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Misc. Erotica Maheen ........ Mohy Rang Dy Piya
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Outstanding and extraordinary update. Very hot and spicy writings.
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Maheen ko chodne ke baad Vinod
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Bahut bahut garam,kamuk,uttejit karnewala aur masaladar writings!
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Bahut bahut garam, behad hi kamuk aur ekdom spicy story writings!
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Very nice and interesting update!
Really hot and super exciting writings!
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Milte hai.....honeymoon par
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Nice! Superb aur ekdom umda update! bahut khub,bahut achi writings!
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Super and sexy...Aur 1k baat.. Office jatay hi Sir Vinod ko 3din ko out tour ko bayjay..Office say sida tour ko jaya..Aur Maheen ghar par akali rahai aur sex to tadpai aur neetu ko bolaya aur uska boyfriend bhi aya..Aur Neetu ki jaga par Maheen ki chudai karay..Neetu ko bhi malum na ho..ki usnai Maheen ki chudayi ki hai..Thoda extra masala dalo..Aur fir Vinod kay anai kay baad honeymoon tour ko jaya...Thoda iska barai mai socho..
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(08-03-2025, 09:48 PM)Faaadi Wrote: "Wah!  Yeh update bilkul dil jeet liya! Aapki mehnat aur jadoo-e-bayan ka sach mein dil se daad deta hoon. Har ek lafz ne mujhe apni duniya mein khicha aur ab aur 3 din ek sadi k barabar guzrege magar ab dil yeh keh raha hai ke k jald se jald is khoobsurat story ka agla update mile Aapki har post, har update dil ki gehrai tak asar karti hai aisa lagta hai jaise yeh sab kuch bilk real mai ho raha ho isliye ab iss bar thoda jaldi meherbani farma kar aur hum sab ka thora sa khayail karke zara jalde matlab k kal nahi lekin parso update dene k koshish karna lekin bilkul ais update ke tarah dil ko cho lene wala  update dena






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kahaani pasand krny ky ly

koshish kron ga ky aik update kal dy don ..............

lakin no promise yaar ............


(08-03-2025, 10:49 PM)The MilfHunter Wrote: Just mind blowing and mouth watering update.








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(08-03-2025, 11:04 PM)arvind274 Wrote: Nice updates








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(08-03-2025, 11:16 PM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Ati sundar











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(08-03-2025, 11:21 PM)Vondo Baba Wrote: ? percent entertaining writing











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(08-03-2025, 11:32 PM)Rahul@1234567 Wrote: Super mind blowing...jitna update dete ho utna hi kam lagata h ....best always forever story of life..... please please please please update more










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(08-03-2025, 11:33 PM)Vijayverma Wrote: Superb update bro keep it bro waiting for next update eagerly bro












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(09-03-2025, 02:11 AM)Meandme Wrote: mst update









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(09-03-2025, 02:28 AM)masud93 Wrote: maast  & lajawaab,,,,,aise hi ek dusre se chudwata rahe,,,,aur hum reader ko maazaa dete rahe,,, thanks bro,,& gif, pic ba upload karne ka tarika sike ke  story ka maazaa badaye











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(09-03-2025, 02:32 AM)masud93 Wrote: love from Bangladesh,,,,, aab lagta hai office ke mahawol bhi kuch garam garam hoga,,,,maazaa aayega office mein bhi,,,,neetu & many character bhi add hogi shayad,,,,request hai Ek,,,India mein bhi  asif ke baare mein kuch
gatna bataw








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(09-03-2025, 02:35 AM)masud93 Wrote: office mein jake honeymoon ka program ban jaye ga lagta hai,,,dekhte hai writer ke man mein kya hai,aur ha bro,,


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(09-03-2025, 10:58 AM)Armando Wrote: Outstanding and extraordinary update. Very hot and spicy writings.







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(09-03-2025, 11:52 AM)Mousumi Wrote: Bahut bahut garam,kamuk,uttejit karnewala aur masaladar writings!










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(09-03-2025, 01:48 PM)Gadrayi Maal Wrote: Bahut bahut garam, behad hi kamuk aur ekdom spicy story writings!










