Adultery Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust)

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Bc khatam karo ye raghu wala chapter ... Ghatiya ho gaya jyada kuch ... Ram n kavya ki story badao aage

kisi ko raghu wala chapter pasand hain to kisi ko ram wala.....aab aap hi sab batawon ki main kya likhun.......

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Update- 31(A) (Megha Update)

aab dono ke beech khel shuru ho chuka tha.........khiladi bhi naya tha.............aur khel bhi.......dekhna tha ki kaun is khel mein jeetata hain.......................aur kisi hoti hain haar................................................................

Aab Aage...........................................................................................

Ram ki nazrein kavya ke chehrey par tiki hui thi..........wahin kavya bhi taktaki lagaye ram ki taraf dekh rahi thi..............dono ke beech kuch pal ki khamoshi rahi...........fir ram aahista se bol padta hain.........

" bhabhi........main inke saath jee bharkar khelna chahta hoon............." aur ram kavya ke dono chuchiyon ki taraf ghoorta hua dheere se bol padta hain wahin kavya gehri saans chodhti hui haan mein apna sir hila deti hain..........wo to chahti hi thi ki ram uske dono chuchiyon ke saath khele.........unhein jee bharkar masley........usey nanga karke unhein mooh mein lekar choosey.........apne danton se kaate...........magar sharam ki wajah se wo aisa bol nahin paa rahi thi............aur shayad ram ne uske is mushkil ko aab aasan kar diya tha..........

" haan...........ram.........tum jee bharkar khelo inke saath............." aur kavya ka dil zor zor se dhadakney lagta hain wahin ram lalchayi hui nazreion se kavya ke dono chuchiyon ko ghoor raha tha.......mano apni aankhon se parakh raha ho ki dono size mein ek saman hain ya nahin..........wahin kavya ek tuk ram ki taraf dekhey jaa rahi thi.........kuch sochkar wo haule se bol padti hain........

" aise kya dekh rahe ho ram.............khelo na inke saath............main tumhein kuch nahin kahungi........." aur kayva ander hi ander bechain ho uthathi hain........wahin uski choot mein fir se sensation hona shuru ho jata hain............ram ke haath apne ubharon par mehsoos karke uska rom rom aab romanchit hone laga tha............wahin ram aab bhi khamosh tha........shayad thoda confuse lag raha  tha........

" main ye soch raha hoon ki main inmein se pehle kaun sa pakdun.........mujhe to dono ek saman hi nazar aa rahe hain...........aab ek ko  agar padkadta hoon to dusare ke saath beimani hoga........." aur ram haule se muskura padta hain wahin kavya ka sharam se bura haal tha.........jaise taise wo ram ke sawalon ka jawab de pati hain.......wahin uski choot mein gilapan badhta hi jaa raha tha.......

" tum.......dono ek saath padak lo ram..............ismein koi beimani nahin hogi.........." aur kavya ka kaleja fir se zoron se dhadakney lagta hain..........wahin ram khushi se chahak uthatha hain........ram haan mein apni gurden hilata hain aur abki baar apne dono haath kavya ke chuchiyon ki taraf dheere dheere badhaney lagta hain..........jaise hi uske haath kavya ke chuchiyon ko chutey hain kavya na chahtey hue bhi zoron se aaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.........sisak padti hain........ek baar wo fir se jaise madhosh hone lagi thi............

ram apne haathon se kavya ke naram naram chuchiyon ko haule haule se daba raha tha.......masal raha tha.......uski narmahat ko apne haathon par mehsoos kar raha tha........to kabhi uske nipples ko apni ungliyon ke beech dabakar kheench raha tha..........masal raha tha..........wahin kavya aankhein band kiye hulki hulki siskari le rahi thi...........saath hi saath uska dil aab zoron se dhadak raha tha...........

