[An ideal Indian mother]

wah! aur ek mast update! bahut acha laga is kahgaani padhke!

[Fantastic Four]

bahut badiya ek mast,jabardast aur exciting update!

[Samreen khan]

Story starting me 3,4 update tak thik chali ab intrest khatam ho gaya pahle boos ki taraf Maheen ka attraction dikhaya jo story ko acha bana raha tha per ab story bakwas ban chuki hai

Agar story psnd nhi aari h to wo apki problem hai naa ki writer ki so please agr tarif nhi kr sakte to bakwas bhi nhi bolo shyd tmhe story reed krna nhi aata h m todhi help krti hun apki agr smjh nhi aaya to kabhi movie Delhi hai tmne to usme hero heroine ko dikhate h phir side rol aate rehte h or jate rehte hai par end tak hero heroine hee rehte screen pe story hai maheen or Vinod ki baki sab h side role hai ye mera view h

[sushilt20]

Nice update

[arvind274]

Story starting me 3,4 update tak thik chali ab intrest khatam ho gaya pahle boos ki taraf Maheen ka attraction dikhaya jo story ko acha bana raha tha per ab story bakwas ban chuki hai

Priy omprkash meena bhai sayad aap pink bhai ki lekhni se parchit nhi ho aur na hi unki xossip ki story mejar shab ,ajeeb si pyas ,wafao ka imehan aur lagbhag abhi ki neha aur chedi ki story etc ashi kai kahaniya  jo saheb ne lakh kr ithas ke panno me darj kr di hai aur jiski copy sayad hi bhavisya me koi dusra raighter kr sake .to om prakash meena bhai aap saheb ki kahani ko bs aaram se reed kro pink saheb ye wo jadugar hai kb kha se apne jadu chalyenge koi nhj janta.

[amol1]

Priy omprkash meena bhai sayad aap pink bhai ki lekhni se parchit nhi ho aur na hi unki xossip ki story mejar shab ,ajeeb si pyas ,wafao ka imehan aur lagbhag abhi ki neha aur chedi ki story etc ashi kai kahaniya  jo saheb ne lakh kr ithas ke panno me darj kr di hai aur jiski copy sayad hi bhavisya me koi dusra raighter kr sake .to om prakash meena bhai aap saheb ki kahani ko bs aaram se reed kro pink saheb ye wo jadugar hai kb kha se apne jadu chalyenge koi nhj janta.

Link bhejna uper mention kiye stories ki..!!

[Rohit]

Outclass and superb update!

[Omprakash meena]

Story achi per story me kyo adam ka charector add kiya or kyo nick ki taraf Maheen ko attraction dikhaya or achanak attraction khatam bhi ho gaya ye samjh nahi aaya

[Sahazaem]

Story achi per story me kyo adam ka charector add kiya or kyo nick ki taraf Maheen ko attraction dikhaya or achanak attraction khatam bhi ho gaya ye samjh nahi aaya

Isko update bhi kr den 2 years ho gaye hen

[Rumana]

एकदम हार्डकोर और फाडू अपडेट! बस अद्भुत और रोमांचक लेखन!

[Sabitri Roy]

Ekdum lajawab writing skills aur ashadaran narrations!

[pinkbaby]

Maheen , a gracious lady.Let the ploy of story be seductive.Build

Thanks dear

Sabki apni-apni pasand hoti hai…. Theek hai ki kahani aapko pasand nahin aa rahi aur iska plot aapke man-mutabiq nahin hai… lekin iske liye kahani ko “bakwaas” hi qaraar de dena bhi to munasib nahin hai na.

Thanks for supporting 

Awesome and marvelous update

Thanks 

Amazing and absolutely fascinating update

Thanks 

jabardast,mast,lajawab aur bahut hi mazadar update!!!

Thanks 

Waiting for birthday event of Vinod, please update fast bro

Very soon will be updated



Pinkbaby

[pinkbaby]

Har Dil Aziz, Pinkbaby:
Hameesha khush-o-khurram aur shaad-o-abad rahain.
Aap bahtareen kahani nawees (story writer) aur mukalmay nigar (dialogue writer) hain.
Lagta hai Kay main story path nahi raha balkay usay apni T.V. screen par dekh raha hoon.
App kahani ko buhut achay (perfectly) say lay kar chal rahay hain.
Kisi Kay kehnay par kahani ko badalnay ki zaroorat nahi hai. 
Mera mashwara hai kaay app Creative Media Line main apni kismat azmain.
Best Regards:
Gafzali

Special and humble thanks for this much love and liking and support.

Itna mahaan nahi hon ky koi screen play likh sakoon bhai bus koshish krta hon dosto ko entertain krny ki aor yeh aap dosto ki mohabbat hai ky itni izzat dety ho aap mujhy.



Thanks again ❤️ ? ? ❣️ ?

[pinkbaby]

wah! aur ek mast update! bahut acha laga is kahgaani padhke!

Thanks 

bahut badiya ek mast,jabardast aur exciting update!

Thanks 

Agar story psnd nhi aari h to wo apki problem hai naa ki writer ki so please agr tarif nhi kr sakte to bakwas bhi nhi bolo shyd tmhe story reed krna nhi aata h m todhi help krti hun apki agr smjh nhi aaya to kabhi movie Delhi hai tmne to usme hero heroine ko dikhate h phir side rol aate rehte h or jate rehte hai par end tak hero heroine hee rehte screen pe story hai maheen or Vinod ki baki sab h side role hai ye mera view h

Love ❤️ you

Nice update

Thanks 

Priy omprkash meena bhai sayad aap pink bhai ki lekhni se parchit nhi ho aur na hi unki xossip ki story mejar shab ,ajeeb si pyas ,wafao ka imehan aur lagbhag abhi ki neha aur chedi ki story etc ashi kai kahaniya  jo saheb ne lakh kr ithas ke panno me darj kr di hai aur jiski copy sayad hi bhavisya me koi dusra raighter kr sake .to om prakash meena bhai aap saheb ki kahani ko bs aaram se reed kro pink saheb ye wo jadugar hai kb kha se apne jadu chalyenge koi nhj janta.

Thanks bhai itny bary bary alfaaz kahny ka mery baary main 

Link bhejna uper mention kiye stories ki..!!

Kuch stories meri profile py hain baqi aap isi naam sy google kr skty hain buhat araam sy mil jaain gi

Outclass and superb update!

Thanks 

एकदम हार्डकोर और फाडू अपडेट! बस अद्भुत और रोमांचक लेखन!

Ekdum lajawab writing skills aur ashadaran narrations!

Thanks 





Pinkbaby

[amol1]

Next Update ki date and time bol do yrr @pinkbaby... Hrr rooj din me 7-8 baar refresh kr kr ke pareshan ho gye hmm update ki wait krte

[sahebraopawar]

Next Update ki date and time bol do yrr @pinkbaby... Hrr rooj din me 7-8 baar refresh kr kr ke pareshan ho gye hmm update ki wait krte

My comment is same

[K MD THABREZ]

Witting next update

[Vito Corleone]

Exciting and absolutely fascinating update. Really mind blowing and dick raising writing!!!Please keep writing like this way.

[ShaziaMirza]

بہترین کہانی

[Ruksana Parveen]

ekdum kamaal kar diya aapne yaar. Bahut badhiya ek mast kahaani shuru kya aapne. eisa hi likhte raho yaar!!