Adultery The Facilitator

[a2011]

I guess some reader's look for a sense of justice for all the characters, like for Kunal who is the loser in this story so far, to have some retribution...and for Priya to suffer for the manipulation, and Esha to suffer for cheating, Aniket to suffer for trying to make Kunal a cuckold...in the real-world things are not fair, so maybe even in this story, things are not going to be fair...lets see what happens

[Harry Jordan]

ARE YOU HERE TO DO MAGIC TO CHANGE WIMP TO BULL. 
BULL SHIT. 

The following sentences down here is directly taken from part T.

Kunal's response was laced with bitterness and disbelief, "What do you think of me, Esha? Some wimp, a character in your dirty games? I won't play along anymore!" His declaration was heavy, laden with the weight of their shattered life together, the end of their shared dreams now palpable in the air between them.

The fact that you still consider Kunal to be a wimp is what makes your point invalid. Kunal did what every dutiful husband did , Esha is the real problem in their marriage. She instantly forgot her husband when a bigger dick entered her cave. To be honest,  Priya saved Kunal by wasting his life living with a slut. One day she will find another man with a bigger dick than Aniket and she will do the same thing she did with Kunal.

ESHA IS THE HEROINE MY ASS!!! 

[Harry Jordan]

The idea for the story stems from a scenario where a wife cheats on her husband and subsequently becomes pregnant by her lover. We explored various outcomes instead of a predictable ending, in this story. A human emotions are not command to robot , so the emotional complexities need to be explored. 

I get that , and I can say you are doing a damn fine job exploring that. Before Part T I had my concerns regarding how Esha's mindet is in this story because she is not showing any sympathy or concern towards Kunal. But then part 2 of T finally showed it and it also helped understand Esha as a character. And I get that , the emotion play is done really well , Kunal is led by rage and anger of the betrayal he has endured , Esha despite betraying her husband is still finding solace with her lover. And Priya the orchestrator of this events all , is happy with the ruined marriage but concerned that her control is leaving her hands. 

And I can say honestly , I have no idea how this story will end because the emotions are overwhelming. I am actually having trouble to side with characters or to find a happy ending with this. But regardless stories like this is where the thrill of emotions actually controls the narrative. And this is definitely the right approach for a story like this. I am optimisitc that you guys will do a wonderful job with this story.

[Harry Jordan]

I guess some reader's look for a sense of justice for all the characters, like for Kunal who is the loser in this story so far, to have some retribution...and for Priya to suffer for the manipulation, and Esha to suffer for cheating, Aniket to suffer for trying to make Kunal a cuckold...in the real-world things are not fair, so maybe even in this story, things are not going to be fair...lets see what happens

Honestly I don't think realistic approach can make a story like this work. Because if we consider a realistic approach we can never relate or love the characters considering the stupid and bold decisions they take. Realistically the story would never progress this much in a real time scenario. I've read a wonderful redemption story in Literotica where a man who is cheated by turns his life around. And it connected to me because the story and the character portrayal was done really well. In my opinion, Kunal's character is a perfect candidate for an "Underdog turned victor" story , and in a way it can make  sense because he has the motive for that drive. Me personally I am never a fan of a man undergoing all the sufferings and humiliation and then when its over,  he stays the same. That negates the point of his character.

[a2011]

Honestly I don't think realistic approach can make a story like this work. Because if we consider a realistic approach we can never relate or love the characters considering the stupid and bold decisions they take. Realistically the story would never progress this much in a real time scenario. I've read a wonderful redemption story in Literotica where a man who is cheated by turns his life around. And it connected to me because the story and the character portrayal was done really well. In my opinion, Kunal's character is a perfect candidate for an "Underdog turned victor" story , and in a way it can make  sense because he has the motive for that drive. Me personally I am never a fan of a man undergoing all the sufferings and humiliation and then when its over,  he stays the same. That negates the point of his character.

I agree, I would like to see Kunal get fair treatment too, even though a transformation to a victor in my opinion is unnecessary....I'd also like to see some bad consequences to the other 3 characters, who seem to be all just acting like they're hurt for doing what they wanted all along...

