Misc. Erotica Maheen ........ Mohy Rang Dy Piya

[Sharmin Shila]

Jhakkas aur lajawab update

[sahebraopawar]

"Your writing is top-notch, brother! The way you've woven the story of Vinod and Maheen is riveting, leaving readers eager for more. Your subtle storytelling style is commendable, and I wish you continued success in your literary pursuits!

[Jethani Devrani]

Your are really incredible and you writing is absolutely entertaining!!!!!!

[Miss Lanka]

zabardast aur lajawab update

[Rahul007]

Absolutely wonderful update and brilliant writing. Just superb and outstanding story line!!!Fantastic and beautiful build up.

[Fuck Master]

Marvelous and interesting story.

[Pakeeza Ladki]

Zabardast update. Lajawab aur bahut badhiya kahaani

[K MD THABREZ]

Lajawaab hai

[pinkbaby]

Nice updates

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Zabardast update..iss incident sa dono aur close ho gai h...kya vinod ka b'day mai  dono pass aa gaiga

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Let's see what happens

Vinod ka birthday hota hai ya kisi aor ka ....................

Superb update bro
waiting for next update eagerly

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Super....mast...mind blowing... update more

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Jhakkas aur lajawab update

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"Your writing is top-notch, brother! The way you've woven the story of Vinod and Maheen is riveting, leaving readers eager for more. Your subtle storytelling style is commendable, and I wish you continued success in your literary pursuits!

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Your are really incredible and you writing is absolutely entertaining!!!!!!

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zabardast aur lajawab update

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Absolutely wonderful update and brilliant writing. Just superb and outstanding story line!!!Fantastic and beautiful build up.

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Zabardast update. Lajawab aur bahut badhiya kahaani

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Lajawaab hai

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[Manishg]

Love u bhai

[Manishg]

Woooooow

[dragonslair]

There should be more scenes with rajiv to establish some kind of bond and closeness.

[sushilt20]

Nice update

[Yash121]

Waiting for next update

[pinkbaby]

Next Day

Maheen ko office jaana tha ....... Maheen time py uthi ...... aor kitchen main aagye ............ nashta bnaany ky ly .......... usny Vinod ky aany sy pahly uski pooja ky ly thaali prepare kr ky rakh di ........... Vinod aaya to Maheen ko dekh kr khush hoa ......... aor usy pooja ki thaali prepare krny ky ly thanks bol kr thaali ly kr pooja ky ly chala gya ......... aor Maheen nashta bnaany lagi ............

Waqt ky saath saath Vinod ki pooja ko ly kr Maheen aor Vinod ky darmyan aik bynaam sa taluq ban chuka hoa tha ........ Maheen Vinod ky saath usky faith ky mutabiq pooja aor rituals ko nahi apnaa rahi thi ...... mgar usky bawjood bhi woh Vinod ko uski pooja main poora sath deti thi .......... thaali tyyar krna, kabhi agar bati waghaira pakrana aor parshad ly kr khana ....... woh khud ko samjhaa rahi thi yeh sab krty hoy ...... ky woh yeh sab kaam Vinod ko yeh jataany ky ly kr rahi hai ky usky lye uski dosti aor usky saath hony ki kitni ahmyat hai .......... aor woh uski dosti ki ktini qadar krti hai ............ Vinod ko ahmyat dety hoy uski pooja main uski help krty hoy woh apny hi faith, apny mazhab, apni tarbiat aor apni routine ky khilaaf bhi kaam kr rahi thi ....... mgar jo kuch Vinod usky ly kr raha tha ........ usy lagta tha ky woh yeh sub krty hoy kuch bhi ghalat nahi kr rahi hai ........ aisa nahi tha ky woh apny mazabhi nazriyat main koi tabdeeli laa rahi thi ....... lakin woh apny aqayd ky khilaaf.......... Vinod ki ritti riwaj, uski pooja main uska saath dy kr usy aor khud ko is baat ka ahsaas dilaa rahi thi ky usky ly apny nazryat sy zyada zaruri aor aham Vinod ki khushi hai ...........

