[Harry Jordan]

I only expect one of these two scenario in Esha's life to eventually happen.

Either Esha when she learns the truth about how her relationship with Aniket was never genuine considering Aniket was pushed into her life by Priya will feel heartbroken and upset on this. And she will live a life of regret and guilt of ruining a wonderful marriage to live a new one. A punishment of eternity where she will forever be haunted for her mistakes thanks to the co-parenting plan and will never get Aditya as a part of her life in whole. 

Or something happens to Aniket , either he dies or cheats , which will eventually increase Esha's suffering. And despite the hatred for her choices , Kunal will end up helping Esha because at the end of the day she is Aditya's mother and he did love her. And Esha will realize how much of a kind soul and good hearted man Kunal is and will feel guilty of ruining his life. This will lead to them eventually patching up and maybe moving their base away from Mumbai to start fresh.

I kind of want the second one because honestly , I don't like the character of Aniket. He is generally a hypocrite in my eyes , he so non-chalantly ruined a marriage to get a woman he craves and most of the times his behavior is more sexually charged rather than romance. Hell even the idea of getting Esha pregnant was to fullfill his fantasy of drinking her breast milk. In many ways , Esha and Aniket's relationship is dominated by more sexual energy and interaction than that as a romantic couple. So in a way I dislike certain parts about Aniket's character , and most importantly I am curious on what his mindset is , not long back he wanted Kunal to be a cuckold and be a part of his relation with Esha. So all things considered , I am not overly fond of the character of Aniket , in my eyes he doesn't look genuine to me.

[Rocky@handsome]

I only expect one of these two scenario in Esha's life to eventually happen.

Either Esha when she learns the truth about how her relationship with Aniket was never genuine considering Aniket was pushed into her life by Priya will feel heartbroken and upset on this. And she will live a life of regret and guilt of ruining a wonderful marriage to live a new one. A punishment of eternity where she will forever be haunted for her mistakes thanks to the co-parenting plan and will never get Aditya as a part of her life in whole. 

Or something happens to Aniket , either he dies or cheats , which will eventually increase Esha's suffering. And despite the hatred for her choices , Kunal will end up helping Esha because at the end of the day she is Aditya's mother and he did love her. And Esha will realize how much of a kind soul and good hearted man Kunal is and will feel guilty of ruining his life. This will lead to them eventually patching up and maybe moving their base away from Mumbai to start fresh.

I kind of want the second one because honestly , I don't like the character of Aniket. He is generally a hypocrite in my eyes , he so non-chalantly ruined a marriage to get a woman he craves and most of the times his behavior is more sexually charged rather than romance. Hell even the idea of getting Esha pregnant was to fullfill his fantasy of drinking her breast milk. In many ways , Esha and Aniket's relationship is dominated by more sexual energy and interaction than that as a romantic couple. So in a way I dislike certain parts about Aniket's character , and most importantly I am curious on what his mindset is , not long back he wanted Kunal to be a cuckold and be a part of his relation with Esha. So all things considered , I am not overly fond of the character of Aniket , in my eyes he doesn't look genuine to me.

Totally Agree with You my Bro!! , Esha has literally insulted institute of marriage..most importantly it was their love marriage...just for her carnal desires
She has ruined whole  life of kind hearted soul  Kunal!! She truly deserves a severe punishment?

[Speedy21]

Totally Agree with You my Bro!! , Esha has literally insulted institute of marriage..most importantly it was their love marriage...just for her carnal desires
She has ruined whole  life of kind hearted soul  Kunal!! She truly deserves a severe punishment?

Its not about punishment mate  i believe this story all about redemption and getting better   kunal know he is played by someone now wht he does to make him better at the game that he lost without his knowledge,

[aravindkkumar08]

It's clear that Esha loves aniket and she already decided to live with aniket and his baby. When ever she see Kunal she feels betrayal not love to Kunal. She wants his son to take revenge with his husband. If she loves Kunal she may take steps to get back to him not to have intercourse with aniket. May be in climax we may find aniket may be true facilitator not Priya.

