Adultery The Facilitator

[a2011]

Good update...okay, the issue was that Esha got pregnant because of fake pills, not that she cheated lol...that part was hilarious

[Speedy21]

Good update...okay, the issue was that Esha got pregnant because of fake pills, not that she cheated lol...that part was hilarious

She is justifying herself as it a mistake  humor ???

[Harry Jordan]

Two Word Review for Part U : ABSOLUTELY SPECTACULAR


The idea that Kunal wants to form a romantic relationship with Priya opens a doorway to interesting scenarios to explore the dynamics of these characters. I would like to share certain dynamics that can really make this story captivating.


Kunal's Search For Truth : Part T and Part U did a remarkable job in exploring Kunal's character and the improvement and evolution it is going through. As Part T focused on his rage and anger , Part U showed the meticulous and attentive side of him , this break up has started to transform him in ways that he himself is unaware of. For a man who was once a simple hardworking employee is now a part time detective and he is doing it very carefully considering one wrong move could ruin his plans to find out the truth. Its pretty clear the surroundings and change in his life is transforming his mentality and now the added risk of getting close to Esha would definitely evolve him further. Plus I am happy that the author dedicated an entire chapter to Kunal and Kunal's perspective alone. Because I honestly believe that is the best way to go. Conventional wisdom does say he should be the Victor of the story and he should finally be the man walking out of all this the winner. And I believe that can be achieved if his evolution keeps on developing.


Possible Romance Between Kunal and Priya : This is definitely I would love to see , because both the characters can have the potential to really converge in ways they cannot imagine. Kunal is approaching this relationship to find out more about Priya and just imagine what if Kunal actually symphatizes with Priya and see the error in Esha's actions. What if Kunal with his influence thanks to his job in USA decides to give Priya a second chance in her lost PHD. And that makes Priya to like Kunal's character and starts to fall in love with him. What if Priya understands the shortcomings Kunal has in bed and used her knowledge to give him a better lifestyle choice and fitness routine which eventually leads to Kunal having physical changes and better in bed. What if Kunal and Priya eventually forge a bigger emotional and physical connection that is much more bigger than Kunal and Esha had. This will be a really cool dynamic that can add a certain thrill to the story. Many of this cheating stories have the wife and her new lover's relationship explored. I say lets take a unique approach , lets explore the husband and the woman who ruined his marriage relationship that can be explored. Because there is a cascade of emotions that can help carve out interesting situations and bonds never seen before.


Transformation of Priya's Character : Priya is definitely the title character , she has been and have been pretty much been the "Facilitator" in this story. But imagine if she genuinely starts to fall in love with Kunal in future developments. I would like to iterate some of the points from the earlier scenario and have Kunal actually understand Priya's reasoning for her actions and Priya realizes that Kunal was always a good man and Esha is a fool to let a man like him slip away from her grasp easily. Let Priya understand Kunal as a person up close and eventually have her slowly fall in love to his comfort and his dedication. This can be diluted in two ways where Kunal can be genuine with his side and they can become a happy couple or Kunal can be sinister and he will eventually make Priya experience a heartbreak. Either way a possible romance with Kunal could add more dynamic to Priya's character and the nature of their relationship can help evolve their characters further. More importantly I would love to see Priya evolve from her character as a manipulator and control freak to a loving woman who understands her mistakes and eventually dreams of a new life with Kunal.



Jealousy of Esha : THIS is definitely the part I will be looking forward to. Despite of her decisions , Esha still claims she "feels" for Kunal. I wonder what would be her reaction when she sees Kunal forming a relationship with not just another woman , but the very woman who was a mastermind in ruining her marriage. Will we finally see a more hypocritical side of Esha in the future with her witnessing Kunal and Priya getting close. A rather interesting part I would love to see is if Priya convinces Kunal to improve in his fitness and eventually Kunal transforms into what Priya desires and one day Esha witnesses Kunal and Priya in their time of intimacy at her place. It will be Esha's turn to be kicked to the corner. This will add much more dynamic to Esha's stance in her life right now. She claims she still "loves" Kunal but her thought process is completely engaged in Aniket and this pregnancy. I would like to point out the following sequence from part U to prove my point.

"I felt it, Aniket, the baby kicked!" Esha whispered, her voice quick with joy. "The first sign, it's amazing, right?"

Kunal's jaw tightened, the mention of Aniket and the baby a fresh wound. He tried to remain unseen, but Esha was too engrossed in her conversation to notice him.
"I have to be quick. I'll drop Aditya with Kunal, then see you at the clinic," she continued, her words tumbling out. "We'll see the baby's development on the ultrasound, I can't wait!"
Those words were like daggers, piercing Kunal's resolve. Here he was, trapped in this metal box, witnessing a new life forming without him, a life he had once imagined with Esha. The jealousy was a sharp, burning pain, not just for what he'd lost, but for what was being created in his absence.