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(09-03-2025, 02:06 PM)Madman007 Wrote: Very nice and interesting update!
Really hot and super exciting writings!
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(09-03-2025, 03:31 PM)Vnice Wrote: Milte hai.....honeymoon par
With more exitement











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(09-03-2025, 04:22 PM)Vamp Wrote: Nice! Superb aur ekdom umda update! bahut khub,bahut achi writings!









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Very...very ..sexy and hot...one...Aur Vinod ko kuch din kay liya bhar janai do ..Abhi office say...Aur Maheen ko sex kay liya tabpai..Raat mai neetu ko ghar par bolay aur sath mai Rajiv ko bhi..Aur Rajiv Maheen ki jam kay chudai kar..Lakin Neetu ko malum nahi hona chahiye hai..Fir Vinod aur Maheen honeymoon tour par jaya..
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Aur Vinod ko office kay kaam kay liya bhar janai do.. Neetu aur Rajiv ko Maheen kar ghar par bolay aur Rajiv Maheen ki jam kar chudai kar lakin Neetu ko malum nahi ho.. Rajiv Maheen ko Neetu samjh kar chodai..Aur Rajiv Maheen ki tarif kar kay chodai neetu samjh kar..
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reader to update pe update demand kar raha hai,,,
Yaahi to ek writer ka victory,,,,,
milte hai office pe,,,Ya honeymoon spot pe,,,
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Very mush sweet and savory writings!
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UPDATE NO: 25


Office main tea break tak sub ko Maheen aor Vinod ky beech hoy nay sambandh ka pata chal chuka hoa tha ........ tea break main Nick bhi apni coffee lainy ky ly aaya to us sy bhi Maheen ki mulaqaat hoi ............ Nick ny Maheen ko dekha ..... to dheery sy muskraany laga ...... maaini khaiz nazron sy usy dekhty hoy .............. uski nazron ko dekhty hoy Maheen samjh gye ky usy bhi usky aor Vinod ky darmyaan jo hoa uska pata chal chuka hai ................ yeh baat soch kr Nick ky nazron ka matlab samjhti hoi Maheen sharmaa gye .............. Nick usky qareeb aaya .....

Nick ........ Hi Maheen ...... how are you

Maheen ... I am okay sir ...

Nick ..... that's good ...... today you are looking fresh and glowing ........ any special reason ........ Nick Maheen ko tease krty hoy bola ........

Maheen uski baat ko sun ky sharmaa gye ....... woh Nick ka matlab samjh rahi thi ......... mgar ab usy kya jawab deti ....... no ... nothing special sir .....

Nick muskraya ..... okay .......... enjoy yourself ........ yeh kahty hoy Nick apny office ki taraf chala gya aor Maheen ny sukh ka lamba saans lya .....



Chaay py Karan bhi aaya lakin zyada baat nahi ki aor khaamoshi sy apna chaay ka cup ly kr apni table py chala gya ........ bajaay tea room main beth ky chaay peenay ky ............ usky jaany ky baad........... . Neetu aor Jenny dono mil ky Maheen ko tease kr rahi thin ............ Vinod ko to kisi ny kuch na kaha ........ mgar Maheen ky sharmaany aor ljaany ki wajah sy usy zyada tang krti rahin ...........

Neetu .......... hey Jenny ........ Maheen aor Vinod aik honeymoon trip plan kr rahy hain ........ this weekend py ........

Jenny ....... woww ........... yeh to buhat achi baat hai ...... in logo ko jaana bhi chahye .......... aik doosry ko samjhny ka aor enjoy krny ka time mily ga ............

Maheen sharmaa rahi thi ............... mujhy yeh sub theek nahi lag raha  ......

Jenny ........... Maheen actually yeh tumhara pahla mouka hai na apny husband ky ilawa kisi bhi doosry mard ky saath relationship main aany ka is ly tum ko thora un comforartable lag raha hai ......... lakin yeh siraf chand dinnon ki baat hai phir tum dono aik doosry ky saath bilkul comfotable ho jaao gy .......... aor yeh honeymoon trip bhi is sub main kaafi helpful ho ga ............

Neetu muskraai ......... aor Maheen ko tease krti hoi boli ........... Jenny ..... Maheen to ab tak bhi kaafi comfortable ho chuki hoi hai Vinod ky saath .......... main ny kal dekhi thi in dono ki chemistry ............