[Harry Jordan]

It's clear that Esha loves aniket and she already decided to live with aniket and his baby. When ever she see Kunal she feels betrayal not love to Kunal. She wants his son to take revenge with his husband. If she loves Kunal she may take steps to get back to him not to have intercourse with aniket. May be in climax we may find aniket may be true facilitator not Priya.

The conventional wisdom says Kunal will eventually find the truth and in a way get his revenge on Priya is some sort of way. And after everything , he will move on from Esha for good , getting his closure knowing that he wasn't responsible for their failed marriage.

[Harry Jordan]

One thing I have noticed in life is that when a heartbreak happens upon the grounds of adultery and cheating , the person that is inflicted upon is hurt the most compared to the one who did. Because the person who did has the one who he/she cheated with as solace to give the person company and comfort but the other one who gets cheated on suffers the worst considering he has no one. And here the heartbreak does indeed matter , because for Kunal , Esha wasn't just a wife , he fell in love with her at college , their relationship began with romance , they connected to each other as individuals and that eventually grew to a marriage and a wonderful son. And for her to stray with Aniket was indeed heartbreaking for Kunal because the first reaction of Kunal when they first cheated was denial , he wasn't willing to accept she is moving away which is also why he made the reckless decision of watching her with Aniket because he already believed he was lacking something that Aniket gave her. After doing that stupid thing , he somehow managed to repair the relationship and form a bond again and try. That action alone shows how much Kunal loves and cares for Esha , he was willing to give her a chance and become their usual self like before or work on building something new. But Esha was too much engulfed in Aniket that she didn't see Kunal's efforts to fix their relationship one bit. Which is why even now , she has that duality where she does at times show sorrow and sadness over breaking Kunal's heart but at the same time her other side wants to justify that Aniket was too good to avoid. Without a shadow of a doubt Esha was a selfish woman , she wanted both the men in her life , she wanted Aniket as her secret fling and everything else while she also wanted the comfort of Kunal's family life. But now she is being forced to choose Aniket and she is being shown to not be interested in a marriage with Aniket because deep down Esha doesn't desire that. In her mind , Aniket was the sexual release and an unbounded romantic fling she craved not a husband , for that she always had Kunal as her own. This explains why she was always against Divorce because a part of her still loves Kunal but for now , a new child with the man she slept with dominates her thoughts. That being said , it makes sense by Kunal's hurt and suffering is relatable more because he is the one that is being wronged. But I would like to see some changes in him , there should be tranformation in his dynamic because no person remains the same after a break up. And here games were played with his life so he needs to take charge and rise up to the occation. Esha's actions cannot be easily forgiven and I don't think it will be in whole , but at the end of the day , Kunal will have to win this game and destroy Priya once and for all.


Though in my opinion , this game that will be played between Kunal and Priya , should eventually culminate in Kunal and Priya falling in love. Both these characters should transform each other and change the dynamic. Or you can take an ABBAS-MUSTAN movie route and bring some twists and turns , transform the story from this point to a continous game of manipulation and double cross and mind games. Have Kunal dominate Priya in her own game , maybe Reveal Aniket to be a man with sinister intentions as well. Because I still don't trust him , he was a guy who wanted Kunal to be a cuckold , and now he suddenly became this loving partner for Esha. Something doesn't add right. He also has interest in Aditya , there could be an ulterior motive hidden in the unexplored parts of Aniket.

Whatever it is , I am definitely looking forward for future chapters and how this story will lead to its eventual conclusion.

[RCF]