[RCF]

You are obsessed with kunal and begging for the justice. Kunal does not deserve it. If so, Esha would have shown some love for him or felt guilty or aborted the child. Esha thinks kunal cheated her for 7 years without fulfilling her desires or bring the bitch out of her. A man should not alway be goody goody and handle woman like a baby. in the bed woman should be treated only like a bitch.

Yes Harry our friend is always obsessed with husbands as he hates injustice to them in every story but I do not think this story falls under that bucket.

Kunal does not deserve justice is a meek point, because he is not in need of justice. He is not the victim in this story as it being portrayed, Real victim in this story is the Facilitator..you guys will see it in the end lol

Her master plan is to pursue Kunal and make him fall for herself and marry him...That is second phase of her revenge...to not only make Esha lose Kunal but for whom she spoiled her life, she wants to make him her lover and husband. She wants to see in Esha's eyes and see the pain of losing Kunal and also seeing him with her would cause her more pain...but her plan might fail big time for two reasons.

1. Esha unlike what Priya planned fell in love with Aniket, Though Aniket was her choice for Esha to break up with Kunal so she will suffer, Esha actually made Aniket fall in love with her and they might have a bright future so its not a grand revenge as she planned plus she will get Aditya joint custody.
2. Kunal will investigate and find the manipulations and reasons behind Priya and he will play his own game against Priya..there could be many ways this can go from Kunal standpoint, he could act as if he fell in lvoe and make Priya suffer at the end by leaving her or some other direction.

Anyways my point is...Kunal will be happy even if he is angry right now...who knows..but he won't be a cuckold, nor he will be a wimp.
One more thing I need to mention, that author is not thinking through end to end when he is writing such critical aspects in the story, I have previously pointed out many points where there was loose writing like Priya easily manipulation Kunal to make him think he is the fault for Esha cheating him, Esha easily accepting her friend Priya's suggestions to meet with Aniket despite knowing her manipulations, also taking pregnancy pill from her manipulating friend...all these are weak writing with  unrealistic plots.
I want to point one more here...Any parents when they see what their DIL has done, would first call her parents, Esha's parents by now should have known her cheating, pregnancy and lot more..She should have been confronted by her parents by now. She is going through child custody in court but her parents are no where to be seen..Author is assuming that only Esha will have to tell her parents..buddy its actually Kunal's parents who will make the call in reality. 

~RCF

[Harry Jordan]

I agree, I would like to see Kunal get fair treatment too, even though a transformation to a victor in my opinion is unnecessary....I'd also like to see some bad consequences to the other 3 characters, who seem to be all just acting like they're hurt for doing what they wanted all along...

By Victor I don't mean he becomes a millionaire overnight or something else. Just a push to become a better version of himself , because like it or not Kunal does have his own flaws. Even now in this moment of rage and anger he is letting out a chauvinistic side of him. That won't improve his character but only worsen. Not to mention the amount of humiliation he has endured , realistically he would've committed suicide when Esha confessed. But I always prefer the story of a perseverent man than a failed one. Let this be a lesson to him , Esha definitely did a mistake , a very drastic one for that matter. But Kunal shouldn't punish himself for it but rather push himself to be a better version of himself. He should not be the same suffering , emo version of himself. If Esha can move on that easily , Kunal should move on organically. Esha will regret her decisions in the future , Kunal should not have any regrets but he should never do the same mistake again. In all sense , the development of the story demands an optimisitc ending to the character of Kunal.

[Harry Jordan]

Yes Harry our friend is always obsessed with husbands as he hates injustice to them in every story but I do not think this story falls under that bucket.

Kunal does not deserve justice is a meek point, because he is not in need of justice. He is not the victim in this story as it being portrayed, Real victim in this story is the Facilitator..you guys will see it in the end lol

Her master plan is to pursue Kunal and make him fall for herself and marry him...That is second phase of her revenge...to not only make Esha lose Kunal but for whom she spoiled her life, she wants to make him her lover and husband. She wants to see in Esha's eyes and see the pain of losing Kunal and also seeing him with her would cause her more pain...but her plan might fail big time for two reasons.

