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Bhai band kar do yeh story. Baith gaya hai humara.
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Story mein shuru se sirf zabardasti ho raha hai. Mehek ka character change karo. Woh khud ab bhikhari, mazdoor, choro se .... samajh gaye na ;-) (Wink)
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nice story clp); please continue ..
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Update 48
Mahak apni bebasi par aansu bahaye ja rahi thi or iski sabse badi vajah thi jalim singh ki blackmailing koi bhi ladki koi officers or koi bhi rahishjadi kyo na sabko apni ijjat ki parwah hoti hai or yahi karan tha ki aaj mahak ki ijjat ko En sonagachi ki galiyon me nilam ki gayi or mahak bebasi se sab sahti rahi
Mahak ke pass kisi ke aane ki Aahat hoti hai or mahak darwaze ki taraf dekhti hai to chanda or salma ke sath jalim singh aaye hue the
Mahak -kyo kar rahe ho aisa kyo meri jindagi barbad kar rahe tumhe paise chahiye mai dungi tumhe paise bolo kitne chahiye
Jalim (haste huye) -tu kya samjhti hai kutiya tujhe yaha paise ke liye nilam kiya hai tujhe paise ke liye nahi tujhe hum jaiso ke raste se hatane ke liye nilam kiya hai
Mahak - tumko mai chhodungi nahi tum jo kar rahe ho uska natija bahut bura hoga samjhe
Jalim -abhi to tere sath hoga bura teri shadi hai aaj
Mahak chouktey huye sadme me chali jati hai
Jalim -aaj teri shadi hai suna tune
Mahak -kisse
Jalim -,tera asli hakdar tera malik jisne tere ko kharida hai
Mahak -mai aisa kabhi nahi karungi or aisa nahi kar sakte
Jalim - aisa hi hoga or khud taiyar hogi samjhi kutiya
Mahak-nahi aisa kabhi nahi hoga
Jalim -apne phone me kahi call lagata hai jo video call tha
Phir video call karne ke baad phone ko mahak ki taraf ghumata hai or mahak ko uska Ghar dikhayi deta hai bahar se or iske baad kuch aadami jo shayad jalim Singh ke aadmi the
Jalim -ab to tu samjh gayi hogi na mai kya kahna chahta hu ab bol ab bhi nahi karegi tu shadi karegi na bol kutiya bol karegi na
Mahak-kyo kar rahe ho aisa kyo meri jindagi barbad karne per tule huye ho please chhod do mujhe mai tere raste kabhi nahi aaungi please
Jalim mahak ke upar burkha fekta hai
Jalim -jyada noutanki mat kar or ye burkha pahan tujhe aaj shadi karni court me agar tune jyada hosiyari dikhai udhar rajistard office me to sali tu janti hai anjam kya hoga isliye ye burkha pahan or fatafat bahar aa
Mahak ki aankhon se aansu bahe ja rahe aaj mahak itni bebas thi ki kuch kar nahi sakti thi es shadi ke alawa itni bebas thi mahak
Mahak us burke ko dekhti hai or pahan leti hai
Aaj mahak ki jindagi badalne wali thi mahak shrivastav se mahak mahak sultan banne wali hai
Mahak shadi shuda jindagi kaise rumanch se bhari hogi kaisi jindagi hogi aage
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Ise aage to badao yaar koi
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iss story kab aayega..........????
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Hello Omprakash ji
Story complete karna ki try karo. it is a very good story
Waiting for New updates in it
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Chalo Mahak story ke aage naa badhne se humiliation se bach gayi!
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Still waiting for next update...
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kya koi or writer is story ko continue karuga ?
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Awwesome..... Waiting for next update plz
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कोई इस स्टोरी को आगे बढ़ा सकता है क्या मदद ओर सजेशन चाहिए
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Nikah karwao bahi sultan mahak ko begum kitarah pyar de
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Update 49
Mahak isvakt court ke band cabin me vakil or majistret ke samne sultan ke sath baithi hui thi mahak ki jindgi mahak ko ek alag mod per lakar khadi kardi thi uski jindagi aaj badalne wali thi
Mahak shirvastava aaj mahak sultan banne ja rahi thi jalim or salima bai sath hi khade huye the
Vakil -sultan bhai jaan aap es papers per sign kijiye
Sultan -ek bar vakil ko dekhta hai or fir mahak ko dekhkar sign kar deta
Fir mahak ko sign karne ke liye bola jata hai mahak sign karne ki himmat bilkul bhi nahi thi per phir mahak ko ye kadam uthana tha kyo ki mahak ki family ki jaan jalim singh ke hatho me thi
Mahak ko ek bajaru rand ki tarah soda hua tha mahak ne apni life me kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki usko es tarah jalil karke ke becha jayega per mahak kar bhi kya sakti thi siway apni bebasi per aansu bahane ke
Mahak burkhe ke andar aansu baha rahi thi ek kam umar ki ladki ko buddde se shadi karna kaha tak sahi tha per kar bhi kya sakti thi es sign karne ke alawa
Mahak apni bebasi ko rotey huye huye papers per sign kar deti hai
Or mahak Shrivastava se sultan ban jati hai
Jalim singh - mubarak ho bhai jaan aaj aapka nikah ho gaya hai
Salima - mubarak ho sultan miya aapko to ek kcchi umar ki ladki se shadi ho gayi hai
Sab tahake lagakar haste huye court se bahar aa jate hai
Mahak ki aaj jindagi badal gayi thi thi ek buddde ki begam ban gai thi
Court se bahar aate hi jalim or sultan ek pal ke liye chouk jate Hain par phir se vo hi raksash vali hasi hasne lag jate Hain
Esvakt court ke bahar sakshi or puri kolkata security officer ghere huye khadi thi
Sakshi -mahak edhar aajao in kutto ko to aaj mai sabak sikhati hu
Jalim - abe o thanedarni sahiba tum ye mat socho ki ye tumhari dost ab tumhari dost hai ye ab mahak sultan ban chuki hai
Sakshi ko ye baat sunte hi sadma lagta hai or uske pairo tale jamin khilane lagti hai
Sakhi kya bakwas kar raha hai kutte
Jalim - ha hum sahi kah raha hu or tumhare naye jija se to milo sultan se
Sakshi ek najar sultan per dalti or ek najar burkhe ke andar mahak per
Dhero sawal the Sakshi ke man me or dhero sawal mahak ke andar aakhi mahak sakhi ke koste huye ro rahi thi ki tumne bahut der lagadi aane me ab mai barbad ho chuki hu or iski shuruaat aaj ho chuki hai
Es barbaadi ka jimmedar aakhir kon kis ko dos de dhero sawal aaj mahak or sakhi ke andar the
Aakhir kaisi hogi mahak ki aane wali jindagi kaisa safar hoga 5 bachcho ke bap sultan ke sath mahak ka safar
Kaise samna karegi mahak apne pariwar ka or kaise milwaye apne pariwar ko apne husband se
Bane rahiye romanchak update ke sath
Waiting for next update ???