Thriller THE VILLAGE IS NO PLACE FOR GIRLS by desidesires - Continuation by me

[tharkibudda]

wow one of the raw story bro.. enjoyed to the core

Unfortunately it wasnt received well. Hardly any comments except from two regular readers...so couldnt get the enthusiam to continue

[doctor101]

Tharkibudda bhai,
If xossipy readers are selfish, write for your own hobby, creativity, brush up your creative juice with regular big updates. Lots of readers are plain lazy to comment it. But once your content will be available, it will catch FIRE and you will get the credit you deserves. How many good classic erotica stories murdered aka incomplete? 50%. I gave you plots idea.
1. Exploit Gauri after Sangeet Ceremony midnight sleep misunderstanding adventures.
2.Garima by Gauri's Father , Drivers, Servants, Gauri's future husband.
3. Garima takes revenge once her character change from victim to hunter.

[tharkibudda]

Birju, still standing over her, his own cock now limp and dripping, felt a twinge of guilt. But it was quickly drowned out by the thunderous applause of his own ego. He had never felt more powerful than he did at this moment, watching Garima's beautiful face marred by his cum.


As he stumbled back to the chair, his legs feeling like they might give out beneath him, Pratap took full advantage of Birju's momentary retreat. With a cruel smirk, he grabbed both of Garima's wrists, wrenching them behind her back and holding them there with one hand, the other bracing her hips as he began to pummel into her once more.

Her screams grew louder, echoing through the room, but they only seemed to spur him on. Pratap's hips smacked against her ass as he took her, . She could feel her insides being torn apart, but she couldn't stop her body from reacting. Her pussy was still slick  Birju's cum, and she was horrified to find that she was still aroused, her clit throbbing in time with Pratap's thrusts.

Her cheeks were sticky with Birju's semen, and she could feel it dripping down her neck, pooling between her breasts. Her eyes burned with the need to wipe it away, to clean herself of the humiliation, but Pratap's grip was too tight. He was in no mood to give her even that small mercy.


He pounded into her with a ferocity that seemed fueled by her pain, his eyes locked on hers as he watched her struggle. "You're going to take it all," he hissed, his grip tightening. "Just like the white whores in those videos"

The room spun around her, the pain and humiliation coalescing into a single, white-hot point in her mind. She wanted to die, to be free from this nightmare. But her body, treacherous and unwilling, responded to the brutal rhythm, her pussy clenching around Pratap's cock.



Her screams grew hoarse, her voice raw from the abuse. She could feel the pressure building in her stomach, the beginnings of another orgasm she hadn't wanted. Her wrists were on fire, the skin turning white from his iron grip.

Pratap's breath was hot and ragged in her ear, his hips smacking against her ass as he fucked her with a brutal intensity. The pain was unbearable, but her body continued to betray her, her muscles tightening around him as he pumped in and out.

"You're going to cum for me," he growled. "You're going to love it, aren't you?"

But Garima was beyond hearing his taunts. With a final, desperate arch of her back, she screamed her release, her body shaking as the orgasm ripped through her. It was as if the dam holding back the flood of emotions had finally broken. The pleasure was so intense, it almost drowned out the pain and the fear.


Pratap, lost in his own depraved delight, didn't even notice as Garima's body went slack. He continued to fuck her, her limp form a silent testament to his power. Her eyes rolled back in her head, and she slipped into unconsciousness, unable to endure any more of the agony he inflicted upon her.

Her legs, once trembling with the effort to keep up with their depraved dance, now hung lifelessly around his hips. Her arms, which had been fighting him off, fell to her sides, and her mouth gaped open in a silent scream. The room spun around her, the colors blurring into a sickening kaleidoscope of pleasure and pain. Pratap's eyes were wild with lust, his teeth bared as he drove into her, oblivious to her plight.

The last thing Garima felt before the world went dark was the final, brutal thrust as Pratap emptied himself inside her. He grunted with satisfaction, his grip on her wrists loosening as he reached his peak. Her body, no longer supported by his weight, slumped to the floor, her head lolling to the side.

[Mutthal07]

Highly erotic & imaginative... kudos tharki

[fanofallnature]

Birju, still standing over her, his own cock now limp and dripping, felt a twinge of guilt. But it was quickly drowned out by the thunderous applause of his own ego. He had never felt more powerful than he did at this moment, watching Garima's beautiful face marred by his cum.
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The last thing Garima felt before the world went dark was the final, brutal thrust as Pratap emptied himself inside her. He grunted with satisfaction, his grip on her wrists loosening as he reached his peak. Her body, no longer supported by his weight, slumped to the floor, her head lolling to the side.

A very erotic update.

Thank you, tharkibuddha;  but please try and post the next update soon.......

We are eagerly looking forward to your next update.

[doctor101]

Bhai wedding events men Garima - Gauri ka adventures start karo bhai. Lets go to sangeet ceremoney fuck.

[Mutthal07]

Continue it...
Its good enuf