" bhabhi.........maine dekha tha us video mein ki wo ladki us aadmi ka lund apni gand mein le rahi thi.............kya lund gand mein bhi liya jata hain..........kya usmein dard nahin hota.........." aur ram fir se bol padta hain............aisa pehli baar tha jab ram aise open words ka use kavya ke samney kar raha tha...............usey ajeeb to lag raha tha par maza bhi bahut aa raha tha...........is waqt uska lund poori tarah se sakht ho chuka tha.........aisa lag raha tha jaise aab pani nikal jayega.........wahin kavya ka bhi bura haal tha..........uska bhi sabra dheere dheere jawab deta jaa raha tha..........

" haan kuch ladkiyaan leti hain.............aur unhein wahan par lene mein shayad maza bhi aata hai............" aur kavya aahista se bol padti hain wahin ram haule se muskura padta hain.........aisa lag raha tha jaise wo kavya ke jawab se santusht na hua ho...........

" aur aapko bhabhi..........kya aap nahin leti bhaiya ka lund apni gand mein..........." aur ram masoomiyat se dubara bol padta hain........wahin kavya ek tuk ram ke chehrey ki taraf dekhey jaa rahi thi..........dheere dheere uska sharam aab khatam hota jaa raha tha.........upar se ram is tarah ussey khuley mein baat kar raha tha to uska behakna zayaz tha............

" nahin..........filhaal to maine kabhi nahin liya unka wahan pe..........na jane kyon mujhe bahut ghabrahat si hone lagti hain.......................aur wo bhi koi jagah hain karney ki.............." aur kavya ka dil zor zor se dhadakney lagta hain........wahin ram munn hi munn khus ho jata hain...........shayad usey lagney laga tha ki kavya ussey kabhi na kabhi apni gand to zaroor marwayegi.........

" maine to dekha tha ki ladkiyaan ek saath teen teen mard ko sambhaley hui thi..............ek uski gand mein lund dala hua tha.......to dusari uski choot mein.....aur teesara uski mooh mein........" aur ram thoda hiaran hota hua kavya ke chehrey ki taraf dekhta hua dheere se bol padta hain wahin kavya ki sansein pal pal bekabu hoti jaa rahi thi.........jaise taise wo apna hosh aab tak sambhaley hui thi.........

" wo waisa us types ki movies mein hota hai..........reality mein nahin........" aur kavya ka dil ek baar fir se machal uthatha hain........wahin ram bhi janta tha ki kavya ki baateion mein kitni sacchayi hain.........wo kuch nahin kehta aur is baar uske chuchiyon ko kaskar masalney lagta hain wahin kavya ki siskari fir se tezz hoti chali jati hain...........kabhi wo apne honton ko apne danton ke beech dabakar kaat rahi thi to kabhi apni aankhein band kar leti..........

" bhabhi.......magar mujhe to kahin se bhi aisa nahin lagta............khair..........utariye na inhein..............mujhe aapke doodh dekhney hain........." aur ram kavya ke chuchiyon par suit ke upar se haath ferta hua dheere se bol padta hain wahin kavya apna dono haath apne peeth ki taraf le jati hain aur peeth par badha dor dheere se khol deti hain..........fir wo apne suit ko upar ki taraf uthaney lagti hain wahin ram bade gaur se kavya ke taraf dekhey jaa raha tha.........jaise jaise uske kapdey upar ki taraf uththey jaa rahe they waise waise ram ke lund mein sansanahat bhi badhti jaa rahi thi..........

kavya agle hi pal bina waqt ganwaye apna suit utar deti hain aur kale bra mein uska gora badan aur bhi qahar dhane lagta hain.........wahin ram ki nazrein uspar hi tiki hui thi.........wo aabhi bhi kavya ke taraf bade gaur se dekhey jaa raha tha..........is halat mein pehli baar wo kisi ladki ko is tarah se dekh raha tha.........