Office main bhi din acha guzarta hai ........... wahan bhi kai baar Vinod Maheen ky pass aa ky uski tabiat ka pooch ky gya ............ aor Maheen uski fikar mandi sy buhat khush thi .........

Vinod usky pass aa ky ahista sy bola ...... Maheen ...... tum theek mahsoos kr rahi ho na ...... woh pait main dard to nahi ho raha na ab ..........

Maheen muskraai ...... aor blush krti hoi dheery sy boli ....... nahi ab main theek hon ....... aap itna pareshaan na hon .......

Vinod ny bhi aik sukoon ki lambi saans li ....... jis py Maheen muskraa di ........

Maheen ko pain waghiara to ab nahi thi mgar phir bhi woh kaafi thaki hoi lag rahi thi ........... Neetu usky pass aai aor uski tabiat ka poocha to Maheen ny usy btaa dya ky periods ki wajah sy uska mood thora distressed hai .............. Neetu muskraa di ..........

Itny main Maheen ko Jenny ny aa ky bataya ky Maheen ko boss ny bulaya aor koi assignment usky zimmay lgaa di ....... jo usy agly hi din complete krni thi ........ aik important assignment thi ........ aor usy yeh bhi btaya tha boss ny ky yeh uska samjho to test case hai .............

Maheen apni table pr aa kr woh assignment complete krny lagi ....... aisy project usny India main apny office main bhi kaafi baar kye thy ...... mgar is naye jaga py ........ naye office main ........ naye boss ky saamny kaam krny main woh buhat ghabraa gye thi ........... usky dil ki dharkan bhi taiz ho gye thi ky woh kaisy yeh sub mukamal kr saky gi ....... kaam krty hoy usky haath kanmp rahy thy ............ us assignment ky kaam sy zyada usko un sub cheezon ki wajah sy ghabrahat ho rahi thi ky agar woh naa kr saki to kya ho ga .......... usy kitni sharmindgi ka saamna krna ho ga ............... office time khatam hony tak woh assignment ka one third hissa hi complete kr paai ........

Ghar aa ky change kr ky dono khana khaya khaany ky doraan Vinod ny Maheen sy uski assignment ky baary main poocha ....... to Maheen ny us sy discuss bhi kya ............

Vinod .... meri koi help chahye ho to btaa do ....

Maheen ....... nahi its okay main kr lon gi ........ mgar usky chehry py abhi bhi thori pareshani lag rahi thi .........


khany ky baad dono apany room main chaly gy ......... Maheen aram krny ki bajaay apna laptop ly kr wapis lounge mai aa kr beth gye ....... dobara sy kaam krny ........... usy pta bhi nahi chala ky kb 7 pm ho gy ........ aor Vinod bhi bahar aa gya apny room sy sony ky baad ...........

Vinod ....... Good evening Maheen ........ soi nahi tum ...

Maheen ...... nahi wohi assignment ka kaam kr rahi thi ... .....

Vinod ........ okay main chaay bnaa ky laata hon tumhary lye .......

Maheen muskraai ........... yes please ........... buhat talab ho rahi hai .......



thori der main Vinod chaay bnaa laya aor Maheen ko di aor khud bhi usky saamny beth kr peeny laga ............. ............ Vinod ko Maheen kaafi pareshan lag rahi thi .......

Vinod ......... Maheen tum pareshan lag rahi ho .......... tabiat to theek hai na ...........

Maheen zabardasti muskrati hoi ........ nahi nahi kuch problem nahi hai .. main theek hon ........

Vinod ...... phir kya periods ko ly ky masla hai koi .....

Maheen thora sharmaai ............. nahi periods ka ab koi issue nahi hai .......... wohi bus assignment di hai na Nick ny aaj .......... to usi ko ly kr thora ghabrahat ho rah hai ..........