One thing I have noticed in life is that when a heartbreak happens upon the grounds of adultery and cheating , the person that is inflicted upon is hurt the most compared to the one who did. Because the person who did has the one who he/she cheated with as solace to give the person company and comfort but the other one who gets cheated on suffers the worst considering he has no one. And here the heartbreak does indeed matter , because for Kunal , Esha wasn't just a wife , he fell in love with her at college , their relationship began with romance , they connected to each other as individuals and that eventually grew to a marriage and a wonderful son. And for her to stray with Aniket was indeed heartbreaking for Kunal because the first reaction of Kunal when they first cheated was denial , he wasn't willing to accept she is moving away which is also why he made the reckless decision of watching her with Aniket because he already believed he was lacking something that Aniket gave her. After doing that stupid thing , he somehow managed to repair the relationship and form a bond again and try. That action alone shows how much Kunal loves and cares for Esha , he was willing to give her a chance and become their usual self like before or work on building something new. But Esha was too much engulfed in Aniket that she didn't see Kunal's efforts to fix their relationship one bit. Which is why even now , she has that duality where she does at times show sorrow and sadness over breaking Kunal's heart but at the same time her other side wants to justify that Aniket was too good to avoid. Without a shadow of a doubt Esha was a selfish woman , she wanted both the men in her life , she wanted Aniket as her secret fling and everything else while she also wanted the comfort of Kunal's family life. But now she is being forced to choose Aniket and she is being shown to not be interested in a marriage with Aniket because deep down Esha doesn't desire that.  In her mind , Aniket was the sexual release and an unbounded romantic fling she craved not a husband , for that she always had Kunal as her own. This explains why she was always against Divorce because a part of her still loves Kunal but for now ,  a new child with the man she slept with dominates her thoughts. That being said , it makes sense by Kunal's hurt and suffering is relatable more because he is the one that is being wronged. But I would like to see some changes in him , there should be  tranformation in his dynamic because no person remains the same after a break up. And here games were played with his life so he needs to take charge and rise up to the occation. Esha's actions cannot be easily forgiven and I don't think it will be in whole , but at the end of the day , Kunal will have to win this game and destroy Priya once and for all.


Though in my opinion , this game that will be played between Kunal and Priya , should eventually culminate in Kunal and Priya falling in love. Both these characters should transform each other and change the dynamic. Or you can take an ABBAS-MUSTAN movie route and bring some twists and turns , transform the story from this point to a continous game of manipulation and double cross and mind games. Have Kunal dominate Priya in her own game , maybe Reveal Aniket to be a man with sinister intentions as well. Because I still don't trust him , he was a guy who wanted Kunal to be a cuckold , and now he suddenly became this loving partner for Esha. Something doesn't add right. He also has interest in Aditya , there could be an ulterior motive hidden in the unexplored parts of Aniket.

Whatever it is , I am definitely looking forward for future chapters and how this story will lead to its eventual conclusion.

It will never be that easy with stories like these, Simple revenge and move on will not be the theme of this one.

The more he digs about Priya the more he will find that the consequences of their simple action of destroying her thesis are far worse than they imagined at that time...her chance to make it big might have been destroyed which is what we know, but there is very good chance, she lost lot more than that because of that recklessness.

She lost dad, her mom became paralyzed or something, I also think there would be good connection about her hate towards men connected to her lost chance for PHD. At the end we would be forced to consider that there won't right or wrong for any character here, as those lines will be blurred and everything will be grey.

Do not think any character will win or lose at the end. Your wish to see Esha suffer might not happen nor Priya being destroyed. Also I do not think Aniket has that much scope to be the villain here...Unless he is connected with Priya and they both played an act..he is just an opportunist and wanted Esha and now could be some one who loves her, that's all. 

Who ends up with whom doesn't really matter...Kunal is already free and only seeking the truth..Only possibility for him could be Priya. If he gets back with Esha, this story sucks as a whole.


~RCF

[Harry Jordan]

Also weird thing , I also noticed this story and similarity of it with a popular hindi serial Yeh Hai Mohabbatein. There too the lead male character Raman is betrayed by his wife and moves with another man. Only difference is there , it was two children , Ruhi and Adi , Adi is sent to be with his mother while Ruhi is sent to his father. Though this part of the story isn't the main plot because the serial was about Raman finding new love with a woman called Ishita. Which make me wish , I hope Kunal have an Ishita of his own in the future. I want a full chapter dedicated to him building this new life with his new love. Maybe an epilogue would be enough , but it should be long. I don't want the ending to have there you go , Kunal won , THE END. 