" utariye na inhein bhi............" aur ram kavya ke bra ki taraf dekhtey hue dheere se bol padta hain.........wahin kavya haule se apne dono haath peechay ki taraf le jati hain aur dheere se apne bra ka hook khol deti hain.......agle hi pal uska bra uski chuchiyon se door hota chala jata hain wahin ram ki jaise sansein atak gayi thi..........wo apni aankhein faadey kavya ke dono chuchiyon ki taraf dekhey jaa raha tha..........wahin kavya ka sharam se bura haal tha.........uski nazrein neechay ki taraf jhuki hui thi..........

ram apna haath aagey ki taraf badahta hain aur kavya ke bra ko uske badan se dheere dheere alag karney lagta hain........jaise jaise uske bra hatatey jaa rahe they waise waise ram ki bechaini bhi badhti jaa rahi thi..........wahin uska kaleja bhi zoron se dhadakta jaa raha tha..........agle hi pal ram kavya ke bra ko uske badan se alag kar deta hain aur kavya ki gori nangi chuchiyan aab uski aankhon ke samney beparda ho jati hain........jinhein ram bade dhayan se dekh raha tha............gore badan mein gulabi chuchiyaan aur bhi qahar dhaa rahi thi jo kisi matar ke dane ke saman tani hui thi...........wahin ram bina waqt ganwaye kavya ke chuchiyon par apne haath rakh deta hain aur bari bari se unhein masalney lagta hain.........

ram ke is tarah masalney se kavya ki sansein ek baar fir se bhari hone lagti hain...........wahin uski panty lagbhag poori tarah se bheeg gayi thi...........ram bahut aahista se apne ungliyon ke beech kavya ke nipples ko daba raha tha to kabhi unhein chutki mein lekar kheench raha tha.......to kabhi gol gol ghuma raha tha wahin kavya ki behchaini bhi badhti jaa rahi thi........wo wahin lumbi lumbi sansein leti hui haule haule se sisak rahi thi..........jawani ka khel aab unke beech shuru ho chuka tha..........

ram agle hi pal apna chehra kavya ke dono chuchiyon ki taraf le jata hain aur ek nazar wo kavya ki chuchiyon ko bade dhyaan se dekhney lagta hain...........fir wo haule se apna mooh kholta hain aur kavya ke chuchiyon ko apne mooh mein bharkar haule haule se kisi chote baachey ki tarah peenay lagta hain...........wahin uska dusara haath aabhi bhi uske dusare chuchi par they jinhein wo aabhi bhi masal raha tha..........wahin kavya bade pyaar se apne haath ram ke sir par rakhey hui thi aur uske sir ko sehlaye jaa rahi thi..........

ram kabhi apne danoton ke beech unhein daba leta............to kabhi apne danton se dabakar kheenchney lagta.......uske har ek harkat pe kavya buri tarah se machal jati..........aab uska sabra dheere dheere jawab deta jaa raha tha.........wahin ram aaj kavya ke chuchiyon par mano toot pada tha......aisa lag raha tha jaise kavya kahin bhagi jaa rahi ho...........wo jaise janam ka bhookha ho.........wo kabhi poori taqat se unhein masalta to kabhi uske nipples ko bari bari se kheenchney lagta............wahin kavya dard aur maze se sisak uthathi........

ram ka lund is waqt buri tarah se akada hua tha...............aisa lag raha tha jaise aab uska pani chooth jayega..........aab usey bhi sabra nahin ho raha tha.............ram kavya se thoda sa door hota hain aur fir se kavya ke taraf bade dhyaan se dekhney lagta hain............wahin kavya usey hi dekhey jaa rahi thi............

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[Ajaykumar82]

Update- 31(B) (Megha Update)

" aaaaaaaaaasssssssssssss........aise kya dekh rahe ho ram........." aur kavya ki aankhein dubara laajat se band ho jati hain wahin ram is baar apna ek haath kavya ke pet ki taraf le jane lagta hain.....aur jaise jaise uske haath neechay ki taraf sarak rahe they kavya ki bechaini bhi aab badhti jaa rahi thi.......wo bahut aachey se janti thi ki ram ka haath aaab uske jism ke kis hissey par jane wala hain............ye khyaal aate hi uski choot mein gilapan fir se badhney lagta hain........wahin wo bhi apna ek haath aagey badhati hain aur ram ke lower ki taraf le jane lagti hain.......aur ram ke lund ko lower ke upar se hi pakad leti hain.......wahin ram na chahtey hue bhi zoron se sisak padta hain........