Vinod muskraya ....... ary yaar tum yeh sub to itni baar kr chuki ho tumhary ly konsa yeh kaam naya hai ............. aor main bhi hon na tumhari help krny ky ly ..............

Maheen muskraai .......... haan buhat baar kya hoa hai kaam ..... mgar aaj pta nahi kyon ghabraht hoti jaa rahi hai ........ haath kaanmp rahy hain mery ............. bychaini si ho rahi hai ............. buhat tension ho rahi hai ..........

Vinod usko buck up krny ky ly muskraya ........... Maheen mujhy pata hai tum yeh kr sakti ho .............. lakin agar tumhari aisi hi kaifiat ho rahi hai jaisy tum bol rahi ho to pta hai aisy waqt main thori si madad bhi buhat kuch change kr deti hai ............ thori si aashirwad ......

Maheen ...... main samjhi nahi ..........

Vinod ........ please meri baat ka bura nahi mnaana ....... lakin I will suggest you ky tum ko Ganesh ji sy aashirwad leni chahye ....... ....... woh tmam rukawtain aor pareshanyan door kr dety hain .......... aor man ko shaanti dety hain ..........

Maheen Vinod ki baat sun kr chounk pari .......... woh roz Vinod ko pooja krty hoy dekhti thi ...... uski help bhi krti thi ....... mgar usny kabhi bhi yeh nahi socha tha ky woh kabhi khud bhi Ganesh ji sy unki aashirwad maang sakti hai apny lye ........ apny faith aor mazhab ky khilaaf jaaty hoy ............ usny kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ky woh aisa kr sakti hai kabhi ...........

Maheen ........ Vinod ........ what are you saying .......... tum jaanty hoy na ky main yeh nahi kr sakti ........... you know my own relegion ..........

Vinod ....... ary yaar tum kuch zyada hi soch rahi ho .......... dekho tum kuch bhi ghalat nahi krny jaa rahi ho ........... sirf apny man ki shaanti ky ly Ganesh ji ko bolo gi na ............ aor to kuch bhi nahi na ........ is sy tumhary faith aor tumhary relegion ko kuch bhi effect nahi ho ga ....... believe me ........... tumhary man ko shaanti milay gi aor tum apna kaam asaani sy kr paao gi ..........

Maheen .......... lakin Vinod ........

Vinod ......... dekho tum unky ly pahly bhi to parshad ready krti ho na ....... aor ab bhi kuch zyada nahi hai ....... waisy hi unko parshad ki thaali paish krni hai ........ aor un sy apny man ki shaanti aor unki blessings ki prayer krni hai ............. aor yaqeen kro tum is sy buhat acha feel kro gi ........ aor dekhna tumhari assignment bhi kitni achi ho jaati hai ......... Vinod muskraya ....... tum ruko main parshad ki thaali bnaa ky laata hon ............

Vinod uth ky jaldi sy kitchen main chala gya ........... aor chand minton main hi apny haath main thaali lye hoy wapis aagya ........ Maheen ny dekha us main phool, mithaai aor aik diya rakha hoa tha ........... Vinod ny Maheen ka haath pakar ky usy uthaya .......... aor Ganesh ji ki moorti ky saamny ly jaany laga ............ Maheen ko apny paon buhat bhaari lag rahy thy ........... uski ghabrahat mai izafa hota jaa raha tha ....... usko andar sy guilt feel ho raha tha ............... mgar Vinod ny usy Ganesh ji ky saamny khara kr dya ..........

Maheen dheery sy boli .......... Vinod mujh sy nahi ho paay ga yeh ....... please ........

Vinod bhi ahista sy Maheen ky kaan ky pass monh laa ky bola .......... Maheen please ........... mery kahny py aik baar kro .......... mery lye ........... please .........

Maheen ny aik nazar Vinod ki taraf dekha ...... aor phir uski nazrain Ganesh ji ki moorti py tik gyn ........... unki aankhon main dekhny lagi ............. usy laga ky uski nazrain kisi magnet ki tarah moorti ki aankhon sy jud gye hoi hain .......... woh apni nazrain hataa nahi paa rahi thi ...........