Now this part of the chapter only adds fuel to Kunal's position in the current scenario and I don't want this to be used as a direct tit for tat approach. But Esha is happy with this pregnancy and her relation with Aniket at this point , and she is still finding happiness despite the hurt she had inflicted on Kunal. What is more curious about this factor is that Esha is happily talking about her unborn baby to Aniket expressing her happiness while at the same time a few minutes later she states to Kunal that this pregnancy is a mistake. She is finding reasoning for her cheating and trying to find justifications for her actions. Which is why I would definitely love Priya and Kunal to form a romantic relationship and their bond should grow right in front of Esha's eyes and either that will make her mind clear on what she wants , either she will completely forget Kunal and move with Aniket for good. Or she will get that pull , that familiar twinge she always had for Kunal and make her see her errors and try to find any hope for a reunion with him in the future. Its a fucked up situation , but I still believe Esha and Kunal can get a happy ending together if the story takes an interesting path.


That being said , once again I applaud the Author for another remarkable Part. Your handling of character dynamics is much appreciated and the way the story is developing , I am definitely looking forward to it. On a side note , I have used a "Kunal" character in my own story which I will admit is loosely inspired from here. However , the characters are completely different including origins as my vision for the character is something unique and I've been writing him as a thesis on my case studies and research regarding sexual relationships and sex life. I feel honored that you are also one of the writers that inspired me to start my stinct in story telling and now I understand the hardships you must be taking to complete each chapter. Anyways , All The Best for upcoming parts and wish you well for the future with more interesting stories like this.


With Love.

 HARRY JORDAN 

[RCF]

Jealousy of Esha : THIS is definitely the part I will be looking forward to. Despite of her decisions , Esha still claims she "feels" for Kunal. I wonder what would be her reaction when she sees Kunal forming a relationship with not just another woman , but the very woman who was a mastermind in ruining her marriage. Will we finally see a more hypocritical side of Esha in the future with her witnessing Kunal and Priya getting close. A rather interesting part I would love to see is if Priya convinces Kunal to improve in his fitness and eventually Kunal transforms into what Priya desires and one day Esha witnesses Kunal and Priya in their time of intimacy at her place. It will be Esha's turn to be kicked to the corner. This will add much more dynamic to Esha's stance in her life right now. She claims she still "loves" Kunal but her thought process is completely engaged in Aniket and this pregnancy. I would like to point out the following sequence from part U to prove my point.

I do not see this happening. In fact if Kunal settles down, she will be happy. You need to understand one fact that Esha has moved on from her past life, There could be regret, sadness but with new baby there is no looking back again. Kunal will be the hero by forgiving both Esha and Priya lol 


Now this part of the chapter only adds fuel to Kunal's position in the current scenario and I don't want this to be used as a direct tit for tat approach. But Esha is happy with this pregnancy and her relation with Aniket at this point , and she is still finding happiness despite the hurt she had inflicted on Kunal. What is more curious about this factor is that Esha is happily talking about her unborn baby to Aniket expressing her happiness while at the same time a few minutes later she states to Kunal that this pregnancy is a mistake. She is finding reasoning for her cheating and trying to find justifications for her actions. Which is why I would definitely love Priya and Kunal to form a romantic relationship and their bond should grow right in front of Esha's eyes and either that will make her mind clear on what she wants , either she will completely forget Kunal and move with Aniket for good. Or she will get that pull , that familiar twinge she always had for Kunal and make her see her errors and try to find any hope for a reunion with him in the future. Its a fucked up situation , but I still believe Esha and Kunal can get a happy ending together if the story takes an interesting path.

Esha is a cheater no doubt, she did wrong with Kunal agreed, but that doesn't mean she should shut down rest of the things that are active in her life. Regret doesn't mean not care for other things. She didn't call it a mistake, she called her pregnancy an accident. That is not reasoning for her cheating, that is reasoning for Kunal's comment on unborn baby. It a fact that if not for the baby, Kunal would have forgiven her second time lol so he is willing to give as many chances to her as possible. 
Yes she is happy for her unborn baby, who wouldn't..despite the mistakes, baby is an emotion for mothers. Now that baby is anchor for her new life with Aniket so sharing that happiness with Aniket is valid and makes sense.

