[Saibabugvs]

I found this story and writing nice. Only problem is obsessed comments with no value so not reading them. Appreciating writer is good but too many comments with possible story line is disturbing.

as this is public website we cannot avoid them so when known commenters I stopped visiting this page.

Loved the writing style

[Rangushki]

Wife has no love towards husband. Child has no love towards father. Why this useless kunal is still roaming around instead of going back to US.

[Harry Jordan]

I've been reading some comments lately about how discussing the story's future can affect the story one way or another. Which is why I have made the conscious decision to no longer discuss the future storyline and let the writer do the desired ending he wants with the story. I noticed I have been too much into the discussion and after starting my own story in the site I've realized the magnitude and grind it takes to write a cohesive story. Plus I have my own story to complete , and making my own realized the amount of stress and ideas the writer might be going through. I might have issues with stories in general in this site because of how primitive it has become but I know understand the error of my ways. From now on , I won't be discussing the future chapters or characters in this story anymore but rather share my one opinion about each chapter update. I wish the writer nothing but the best in writing his story and I have full confidence that he will write the satisfying ending to this story and give closure to the characters that deserve. 

Definitely looking forward to future chapters and the conclusion and wish ClearLover more opportunities in making great content in the future. 


           Yours Truly

 HARRY JORDAN 

[Jyoti1988]

I've been reading some comments lately about how discussing the story's future can affect the story one way or another. Which is why I have made the conscious decision to no longer discuss the future storyline and let the writer do the desired ending he wants with the story. I noticed I have been too much into the discussion and after starting my own story in the site I've realized the magnitude and grind it takes to write a cohesive story. Plus I have my own story to complete , and making my own realized the amount of stress and ideas the writer might be going through. I might have issues with stories in general in this site because of how primitive it has become but I know understand the error of my ways. From now on , I won't be discussing the future chapters or characters in this story anymore but rather share my one opinion about each chapter update. I wish the writer nothing but the best in writing his story and I have full confidence that he will write the satisfying ending to this story and give closure to the characters that deserve. 

Definitely looking forward to future chapters and the conclusion and wish ClearLover more opportunities in making great content in the future. 


           Yours Truly

 HARRY JORDAN 

Great writer you think very well please keep your story update and write energy utilize own story great dicigion you get

[Jyoti1988]

I've been reading some comments lately about how discussing the story's future can affect the story one way or another. Which is why I have made the conscious decision to no longer discuss the future storyline and let the writer do the desired ending he wants with the story. I noticed I have been too much into the discussion and after starting my own story in the site I've realized the magnitude and grind it takes to write a cohesive story. Plus I have my own story to complete , and making my own realized the amount of stress and ideas the writer might be going through. I might have issues with stories in general in this site because of how primitive it has become but I know understand the error of my ways. From now on , I won't be discussing the future chapters or characters in this story anymore but rather share my one opinion about each chapter update. I wish the writer nothing but the best in writing his story and I have full confidence that he will write the satisfying ending to this story and give closure to the characters that deserve. 

Definitely looking forward to future chapters and the conclusion and wish ClearLover more opportunities in making great content in the future. 


           Yours Truly

 HARRY JORDAN 

Great writer you think very well please keep your story update and write energy utilize own story great dicigion you get

[Arul Pragasam]

Waiting for climax as nothing good is going to happen in the life of kunal hereafter.  banghead:

[sunniappan]

Beautiful story updates.
Please post the next update soon.

[aravindkkumar08]

I think instead of drag writer can finish at once as it's seem impossible as writer has to finish the sub plot he created. Sincere request to writer to give story update at regular times.

[aravindkkumar08]

Now a days stories common of cuckold husband and some groups are interested in this. Recently reading reditt stories blog where husband teaching lesson in all aspect to cheating wife and his lover instead of letgo.

[parottamaster]

Will kunal realize his mistake at least now. He is the one responsible for everything. He knows very well that he is inadequate and does not worth being husband of Esha. What is he trying to prove.

[Harry Jordan]

I have stated before I will not discuss the future storyline or predictions anymore. But I will say one thing clear , I do like this story for what it is , it is after all a story focussed on human emotions and how each life transforms with the decisions they make. Despite some plotholes and storyline errors , I still like how this story is crafted. As for what I desire in this story, I have stated this obviously before , for now my expectations for this story is just one thing. And that is what the recent chapter ending insinuated , let Kunal become the hero of his story and find closure. That is all I desire from this story , will it be achieved or not? I don't know , for now that is only I expect at the end of the story. Give a satisfying ending to his character because of all the sufferings he endured , he should be the one riding off the sunset after all the mess. Sure some might think I always support the husband character in this stories but honestly how can I not when every story regarding this theme in this site , the husband is treated as a masochist porn fetish. In my opinion , the story definitely has its charm and it has some interesting narration and dynamic. And that is why despite its flaws , there are some good factors that elevate this story. For now , my desire to this story is only for the character of Kunal because I still believe he deserves to be the victor. None of the events in this story was his fault , and him finding out the truth should give him the necessary closure he needs. The man deserves a woman that actually respects him , Esha is better off being a prostitute and Priya is better off getting the worst death possible!

[jiljilrani]

Seems like author is now fully confused. Whether to make this as revenge drama, cuckold tale or sacrificing husband love tale or fight for the child drama.

Author, please punish Aniket, Esha and priya and bring some victor smile in the face of Harry Jordon, who made this story more popular and top of the list. 

[Harry Jordan]

Seems like author is now fully confused. Whether to make this as revenge drama, cuckold tale or sacrificing husband love tale or fight for the child drama.

Author, please punish Aniket, Esha and priya and bring some victor smile in the face of Harry Jordon, who made this story more popular and top of the list. 

Oh believe me I am over it , I should not intervene with how the author wants to handle his story. I just stated what I desire with this story. However if you really wanna make me feel like a victor , then read my story Love Sex and War for now. I will be posting the next chapter update in a few days. 

[Kartikjessie]

Waiting for another rocking update.

[Vasanthan]

Please post the final update soon. Post pregnancy, the story lost its interest completely. Except for your writing, i dont see anything great.

[DeanWinchester00007]

Wife has no love towards husband. Child has no love towards father. Why this useless kunal is still roaming around instead of going back to US.

PUNCHING BAG . TBH that is the best option for him . He can start fresh new in US

[DeanWinchester00007]

Seems like author is now fully confused. Whether to make this as revenge drama, cuckold tale or sacrificing husband love tale or fight for the child drama.

Author, please punish Aniket, Esha and priya and bring some victor smile in the face of Harry Jordon, who made this story more popular and top of the list. 

Yes, I think that Writers never expected that many people gonna side with Husband . There are many comments Siding and asking to do justice with Husband , But they did inform earlier that story is already completed. But Now i think They are no thinking to change the ending of the story . 

And No , Nobody is gonna be punished , The story is gonna have Positive ending for all the characters . AKA Mature Ending .

[DeanWinchester00007]

Will kunal realize his mistake at least now. He is the one responsible for everything. He knows very well that he is inadequate and does not worth being husband of Esha. What is he trying to prove.

He is looking someone to pin the Blame , And Priya is Perfect target . In his head he still believes that ESHA is innocent its because of Priya She cheated on him otherwise ESHA would have never done something like that . 

[DeanWinchester00007]

To The Writers , What Happened ? Where is the Update ? If you are busy its completely fine , But can you give an small update about when can we expect next update .
Thanks .

[sumo34]

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