Maybe in the epilogue we can saw Kunal shifts base to someplace else , possibly US and the co-parenting deal is changed where Aditya's early education plans will be handed over to Esha while the higher education will be done by Kunal in the US. And by the end , we can have Aditya learning to love Kunal's new family and having the need to be with him on tha long term than with Esha. After all , Aditya isn't going to be a child forever. Plus it would be a nice added consequence for Esha's actions as she will eventually loose Aditya despite the love she gave her because in the end she also betrayed the child as well ruining his family.

[Harry Jordan]

It will never be that easy with stories like these, Simple revenge and move on will not be the theme of this one.

The more he digs about Priya the more he will find that the consequences of their simple action of destroying her thesis are far worse than they imagined at that time...her chance to make it big might have been destroyed which is what we know, but there is very good chance, she lost lot more than that because of that recklessness.

She lost dad, her mom became paralyzed or something, I also think there would be good connection about her hate towards men connected to her lost chance for PHD. At the end we would be forced to consider that there won't right or wrong for any character here, as those lines will be blurred and everything will be grey.

Do not think any character will win or lose at the end. Your wish to see Esha suffer might not happen nor Priya being destroyed. Also I do not think Aniket has that much scope to be the villain here...Unless he is connected with Priya and they both played an act..he is just an opportunist and wanted Esha and now could be some one who loves her, that's all. 

Who ends up with whom doesn't really matter...Kunal is already free and only seeking the truth..Only possibility for him could be Priya. If he gets back with Esha, this story sucks as a whole.


~RCF

Agree for the most part , yeah , there is chance I belive this game will also transform Kunal as a person as well. Before all this , he was a simple family man , then he made reckless decisions that also supported in Esha eventually abandoning him and his family for Aniket. I mean lets be honest, if Kunal never asked for that stupid decision to watch Esha and Aniket , maybe Esha wouldn't have thought less of Kunal to some extent. 

A good possibility could be an eventual romance formed between Kunal and Priya and these characters actually starting to generate feelings for each other. That could be an interesting twist where Kunal and Priya eventually fixes each other with Kunal finding a way for Priya to complete her PHD and Priya convincing Kunal to overcome from the love and feelings towards Esha so he can move on. Though this romance can only work if its a slow burn with chapters dedicated to it. Or else the obvious easy choice is the game being played to many levels and this eventually changes all the characters involved.

Me personally right now , I don't want a Kunal and Esha reunion unless they both go through some serious consequences , and in my eyes , a Kunal and Esha reunion will only work with a barrage of tragedies that includes her miscarriage and maybe Aniket's sudden death. Those are the only ways I see , I mean even if Esha learns the truth , there won't be much change in her.

Obviously , stories like these have no winners or loosers. Kunal even if he wins by getting his "revenge" or "closure" , he will have to face the reality that his family will never be whole. Priya will not find any peace despite taking her revenge on Esha because that doesn't fix what she lost. And Esha too despite all of her actions , will forever be haunted by the reality that she built a new family with Aniket over the ashes and rubbles of the family she had with Kunal. But there will be redemption , that is what eventually will happen. All these characters will change and transform from this game. But alteast in Kunal's case , he could write his salvation , or like the latest chapter said become the hero of his own story. That doesn't mean he will be hero to the story in general because he already lost a lot. Its about closure and finding the truth and change according to it from your actions.

[clearlover]

Hello Readers,

While I target to give an update by next weekend, I have a week professional training starting from Monday, if I am busy,then this time, it might get delayed by another week.

Thanks for understanding.

[Harry Jordan]

Hello Readers,

While I target to give an update by next weekend, I have a week professional training starting from Monday, if I am busy,then this time, it might get delayed by another week.

Thanks for understanding.

Its alright mate , take your time. Never compromise on quality , just take your time and finish the story accordingly.

[Gopal Ratnam]

"The baby is kicking i would love to see it in ultrasound".

Is Esha giving birth to her first child.
Did she not feel Aditya kicking in the womb or see him in the ultrasound.
Is Ankit fool to believe whatever she says.

[Harry Jordan]

"The baby is kicking i would love to see it in ultrasound".

Is Esha giving birth to her first child.
Did she not feel Aditya kicking in the womb or see him in the ultrasound.
Is Ankit fool to believe whatever she says.

