15-04-2025, 02:18 AM
Same chuchi lund repeat its just too slow and boring now fans are hushed because they dont want it to end but its just strecthing the story now
(15-04-2025, 12:17 AM)seansean007 Wrote: .........Overall great update, and as expected..... the missed out part came in as a flashback.... which was brilliant.
Ramu agle pal rickshaw se utra aur tezi se Anita ki taraf badha. Anita ki dil uske apne taraf aate dekh dhadakne lagi aur isse pehle ki woh kuchh samajhti ya bol paati Ramu uske paas aakar daye haath se uski kamar pakad kar neeche jhukkar uski dayi chunchi blouse cup ke upar se munh mein lekar chusne laga.
Ramu ke aesa karte hi Anita ki badan mein bijli jaisi mehsus huyi aur dil aur jor se dhadakne laga. Anita bhale hi besharm thi aur Ramu ko khuleaam apni chunchiyon par dekhte hue dekh aetraaz to dur ki baat hai ulta muskura rahi thi, magar woh yeh ummeed nahin kar rahi thi ki Ramu aese aaj uski chunchi mein munh lagakar peene ka koshish karega. Anita ko situation samajhne mein kuchh seconds lag gayi tab tak Ramu uski dayi chunchi par blouse ke upar se hi bhukhe bheriye ke tarah tut pada tha.
(19-04-2025, 12:46 AM)pankajshah34 Wrote: Gr8 update. Very hot n erotic. Sean, Although it's ur story n u have taken its highest point of erotism but still I feel u didn't really given much importance to kiss between Anita n hariya. I feel it's missing. I mean some naughty n nasty talks could have been happen while they kiss first time.
(20-04-2025, 12:29 AM)pankajshah34 Wrote: Hi Val, thanks for feedback. Actually in recent times hariya asking Anita openly, aap humse chudwayengi Na n in reply to that Anita also says, Haan hariyaji, aapse thukwaungi. Many other such conversations happens. For lawda, hathiyar, dudh n so on. But while kissing no such conversation happens. So I feel, with so much great narrative skills Sean shown to us, he could have put some dirty talks while kissing.You have a very strong and valid point Pankaj... Me and a lot of others have been pondering over the same thought too...
(20-04-2025, 12:29 AM)pankajshah34 Wrote: Hi Val, thanks for feedback. Actually in recent times hariya asking Anita openly, aap humse chudwayengi Na n in reply to that Anita also says, Haan hariyaji, aapse thukwaungi. Many other such conversations happens. For lawda, hathiyar, dudh n so on. But while kissing no such conversation happens. So I feel, with so much great narrative skills Sean shown to us, he could have put some dirty talks while kissing.