Jenny hansi ........ by the way you two appear to be a very beautiful and competible couple ............ bilkul match ..........

Maheen Jenny ki baat sy sharmaai .......... lakin dil hi dil main khush bhi hoi ............... aor aik nazar Vinod ki taraf dekha ....... jo un sy door Dane ky saath betha hoa tha ...........

Jenny forn hi boli ........ look look ..... how is she looking at her lover ...... hahahahh ............ Neetu bhi hansny lagi ........ aor Maheen bhi sharmaati hoi unky saath muskraany lagi ............

Jenny ........ by the way Maheen you are very lucky .......... ky tumko Vinod jaisa handsome boyfriend mila hai ............ i hope you are enjoying his company ............. am i right ...... ?

Maheen ny sharmaaty hoy ahista sy haan main sir hilaa dya ..........

Jenny ....... Maheen tell me how was your first night with Vinod ....... ???

Maheen muskraai ........ aor sharmaati hoi boli ....... naa main koi virgin hon aor naa hi meri Vinod sy shaadi hoi hai ........... jo meri usky saath pahli night special hoti ...........

Jenny hansi ........ no no ........ no way ....... tum aisi batain kr ky bach nahi sakti ............ theek sy btaao ky kaisa hoa sub kuch ........ warna tumko pata hai na ky main jaa ky Vinod sy pooch lon gi ........

Maheen ghabraa gye ........ aor phir hans pari ........ that was good ..........

Jenny ...... better than with your first night with your husband .... ???

Maheen sharmaati hoi ...... yes .... much better ....... Vinod is much caring ........ and much loving ........

Jenny ........ is he bigger than your husband ...... ???

Maheen ..... shramaati hoi ..... hmmm .......... bigger ..

Jenny ........ phir to dard bhi hoa ho ga ...........

Maheen ....... haan ........ buhat ........

Jenny ........ only now you can know that the bigger is always better ........

Maheen ny bhi muskraa ky haan main sir hilaa dya ........

Jenny Maheen ky kaan ky pass apny hont laa ky whisper krti hoi boli ............ Maheen ........... Vinod might be big ..... but he can never be bigger than Nick's big Gun ................... hehehehe

Maheen ka chehra uski baat sun ky laal ho gya ........ Neetu aor Jenny uski halat dekh ky hansany lagin .......

Maheen ........... Jenny ...... have you told Nick also ........... ??

Jenny Maheen ko aankh maarti hoi boli .......... yes ....... and believe me he was so much happy and excited ............. aor phir usky kaan ky pass monh ly jaa ky ahista sy boli ......... and he is waiting for his turn ........... hehehehe ........

Maheen ko uski baat py aor bhi sharmindgi hony lagi ..... aor usy Nick ky nazrain yaad aany lagin .............

Neetu boli ..... hey jenny ... don't scare her ..... it's just begining for her ........ abhi der lagy gi isy Nick ky ly ready hony main ........

Maheen sharmaai aor unko jawab deti hoi boli ..... no way ....... I don't wanna die in some ocward way ........ heheheh

teenon hansnay lagin ........ aor phir Maheen aor Vinod ky honeymoon trip ky ly munasib jaga discuss krny lagin ......... Jenny ny unko London sy outskirts main aik lake area ka btaya ........... Maheen you will enjoy the place ........... it is so good and full of nature ........... very good environment and good shopping malls ........... additionally there is a beautiful lake ............ you would fell in love with the place ...............

Maheen ko bhi dilchaspi hony lagi ........... Jenny ny Vinod ko bhi bulaa lya aor unko us jaga ka btaya .......... phir Jenny ny hi call kr ky Maheen aor Vinod ky ly wahan ky aik resort main aik room book krwaa dya .......... unko Thursday ki shaam ko check in krna tha ........... Sunday tak ky ly .................. Maheen bhi ab kaafi comfortable aor khush thi .......... usy Asif ky saath kahin pr bhi honeymoon ky ly jaany ka mouka nahi mila tha apny ghar ky conservative mahool ki wajah sy ....... mgar usky dil main yeh khawahish aor yeh kammi zarur rah gye thi ky woh honeymoon ko enjoy nahi kr saki ............ aor ab usy life main aik aor mouka mil raha tha apni life main rah jaany wali kammi ko poora krny ka ............ aor woh bhi Vinod jaisy handsome, khoobsorat, powerful aor caring mard ky saath .............. pahly honeymoon ky ly jaany ki jhijhak uski khatam ho chuki thi ............. aor uski jaga excitement ny ly li thi ...............

