Adultery The Cheating Wife ?

[Bobbyprasad753]

Exactly!  

Ur story is to good bro.this story in srinu in hospital admited 3 weeks.ganga in this 3 weeks so many people is fucked her men's and women's also.may be chacha and javedh death's is also mystory..may be ganga planed murder's with rani gunz people.now present also the thief is huged fanga infront of srinu...may be she's like affair's with rani gunz people person's.these all mysterie's is main point is ganga.may be ending is ganga is agree all attraction fuck's and intensional sex with other..she's accept to srinu but she's tells only loving only srinu,than ganga tells this all crap she did't repeat agree infront of her srinu.than srinu also accepted the her points and than ganga and srinu happy marriage and sex life continue there journey.

[doctor101]

Your command on English language and Literature and NOVEL EROTICA WRITING SKILL IS OUTSTANDING. SUSPENSE BUILT-UP AND RELEASING LAYERS ARE BEAUTIFUL. I THINK YOU WILL BECOME A GOOD EROTIC NOVEL WRITER IN COMMERCIAL MARKET.

[kk007007]

Your command on English language and Literature and NOVEL EROTICA WRITING SKILL IS OUTSTANDING. SUSPENSE BUILT-UP AND RELEASING LAYERS ARE BEAUTIFUL.  I THINK YOU WILL BECOME A GOOD EROTIC NOVEL WRITER IN COMMERCIAL MARKET.

[Bobbyprasad753]

Your command on English language and Literature and NOVEL EROTICA WRITING SKILL IS OUTSTANDING. SUSPENSE BUILT-UP AND RELEASING LAYERS ARE BEAUTIFUL.  I THINK YOU WILL BECOME A GOOD EROTIC NOVEL WRITER IN COMMERCIAL MARKET.

Brother i understamd english language but i can't speak and wrinting skills in english because i am telugu reader.i like this story and i translated in google to read this story because i like the story.u don't criticise me.i am also like the story persons in one of the person the person.

[Bobbyprasad753]

Writer k k brother u critisicing me.actually i am telugu reader but ur way the story telling is super i google translated option using to read this story.i like the story.i know my english writing skills is to week.but i like this story that's why i am also shared also my  point of views brother.u dont't critisice me brother...i know u all r very well speak and writing skills in english language brother.i am also one of the person ur stories liked persons.thank you for what the way ur receiving brother.and sorry brother i did't comment in this thread again.

[hotandluking]

Hope the writer gives an early update,on Sunday.
No pressure,just hoping.
Thanks for the effort.

[val.coutinho]

Bro KK... Great update and great story.... Some dark side or dark desires of Srinu had to come out..... Otherwise the story had no meaning of love that Ganga and Srinu had developed for each other..... He is in two minds now.... Whether to find out about Ganga or should he recollect the wrongs he has done in the past before marriage..... The guilt within him is making him love Ganga all the more when is around her.....
Let the secrets of Ganga also be revealed slowly and let Srinu fall in love with Ganga all the more.....
What a plot what a story KK.... Go ahead and post the next update ASAP bro..... Can't wait to read the next chapter/update.....
So far you have made me read the whole story again and again till the last update and hope the future updates/chapters will be read again and again by me atleast that's what I can tell.....

[kk007007]

Brother i understamd english language but i can't speak and wrinting skills in english because i am telugu reader.i like this story and i translated in google to read this story because i like the story.u don't criticise me.i am also like the story persons in one of the person the person.

Writer k k brother u critisicing me.actually i am telugu reader but ur way the story telling is super i google translated option using to read this story.i like the story.i know my english writing skills is to week.but i like this story that's why i am also shared also my  point of views brother.u dont't critisice me brother...i know u all r very well speak and writing skills in english language brother.i am also one of the person ur stories liked persons.thank you for what the way ur receiving brother.and sorry brother i did't comment in this thread again.

సారీ బ్రదర్.. నేను కూడా తెలుగువాడినే

[kk007007]

Bro KK... Great update and great story.... Some dark side or dark desires of Srinu had to come out..... Otherwise the story had no meaning of love that Ganga and Srinu had developed for each other..... He is in two minds now.... Whether to find out about Ganga or should he recollect the wrongs he has done in the past before marriage..... The guilt within him is making him love Ganga all the more when is around her.....
Let the secrets of Ganga also be revealed slowly and let Srinu fall in love with Ganga all the more.....
What a plot what a story KK.... Go ahead and post the next update ASAP bro..... Can't wait to read the next chapter/update.....
So far you have made me read the whole story again and again till the last update and hope the future updates/chapters will be read again and again by me atleast that's what I can tell.....

[intrepid]

Hi KK,

I just read the last 3 episodes together. Appreciate bringing in the human side of Srinu….if his wife cheats, then so can he. Reading the Yin and Yang conversation with Srinu was so much fun….they really tried to mess with his mind.

The last episode where Ganga reminisces her college days was realistic. I too attended a missionary college and witnessed many “teacher Mary” type activities and much more….saw a bigger pile of liquor bottles behind the dormitory than the local bar.

Keep up the good work, but don’t lose direction…the story has to have some logical conclusion when you decide to end it as well as poetic justice for Ganga to have 1st cheated on Srinu. Thanks.

Intrepid

[kk007007]

Hi KK,

I just read the last 3 episodes together. Appreciate bringing in the human side of Srinu….if his wife cheats, then so can he. Reading the Yin and Yang conversation with Srinu was so much fun….they really tried to mess with his mind.

The last episode where Ganga reminisces her college days was realistic. I too attended a missionary college and witnessed many “teacher Mary” type activities and much more….saw a bigger pile of liquor bottles behind the dormitory than the local bar.

Keep up the good work, but don’t lose direction…the story has to have some logical conclusion when you decide to end it as well as poetic justice for Ganga to have 1st cheated on Srinu. Thanks.

Intrepid

Loose rope only there to get tied up at the end. People just have no patience to understand it.

[primeOne]

please update the story

[erotichorny69]

Great update.When can we get the next update?
And Thanks for a hot story.

[Robert Smith]

Best ever erotic story ever written in xossipy

[kk007007]

Best ever erotic story ever written in xossipy

[kk007007]

please update the story

Update will take time.. But i will try to give small updates. 

[sexypreeti]

So Mr. KK007007, you jump on any positive comment which talks good about your story... But you do not respond to the multitude of comments from your story fans who have been indefinitely waiting for an update!!!

[srider69]

Good one, sexypreeti, your comment is, just like your story, "mummy ko ahmed..."

[Ayush01111]

Waiting for your next update

[kk007007]

So Mr. KK007007, you jump on any positive comment which talks good about your story... But you do not respond to the multitude of comments from your story fans who have been indefinitely waiting for an update!!!

I dont respond to people's comment who just ask for when is the update.. coz i myself do not know when i will post a new update. 

So rather than give false hopes about updates.. i tend to not replay.. 

i dont ignore anybody.. pls dont misunderstand my fellow perverts.