is tarah kavya ke najuk sparsh se ram ka lund aur bhi sakht hota jaa raha tha........wahin uska sabra aab jawab dene laga tha.........wo bhi bina waqt ganwaye agle hi pal kavya kee janghon ke beech apne haath rakh deta hain aur uski choot ko kaskar apni mutthi mein zoron se bheench leta hain.......ram ke is harkat pe kavya bhi zoron se sisak padti hain wahin ram uski chuchiyon ko kabhi kaatey jaa raha tha.......to kabhi berahmi se masley jaa raha tha............idher kavya bhi uske lund ko lower ke upar se hila rahi thi aur aakhirkar  is baar ram ka sabra poori tarah se jawab de jata hain aur wo wahin zoron se sisaktey hue cum chodney lagta hain...........jo uske lund ke pani se uske lower ko gila karta jaa raha tha........

aab wo apni manzil to paa chuka tha magar pyasi reh gayi thi to ek baar fir se kavya............jo aab wo ram ko ajeeb si nazreion se dekh rahi thi........ram ki sansein bahut zoron se chal rahi thi wahin uski aankhein aabhi bhi band thi.........jab uska nasha poori tarah se utarta hain wo fauran kavya ko apne se alag karta hain aur fauran bathroom mein bhag jata hain...........fresh hone ke baad wo dubara se wapas aata hain to kavya apna suit dubara se pehan chuki thi............aur wo wahin baithi hui lumbi lumbi sansein le rahi thi............sach to ye tha ki uski pyaas bujhney ke bajaye aur bhi bhadak uthi thi.........is adhurey pyaas ki wajah se uske ander ki jo aag lagi hui thi wo aag aab aur  bhi bhadak gayi thi........magar ram ka ye sab pehli baar tha ye sochkar wo mayoos to hoti hain magar ussey nazar nahin hoti............wo bhi janti thi ki jawani ke is khel mein aisa aksar hota hain............

wo bhi apne aapko samjha bujakar bister par let jati hain aur ram kavya se nazrein chupaye fauran bister par jakar soo jata hain........waise bhi aaj jo kuch hua tha ram ke liye itna sab bahut tha........aaj kavya jaisi hassena ko usney adnangi halat mein dekh liya tha upar se uske badan ke saath jee bharkar khel raha tha............ye ram ke liye kisi karishmey se kum nahin tha............

magar shayad aaj kavya ki aankhon mein neend jaise gayab ho chuki thi............bister par wo bhale hi leti hui thi magar uske dimag mein is waqt bahut kuch ghoom raha tha.........aaj kavya poori tarah se bechain lag rahi thi...........jawani ki aag mein wo pal pal jal rahi thi............aab usey apni pyaas kisi bhi keemat par bujhani thi............chahe uske liye usey jo karna pade..........sahi ya ........galat.........wo nahin jati thi.............kafi der tak wo yu hi na jane kya kya sochti rehti hain aur aakirkar wo bhi thak kar soo jati hain............

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har roz ki tarah ram apne college chala jata hain aur kavya apne kaam mein lag jati hain.......magar har din ki tarah aaj ka din kuch khaas hone wala tha..........upar se aaj mausam ka mizaz bhi kuch badla badla sa nazar aa raha tha...........aasman mein ghane badal chaye hue they aur dheere dheere hawa bhi aab chalney lagi thi...........kavya kuch sochkar muskura padti hain aur fauran apne kamrey ki taraf chal padti hain............fir wo almirah se saari select karti hain aur wahi safed rang ki saari nikalti hain jo kal raghu ne ussey demand ki thi...........ek baar fir se uske chehrey par muskaan tair jati hain aur wo apne suit ko dheere dheere utarney lagti hain.........aur neechay apna laggy.........