Believe it or not , that is indeed how motherhood works.

I believe in Esha's case , she is as excited as she was when she had Aditya. Only difference this time is when having Aditya , Esha not only had Kunal , but also the attention of his family and hers as well. But now , the only person she has support from is Aniket. This is her reality , the reaction to her action. At the end of the day , her family from now on will only be this new child and Aniket and probably his family who might accept Esha considering she is pregnant. She cannot claim Aditya anymore and eventually there is a possibility she will loose him as well in time when he gets old.

Its pretty clear now that Esha is in love with Aniket and she has no feelings or any sort of feelings for Kunal. She claims she has but she is lying to herself believing that. Sure she feels emotional everytime Kunal walks in  and takes Aditya away , even in their last interaction she got angry when Kunal called her a cheater , she is trying to justify her actions thinking that what she feels for Aniket is true love. And to some extent it is true.

Like it or not , the blame to some extent lies on Kunal , he is too much of a family man and too much engrossed in his orthodox morals and mindset. At the end of the day , I want Kunal to change , and I believe this divorce and the eventual closeness with Priya will bring that change in him. Kunal's values and mindset is too outdated in this modern world , he will have to adapt and evolve. And thus , for a better future for his son and in a way for himself as well , he must undergo some makeover. And in my opinion , Priya is the perfect contendor for that. Whatever game they play with each other , they might end up fixing each other.

[Ajay Kailash]

The narration is good. Frankly speaking, the investigation part of kunal is bit boring. It does not do any justice or change the situation in any way. Why should he spend that much time on it after leaving the wife. If Esha did not get pregnant, is that ok for him for her to open the legs to Aniket. Is he not selfish and partial cuck here?

The author had not spoken anything on the parents and brother of Esha. Are they aware of the situation? They are not seen anywhere in the court when the divorce proceeding are going on? Are they not in good ties with Esha after she married kunal? Are they thinking, this bitch had found another man now? Is this not a big gap?

[Harry Jordan]

The narration is good. Frankly speaking, the investigation part of kunal is bit boring. It does not do any justice or change the situation in any way. Why should he spend that much time on it after leaving the wife. If Esha did not get pregnant, is that ok for him for her to open the legs to Aniket. Is he not selfish and partial cuck here?

The author had not spoken anything on the parents and brother of Esha. Are they aware of the situation? They are not seen anywhere in the court when the divorce proceeding are going on? Are they not in good ties with Esha after she married kunal? Are they thinking, this bitch had found another man now? Is this not a big gap?

Kunal's arc is important because he definitely needs closure. I believe this game is important for him as well because this game when it ends will change every character involved. Kunal is a family man with a pretty orthodox mindset and that is also a negative aspect of him , he forgived Esha mutliple times because he didn't want his family to be broken apart. That mindset must be broken in him and that is what this game will help him become , his future involvement with Priya will make him see relationships more differently and not see a bond between two people and marriages to not be just about respect and decorum. But love ,admiration , comfort and many aspects. His understanding of marriage will change eventually and thus if there is a future with someone else for him , he won't do the same mistake again. Maybe he will learn to have a better connection with someone else in the future than he ever had with Esha.

As far as we know Esha's parents and brother are pretty distant. They don't speak often and there is a chance Esha's parents are pretty rural and very conservative. Hell , all things consider a major death can happen with how Esha's father is said to be a heart patient , maybe the reveal of Esha's action will eventually sent him to his death which will traumatise Esha further which might or might not lead to a miscarriage. I believe this information is not revealed yet because these things might play a major role in coming events. For now , Kunal will play the hero of the story for the time being because his means is justified and he is taking his revenge , to find out who ruined his life. This is the start of Kunal's evolution , the game will change him , how much change will happen , only time will tell.

[Speedy21]

Kunal's arc is important because he definitely needs closure. I believe this game is important for him as well because this game when it ends will change every character involved. Kunal is a family man with a pretty orthodox mindset and that is also a negative aspect of him , he forgived Esha mutliple times because he didn't want his family to be broken apart. That mindset must be broken in him and that is what this game will help him become , his future involvement with Priya will make him see relationships more differently and not see a bond between two people and marriages to not be just about respect and decorum. But love ,admiration , comfort and many aspects. His understanding of marriage will change eventually and thus if there is a future with someone else for him , he won't do the same mistake again. Maybe he will learn to have a better connection with someone else in the future than he ever had with Esha.