Jenny ........... Vinod i hope you two will fully enjoy the scenery of nature ............... don't keep staying in bed with Maheen all the time ............ hahaha ............... Neetu bhi hansny lagi aor Maheen sharmaa gye ........

Jenny ........ aor haan wahan Maheen ko shopping bhi krwana ....... I think Maheen ko ab apny conservative attire sy bahar aana chahye aor yahan ky mahool main dhal jana chahye .......... Maheen try to be like that .............

Maheen ny holay sy apny sir ko hilaa dya ............... aor phir apny table py kaam krny lagi ............. woh mahsoos kr rahi thi ky Karan kuch khicha khicha sa hai ........ kuch sad sad ............... aik baar woh koi file ly ky usky cabin main gye ............. to us sy poochy bina naa rah saki .......

Maheen ........ Karan ..... tum theek to ho na ........ kya hoa hai aaj tumko ....

Karan ny Maheen ki aankhon main dekha aor udaas lehjy main bola ........ kuch nahi ............ lakin tum to khush ho na ...........

Maheen thora jheenmp gye ........... haan main khush hon ............ lakin tum apna btaao na .......... koi problem hai kya ....

Karan .......... tum meri problems ko choro ...... aor Vinod ky saath apna honey moon enjoy kro ........... he is a lucky guy ............

Maheen thora sharmaai aor apni table py aagye ................. aor thora Karan ki baton ko sochny lagi samjhny ki koshish krny lagi ....... usky behaviour ko ........... ky jaisy ........ ky jaisy usy uska Vinod ky saath milna aor usky saath honeymoon ky ly jaana pasand naa aaya ho ............. Maheen ko Karan ky acha ya bura lagny sy koi faraq parny wala nahi tha ........... kyon ky woh to Vinod ko pyaar karny lagi thi .......... dil sy chahny lagi thi ...............  lakin usy is baat ki hairat ho rahi thi ky Karan ko kyon acha nahi lag raha  ............. kahin woh bhi to usy pasand nahi krny laga ............. yeh baat soch ky Maheen muskraa di ............. ab har koi to mujhy pasand krta hai to main ab kisi ko rok to nahi sakti na ............. Maheen dobara sy apny kaam main lag gye ............. lakin aik aourat hony ki haisyat sy woh Karan ki nazron aor us ki udaasi ko samjh rahi thi ......... usy yaad aa raha tha ky kaisy Karan hamesha uski help krny ky ly usky irdgird madlaata rahta tha ........... mgar woh to siraf Vinod ky khayalon main thi to usy kaisy kisi aor ki taraf dekhny ki fursat milti ...... mgar aaj us py thora asar hoa tha Karan ki udaasi ka .......


office sy ghar aany ky baad Vinod bola ....

Vinod ...... to phir kaisa raha aaj ka tumhara din ......

Maheen hansi ...... uuuuuufffffffff ......... Jenny aor Neetu ny to mera sir hi khaa lya aaj ...... mujhy tease kr kr ky .......

Vinod hansany laga .........

Maheen ....... haan to aor kya ...... woh to aisy mujhy tease kr rahi thin jaisy ky main ny tum sy shaadi hi kr li hai ..... aor ab such main hi hum pati patni hain .........

Vinod usy apni bahoon main bharty hoy bola ...... to kya khayal hai ly hi na lain hum phairay mandap main jaa ky ...........

Maheen uski bahoon main kasmsaai ....... aor uski naak ko apni unglyon main ly ky pinch krti hoi boli ....... wah ..... bari jaldi hai mujhy apni patni bnaany ki ........

Vinod Maheen ky honton ko kiss krty hoy bola ....... haan bilkul hai ..........