aab wo sirf bra aur panty mein sheeshay ke samney khadi thi aur ek tuk apne aapko nihaar rahi thi.......shayad usey bhi apna haseen badan attract kar raha tha...........wo us saari ko dheere dheere pehaney lagti hain aur baar baar ghadi ki taraf bhi dekhti rehti hain......dil mein bechaini bhi waqt ke saath saath aab badhti jaa rahi thi.........waise raghu ko aane mein aabhi kuch waqt tha......aur kavya ke liye itna waqt taiyaar hone ke liye kafi tha...........humesha ki tarah deep low cut blouse jo uski nangi peeth ko aur bhi apni taraf attract kar rahi thi.........samney dressing table par wo kuch sringaar ke saman use karti hain aur apne aapko sajney sanwarey lagti hain.......final touch dekar aakhirkar uske chehrey par ek pyari si muskaan tair jati hain aur wo apne aapko ek tuk sheeshay mein khadi yu hi nihari rehti hain..........har roz ki tarah wo aaj kuch zyada hi haseen lag rahi thi.........aaj usney bal bhi khule rakhey they............

waise aaj wo ye sab raghu ke liye hi to kar rahi thi............kyon ki raghu ki khushi mein usey aab apni khushi nazar aa rahi thi..........waise kavya aaj poori qayamat lag rahi thi..............ghadi mein jab uski nazar jati hain uske chehrey par ek muskaan tair jati hain........kyon ki aab ghadi mein 9 baj chuke they aur raghu ke aane ka waqt bhi ho chuka tha.........ander hi ander usey kuch ghabrahat si hone lagi thi wahin usey raghu ke aane ka aab bada hi besabri se intezar bhi tha..........tabhi kamrey ka dor bell baja aur kavya ke chehrey par ek muskaan tair gayi.........usey pata ttha ki darwaze par is waqt kaun hoga.........

wo fauran main door ki taraf chal padti hain jahan raghu humesha ki tarah bahar khada hua darwaza khulney ka intezar kar raha tha.........magar kahin na kahin uske ander thodi ghabrahat bhi ho rahi thi..........magar usey yakeen tha ki aaj raghu usey is haal mein agar dekheyega to zaroor khus ho jayega...........aur shayad kavya bhi yehi to chahti thi.........jaise hi main door khula raghu samney wahin darwaze par khada tha............usi haal mein........usi andaaz mein..........humesha ki tarah aaj bhi wo paan chaba raha tha.........wahin raghu ki jab nazar kavya par padi uski aankhein hairat se failti chali gayi........kyon ki usey khud par yakeen nahin ho raha tha ki kavya aaj uske liye saj sanwakar aayi hain..........bahar kafi zyada mositure tha aur hawa bhi aab chalni band ho gayi thi...........badal bahut ghane chaye hue they aisa lag raha tha jab baarish ho jaye  ........wahin raghu ka jism pasiney se boori tarah bheega hua tha...........kuch kaam ki wajah se,............to kuch badhtey tapmaan ki wajah se............

" are waah..................aaj to aap bilkul qayamat lag rahi hain memsaheb............" aur raghu kavya ke peechay peechay chal padta hain wahin uski nazrein humesha ki tarah aaj bhi kavya ke gand par tiki hui thi...........wahin kavya bahut aachey se janti thi ki raghu is waqt kya dekh raha hoga........magar shayad kavya ko aaj ye sab aacha lag raha tha..........

" naaste mein .............kya lengey aap............" aur kavya raghu ki taraf dekhtey hue haule se muskura padti hain wahin raghu apne kale peelay daant dikhata hua haule se hans padta hain...........aaj kavya ke language mein bhi thoda sa badlaav aa gaya tha...........jis naukar se wo kal tak tum kehkar bulati thi aaj usi naukar ko aap kehkar bula rahi thi...........ye badi baat thi.......