~RCF

[a2011]

Yes, Kunal should be grateful to Priya. If not for the fake pills he would still be stuck with a cheating bitch and become a cuckold by now...Priya saved him

[Speedy21]

Yes, Kunal should be grateful to Priya. If not for the fake pills he would still be stuck with a cheating bitch and become a cuckold by now...Priya saved him

Kunal wil be like " man Iam a fool and I got played by someone else whole time

[Harry Jordan]

I do not see this happening. In fact if Kunal settles down, she will be happy. You need to understand one fact that Esha has moved on from her past life, There could be regret, sadness but with new baby there is no looking back again. Kunal will be the hero by forgiving both Esha and Priya lol 


I still believe Esha is not worthy of forgiving. If it was just cheating I could understand , but she not only cheated but also got pregnant and wasn't willing to give divorce to Kunal. She wanted to take the cake and eat it as well. In my opinion on a storyline standpoint , that is definitely not worth forgiving. Sure she is definitely facing consequences , she apparently still has "feelings" for Kunal which is indeed laughable. In my head cannon , I want their current relation standpoint to continue and have Aditya live with Kunal and Esha on separate terms. And then this would set up an epilogue to the story where a grown up Aditya would side with Kunal on her mother's actions and abandon him leaving with her new family as her only world. In my opinion , Kunal should never forgive but instead move on from Esha , Esha's biggest consequence will be loosing Kunal for good , her reputation and her indentity is already ruined , she will forever be a cheater and an adultress. She built her life with Aniket over Kunal's broken heart and that will forever haunt her in her lifetime. There is no need for forgiveness , not everything deserves a happy ending. After all this is a story with a moral that your love will only matter as long as you have a bigger dick! 



Esha is a cheater no doubt, she did wrong with Kunal agreed, but that doesn't mean she should shut down rest of the things that are active in her life. Regret doesn't mean not care for other things. She didn't call it a mistake, she called her pregnancy an accident. That is not reasoning for her cheating, that is reasoning for Kunal's comment on unborn baby. It a fact that if not for the baby, Kunal would have forgiven her second time lol so he is willing to give as many chances to her as possible. 


To some extent I would agree that Kunal would've done the same thing you stated. Yes , if not for pregnancy Kunal would've given her a second chance. But that is just the mindset of a family man talking, in many ways and sense even though Kunal has a Liberal mindset he also follows a conservative and orthodox lifestyle. For him family and raising kids are responsibilities and duties as individuals , but his mindset also held back the reality of living life openly. He believed in the chastity of marriage , the sacred trust between husband and wife and duties they share with raising Aditya. And Esha shattered those thoughts in him. Him willing to forgive was that orthodox and conservative side of him trying to maintain his marriage despite the mistakes. And I believe this divorce should open Kunal's eyes and make him see marriage and concept of relationships through different perspectives. In my opinion , a potential romance with Priya could intricate certain character development in Kunal as a person where he would eventually take a different approach for relationship. A potential bond forming between Kunal and Priya could actually result in an interesting dynamic. Kunal can learn from Priya on why she is so unaccepting of marriage and she ever seeks a life partner for herself. And Priya could eventually symphathize with Kunal and realize he is someone that is not afraid of change and can adapt to her willingness and maybe even few moments relating with Kunal and his mother could result in Priya thinking about the idea of marriage to not be a bad choice. The easy way is Kunal symphatizing with Priya for Esha's action in her past that ruined her future and Kunal could give her that future back by using his US contacts in getting her another shot at her PHD. Now yes in a storyline standpoint I do see Kunal is going to play his own game and make Priya pay for her sins. But a rather different approach in my mind says it would be better if this new game they play on each other make them connect to each other as transformed individuals and can see a future with more respect and love for each other as together. Maybe them forming a better connection than Kunal and Esha had would show the acceptance of her mistakes in Esha's mind as well. 


Yes she is happy for her unborn baby, who wouldn't..despite the mistakes, baby is an emotion for mothers. Now that baby is anchor for her new life with Aniket so sharing that happiness with Aniket is valid and makes sense.

I mean sure , after all Aditya was the anchor to her and Kunal's marriage but it seems he was a weak anchor I am afraid LOL. She can make more failed anchors unless Aniket's dick is good enough for her! 

[Harry Jordan]

Yes, Kunal should be grateful to Priya. If not for the fake pills he would still be stuck with a cheating bitch and become a cuckold by now...Priya saved him

In a way , yes. Priya actually saved Kunal's life from a life far worse. I mean this is a woman unwilling to divorce Kunal despite getting pregnant with another man's child. In my eyes , she deserves a life long consequences , I am just waiting for the author to kill Esha's father but I believe he is saving it for future episode.

[Harry Jordan]

Kunal wil be like " man Iam a fool and I got played by someone else whole time

Would be actually funny and EPIC if Kunal and Priya actually fall in love and they will start a family in front of Esha. We were thinking Kunal was getting played but in the end it was Esha who got played as she will be known as a cheater forever and Kunal will find a woman that will actually love her unlike Esha. 

[Speedy21]

Would be actually funny and EPIC if Kunal and Priya actually fall in love and they will start a family in front of Esha. We were thinking Kunal was getting played but in the end it was Esha who got played as she will be known as a cheater forever and Kunal will find a woman that will actually love her unlike Esha

Starting to believe this story more about kunal than esha n priya esha having all she want we'll kunal get served

[Harry Jordan]

So not only Kunal cannot move away from Esha since he has to take care of Aditya with joint custody. Now he will have to endure Esha have her romantic moments right in front of him!