As far as we know Esha's parents and brother are pretty distant. They don't speak often and there is a chance Esha's parents are pretty rural and very conservative. Hell , all things consider a major death can happen with how Esha's father is said to be a heart patient , maybe the reveal of Esha's action will eventually sent him to his death which will traumatise Esha further which might or might not lead to a miscarriage. I believe this information is not revealed yet because these things might play a major role in coming events. For now , Kunal will play the hero of the story for the time being because his means is justified and he is taking his revenge , to find out who ruined his life. This is the start of Kunal's evolution , the game will change him , how much change will happen , only time will tell.

 Esha is happy now with Aniket only guilty she has now adi she chose move forward without releasing the consequences that gone come as for kunal i dnt wht he has left expect adi  r finding priya manipulation worked  still doesn't changed fact that his family has broken r getting even with priya does that justify wht he went through even half of it !??? Aniket this guy having happy  life man look split a good family and even made her pregnant and she moved with gettting blowjod in kitchen this guy is the king at this moment of the story  who ever the master is Aniket getting al he want

[Sarran Raj]

Amazing. I did not see Esha is having any guilt even when kunal said she cheated him. For her now Aniket is the world. She does not have the mind to think how kunal would feel. what if kunal had done something similar and made another girl pregnant. Can esha digest it. The mindset of esha is not crafted well. She thinks its ok to cheat. Nothing is wrong in love, sex and war.

[Sarran Raj]

Whenever kunal says she is a cheater. I wish Esha should have shot back saying. She was not happy with the marriage and fed up faking the orgams in bed. Now she found a real man in Aniket. It was you forced me to cheat, you bloody wimp. kunal will shut his mouth and ass thereafter.

[Harry Jordan]

Amazing. I did not see Esha is having any guilt even when kunal said she cheated him. For her now Aniket is the world. She does not have the mind to think how kunal would feel. what if kunal had done something similar and made another girl pregnant. Can esha digest it. The mindset of esha is not crafted well. She thinks its ok to cheat. Nothing is wrong in love, sex and war.

Its pretty ironic because Love , Sex and War is actually the title I chose for my story.  And to answer your point , yes , Esha has no guilt because at the end of the day that is indeed a cheater's mindset. This new world she built , this new love for Aniket , this overwhelms her , she is no longer concerned whether Priya betrayed her trust or manipulated her into getting pregnant because in her mind Aniket is everything she wants. But then again , she also wants Aditya but the realization that Aditya can never be hers for whole breaks her. Sure she has no regret , because there is no point in regret anymore. She made her decision , or was forced into it because she was unwilling to divorce Kunal. But she has expressed that she wished she never met Aniket so that she could've been happy with Kunal. But Aniket gives her more than Kunal apparently gives. And that has made her believe that Aniket is the future for her. But like I said in the past , Love is a big joke in this story. Love has that power and bond as long as you have a bigger dick , if not then your love is in life support.


Esha will live a life of consequence eventually. She will never have Aditya for herself and soon Kunal will distance himself from her for good , and thus the co-parenting will switch from alternate days to six months each with mother and father and their separate partners. I just hope there is a chapter dedicated to Kunal finding love again with someone because honestly , many cheating stories like this often only narrate the wife perspective and ignore husband's second life. I believe the writer should consider that idea and eventually have Kunal get his own perfect romance. But more importantly let this new game played by Kunal transform him and his perspective. He should not be a mellow and the simple man he was in the beginning. Let the story ending culminate with some change in his personality.

[zulfique]

Whenever kunal says she is a cheater. I wish Esha should have shot back saying. She was not happy with the marriage and fed up faking the orgams in bed. Now she found a real man in Aniket. It was you forced me to cheat, you bloody wimp. kunal will shut his mouth and ass thereafter.

Rightly said bro.  clp);