Maheen usky honton py kiss back krti hoi boli ........ abhi bhi kuch zarort baqi hai kya phairy lainy ki .......... bana to lya hai mujhy tum ny apni patni ...... bina phairon ky hi ......

aor dono aik doosry ki bahoon main kuch der kiss krty rahy ..... aor phir change kr ky khaana khaany lagy ........


Week ky baqi din long weekend aor short honeymoon trip ki tyyari main hi lag gy ............ office aor ghar main bus isi baat py discussion hoti ........... Maheen bhi ab kaafi excited thi ........... mgar jo mushkil Vinod ko paish aa rahi thi woh yeh thi ky Maheen ny ab Vinod ko honeymoon trip tak apny qareeb aany sy rok dya tha ........ woh raat ko apny bedroom main alag soti thi ..... aaj night py bhi wohi bahas ho rahi thi ..........

Vinod ....... please Maheen ........... aaj to kr leny do na ........ itny din ho gy hain na ............

Maheen ............. to kya hoa .......... pahly bhi to itny din bina kye ruky hi thy na ........... aor ab aik din sabar nahi hota kya ............. kal shaam ko to hum ny wahan jaana hi hai .......... phir waha jaa ky tum konsa mujhy chorny waly ho .............. Maheen muskraai ..........

Vinod ........ theek hai ........ wahan jaa ky dekhna main poora badla loon ga tum sy ...........

Maheen muskraai ........... haan ly lena badla .......... jaisy dil kry .............
yehi to Maheen chahti thi ky itny din Vinod usky ly tarapta rahy ....... aor woh khud bhi ........... taaky honeymoon py woh log khul ky enjoy kr sakain ............ Maheen ny mahsoos kya tha ky jab sy uska Vinod ky sath relationship shuru hoa tha ......... ab woh pahly ki nisbit zyada khush aor fresh rahny lagi thi ................ khili khili si .......... kyon ky ab usy Asif ki kami feel nahi hoti thi ............... haan doosry teesry din Asif sy baat ho jaati thi uski ............... khud sy hi uski taraf sy bhi calls main waqfa barhta jaa raha tha ............... lakin aisa nahi tha ky woh Asif ko bhool rahi thi .......... ya uski mohabbat kam ho rahi thi ........... lakin aik naye mard ka saath usky jeevan main naye rang bhar raha tha ............
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as per my promise aik update haazir e khidmat hai

umeed hai doston ko pasand aay ga

aor tashangi khatam ho jaay gi ab next update ky ly

aor umeed hai ky mujhy kuch waqt dy dya jaayy ga dosto ki taraf sy ............


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(10-03-2025, 09:59 PM)pinkbaby Wrote: as per my promise aik update haazir e khidmat hai

umeed hai doston ko pasand aay ga

aor tashangi khatam ho jaay gi ab next update ky ly

aor umeed hai ky mujhy kuch waqt dy dya jaayy ga dosto ki taraf sy ............