Kunal is an icon for Masochism Lovers at this point. Every chapter of his is dedicated to pain , hurt and heartbreak. I think like how Esha and Aniket went to Arijit Concert to sing their love and affection for each other. Kunal should go to an Ankit Tiwary concert and sing his heartbreak and pain 

[Harry Jordan]

Starting to believe this story more about kunal than esha n priya esha having all she want we'll kunal get served

I mean all things consider Kunal is definitely the hero of the story. He is setup to be the victor like Part U ending said. The words below is one of a paragraphs in the ending of Part U.


Kunal's mind churned as Aditya's playful chatter faded into background noise. Choices loomed before him: he could either resign himself to a lifetime as the defeated man whose wife, despite all his love and care, chose another, or he could seize this new strategy-not for physical desire, but for redemption. To uncover the truth would be his salvation, a chance to live as a hero in his own story. Even if he stumbled, he wouldn't spend his days drowning in regret.

That is potentially what the story is setting up. This is the start of Kunal's redemption arc , his salvation begins , because by seeking the truth he won't be living in life in regret but realizing the reality that it wasn't his fault. He will have his happy ending eventually. And in my own personal bias , I want only him to have a happy ending.

[a2011]

the author is screwing Kunal's character in every update, now making him hear Esha's child stuff to screw with his mind more...yaar plz cut him some slack, he didnt even drop the water on Priya's Phd...hahaha

[Harry Jordan]

the author is screwing Kunal's character in every update, now making him hear Esha's child stuff to screw with his mind more...yaar plz cut him some slack, he didnt even drop the water on Priya's Phd...hahaha

Don't worry , he is being set up to be the unsung hero of this story. He will be the emerging victor. Eventually we will see Kunal succeed in life and Esha accept her mistakes and seek apology from Kunal and confess that she never deserved him. Kunal will be the winner while other characters will live with the consequences of her actions. Esha already is , her life is partially screwed.

I have already made my headcannon for an epilogue where an older Aditya learns the truth and abandons Esha and be with Kunal and his new love for good. Esha will only have Aniket and this new child for the rest of her life, this is her cross to bear. She will forever be a cheater and has to live with the reality that she screwed a marriage to make a new one.

[Krishna@123]

Whatever at the end Esha should be punished. She should suffer some how She should not get Scot free.

[Harry Jordan]

Whatever at the end Esha should be punished. She should suffer some how She should not get Scot free.

I believe she is even right now. Her reputation is pretty much ruined , her family will mostly abandon her and probably her dad will die hearing the news. For the rest of her life she will be a cheater , because she sacrificed her marriage with Kunal to build a life with Aniket. Hell conventional wisdom says even Aditya when grown up will abandon his mother knowing the wrong she had done. Esha is already living with a lot of consequences. And most importantly , she has lost a good man in Kunal and will never have Aditya as a whole in her life ever again because of her co-parenting.

[Rocky@handsome]

I don't know why, but i really feel bad for kunal,i literally cried for kunal and fate he is facing for being loyal and dutiful husband....i just want to Esha to suffer a lot a lot and lot ...she doesn't have an ounce of regret for cheating kunal, what kind of women, shiit Man!! let her face the worst consequences,coz she is the one who cheated kunal!! ..make a regret for losing a good man like kunal?

[Rocky@handsome]

I don't know why,  but i really feel bad for kunal,i literally cried for kunal and fate he is facing for being loyal and dutiful husband....i just want to Esha to suffer a lot a lot and lot ...she doesn't have an ounce of regret for cheating kunal,  what kind of women, shiit Man!! let her face the worst consequences,coz she is the one who cheated kunal!! ..make a regret for losing a good man like  kunal

[Speedy21]

I don't know why,  but i really feel bad for kunal,i literally cried for kunal and fate he is facing for being loyal and dutiful husband....i just want to Esha to suffer a lot a lot and lot ...she doesn't have an ounce of regret for cheating kunal,  what kind of women, shiit Man!! let her face the worst consequences,coz she is the one who cheated kunal!! ..make a regret for losing a good man like  kunal?

It's all who has the big dick mate desire surpassed the love nowadays

[Harry Jordan]

It's all who has the big dick mate desire surpassed the love nowadays

Honestly that is the part that brings the need in me to not have a happy ending for Esha. Because as a researcher on sex education and sexual health , this has often been a very outdated myth that people still believe is true. That is one of the reason why I don't prefer Esha to have a happy ending because the story insinuates that the "Big Dick Wins the Woman" scenario that has often adapted in sex stories that has painted a very wrong mindset about sexual intercourse in general.