete hai.. so
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ek baar phir sorry...
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par me mazboor tha...
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aap hum reader ke mazboori samaj sakti ho....
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ham sab apse kitni ummeed laga kar rakhte hai...
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or jab next update short ya desire ke jaisa nahi lagta to ...
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bolna padta hai ...
so sorry one's again ..
agar bura laga ho to..
par Rahul se mujhe chid se ho rahi hai mera bas chale me uski maff karna g***nd na markar kutto se marwa doon....
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i hope next update come fast and Supriya and Iqbaal full sex enjoy ...
thanks & love for my Sriya... ..
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or haan sex images ya gif add karna na bhoolna ...
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I think when you introduce Iqbaal character somthing meaning full so pl do justice for this one otherwise no meanings for precense rest is ok
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No need to get rude please… if you dont like it you can stop reading… as I said before I have a story in mind and its going according to that. Abhi Iqbal ka time nahi aaya hai, par jab aayega tab aisa nahi lagna chahiye ki Supriya iske saath kyu kar rahi hai. It would be completely against her character right now to do it with him.
Again, haath jod kar vinti hai, aap mujhse please rude mat ho, main apna bahut saara samay nikaal kar ye story likh rahi hu. Meri life mein bahut kuch hai - work, family, other entertainment stuff. Kafi mushkil se time nikaal ke ye story likh rahi hu. Shayad is story ke baad dubara kabhi na likhu.
Aapko nahi pasand toh I understand kyunki main sabki ummeedo par toh khari nahi utar sakti. Baaki aur bhi stories hain is site par aap unhe pade.
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Kya laga raha hai ki iqbal ko dalo iqbal ko dalo jo mil raha hai wo chup chap padlo nahi to niklo yaha se writer ko jo lage ja wahi wo likhega
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Shaandar kamaal ka update jabardast best story, Sriya Ji please sex scene thoda jayda details me explain karna next update se to full maza ayega it's only request
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Chudai wale part me aur gif add karo aur chudai wale part ko thoda lamba khichti
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mujhe or reader se kuch lena dena nahi hai...
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mera kahna ye tha ki iqbaal ko chutiya mat banao or use ek chalak or samajhdar roop me pesh karo..
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or uske sath thoda sex movement event karao or phir sex only one person se boring lagne lagta hai...
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sriya ji ye apki apni life ki story to hai nahi ki apko sad feel hua hai..
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ya aap hi wo Supriya hai wo is story ki Nayika hai...
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tabhi to apko bura laga..
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Super ....mind blowing.... please please please update more
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Exbiiixossip2 - Comments and suggestions are fine, but aap kuch jyada hi rude ho gaye they. Anyway I understand your viewpoint. Like I said, trust me, in the end everything will be fine.
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Aap apne according story likhna dusre kisi readers ke according mat likhna
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Sirya i aap buhat acha likh rahi hain
Jaisa aapka mind hai bus usi ky mutabiq likhti jaain
Sub ky mashwaron ko maanain gi to apny concept sy hat jaain gi aor story control mai nahi rahy gi.
Keep concentrating on your own skills and thoughts.
Carry on please
Best of luck
And waiting for your next update.
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thank you sriya ji
understand for my feeling and keep it now next update come fast baby.. with hot pics as like you and situation.
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Congratulations! Sriya on your 50th update
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