1. Esha unlike what Priya planned fell in love with Aniket, Though Aniket was her choice for Esha to break up with Kunal so she will suffer, Esha actually made Aniket fall in love with her and they might have a bright future so its not a grand revenge as she planned plus she will get Aditya joint custody.
2. Kunal will investigate and find the manipulations and reasons behind Priya and he will play his own game against Priya..there could be many ways this can go from Kunal standpoint, he could act as if he fell in lvoe and make Priya suffer at the end by leaving her or some other direction.

Anyways my point is...Kunal will be happy even if he is angry right now...who knows..but he won't be a cuckold, nor he will be a wimp.
One more thing I need to mention, that author is not thinking through end to end when he is writing such critical aspects in the story, I have previously pointed out many points where there was loose writing like Priya easily manipulation Kunal to make him think he is the fault for Esha cheating him, Esha easily accepting her friend Priya's suggestions to meet with Aniket despite knowing her manipulations, also taking pregnancy pill from her manipulating friend...all these are weak writing with  unrealistic plots.
I want to point one more here...Any parents when they see what their DIL has done, would first call her parents, Esha's parents by now should have known her cheating, pregnancy and lot more..She should have been confronted by her parents by now. She is going through child custody in court but her parents are no where to be seen..Author is assuming that only Esha will have to tell her parents..buddy its actually Kunal's parents who will make the call in reality. 

~RCF

Good to see you back RCF.

And I will admit , I do share that thought about husbands but to be honest, that sentiments only exist in this site because this place is filled with "looser Husbands" everywhere LOL.

I do like the thing you believe will happen and honestly that was the first thing that came in my mind when this story began. That Priya wants to actually replace Esha in her own marriage and become Kunal's love and Aditya's mother but Priya's conflicting arc regarding her revenge with Esha or protecting Esha is making the future look like uncharted territory. I don't believe Priya's plan failed by bringing Aniket in this because she still pushed Esha to the point she has become pregnant. If she wanted to make Esha suffer , she wouldn't have agreed to that. Priya is definitely established as a "Villain" in this because of her actions but at the end of the day its still not clear what exactly is her endgame. She is trying to ruin Esha's life and for some reason it is Kunal that is suffering in the story the most.

I will admit there is come incomplete portions in the story. But I really like his literature skills , with few words , he conveys a lot of the narration. That is something remarkable.

[Saradagaa]

The idea for the story stems from a scenario where a wife cheats on her husband and subsequently becomes pregnant by her lover. We explored various outcomes instead of a predictable ending, in this story. A human emotions are not command to robot , so the emotional complexities need to be explored. 

Your writing is excellent, thanks to your partner who has literature back ground. I can say that it's at a professional level.

I don't know which language you think and translate into english but the vocabulary and sentence framing is extraordinary and apt.

Description of the environment is as good as in classical literature.

There is a novel in Telugu where in each character present it's POV, taking the readers along with them.
This is not exactly on similar lines but with a little bit of tweaking for Kunal as well as Isha characters, many more complex situations could be created.

Agreed it's about emotions. There is a large scope for making characters view from other character's perspective.

I believe that towards concluding chapters,  you would adopt such strategy. Your subtle hints all along are being noted. 

Finally, may be it's time for you to change your pen name and make your girl friend a part of the name to enjoy the fan following firsthand

[prm.patil024]