" lene ko to bahut kuch hain memsaheb.........magar kya aap de sakti hain ye cheez zyada mayney rakhti hain...........waise aap jo bhi dengi main khushi khusi le lunga......." aur raghu apne daant fir se dikhata hua hans padta hain wahin kavya bhi raghu ke baateion ko sunkar thodi si sharma jati hain............wo raghu ke baateion ka matlab bahut aacheey se samjh rahi thi............ki raghu ka ishara kis taraf hain......

" jo tum chaho wo sab kuch main tumhein de sakti hoon magar usko lene ke liye tumhare ander kaleja hona chahiye............hain tumhare ander wo himmat.....!!!! " aur kavya bhi raghu ki taraf dekhtey hue apni baat ka jawab deti hain wahin raghu fir se hans padta hain......

" aapke liye to main jaan de bhi sakta hoon ..............aur kisi ki le bhi sakta hoon............aap ek baar hukum to kijiye.........." aur raghu paan chabatey hue fir se bol padta hain waghin kavya uski bateion ko sunkar muskura padti hain..........

" wo to waqt hi batayega.......ki tum mein hain kitna dum..........kehna bahut aasan hain aur karna utna hi mushkil.........." aur kavya dheere se hans padti hain...............

" shukriya memsaheb.......jo aapne meri baat rakhi............mere khatir ye saari dubara se pehaney ke liye..........." aur raghu aahista se bol padta hain wahin kavya jawab mein fir se muskura padti hain.........

" ek baat aur kahe.........mujhe aapka ye A.C bilkul suit nahin karta..........in sab mein rehney ki aadat aapko hain ...........mujhe nahin........to kya aap mere khatir apna ye A.C band karengi..........." aur raghu fir se kavya ki taraf ajeeb nazreion se dekhney lagta hain wahin kavya kuch der tak soch mein doob jati hain..........uske liye A.C mein ek pal rehna bahut muskhil tha.........wo janti thi ki agar thodi der ke liye bhi A.C agar band hua to wo pasiney se poori tarah bheeg jayegi...........aur to aur aaj garmi har roz se bahut zyada bhi thi.........magar wo raghu ko naraz bhi nahin karna chahti thi............kuh sochkar wo A.C band kar deti hain wahin raghu fir se muskura padta hain.........raghu aachey se janta tha ki jo log A.C mein rehtey hain wo agar zara bhi bahar nikaley to wo log pasiney se buri tarah bheeg jayengey..........aur shayad raghu bhi yehi chahta tha ki kavya  ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi ho..............

" shukriya memsaheb..........." aur raghu wahin palti modkar farsh par humesha ki tarah baith jata hain wahin kavya kitchen mein jati hain aur raghu ke liye nasta lekar aati hain...............aaj naste mein do kele .........apple aur idli sambhar they.........jo khaas aaj kavya ne raghu ke liye banaye they............wo tray lekar jaise hi neechay ki taraf jhukati hain ek baar fir se raghu ka lund uski aankhon ke samney nazar aane lagta hain...........ek baar fir se uski sansein bhari hone lagti hain............wahin ek baar uska dil fir se machalney laga tha........choot mein gilapan fir se badhney laga tha.........jaise taise wo apne sanson ko sambhalti hain aur aakar wahin sofey par baith jati hain.........

A.C band hone ki wajah se kavya ko aab dheere dheere pasiney hone lage they.......upar se bahar ka mausam itna garam tha ki uski bechani aab badhti jaa rahi thi.........wahin raghu ke jism se bhi pasiney aab dheere dheere beh rahe they...........raghu kuch der tak kavya ke taraf taktaki lagaye dekhta rehta hain fir wo apne t-shirt ke ander se kavya ki bra nikalta hain aur usey apne jaghon par rakh deta hain........wahin kavya bade gaur se raghu ke har ek harkaton ko dekh rahi thi.........laal bra hone ki wajah se usmein safed safed daag saaf nazar aa rahe they jo kavya ko samjhaney ke liye kafi they ki ye daag aakhir kis cheez ke hain.........