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Hahaha? teshnage khatam kaha hui balke teshnage tu aur b bhar gaye very veryyyyyy excited for their honeymoon I can't believe k apko iss tarah k idea atte kaise hai itne amazing itne zabardast aur reality se itne match karte hue bahut khoobsurat update the
Baqi ap ne kaha k apko time dia jaye tu theek hai ap kal break le le lekin update parson dena hahahah?just kidding ap is baar 2 den k bajaye 3 den ka gap Lena lekin please ek bahut bare romance se bharpoor aur erotic update dena
Just take your time lekin ek bharee update ka intezar rahe ga
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"Arrey, yeh kaise har baar apne aap ko outdo kar lete ho? Aapki writing ek perfect cup of coffee ki tarah hai—rich, comforting, aur resist karne mein namumkin! Main aapke romance, passion, aur un chhote lamhon ka *deewana* ho gaya hoon jo kahani ko itni asli banate hain. Aur characters ke beech ka chemistry? Woh toh bas FIRE hai! Apna time lijiye, lekin yaad rakhiye main yahan apni page ko refresh karte hue aapke agle chapter ka intezar karunga ap zabardast hain, likhte rahiye!
"Aapki kahaniyan sirf screen par likhe lafzon se zyada hain—woh dil ka sukoon hain. ? Aap jo emotions har jumle mein bharti hain, woh ek sanat hai. Mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise main sirf kahani nahi padh rahi hoon, balki usme jee rahi hoon, usme saans le rahi hoon, aur use apne seene se laga rahi hoon. Pyaar, intezaar, jazbaat—sab kuch itna khoobsurat aur asli hai. Aapki is khoobsurat den ke liye shukriya. Apna time lijiye, lekin yaad rakhiye ke aapke lafz hamare liye duniya ka matlab rakhte hain.
"Aapki writing mein woh baat hai jo dil ko chhoo jati hai Har chapter ke saath aap ek naya rang bharti hain, aur main har baar hairan reh jati hoon ke aap itni khoobsurat kahaniyan kaise likh lete hain. Aapke characters ka pyaar, unka rishta, aur unke jazbaat—sab kuch itna asli lagta hai. Main aapke agle update ka intezar kar rahi hoon, lekin apna time lijiye aur apne aap ko zaroor break dene ka khayal rakhiye. Aapki mehnat aur mohabbat dono hi nazar aati hain, ap aise hee hamesha lekhte rahe
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Finally nick entering the scene
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(10-03-2025, 10:17 PM)Faaadi Wrote: Hahaha? teshnage khatam kaha hui balke teshnage tu aur b bhar gaye very veryyyyyy excited for their honeymoon I can't believe k apko iss tarah k idea atte kaise hai itne amazing  itne zabardast aur reality se itne match karte hue bahut khoobsurat update the
Baqi ap ne kaha k apko time dia jaye tu theek hai ap kal break le le lekin update parson dena hahahah?just kidding ap is baar  2 den k bajaye 3 den ka gap Lena lekin please ek bahut bare romance se bharpoor aur erotic update dena
Just take your time lekin ek bharee update ka intezar rahe ga








(10-03-2025, 10:29 PM)Faaadi Wrote: "Arrey, yeh kaise har baar apne aap ko outdo kar lete ho? Aapki writing ek perfect cup of coffee ki tarah hai—rich, comforting, aur resist karne mein namumkin! Main aapke romance, passion, aur un chhote lamhon ka *deewana* ho gaya hoon jo kahani ko itni asli banate hain. Aur characters ke beech ka chemistry? Woh toh bas FIRE hai! Apna time lijiye, lekin yaad rakhiye main yahan apni page ko refresh karte hue aapke agle chapter ka intezar karunga ap zabardast hain, likhte rahiye!  
"Aapki kahaniyan sirf screen par likhe lafzon se zyada hain—woh dil ka sukoon hain. ? Aap jo emotions har jumle mein bharti hain, woh ek sanat hai. Mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise main sirf kahani nahi padh rahi hoon, balki usme jee rahi hoon, usme saans le rahi hoon, aur use apne seene se laga rahi hoon. Pyaar, intezaar, jazbaat—sab kuch itna khoobsurat aur asli hai. Aapki is khoobsurat den ke liye shukriya. Apna time lijiye, lekin yaad rakhiye ke aapke lafz hamare liye duniya ka matlab rakhte hain.
"Aapki writing mein woh baat hai jo dil ko chhoo jati hai Har chapter ke saath aap ek naya rang bharti hain, aur main har baar hairan reh jati hoon ke aap itni khoobsurat kahaniyan kaise likh lete hain. Aapke characters ka pyaar, unka rishta, aur unke jazbaat—sab kuch itna asli lagta hai. Main aapke agle update ka intezar kar rahi hoon, lekin apna time lijiye aur apne aap ko zaroor break dene ka khayal rakhiye. Aapki mehnat aur mohabbat dono hi nazar aati hain, ap aise hee hamesha lekhte rahe








buhat buhat shukrya update ko like krny ka


itny achy achy lafzon sy meri hosla afzaai krny ka

yeh sub apa dosto ki mohabbat hai jo aap log dil sy likhi hoi aik kahaani ko dil sy parhty ho ............

meri yahi koshish hoti hai ky haqeeqi zindagi ky qareeb hi rakhon story ko aor tmam waqyaat ko haqeeqi zindagi sy hi lon ........ to hi maza aata hai

saath bnaay rakhy ga ....... aor isi tarah comments krty rahin .......



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