this is one the few rare story which is uploaded on wrong platform.. 
writer has given lot of efforts for this story.. story has been posted on sex stories platform yet thr is very few instances whr writer has used sex language, usually v expect story full of sex language n using bold sex words & expression but writer has done totally opposite which is really impressive..
story shows current practical life of indian couple, which is happening everywhere.. kunal is the real face of current middle/upper middle class husbands. 
in current generation both husband n wife r going for work they r in contact with other people they attract to other people n fall on affairs..
this story actually narrates current situation happening in most of the house.. 
mostly couples marry @ 23-24, they hav kids, their gud sex life stays only for 4-5 yrs.. as they cross 30s their sex life is over.
its practical condition, currently 60-70% married female r dominating their husbands due to various reasons like financial imbalance, family conflicts, sex performance pressure etc and most extra marital affairs r happening bcos of manipulation frm frnds n close people..
coming to story, all characters r very well described, u cant make everyone hero or everyone villain. writer has given perfect shape for all characters showcasing current life style of indian married couples..
most important character is of Priya which writer has handled very well.. she is manipulating everyone right frm esha kunal n ankit & she is stucking in her own spider ?️ net which she created for others..
 esha n kunal r perfect example of current working wife n husband, she was not just manipulated by priya but somewhere she also needed inner joy n sex satisfaction badly on other hand kunal had sex performance pressure n so he let esha to do with ankit later on his inner soul wake-up.. 
ankit role has kept very neutral n thts very suspicious bcos such roles cant b netural.thr is something more to come about this character.. 
writer has cleverly written about indian judiciary n justice.
justice has become a joke n judiciary has become a money making machine.. 
esha is caring for her son but whr was her love for son whn aditya actually needed lov of parents, she chose ankit her inner joy n sex satisfaction above husband n son n still claiming for son. why is judiciary silence on this.
kunal is becoming cuckold by his own choice, both esha n priya r dominating over him.. 
hope so climax is not so early.. v get to read more about this story.. 
as per current situation, thr r few things which might come up..
* esha will divorce kunal n get co-custody of son & will marry ankit n live happily with him
* kunal will get sole custody n he will live alone with son
* esha will get co-custody but ankit will double cross her n will not marry her  
* esha will get co custody of son, ankit priya n esha will celebrate their victory n on tht night only priya will hav sex with ankit infornt of esha by taking her biggest revange & tht will b most turning point of this story
* kunal will expose priya & will do patch up with esha n will accept ankit child..
thr r many more things to come...this story will not end so soon & with netural character.. waiting for next updates..

[prm.patil024]

This is 1 of my best story i hav ever read... hat's off for writer for this wonderful story..gud job ?
this is one the few rare story which is uploaded on wrong platform..

writer has given lot of efforts for this story.. story has been posted on sex stories platform yet thr is very few instances whr writer has used sex language, usually v expect story full of sex language n using bold sex words & expression but writer has done totally opposite which is really impressive..

story shows current practical life of indian couple, which is happening everywhere.. kunal is the real face of current middle/upper middle class husbands.

in current generation both husband n wife r going for work they r in contact with other people they attract to other people n fall on affairs..

this story actually narrates current situation happening in most of the house..

mostly couples marry @ 23-24, they hav kids, their gud sex life stays only for 4-5 yrs.. as they cross 30s their sex life is over.

its practical condition, currently 60-70% married female r dominating their husbands due to various reasons like financial imbalance, family conflicts, sex performance pressure etc and most extra marital affairs r happening bcos of manipulation frm frnds n close people..

coming to story, all characters r very well described, u cant make everyone hero or everyone villain. writer has given perfect shape for all characters showcasing current life style of indian married couples..

most important character is of Priya which writer has handled very well.. she is manipulating everyone right frm esha kunal n ankit & she is stucking in her own spider ?️ net which she created for others..

esha n kunal r perfect example of current working wife n husband, she was not just manipulated by priya but somewhere she also needed inner joy n sex satisfaction badly on other hand kunal had sex performance pressure n so he let esha to do with ankit later on his inner soul wake-up..

ankit role has kept very neutral n thts very suspicious bcos such roles cant b netural.thr is something more to come about this character..

writer has cleverly written about indian judiciary n justice.

justice has become a joke n judiciary has become a money making machine..

esha is caring for her son but whr was her love for son whn aditya actually needed lov of parents, she chose ankit her inner joy n sex satisfaction above husband n son n still claiming for son. why is judiciary silence on this.

kunal is becoming cuckold by his own choice, both esha n priya r dominating over him..

hope so climax is not so early.. v get to read more about this story..

as per current situation, thr r few things which might come up..

