[Sathiesh034]

Can u tell me the story one line again bcoz i forget.. will u complete within a yr or two??

[hotandluking]

Because of the infrequent updates it gets difficult to remain in touch with the story. While the story was hot with a mixture of eroticism and suspense at the start, it has turned into a huge glob of mess with many characters and many storyline running at the same time. The story should not have got rid of chacha and what was his name guy with Ganga as the protagonist with Srinu always one step behind the action and adventure undertaken by Ganga and her partners. 
Sorry KK I m not criticising but any story with too many characters and plotlines tend to suffer under it's own weight. Hope you make it more linear with more frequent updates. 

Always a fan of your earlier work

Story with fewer characters tend to get boring. How long will readers read about sex between the same characters.
Once would be good,Second time would be Meh....Third time,stop it already would be the reaction.
If the writer is talented enough to keep track of all his plotlines,bring on more characters.....more characters means more sex.

[sexypreeti]

Story with fewer characters tend to get boring. How long will readers read about sex between the same characters.
Once would be good,Second time would be Meh....Third time,stop it already would be the reaction.
If the writer is talented enough to keep track of all his plotlines,bring on more characters.....more characters means more sex.

I would tend to disagree with your statement that sex with the same partner would get boring... How many of you have ditched your wifes for this reason...same sex... same partner...

This is purely dependent on the writer as to how he/she keeps the romance/action brewing despite the same two people having sex for the nth time...

This is purely my thoughts...look at it like a disclaimer because it could hurt a few people....

[kk007007]

Because of the infrequent updates it gets difficult to remain in touch with the story. While the story was hot with a mixture of eroticism and suspense at the start, it has turned into a huge glob of mess with many characters and many storyline running at the same time. The story should not have got rid of chacha and what was his name guy with Ganga as the protagonist with Srinu always one step behind the action and adventure undertaken by Ganga and her partners. 
Sorry KK I m not criticising but any story with too many characters and plotlines tend to suffer under it's own weight. Hope you make it more linear with more frequent updates. 

Always a fan of your earlier work

How many characters are too many ?

1, 2 , 5 ?

If a story has Hero, Heroine and a villian.. story is over in 1 update.

Villan kidnaps heroine. Hero beats up villan. Hero rescues Heroine.

If you feel like its too many subplots? you are loosing on main story.. then go read previous updates to brush up your memory.

Even after that you guys feel like story has lost its plot.. I will stop writing the story..

[tomdickharry2024]

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Even after that you guys feel like story has lost its plot.. I will stop writing the story..
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Please do continue man.. this is your story and your characters.. so take it forward the way you think.. it's just the infrequent updates tend to dull the story a bit.. looking forward to seeing your next update!!

[Gopal Ratnam]

It is almost a year since this story has started and it is going strong.

[Navipal007]

Story with fewer characters tend to get boring. How long will readers read about sex between the same characters.
Once would be good,Second time would be Meh....Third time,stop it already would be the reaction.
If the writer is talented enough to keep track of all his plotlines,bring on more characters.....more characters means more sex.

Have you even read the work of Bdrew ?? If not then i recommend you to do the same. Its not about the characters, it's about the content. Story should revolve around specific characters and if any new characters is to be introduced it should be only to forward the story of the central characters. Its not always about the sex but about the buildup to it. Moreover like others I too feel that infrequent updates is the reason is the main culprit.

[Navipal007]

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Even after that you guys feel like story has lost its plot.. I will stop writing the story..

Please do continue man.. this is your story and your characters.. so take it forward the way you think.. it's just the infrequent updates tend to dull the story a bit.. looking forward to seeing your next update!!
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I concur

[sexypreeti]

How many characters are too many ?

1, 2 , 5 ?

If a story has Hero, Heroine and a villian.. story is over in 1 update.

Villan kidnaps heroine. Hero beats up villan. Hero rescues Heroine.

If you feel like its too many subplots? you are loosing on main story.. then go read previous updates to brush up your memory.

Even after that you guys feel like story has lost its plot.. I will stop writing the story..

Dear KK,
This is your story, So you have every right to write it the way you have it in mind. Comments like this will always be there but they should not deter you from doing what you have originally planned...

It is impossible to satisfy everyone...

So just ignore the noise and continue with your story... 

A request, please try to make the updates more timely like you did in the last two ones...

-Preeti

[Navipal007]

Dear KK,
This is your story, So you have every right to write it the way you have it in mind. Comments like this will always be there but they should not deter you from doing what you have originally planned...

It is impossible to satisfy everyone...

So just ignore the noise and continue with your story... 

A request, please try to make the updates more timely like you did in the last two ones...

-Preeti

It's not the noise we are making but cold hard facts. We are as much a fan of this story as you are but sometimes we should be ready to take other people's views and suggestions. We are not here to mindlessly criticize someone on his hard work nor to be devils advocate.

[kk007007]

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Even after that you guys feel like story has lost its plot.. I will stop writing the story..

Please do continue man.. this is your story and your characters.. so take it forward the way you think.. it's just the infrequent updates tend to dull the story a bit.. looking forward to seeing your next update!!
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Dear KK,
This is your story, So you have every right to write it the way you have it in mind. Comments like this will always be there but they should not deter you from doing what you have originally planned...

It is impossible to satisfy everyone...

So just ignore the noise and continue with your story... 

A request, please try to make the updates more timely like you did in the last two ones...

-Preeti

Okay guys but I would recommend you to see the characters chart or read up previous updates to brush up your memory on the Multiple storylines.

https://xossipy.com/thread-62049-post-55...pid5579169

[hotandluking]

Have you even read the work of Bdrew ?? If not then i recommend you to do the same. Its not about the characters, it's about the content. Story should revolve around specific characters and if any new characters is to be introduced it should be only to forward the story of the central characters. Its not always about the sex but about the buildup to it. Moreover like others I too feel that infrequent updates is the reason is the main culprit.

I actually like the number of characters in this story.
Each having his/her own arc.
This story has one of the best erotic sequences(without actually having any sex) between two women,Ganga and Sundari.
All because of a minor character(as of now) Sundari.
Only complaint is the delay in updates for which the writer must be having his own reasons.....other than that,story is doing fine.
Let him cook.

[Robert Smith]

Please do continue man.. this is your story and your characters.. so take it forward the way you think.. it's just the infrequent updates tend to dull the story a bit.. looking forward to seeing your next update!!

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[Only123]

How many characters are too many ?

1, 2 , 5 ?

If a story has Hero, Heroine and a villian.. story is over in 1 update.

Villan kidnaps heroine. Hero beats up villan. Hero rescues Heroine.

If you feel like its too many subplots? you are loosing on main story.. then go read previous updates to brush up your memory.

Even after that you guys feel like story has lost its plot.. I will stop writing the story..

Hi KK Brother, 

I am commenting for the first time, but I will be comment and appreciate from now on,

Please don't give attention to any negative readers,

I am from One of them who loved this story so much , so please don't Stop your magical ✨ writing, we will always be with you ☺️,

you are a mastermind in writing this Adultery and Erotic story ♥️,

[kk007007]

Hi KK Brother, 

I am commenting for the first time, but I will be comment and appreciate from now on,

Please don't give attention to any negative readers,

I am from One of them who loved  this story so much , so please don't Stop your magical ✨ writing, we will always be with you ☺️,

you are a mastermind in writing this Adultery and Erotic story ♥️,

yr):

[sahebraopawar]

[tomdickharry2024]

Eagerly waiting KK!!

[hotandluking]

Eagerly awaiting next update.

[sahebraopawar]

[tomdickharry2024]

Still waiting KK bro..