"raghu agle hi pal us bra ko apne mooh ke paas le jata hain aur bra ke ek cup mein apne mooh mein rakha kuch paan ka peek usmein thook deta hain...............wahin kavya usey ajeeb nazreion se dekh rahi thi.......aur uska dil bhi aab zoron se dhadkney laga tha.............pata nahin raghu uski bra ki aur kya kya halat karega wo yehi sochkar hairaan thi........magar usey raghu ki sari harkatein dheere dheere aab pasand aa rahi thi.........wahin uska inkar bhi dheere dheere aab khatam hota jaa raha tha.............

raghu fir se ek paan ka tukda apne t-shirt se bahar nikata hain aur usey mooh mein lekar fir se chabaney lagta hain.......fir wo us bra ko hawa mein lataktey hue seedha kavya ke taraf chal padta hain..............wahin kavya ajeeb nazreion se raghu ko apne taraf aata hua dekh rahi thi............wahin uska dil aab zoron se ghabra raha tha.........wo aachey se janti thi ki raghu jaise hi uske paas aayega wo usey inkaar nahin kar payegi............aur shayad kavya usey inkaar karna bhi nahin chahti thi............ek ajeeb si pyaas fir se kavya ke ander aab dheere dheere janam lene lagi thi..........

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[Ajaykumar82]

fir se mera 10 kb ka update lost ho gaya.......kal se main teen baar likh chuka hoon aur har baar ye update lost ho jaa raha hain..........mood poora off ho chuka hain........agla update jald dunga....

[Jaan]

Mast update hae bhai..! Aese hi likhty rahiyega ajay bhai..!

[Silverstone93]

fir se mera 10 kb ka update lost ho gaya.......kal se main teen baar likh chuka hoon aur har baar ye update lost ho jaa raha hain..........mood poora off ho chuka hain........agla update jald dunga....

Bhai, updates ka back up rakho taki agli baar aisa na ho.. Mehnat ek zatke me fail ho jaye to kisi ko acha nahi lagta.. Thanks for your efforts.
Nice update. Waiting for your next update.

[Sumit1234]

Lajawab update bro please continue aur hero humra Raghu Rehna chahiye please

[Mprajpootmp]

So erotic bro

[itonya]

mast update ajay ji... devar bhabhi mein achcha conversation hua...

[sumit143]

Nice update

[Anmolkjain]

kisi ko raghu wala chapter pasand hain to kisi ko ram wala.....aab aap hi sab batawon ki main kya likhun.......

Aapne jo aage soccha hai usi ko aage badhao bhai....auro ki baate ko mt suno...aap apni thinking se likho...

deri ke liye maafi chahta hoon  yaara...update haazir hain........

[Ajgupta]

Nice.
Loving ram and kavya chapter.
Make his character more strong buddy.
Rest is ur choice?

[Anmolkjain]

Mind blowing update yaara....kasam se maza aagaya padhkar...

[Sam Fisher]

Sir ji upar ek voting rakh do. Asani hogi aapko

Phir baad mein aap decide kariyega ise Romantic Adultry ya phir sirf Adultry ke taraf le jana he

[naani]

अजय भाई अपडेट अच्छे से है। आपके patience is लिए बहुत धन्यवाद । अगले बार अपडेट पोस्ट करने की पहले रखलो भाई क्यूंकि फिर से लिखने बहुत मुश्किल काम है । ये कहानी आपके है आप क्या सोच के शुरू किया वैसे ही लिखते रहो । नहीं तो किसी ने कहा ना उसी तरफ वोटिंग रख लो और उसके जरिए लिखो। फिर एक बार आप इस कहानी से हम लोगों को खुशी देने की लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद ।

[sunwin]

Aweesssome.. Bhai kya Zardari update diya hai

[sunwin]

I loved the way u have crafted kavya's character to homely wife to bold new bindaas

[sunwin]

Ajay bhai u r going great.. Apne hisaab se likho aap.. Jaisa jaa rhe ho sahi jaa rhe ho