* esha will divorce kunal n get co-custody of son & will marry ankit n live happily with him

* kunal will get sole custody n he will live alone with son

* esha will get co-custody but ankit will double cross her n will not marry her

* esha will get co custody of son, ankit priya n esha will celebrate their victory n on tht night only priya will hav sex with ankit infornt of esha by taking her biggest revange & tht will b most turning point of this story

* kunal will expose priya & will do patch up with esha n will accept ankit child..

thr r many more things to come...this story will not end so soon & with netural character.. waiting for next updates

[Manikandarajesh]

Yes, please give the credit of the story also to your girl friend. She deserves it for her contributions.

[Manikandarajesh]

After winning the case and custody, Esha will give a blowjob in court premises to Aniket in front of Kunal to show this is how big cock rules.

[Saradagaa]

After winning the case and custody, Esha will give a blowjob in court premises to Aniket in front of Kunal to show this is how big cock rules.

Ha ha ha

[Manikandarajesh]

Judge asks "Esha, why did you got pregnant with Aniket baby and decided to live with him?"
Esha says "I did not feel kunal dick inside me after my fuck with Aniket. With that, I know that living with kunal thereafter is a lifetime trauma. So i decided to leave him for his good and be a real man wife. I do not want him suffer unable to satisfy his wife."
Judge "You are the true love. I appreciate it."

[Manikandarajesh]

Judge asks "Kunal, why did you ask Esha to sleep with Aniket in your house?"
Kunal says "There is nothing wrong in learning new things from others. I just want to know, how different Esha felt with Aniket. But, his performance was something i cannot match in my lifetime. My dick will die if it goes for 5 rounds in a night. I now understand why Esha wants to be with him. A big dick in need is a good fuck indeed. Good life Esha."
Judge says "You too a true love kunal, i appreciate you too."

[Saradagaa]

It's not me, it's Kareena Kapoor
“You’ll never truly understand Marriages, Divorces, Anxieties, Childbirth, Death of a loved one, Parenting… Until it actually happens to you. Theories and assumptions of situations in life are not realities. You think you are smarter than most until life humbles you when it’s your turn.”
Is it not correct quote here?

[Somnaath]

nice story 

[Manikandarajesh]

If Esha accepted to abort the child. Would kunal gone for a divorce? 

Kunal did not have any problem with his wife opening legs to another man. Only problem to him is fathering another man child. So, kunal is not a cuckold 

[Harry Jordan]

If Esha accepted to abort the child. Would kunal gone for a divorce? 

Kunal did not have any problem with his wife opening legs to another man. Only problem to him is fathering another man child. So, kunal is not a cuckold 

Actually , Kunal is acting based on his rage and anger. Even his justification to request an abort is that Esha is choosing Aniket over Kunal and his point is definitely being proved by Esha's actions. 

Even after all this scenario , she still does not accept her mistakes and has no concern or feelings towards Kunal , even now she gets to have her happy moments with her new man in her life. And later when Aditya becomes a part of her , her life becomes complete. Its Kunal who eventually looses.

He has been on a loosing streak ever since the beginning of the story and even when he tried to save his marriage , Esha still threw it away and didn't show a single concern for him. I am surprised that Kunal haven't made the decision to murder Esha at this point. Even after all of her betrayal , he is willing to let her have Aditya on occasions. I strongly believe Kunal deserves redemption , he needs to get some victory in his character orc or else his character will be by far the worse character ever written in a story. 

I mean quiet honestly , Kunal's story can be integrated for a COMICBOOK SUPERVILLAIN Origin Story. His wife betrays him , she abandons him , gets pregnant by another man , even his son wants his mother. I am surprised Kunal haven't turned to a terrorist or a serial killer and went on a murder spree at this point. 

In my opinion , I believe the story should end with Kunal killing Priya for her ruining his life , just let Kunal give Priya the worst death possible. Let him go to jail , let some inmates love him for the crime he did. Kunal should leave jail and become an Underworld Don and never trusting another woman ever again. Hell , Kunal can easily be SRK's DON's BACKSTORY! KUNAL BECOMES DON! HE GOES TO MALAYSIA AND WORKS FOR SINGHANIA!  LOL

How is that for a twist, we are reading a prequel story to DON movie 2007 on how KUNAL TRANSFORMED TO DON!

(FYI I am watching Don right now , in about 15 minutes I will be watching Don 2)