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(24-02-2025, 08:42 AM)wackthu Wrote: too much pandering; the story lost it's track. the author is clearly buying time with unnecessary updates.
(24-02-2025, 02:49 PM)Navipal007 Wrote: I agree
Unnecessary ? This update was setup for next updates.. i just cant reveal character archs without proper setup.. otherwise it will be stupid.
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Nice really nice.... Tremendous and marvellous update KK.... Bro your making this story hotter every minute.... Just can't wait to read more about Ganga's adventure with sundari and with all who she's been fucking with.....
Waiting for the next update eagerly....
Val
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No updates of you is unnecessary. And we love every update even without Ganga. The update is steamy as usual. Thank you.
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(24-02-2025, 01:36 AM)kk007007 Wrote: And that’s when I saw it.
A third head.
My breath hitched.
I leaned in, my pulse racing.
Priya.
She was lying between them.
Naked. This is the highlight of the recent update.
Can now understand where the story is moving towards and how Ganga and Sundari's story will be like.
Great update,this one was.
Still waiting for that big Ganga's sex epdisode but now can wait knowing that whenever it comes,it would be awesome.
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Greatly loved the update.So,Ganga was a rather conservative girl.Backstories for characters are always nice to read.But,reading the story again,Chacha is the character which has made the most impact.
Absolutely filthy,raw character which loved spitplay.Hope the writer has a lot of space for that character in future updates. Please give the next update soon...might be asking a little too much but that's how good the story is.
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Lesbian ok but pls don’t bring up the gay stuff
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(26-02-2025, 10:14 PM)Sattipandu219 Wrote: Lesbian ok but pls don’t bring up the gay stuff
There will be a gay scene involving srinu. Srinu wants to do everything that his wife does to him. If his wife fuck with a woman, he will fuck with man. eye for an eye.
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Srinu can resign his job and start a investigation agency to trace out all woman cheating their husband. He will get more money and can apply the knowledge gained
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(27-02-2025, 05:54 AM)Rangushki Wrote: Srinu can resign his job and start a investigation agency to trace out all woman cheating their husband. He will get more money and can apply the knowledge gained
Is this a joke or you mocking the story?
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Superb and i think this is the most classy and hottest erotica in this site..... Bro please keep going and dont listen to haters
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(27-02-2025, 01:44 PM)Robert Smith Wrote: Superb and i think this is the most classy and hottest erotica in this site..... Bro please keep going and dont listen to haters
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Have noticed one thing on this site,whenever a great story(which happens very rarely) is in progress,this kind's sole motive would be to pass a punkass remark or try to spam the board.
Hate such people,if you are not interested,just f*ck off,why do you want to ruin others' experience?
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(27-02-2025, 01:51 PM)hotandluking Wrote: Have noticed one thing on this site,whenever a great story(which happens very rarely) is in progress,this kind's sole motive would be to pass a punkass remark or try to spam the board.
Hate such people,if you are not interested,just f*ck off,why do you want to ruin others' experience?
Exactly!
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(27-02-2025, 04:26 PM)kk007007 Wrote: Exactly! 
Ur story is to good bro.this story in srinu in hospital admited 3 weeks.ganga in this 3 weeks so many people is fucked her men's and women's also.may be chacha and javedh death's is also mystory..may be ganga planed murder's with rani gunz people.now present also the thief is huged fanga infront of srinu...may be she's like affair's with rani gunz people person's.these all mysterie's is main point is ganga.may be ending is ganga is agree all attraction fuck's and intensional sex with other..she's accept to srinu but she's tells only loving only srinu,than ganga tells this all crap she did't repeat agree infront of her srinu.than srinu also accepted the her points and than ganga and srinu happy marriage and sex life continue there journey.
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Your command on English language and Literature and NOVEL EROTICA WRITING SKILL IS OUTSTANDING. SUSPENSE BUILT-UP AND RELEASING LAYERS ARE BEAUTIFUL. I THINK YOU WILL BECOME A GOOD EROTIC NOVEL WRITER IN COMMERCIAL MARKET.
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(28-02-2025, 02:30 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Your command on English language and Literature and NOVEL EROTICA WRITING SKILL IS OUTSTANDING. SUSPENSE BUILT-UP AND RELEASING LAYERS ARE BEAUTIFUL. I THINK YOU WILL BECOME A GOOD EROTIC NOVEL WRITER IN COMMERCIAL MARKET.
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(28-02-2025, 02:30 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Your command on English language and Literature and NOVEL EROTICA WRITING SKILL IS OUTSTANDING. SUSPENSE BUILT-UP AND RELEASING LAYERS ARE BEAUTIFUL. I THINK YOU WILL BECOME A GOOD EROTIC NOVEL WRITER IN COMMERCIAL MARKET.
Brother i understamd english language but i can't speak and wrinting skills in english because i am telugu reader.i like this story and i translated in google to read this story because i like the story.u don't criticise me.i am also like the story persons in one of the person the person.
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