[pinkbaby]

Vinod ki awaaz aai ........... yeh lo Maheen aor isy Ganesh ji ky saamny rakh do .......

Maheen ny moorti sy nazrain hataay bina Vinod sy woh thaali li aor usy moorti ky saamny rakh dya ............

Vinod ...... ab dya jalaao .......... Vinod ny usy maachis di ......

Maheen ny machis ki teeli jalaai aor kaanmpty haathon ky saath diya jala dya Ganesh ji ky saamny ........... uski halki halki si roshni Maheen ki aankhon main utarny lagi ........... Maheen ko mahsoos ho raha tha ky jaisy us roshni ky saath usky andar kuch jaa raha hai ............

Vinod .......... ab agar bati bhi jala do ...........

Maheen ny saath hi rakhy hoy stand mai lagi hoi agar batyon ko bhi jala dya ........... aor kamray main unki khusboo phailny lagi ........

Vinod ........... ab thaali sy phool uthaa ky Ganesh ji ko paish kro .......

Maheen ny thaali sy phool uthaay .... aor kaanmpty haathon ky saath unko moorti ky ooper daal dya .......... guilt ki wajah sy uska dil betha jaa raha tha ............

Vinod .......... ab apni aankhain band kr ky Ganesh ji ko bolo ky tumhary man ko shaanti dain ........ aor tumko shakti dain ky tum apna kaam poora kr sako ..........

Maheen ny apni aankhain band nahi kin ........ bina apny haathon ko baandhy ............ Ganesh ji ki moorti ki aankhon main dekny lagi ........ saath hi dil hi dil main Vinod ki btaai hoi baatain woh jaisy Ganesh ji sy karny lagi ......... moorti ki aankhon mai dekhti hoi .......... usy kuch feel ho raha tha ................. uski aankhain band hony lagin ............ Ganesh ji ........ mujhy shaanti chahye man ki ............ mery kaam main aap ki madad chahye ................... woh dil hi dil main jaisy moorti sy batain krny lagi ............ usy ab ahsas nahi raha tha ky woh kuch ghalt kr rahi hai ........... bus woh moorti ky saamny khari thi aankhain band kye hoy ......... aor agar bati ki khusboo usky andar utarti jaa rahi thi ............ Maheen ko mahsoos ho raha tha ky jaisy uski ghabrahat khatam hoti jaa rahi hai ........... usy shaanti mahsoos ho rahi thi .......... sukoon sa feel ho raha tha ............... woh apni hi baton mai gum thi ky usy Vinod ki awaz sunaai di ...........

Vinod ....... Maheen ab aankhain khol lo .........

Maheen ny ghabraa ky apni aankhain kholin aor sharmindah nazron sy Vinod ko dekh kr apni nazrain jhukaa lin ................

Vinod ........ Maheen ab woh parshad khaao aor mujhy bhi do ..........

Maheen ny us thaali sy mithaai uthaa kr apny monh main daali ....... aor phir doosra tukra Vinod ko dy dya ............ aor phir wapis apna laptop ly kr beth gye ........

Thori der main hi Maheen ko feel hony laga ky jaisy uska man halka ho raha hai ........... uski bychaini khatam ho gye hoi thi ........... assignment ka kaam to thaa abhi bhi magar ab usy jaisy sub kuch aasaan hi lag raha tha ............ koi boojh nahi mahsoos ho raha tha ........... usy andar sy thori guilt bhi feel ho rahi thi ........... mgar buhat hi kam ......... woh khud ko samjhaa rahi thi ........ yeh main ny siraf Vinod ki khatir kya hai ........ aor kuch bhi ghalt nahi hai ............ aor main ny konsa apna faith apna mazhab chor dya hai ......... aor naa hi chor rahi hon .......... bus thora usky kahny py yeh kya hai .......... haan magar isky saath thori shaanti to mili hai ............. thora confidence bhi barh gya hai ........... woh muskraa di ...........

