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Sorry guys... I tried to write story but i am unable to write due to personal issues now.. Firstly being divorcee and single woman i have to take care of many issues... That too now may probs going on so iam unable to write it.. Anyway give some time i will finish up the story asap
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Author Request : my sincere request to all those who are reading the story is that please share your comments... Even if you feel the story is worst and if you feel something need to be changed pls tell it... Because as a writer in this site I am not getting even a single money for the story i am writting... So if i get some comments it would a motivation for me to go on further...
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Genuinely speaking, after a long time I have seen this much good story. Its not just about sex. I only care about the good story. And you wrote in very unique way. I like the Officer on Duty concept of revenge here and revenge of mom she takes from her own daughter is very astonishing. I Hope you complete the story.
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Nice update.. something is building up..
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Nice plot… going good continue
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Author notes : Next update will be posted SOON, within a week time... But before that let me give some clarity on the proceedings
1. One of our reader Behka send a private msg to me stating sudha's character is very weak... Firstly let me thank him for his question and interest on the story... Then to answer his question this story is not hero Vs villian story. Everyone in this story have a grey shades.. After 5-6 updates u will understand y i say so.
2. Many many are asking from where I copied this story.. Trust me this is my creation but 100% inspiration from many movies ( Director Atlee Formula) Movies from where i copied and gonna copy are
1. Officer on duty ( malaylam movie) ( basic structure)
2. Mumbai security officer (malayalam) ( sudha's character)
3. Hate story 3 (hindi)
4. Anjaam paathira, 7'am arivu ( brainwash part)
5. Hate story 1 and trivandrum lodge anoop menon mother character ( jaya character)
6. Baba kalyani ( malayalam movie )(jaya's surname concept)
For now thats all.. In future if i copy i will inform u... Anyway thanks for ur support... Meet u in our next update
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Good and clear update on Name background.
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Superb update mind blowing
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Author Cut : next update will be BEFORE 5 pm today.. I got a super knot so developing on it...
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