Vinod dobara usky pass aayaa aor usko ab khush aor relax dekh kr muskraany laga ............. Maheen bhi usy dekh kr muskraa di ........ aor 10 pm tak usny apni assignment complete kr li .............. aor phir dinner krny lagy ......

Vinod ........... kaisa raha Maheen ...... ab kaisa feel ho raha hai .....

Maheen muskraai ........ acha hai ab ............

Vinod .......... good ...... main ny kaha tha na ky Ganesh ji ki aashirwad sy sub theek ho jaay ga .........

Maheen muskraa di ........ hmmm ....... Maheen ko bhi feel ho raha tha ky Vinod ny theek hi kaha tha ........... such main hi usky man ko shaanti di thi Ganesh ji ny ..............

Khana khaa ky Vinod ny bartan kitchen main rakhy ...... aor phir apny room main chala gya ............. Maheen ny bartan wash kye aor phir apny room main jaany lagi ........ choty sy mandir ky paas sy guzri to uski nazar Ganesh ji ki moorti py pari ............ Maheen aik lamhay ky ly ruk gye ................ phir usy kuch khayal aaya ........... usny moorti ky saamny rakha hoa diya jalaa dya .............. aor dheery sy boli ............ Ganesh ji ............. subah sub theek theek ho jaay bus meri assignment ka ........... yeh bol ky Maheen muskraai aor jaldi sy apny kamray main chali gye ..............

Subah apni routine ky mutabiq nashta kr ky dono office jaany lagy to Vinod bola .............. Maheen jaany sy pahly Ganesh ji sy aashirwad nahi lo gi ..............

Maheen muskraai ............ aor phir naa chahty hoy bhi ....... pta nahi kyon Ganesh ji ky saamny jaa ky khari ho gye ............ bina apny haath baandhy ya sir ko jhukaay ........... usny dil hi dil mai Ganesh ji ki aashirwad maangi .......... aor phir Vinod ky saath office chali gye ........


Jaisy jaisy uski presentation ka time qareeb aa raha tha to uski ghabrahat barh rahi thi ........... Vinod usky qareeb aaya ......

Vinod ........ best of luck Maheen ........

Maheen ny ghabraay hoy uski taraf dekha ........... pta nahi theek ho gi presentation ky nahi ........... Vinod mujhy to ghabrahat ho rahi hai .....

Vinod bola ........... Maheen kyon ghabraa rahi ho ............ yaad hai na Ganesh ji ka aahsiwad hai tumhary saath ........... dekhna sub theek ho jaay ga ...........

Phir Vinod ny kuch socha ........ phir usny apny galy main pehna hoa Ganesh ji ki moorti wala locket uthara aor usy Maheen ky galay main daal dya ............

Maheen ghabraa ky ........... Vinod ........... yeh kya ........... nahi nahi ...... please main yeh nahi pehan sakti ............

Vinod .......... Maheen kuch nahi ho ga ............ jo tumko ghabrahat ho rahi hai na to tumko Ganesh ji apny saath milain gy ............

Maheen apny galay main latak rahi Ganesh ji ki moorti ko dekhti hoi boli ....... pr Vinod ........... agar kisi ny dekh lya isy to ...........

Vinod ...... nahi koi nahi dekhy ga ........ aor kisi ny dekh bhi lya to koi kuch nahi kahy ga ............. tum isko apni shirt ky andar kr lo ..........

Maheen ki dil ki halat ajeeb ho rahi thi ........... usny kabhi yeh nahi kia tha .............. mgar phir bhi najaany kyon usny khaamoshi sy us locket ko apni shirt ky andar kr lya ........ aor Mr. Nick ko presentation deny chali gye ..............

[arvind274]

Nice updates

[Vijayverma]

Superb update bro

[Vijayverma]

Superb update bro
Waiting for next update eagerly

[Yash121]

Mind-blowing update